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Great fight scene. The thing is, Kamon was never a king, he was a soldier in Keilienatens father's army. He was ambushed in a revien and killed. Anuis granted him the chance to get revenge in return for his services. He would give his soul and get his revenge, but he would then use his skills in Anubis' undead army. Kamon new Keilienaten when she was a little girl.


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- PITS of HELL -
Keilienaten falls unto the lake of fire, and burns along with the other lost souls. She screams in agony,
cursing out loud.
As her skin boils up, and her blood begins to dry up, it begins to sparkle. Her entire skin burns away, leaving her naked in
burnt flesh. The fire isn't able to burn her flesh beneath the skin.
Soon, the lake overlaps Keilienaten, and sinks her inside the fiery lake. Her screams are heard no more.
- OUTWORLD - INDIAN CEMENTARY
Kamon has drawn a huge brimstone with his blood around the scared land.
KAMON:
I will give my life for hers.
Kamon kneels in the middle of the brimstone, and with his knife, he slices his wrists, and
spreads his arms. He begins chanting in his Egyptian language.
- Rahankatut : Thousands of years ago
Kamon looks much younger more alive. Kamon is before Pharaoh Akhenaten, receiving orders.
AKHENATEN:
You are one of my best leaders, and you must go to war. Stop the Eye of Ra.
KAMON:
I will do as you wish, my lord.
AKHENATEN:
Good, now be gone.
Kamon nods. Not too far away, a you Keilienaten has been eavesdropping. She's much younger. Maybe in her teens. She is crying. Kamon spots
her from far away, and looks away sadly.
- RAHANKATUT - VILLAGE
Keilienaten and Kamon are together, just like in Keilienaten's flashback.
He's hugging her tightly.
KEILIENATEN:
I know my father has found about us, and that's why he's sending you away.
KAMON:
If that were to be true, I will come back, and when I do, you and I will be wedded. We will confront your father.
KEILIENATEN:
You promise. Do you not care, I'm just sixteen?
KAMON:
Age is blinded here. It is only our differences in class that will be an obstacle between us.
KEILIENATEN:
As long as you and I love one another.
They begin to kiss, and slowly undress one another. They wrap around one anothers naked bodies and make love.
- INDIAN CEMETARY - Present
Kamon is still in kneeling in the middle of the Brimstone. There is now a puddle of mud all around him. He screams loud, as he cries desperately.
RAHAKATUT - DESERT - Thousands of years ago
Kamon and his army are battleling a huge deadly army. To the looks, Kamon's army is winiing, but Kamon spots one of his best men being ambushed. He, without a doubt, goes to his man’s aid. Together they kill their attackers. Once they thought they had the win, two men surprise Kamon’s man, and slice him in half. They drag each half away, and feast upon it.
Angry and disgusted, Kamon goes mad, and attack the oncoming army.
Sekhmet, the leader of Eye of Ra surprises Kamon, and stabs him from the back.
Kamon turns around and still has the energy to fight back. Both battle out, with Kamon loosing a lot of blood.
Sekhmet stabs Kamon on the chest, and smiles. Kamon wastes no time, and stabs Sekhmet On the eye. Sekhmet goes mad, and fires a fireball at Kamon.
Kamon falls the cliff and lands on huge spikes.
Then, huge fireballs begins to fall over the cliff, and one eventually hits Kamon, blowing him to pieces.
- INDIAN CEMENTARY - Present
Kamon is still kneeling, crying, making the blood puddle bigger. He lets out louder cries. Not too far away, the little conniving Piroh watches him, as he floats.
- RAHANKATUT- PATHAWAY - Thousands of years ago
Kamon, who is engulfed all around in flames falls into a dark place. It’s a passageway. The path that lies between Heaven and Hell.
As the fire turns off, Kilvan appears before Kamon.
KILVAN:
I’ve come to offer you an eternal life, in exchange for another.
Kamon’s flesh begins to reanimate. Kamon looks up the the God of Death.
- RAHAKATUT – DESERT – Thousands of years ago
Kamon is riding a dark horse through the desert. He looks stronger and angrier. He has given a second chance, but in an exchange he doesn’t like.
He could hear Kilvan’s offer echo inside his head.
KILVAN:
Your work is to kill and destroy Akhenaten and Nefertiti, so I can overpower Rahankatut, and gain much power. Then together we will overthrow Zaggot.
Kamon angrily rides his horse.
KAMON:
I cannot do such thing, for I am loyal to my Lord, and Keilienaten. What I must do is avenge my death.
- INDIAN CEMENATRY – Present
Kamon has lost plenty of blood, and falls on his back. Piroh quickly goes to his aid. Pirok create a small flame from his hand, and burns both of Kamon’s wrists. The wounds quickly seal up.
PIROH:
Are you trying to destroy everything you have?
KAMON:
I have nothing. For thousands of years, I hid behind Keilienaten’s shadows, protecting her from harm.
PIROH:
She was able to defend herself quiet frankly.
KAMON:
Yeah. She grew into the this ambitious for power Goddess. She turned into something I didn’t like.
PIROH:
A thirst for full power isn’t bad.
KAMON: (angry)
You! You’re Kilvan’s personal messenger. You betrayed her.
PIROH:
I did no such thing. You have to realize, that Kilvan is a God, and he is smart. He tracks all of my moves. He knew about Keilienaten’s and my plan right off hand. I had to tell him before he destroyed me too.
KAMON:
You lie.
PIROH:
It’s all true. Keilienaten knew that. That is why her and I planned secretive and undetected meetings.
KAMON: (angry)
You lie again. How dare you?
PIROH:
It’s true. If you don’t believ me, you can ask her yourself.
KAMON:
You foul full. You dare laugh in my face. She’s dead, and you know it.
PIROH:
But you pity her for nothing. You wonder why her and Dragon King would be lovers. Well, here’s the story: Keilienaten is a smart woman. She planned in drinking Onaga’s blood to gain power. TO live forever, and she did just that. She tricked the dragon into bedding with him, to drink his blood.
KAMON:
Maybe she isn’t as smart as she thought. TO resurrect the dead, is using Onaga’s heart.
PIROH:
How do you know that? That’s just a myth. Forget it. The blood is to hold full power, that even death cannot hold you back, unless the heart is ripped from it’s owner, of course.
KAMON:
So she will walk the the living again?
PIROH:
Yes. Her and I will continue our plan, in bringing Kilvan down. We will need your help, Kamon.
KAMON:
I cannot. I made a deal with Kilvan, and I must abide by it.
PIROH:
You broke the deal when you didn’t kill Akhenet and Nefertiti.
KAMON:
I did kill them.
PIROH:
Now You lie. It was Keilienaten who stained her hands with her parents blood, after destroying the Goddess Iris.
Kamon looks away.
KAMON:
She has gone a different direction. There is nothing that can have her connected to me, anymore. She loves women, for christ’s sake.
PIROH:
That can change if you help. After your death, she vowed never to love another man. Of course no one knew she would lust for same sex relations either, but love is stronger than lust, and you can brake that. Help us, and destroy Kilvan. Then, she will be the same Keilienaten you knew.
Kamon looks at Piroh.
KAMON:
How do I not know, this isn’t another trick from you? That Kilvan isn’t behind all this.
PIROH:
Not this time. Trust me. Now, I must go before Kilvan notices my absences.
KAMON:
How do I know where to find her?
PIROH:
Don’t worry. She’ll find you.
With that said, Piroh disappears.
- PITS of HELL -
The lake of fire departs, splitting in half. Out of the depths, The burnt flesh of Keilienaten walks out. As she walks into the firey hills, he entire skin reanimates, giving her her beauty back. She looks as astonishing as before.
KEILIENATEN:
It’s time.
Keilienaten falls unto the lake of fire, and burns along with the other lost souls. She screams in agony,
cursing out loud.
As her skin boils up, and her blood begins to dry up, it begins to sparkle. Her entire skin burns away, leaving her naked in
burnt flesh. The fire isn't able to burn her flesh beneath the skin.
Soon, the lake overlaps Keilienaten, and sinks her inside the fiery lake. Her screams are heard no more.
- OUTWORLD - INDIAN CEMENTARY
Kamon has drawn a huge brimstone with his blood around the scared land.
KAMON:
I will give my life for hers.
Kamon kneels in the middle of the brimstone, and with his knife, he slices his wrists, and
spreads his arms. He begins chanting in his Egyptian language.
- Rahankatut : Thousands of years ago
Kamon looks much younger more alive. Kamon is before Pharaoh Akhenaten, receiving orders.
AKHENATEN:
You are one of my best leaders, and you must go to war. Stop the Eye of Ra.
KAMON:
I will do as you wish, my lord.
AKHENATEN:
Good, now be gone.
Kamon nods. Not too far away, a you Keilienaten has been eavesdropping. She's much younger. Maybe in her teens. She is crying. Kamon spots
her from far away, and looks away sadly.
- RAHANKATUT - VILLAGE
Keilienaten and Kamon are together, just like in Keilienaten's flashback.
He's hugging her tightly.
KEILIENATEN:
I know my father has found about us, and that's why he's sending you away.
KAMON:
If that were to be true, I will come back, and when I do, you and I will be wedded. We will confront your father.
KEILIENATEN:
You promise. Do you not care, I'm just sixteen?
KAMON:
Age is blinded here. It is only our differences in class that will be an obstacle between us.
KEILIENATEN:
As long as you and I love one another.
They begin to kiss, and slowly undress one another. They wrap around one anothers naked bodies and make love.
- INDIAN CEMETARY - Present
Kamon is still in kneeling in the middle of the Brimstone. There is now a puddle of mud all around him. He screams loud, as he cries desperately.
RAHAKATUT - DESERT - Thousands of years ago
Kamon and his army are battleling a huge deadly army. To the looks, Kamon's army is winiing, but Kamon spots one of his best men being ambushed. He, without a doubt, goes to his man’s aid. Together they kill their attackers. Once they thought they had the win, two men surprise Kamon’s man, and slice him in half. They drag each half away, and feast upon it.
Angry and disgusted, Kamon goes mad, and attack the oncoming army.
Sekhmet, the leader of Eye of Ra surprises Kamon, and stabs him from the back.
Kamon turns around and still has the energy to fight back. Both battle out, with Kamon loosing a lot of blood.
Sekhmet stabs Kamon on the chest, and smiles. Kamon wastes no time, and stabs Sekhmet On the eye. Sekhmet goes mad, and fires a fireball at Kamon.
Kamon falls the cliff and lands on huge spikes.
Then, huge fireballs begins to fall over the cliff, and one eventually hits Kamon, blowing him to pieces.
- INDIAN CEMENTARY - Present
Kamon is still kneeling, crying, making the blood puddle bigger. He lets out louder cries. Not too far away, the little conniving Piroh watches him, as he floats.
- RAHANKATUT- PATHAWAY - Thousands of years ago
Kamon, who is engulfed all around in flames falls into a dark place. It’s a passageway. The path that lies between Heaven and Hell.
As the fire turns off, Kilvan appears before Kamon.
KILVAN:
I’ve come to offer you an eternal life, in exchange for another.
Kamon’s flesh begins to reanimate. Kamon looks up the the God of Death.
- RAHAKATUT – DESERT – Thousands of years ago
Kamon is riding a dark horse through the desert. He looks stronger and angrier. He has given a second chance, but in an exchange he doesn’t like.
He could hear Kilvan’s offer echo inside his head.
KILVAN:
Your work is to kill and destroy Akhenaten and Nefertiti, so I can overpower Rahankatut, and gain much power. Then together we will overthrow Zaggot.
Kamon angrily rides his horse.
KAMON:
I cannot do such thing, for I am loyal to my Lord, and Keilienaten. What I must do is avenge my death.
- INDIAN CEMENATRY – Present
Kamon has lost plenty of blood, and falls on his back. Piroh quickly goes to his aid. Pirok create a small flame from his hand, and burns both of Kamon’s wrists. The wounds quickly seal up.
PIROH:
Are you trying to destroy everything you have?
KAMON:
I have nothing. For thousands of years, I hid behind Keilienaten’s shadows, protecting her from harm.
PIROH:
She was able to defend herself quiet frankly.
KAMON:
Yeah. She grew into the this ambitious for power Goddess. She turned into something I didn’t like.
PIROH:
A thirst for full power isn’t bad.
KAMON: (angry)
You! You’re Kilvan’s personal messenger. You betrayed her.
PIROH:
I did no such thing. You have to realize, that Kilvan is a God, and he is smart. He tracks all of my moves. He knew about Keilienaten’s and my plan right off hand. I had to tell him before he destroyed me too.
KAMON:
You lie.
PIROH:
It’s all true. Keilienaten knew that. That is why her and I planned secretive and undetected meetings.
KAMON: (angry)
You lie again. How dare you?
PIROH:
It’s true. If you don’t believ me, you can ask her yourself.
KAMON:
You foul full. You dare laugh in my face. She’s dead, and you know it.
PIROH:
But you pity her for nothing. You wonder why her and Dragon King would be lovers. Well, here’s the story: Keilienaten is a smart woman. She planned in drinking Onaga’s blood to gain power. TO live forever, and she did just that. She tricked the dragon into bedding with him, to drink his blood.
KAMON:
Maybe she isn’t as smart as she thought. TO resurrect the dead, is using Onaga’s heart.
PIROH:
How do you know that? That’s just a myth. Forget it. The blood is to hold full power, that even death cannot hold you back, unless the heart is ripped from it’s owner, of course.
KAMON:
So she will walk the the living again?
PIROH:
Yes. Her and I will continue our plan, in bringing Kilvan down. We will need your help, Kamon.
KAMON:
I cannot. I made a deal with Kilvan, and I must abide by it.
PIROH:
You broke the deal when you didn’t kill Akhenet and Nefertiti.
KAMON:
I did kill them.
PIROH:
Now You lie. It was Keilienaten who stained her hands with her parents blood, after destroying the Goddess Iris.
Kamon looks away.
KAMON:
She has gone a different direction. There is nothing that can have her connected to me, anymore. She loves women, for christ’s sake.
PIROH:
That can change if you help. After your death, she vowed never to love another man. Of course no one knew she would lust for same sex relations either, but love is stronger than lust, and you can brake that. Help us, and destroy Kilvan. Then, she will be the same Keilienaten you knew.
Kamon looks at Piroh.
KAMON:
How do I not know, this isn’t another trick from you? That Kilvan isn’t behind all this.
PIROH:
Not this time. Trust me. Now, I must go before Kilvan notices my absences.
KAMON:
How do I know where to find her?
PIROH:
Don’t worry. She’ll find you.
With that said, Piroh disappears.
- PITS of HELL -
The lake of fire departs, splitting in half. Out of the depths, The burnt flesh of Keilienaten walks out. As she walks into the firey hills, he entire skin reanimates, giving her her beauty back. She looks as astonishing as before.
KEILIENATEN:
It’s time.


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Alright,im planning on coming back to writing in the story soon,things are getting a bit better,and I think I will be able to do this again,I have missed a hell of alot,so im wondering if someone can give me an update on the characters,like changes and locations and things like that,who ever helps,thanks alot.


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Kamon rises from his knees and looks at the cirlce of blood he has made. His helm segments onto his face (Stargate style) and the his eyes glow a sapphire blue.
Kamon- I do this for, and for you alone.
He launches a fireball into the center of the circle and the circle begins to pulesate with power. He takes his staff and opens both ends.
Kamon- May the gates of the underworld open and let the one I care pass!
He jumps into the air and comes down on the blast with his staff blades open. The power surges to the top portion of his staff and a pillar of light opens.
Underworld-
Keilienaten walks through the firey pit, suddenly she stops, infront of her stands a strange doorway. It happens to be a rift between the world of the living and the dead.
World of the Living-
Kamon is exhausted from casting his spell. He fells as if his body is about to fall to pieces. He fells a strange pain in his body but shruggs it off and leaves the site to go rejoin his god.
-Grand Hall-
Kilvan, pleased with his victory takes the time to relax and drink some wine.
Kilvan- Pathetic, she thought that she could actually defeat me. Hmph, I'll deal with her in my own and in my own time. As for now, I suppose I should enjoy the finer things in life.
Kilvan sits in a chair and puts his feet on the table, leaning back. He picks up a glass and swirls the wine inside it. He then puts it to his mouth slit and drinks to his victory.
Kilvan- Piroh? Come forth.
There is no answer, not one to be kept waiting, he screams
Kilvan- Piroh!!
The mini cyclops appears, it seems that he's out of breath.
Kilvan- Do you enjoy keeping me waiting?
Piroh-.....no, no.
Kilvan- You seem a bit jumpy, anything you want to tell me? Hmm.
Piroh- No, no. Piroh has nothing to say.
Kilvan puts the glass of wine down and remains motionless for a second, then in one quick burst, lunges across the table and grabs Piroh by his head. He brings him face to face and a red glow is seen eminating from his eye slits.
Kilvan- Piroh, are you hiding something from me?
Piroh- Of course not. Why would Piroh hide something?
Kilvan- Because you know that I will seperate your head from your body if I foind out that you are. I'm going to ask one last time. Are you hiding something from me?
Piroh feels his heart jump into his throat and stares Kilvan in the face.
Piroh- i'm not hiding anything.
Kilvan remains silent for a second and the red glow from his mask disappears. He lets go of Piroh and leans back in his chair.
Kilvan- Very well then. Now, what do we do about the Dragon King? His heart is valuable to say the least. We need it to make an indestructible army.
Piroh- But, Kamon has amassed an army that dwarfs even the Dragon Kings by 10 fold. Why do we need his heart to reanimate them?
Kilvan- Giving me that power in this mortal form will let me rule from both sides. This will also rid me of that handicap, Kamon. His true power is still dormant, we must get rid of him before it is awakened.
Piroh- We do it the traditional way, yes?
Kilvan- No, his body holds to much power, doing it that way may shatter the barrier between life and death. We must be cautious, we can't let him know. Bring him to me.
Piroh- Yes, of course.
Piroh fades out and leaves Kilvan to himself.
Kilvan picks up his glass of wine and is about to drink it when he realizes that it's empty.
Kilvan- Who dares.....
He's cut off by a voice in the shadows.
?????- I do.
A crimson glow eminates from Kilvan's mask, accompanied by a smoke.
Kilvan stands up and punches through the table in a fury.
Kilvan- You will pay for your transgression. My jackals will feast on your corpse when I drag you down into the after life.
?????- Death doesn't bother me. I have walked that line countless times. Each time getting stronger.
Kilvan- Well then, you won't mind me sending you back!
Kilvan grabs his scythe and swings into the shadows.
?????- We've already been through this. Do you want to embarass yourself again?
Kilvan puts the scythe down in anger.
Kilvan- When this is over I will personally hang you from the cieling.
The shadow quickly lurks across the ground and wrap itself around Kilvan, forming a figure. The shadow puts Kilvan into a lock and bends him to one knee. The shadow then shoots its hand into Kilvans body and out the other side.
?????- I can tear your heart out right now and you won't even have time to scream. Do you feel that? The ice cold sensation rushing through your body? That is what true due is. The slow realization that you are powerless to do anything about it, no matter how hard you try.
Kilvan- How are you doing this? You can easily make contact with anyone you choose yet I can't harm you. What trickery is this.
?????-It's a perfect control of ones spectral and physical balance. I call it Surface Contact. I can solidify any part I need to make contact with.
The shadows hand retracts out of Kilvan's chest and he lets off the pressure, allowing him to get to his feet.
Kilvan- Surface Contact, I see. That's why I can't touch you. What do you want with me?
?????- Want? "Want" is a meaningless word where I come from. I'm not hear to take nor give anything from anyone. I'm only hear to ensure balance. If necessary, I will TAKE the life I that is intended to preserve that balance. My role in this tournament is much larger then you can fathome. Do not cross me.
Kilvan- What exactly are you?
?????- Some call me the Grim Reaper. However it makes no difference what they call me, I answer to a higher authority.
Kilvan- The Elder Gods?
?????- No, nothing as weak as the Elder Gods. My time hear is wasted, you are clearly not the one I'm looking for.
Kilvan- Do you have any idea who I am? I am....
The shadow cuts him off by grabbing him by his throat and lifting him into the air. Two blazing red eyes appear in the darkness.
?????- Yes, Anubis. I know who you are.
The shadow lets him drop to the ground and lets him catch his breath.
?????- Do not think that armor can protect you. I have more then enough strength to tear through it and rip your essence right out.
With that, the shadow dissapears in on itself leaving Kilvan alone.
At this time, Piroh and Kamon enter the room.
Kamon- I do this for, and for you alone.
He launches a fireball into the center of the circle and the circle begins to pulesate with power. He takes his staff and opens both ends.
Kamon- May the gates of the underworld open and let the one I care pass!
He jumps into the air and comes down on the blast with his staff blades open. The power surges to the top portion of his staff and a pillar of light opens.
Underworld-
Keilienaten walks through the firey pit, suddenly she stops, infront of her stands a strange doorway. It happens to be a rift between the world of the living and the dead.
World of the Living-
Kamon is exhausted from casting his spell. He fells as if his body is about to fall to pieces. He fells a strange pain in his body but shruggs it off and leaves the site to go rejoin his god.
-Grand Hall-
Kilvan, pleased with his victory takes the time to relax and drink some wine.
Kilvan- Pathetic, she thought that she could actually defeat me. Hmph, I'll deal with her in my own and in my own time. As for now, I suppose I should enjoy the finer things in life.
Kilvan sits in a chair and puts his feet on the table, leaning back. He picks up a glass and swirls the wine inside it. He then puts it to his mouth slit and drinks to his victory.
Kilvan- Piroh? Come forth.
There is no answer, not one to be kept waiting, he screams
Kilvan- Piroh!!
The mini cyclops appears, it seems that he's out of breath.
Kilvan- Do you enjoy keeping me waiting?
Piroh-.....no, no.
Kilvan- You seem a bit jumpy, anything you want to tell me? Hmm.
Piroh- No, no. Piroh has nothing to say.
Kilvan puts the glass of wine down and remains motionless for a second, then in one quick burst, lunges across the table and grabs Piroh by his head. He brings him face to face and a red glow is seen eminating from his eye slits.
Kilvan- Piroh, are you hiding something from me?
Piroh- Of course not. Why would Piroh hide something?
Kilvan- Because you know that I will seperate your head from your body if I foind out that you are. I'm going to ask one last time. Are you hiding something from me?
Piroh feels his heart jump into his throat and stares Kilvan in the face.
Piroh- i'm not hiding anything.
Kilvan remains silent for a second and the red glow from his mask disappears. He lets go of Piroh and leans back in his chair.
Kilvan- Very well then. Now, what do we do about the Dragon King? His heart is valuable to say the least. We need it to make an indestructible army.
Piroh- But, Kamon has amassed an army that dwarfs even the Dragon Kings by 10 fold. Why do we need his heart to reanimate them?
Kilvan- Giving me that power in this mortal form will let me rule from both sides. This will also rid me of that handicap, Kamon. His true power is still dormant, we must get rid of him before it is awakened.
Piroh- We do it the traditional way, yes?
Kilvan- No, his body holds to much power, doing it that way may shatter the barrier between life and death. We must be cautious, we can't let him know. Bring him to me.
Piroh- Yes, of course.
Piroh fades out and leaves Kilvan to himself.
Kilvan picks up his glass of wine and is about to drink it when he realizes that it's empty.
Kilvan- Who dares.....
He's cut off by a voice in the shadows.
?????- I do.
A crimson glow eminates from Kilvan's mask, accompanied by a smoke.
Kilvan stands up and punches through the table in a fury.
Kilvan- You will pay for your transgression. My jackals will feast on your corpse when I drag you down into the after life.
?????- Death doesn't bother me. I have walked that line countless times. Each time getting stronger.
Kilvan- Well then, you won't mind me sending you back!
Kilvan grabs his scythe and swings into the shadows.
?????- We've already been through this. Do you want to embarass yourself again?
Kilvan puts the scythe down in anger.
Kilvan- When this is over I will personally hang you from the cieling.
The shadow quickly lurks across the ground and wrap itself around Kilvan, forming a figure. The shadow puts Kilvan into a lock and bends him to one knee. The shadow then shoots its hand into Kilvans body and out the other side.
?????- I can tear your heart out right now and you won't even have time to scream. Do you feel that? The ice cold sensation rushing through your body? That is what true due is. The slow realization that you are powerless to do anything about it, no matter how hard you try.
Kilvan- How are you doing this? You can easily make contact with anyone you choose yet I can't harm you. What trickery is this.
?????-It's a perfect control of ones spectral and physical balance. I call it Surface Contact. I can solidify any part I need to make contact with.
The shadows hand retracts out of Kilvan's chest and he lets off the pressure, allowing him to get to his feet.
Kilvan- Surface Contact, I see. That's why I can't touch you. What do you want with me?
?????- Want? "Want" is a meaningless word where I come from. I'm not hear to take nor give anything from anyone. I'm only hear to ensure balance. If necessary, I will TAKE the life I that is intended to preserve that balance. My role in this tournament is much larger then you can fathome. Do not cross me.
Kilvan- What exactly are you?
?????- Some call me the Grim Reaper. However it makes no difference what they call me, I answer to a higher authority.
Kilvan- The Elder Gods?
?????- No, nothing as weak as the Elder Gods. My time hear is wasted, you are clearly not the one I'm looking for.
Kilvan- Do you have any idea who I am? I am....
The shadow cuts him off by grabbing him by his throat and lifting him into the air. Two blazing red eyes appear in the darkness.
?????- Yes, Anubis. I know who you are.
The shadow lets him drop to the ground and lets him catch his breath.
?????- Do not think that armor can protect you. I have more then enough strength to tear through it and rip your essence right out.
With that, the shadow dissapears in on itself leaving Kilvan alone.
At this time, Piroh and Kamon enter the room.
**Piroh sees Kilvan on one knee on the floor, hand at his throat, gasping for breath**
Piroh: My lord...are you well? What...what happened? You're not hurt, no?
Kilvan: I'm..FINE!!!
**His fists tremble with rage, and the glow behind his eyes turns crimson again. Piroh and Kamon back away**
Kilvan: That...THING...that person...it...he...she....returned...threatened me...it said it was here to ensure 'balance'...ugh...ARGH!
** He punches the floor, leaving an indentation, and tries to rise, but stumbles. The wound in his chest is healing very quickly, but it is still leaking an orange fluid which hits the ground from time to time, making it sizzle**
Kamon: You are still injured from your duel. Here...
**Kamon helps him up**
Kamon: Do you think it could have been from Orderrealm?
**Kilvan nots to Kamon briefly, and dusts himself off**
Kilvan: No...it said it answered to a higher power...something above the Elder Gods...
Kamon: But there exist no such deities!
Piroh: Other than the One Being...yes?
All: ....
Kilvan: That's impossible. Long has that one lost all sense of consciousness.
Piroh: You never know...
Kamon: Do not concern yourself with such things. Your victory is imminent!
Kilvan: Yes....it is, isn't it?
Kamon: How may I serve you at this time, lord?
**Kilvan regards him for a moment**
Kilvan:...You can fetch for me another bottle of wine. I seem to have run out. Return here quickly, so we may plan our assaults.
Kamon: Yes, lord.
**Kamon leaves the room**
Kilvan: Well?
Piroh: I have tested his loyalty. He has failed.
Kilvan: Good. Another excuse to be rid of him. Does he suspect?
Piroh: How would he? He hasn't the slightest clue, yes?
Kilvan: None do, save for Keilienaten.
Piroh: Perhaps we shouldn't have told her, no?
Kilvan: Pah! She burns as we speak.
Piroh: Oh so toasty, yes!
Kilvan: It would appear our mystery assailant hasn't a clue, either. Not that I fear it...but, it's always nice to have security.
**He pauses, and takes in his small servant with a baleful gaze, eye-glow yellow**
Kilvan: And what of your fealty, Piroh? Are you loyal to me?
Piroh: Why, of course, my lord...how could I not be?
**The glow from behind Kilvan's maks is white again**
Kilvan and Piroh:...HA HA HA HA...!
**Kamon enters the room, and pours some wine. Piroh offers him a glass, and the three drink together**
Piroh: So, master...when do we plan our coup?
Kilvan: Immediately after the finals. I will be confronting either Sensui or Sozek. Once I am victorious, we will assault Onaga. Once his heart is consumed, our armies, not his, will be invincible. And then, not even the powers of surface contact will prevent me from rending that intruder's flesh from his bones...
Piroh: My lord...are you well? What...what happened? You're not hurt, no?
Kilvan: I'm..FINE!!!
**His fists tremble with rage, and the glow behind his eyes turns crimson again. Piroh and Kamon back away**
Kilvan: That...THING...that person...it...he...she....returned...threatened me...it said it was here to ensure 'balance'...ugh...ARGH!
** He punches the floor, leaving an indentation, and tries to rise, but stumbles. The wound in his chest is healing very quickly, but it is still leaking an orange fluid which hits the ground from time to time, making it sizzle**
Kamon: You are still injured from your duel. Here...
**Kamon helps him up**
Kamon: Do you think it could have been from Orderrealm?
**Kilvan nots to Kamon briefly, and dusts himself off**
Kilvan: No...it said it answered to a higher power...something above the Elder Gods...
Kamon: But there exist no such deities!
Piroh: Other than the One Being...yes?
All: ....
Kilvan: That's impossible. Long has that one lost all sense of consciousness.
Piroh: You never know...
Kamon: Do not concern yourself with such things. Your victory is imminent!
Kilvan: Yes....it is, isn't it?
Kamon: How may I serve you at this time, lord?
**Kilvan regards him for a moment**
Kilvan:...You can fetch for me another bottle of wine. I seem to have run out. Return here quickly, so we may plan our assaults.
Kamon: Yes, lord.
**Kamon leaves the room**
Kilvan: Well?
Piroh: I have tested his loyalty. He has failed.
Kilvan: Good. Another excuse to be rid of him. Does he suspect?
Piroh: How would he? He hasn't the slightest clue, yes?
Kilvan: None do, save for Keilienaten.
Piroh: Perhaps we shouldn't have told her, no?
Kilvan: Pah! She burns as we speak.
Piroh: Oh so toasty, yes!
Kilvan: It would appear our mystery assailant hasn't a clue, either. Not that I fear it...but, it's always nice to have security.
**He pauses, and takes in his small servant with a baleful gaze, eye-glow yellow**
Kilvan: And what of your fealty, Piroh? Are you loyal to me?
Piroh: Why, of course, my lord...how could I not be?
**The glow from behind Kilvan's maks is white again**
Kilvan and Piroh:...HA HA HA HA...!
**Kamon enters the room, and pours some wine. Piroh offers him a glass, and the three drink together**
Piroh: So, master...when do we plan our coup?
Kilvan: Immediately after the finals. I will be confronting either Sensui or Sozek. Once I am victorious, we will assault Onaga. Once his heart is consumed, our armies, not his, will be invincible. And then, not even the powers of surface contact will prevent me from rending that intruder's flesh from his bones...


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-1st level of Hell-
A ball of energy shoots from the green sky and smashes into the ground like a meteor. Wandering souls, hungrey for flesh begins to approach the crater. The flames around the crash site scortch all those who try to get near it. A silhouette appears in the flames, screaming in agony as the they die out. The figure inside is Hatsuma, the ninja killed by Sensui. HIs deeds under Sensui's control have not gone unexcused. His soul has been sentanced to burn in the depths of Hell. As he regains his conciusness, his memmories flood back into his head. He sees Gabrielle, the pain in her eyes is all too clear. They oth know that he's going to die, but she still refuses to except that fact. Hatsuma's next and last memmory in the living world is the edge of Sensui's blade. His final sense is the edge of the blade going into his chest and his vision of Gabrielle fading. He sees her heart brake as the walls come tumbling down and her tears flow from her eyes.
Hatsuma- Gabrielle.......
He takes his first step into the fabled underworld. As his foot touches the soil, he is filled with an immense pain. His body ignites in flames, he has now officially entered Hell. His being is stripped completely bare, leaving him defenseless. Hatsuma is barely able to stand, his body is barely holding together. He tries to take another step, again he is filled with the same pain as before. He can feel that Hell itself is alive, breathing, seething, and moving ever so slowly. Skies, filled with fire, forests of bones, and winds of tortured screams, all come together to create a canvas, too nightmareish to imagine.
Once again, Hatsuma falls to his knees, collapsing on the burning soil made of bones fire. Trying to breathe is like trying to inhale fire. Hatsuma looks ahead of him. Huge towers of ash and bone stretch into the sky. As he surveys the area, whot looks to be a twisted willow tree catches his eye. It gliters brilliantly against the green sky and the ash black soil. Hatsuma makes his way towards the glowing tree. As he gets closer, his head is filled with screams, and his face with horror, an emtion that has been lost to him for what seems to be an eternity. The glowing lights in the tree are actually cages. The fires burning on it's branches are actually people.
-Help me please!
-I've learned my lesson!
-Let me out, please! Even for a second.
-It was all a mistake. I didn't mean to kill them. Please let me out.
Hatsuma- Is this..... Is this the fate the awaits my soul?
-Are you here to help us?
Hatsuma doesn't answer, shedding only a tear.
As Hatsuma is a bout to leave, the ground beneath him begins to quake. Suddenly, something that looks like a serpent shoots from the ground. It's size is enormous, it towers at least 60 feet above Hatsuma, or at least the visible part. It has no skin, and its gore is all too visible, caged in only by its skeletal structure. It's eyes burn with the fires of Hell as it lurkes over the damned ninja.
Hatsuma- How is this possible? This can't be the Netherealm? Where am I?
- Hahaha. Stupid little soul. You are in Tartarus, you are in Hell.
Hatsuma- Hell? But I was killed in Mortal Kombat!
-We are very well aware of where you died. However, Mortal Kombat has no barring here. All those who die outside the tournament end up here.
Hatsuma- Perhaps you didn't hear me. I said I WAS killed IN Mortal Kombat.
-You were NOT!!!! You were killed in an exhibition match. That has no barring. As well, you were struck down by the Malice Blade. Your soul is was damned from that moment on. Now, prepare to recieve your punishment!
The beast lets out a fearsome roar as it lunges at Hatsuma.
-Non Existance!
The serpent opens its mouth, letting it's tendrills shoot forth. The dig into Hatsuma's soul, imbolizing him. The serpent shoots him high into the air and opens its gaping mouth beneath him.
-Enjoy your suffering while it lasts. These moments are your final.
As Hatsuma plummets into certain doom, a shadow figure appears from nowhere, slicing the serpents head in half, killing it instantly. its body twitches wildly, and soon disintegrates. The figure shoots into the air, catching Hatsuma at the same time, and delivering him to safety.
Hatsuma reaches into his arms and pulls out the dead serpents tendrills.
?????- How careless.
Hatsuma- Who, what are you?
?????- That makes no difference. You should just be greateful I've saved you.
Hatsuma- Saved me? From what?! My release? Look around you? How can you tell me that I'm saved?
The figure grabs Hatsuma by his throat, giving him time to speak.
?????- Non-existance, is far too an easy path for you. It will not bring you salvation.
Hatsuma- This is Hell. Salvation is non-existant here.
?????- Not this far out no. But live long enough, and travel far enough and you will find it.
Hatsuma- Travel? Everytime I take a step, my body ignites.
?????- The fire you feel are your sins. you must carry there burden. Only when you reach the end can they be forgiven.
Hatsuma- Tell me. What am I supposed to do?
?????- Hell is divided into 10 circles. Each representing a different sin. You must traverse these circles to reach salvation in the middle.
Hatsuma- 10 circles? I have been taught that there where 9 layers?
?????- You speak of the Inferno. That was Dante's own rendition of it. The only way his mortality could cope with it. The visions he saw were only supressed images. What awaits you is far worse.
Hatsuma- What sort of "salvation" awaits me at the center?
?????-.......Life.
Hatsuma- Life? That can't be! No one has ever escaped from Hell. So, how are you here?
?????- My from was forged in it's fire. I leave this choice to you. You can make the journey, and if you succeed, your life will be restored. If you renounce it, or fail, your soul will become part of this for all eternity.
Hatsuma- How will eye return to life?
?????- If you make it that far, I will await you there, with your body. If you make it that far, we shall meet again.
Hatsuma- Very well. But who are you? You're not a demon, but I suspect you're far from a saint.
The figure is quiet for a moment.
?????- Grave.
With that, the figure vanishes, leaving Hatsuma with his trek towards salvation.
A ball of energy shoots from the green sky and smashes into the ground like a meteor. Wandering souls, hungrey for flesh begins to approach the crater. The flames around the crash site scortch all those who try to get near it. A silhouette appears in the flames, screaming in agony as the they die out. The figure inside is Hatsuma, the ninja killed by Sensui. HIs deeds under Sensui's control have not gone unexcused. His soul has been sentanced to burn in the depths of Hell. As he regains his conciusness, his memmories flood back into his head. He sees Gabrielle, the pain in her eyes is all too clear. They oth know that he's going to die, but she still refuses to except that fact. Hatsuma's next and last memmory in the living world is the edge of Sensui's blade. His final sense is the edge of the blade going into his chest and his vision of Gabrielle fading. He sees her heart brake as the walls come tumbling down and her tears flow from her eyes.
Hatsuma- Gabrielle.......
He takes his first step into the fabled underworld. As his foot touches the soil, he is filled with an immense pain. His body ignites in flames, he has now officially entered Hell. His being is stripped completely bare, leaving him defenseless. Hatsuma is barely able to stand, his body is barely holding together. He tries to take another step, again he is filled with the same pain as before. He can feel that Hell itself is alive, breathing, seething, and moving ever so slowly. Skies, filled with fire, forests of bones, and winds of tortured screams, all come together to create a canvas, too nightmareish to imagine.
Once again, Hatsuma falls to his knees, collapsing on the burning soil made of bones fire. Trying to breathe is like trying to inhale fire. Hatsuma looks ahead of him. Huge towers of ash and bone stretch into the sky. As he surveys the area, whot looks to be a twisted willow tree catches his eye. It gliters brilliantly against the green sky and the ash black soil. Hatsuma makes his way towards the glowing tree. As he gets closer, his head is filled with screams, and his face with horror, an emtion that has been lost to him for what seems to be an eternity. The glowing lights in the tree are actually cages. The fires burning on it's branches are actually people.
-Help me please!
-I've learned my lesson!
-Let me out, please! Even for a second.
-It was all a mistake. I didn't mean to kill them. Please let me out.
Hatsuma- Is this..... Is this the fate the awaits my soul?
-Are you here to help us?
Hatsuma doesn't answer, shedding only a tear.
As Hatsuma is a bout to leave, the ground beneath him begins to quake. Suddenly, something that looks like a serpent shoots from the ground. It's size is enormous, it towers at least 60 feet above Hatsuma, or at least the visible part. It has no skin, and its gore is all too visible, caged in only by its skeletal structure. It's eyes burn with the fires of Hell as it lurkes over the damned ninja.
Hatsuma- How is this possible? This can't be the Netherealm? Where am I?
- Hahaha. Stupid little soul. You are in Tartarus, you are in Hell.
Hatsuma- Hell? But I was killed in Mortal Kombat!
-We are very well aware of where you died. However, Mortal Kombat has no barring here. All those who die outside the tournament end up here.
Hatsuma- Perhaps you didn't hear me. I said I WAS killed IN Mortal Kombat.
-You were NOT!!!! You were killed in an exhibition match. That has no barring. As well, you were struck down by the Malice Blade. Your soul is was damned from that moment on. Now, prepare to recieve your punishment!
The beast lets out a fearsome roar as it lunges at Hatsuma.
-Non Existance!
The serpent opens its mouth, letting it's tendrills shoot forth. The dig into Hatsuma's soul, imbolizing him. The serpent shoots him high into the air and opens its gaping mouth beneath him.
-Enjoy your suffering while it lasts. These moments are your final.
As Hatsuma plummets into certain doom, a shadow figure appears from nowhere, slicing the serpents head in half, killing it instantly. its body twitches wildly, and soon disintegrates. The figure shoots into the air, catching Hatsuma at the same time, and delivering him to safety.
Hatsuma reaches into his arms and pulls out the dead serpents tendrills.
?????- How careless.
Hatsuma- Who, what are you?
?????- That makes no difference. You should just be greateful I've saved you.
Hatsuma- Saved me? From what?! My release? Look around you? How can you tell me that I'm saved?
The figure grabs Hatsuma by his throat, giving him time to speak.
?????- Non-existance, is far too an easy path for you. It will not bring you salvation.
Hatsuma- This is Hell. Salvation is non-existant here.
?????- Not this far out no. But live long enough, and travel far enough and you will find it.
Hatsuma- Travel? Everytime I take a step, my body ignites.
?????- The fire you feel are your sins. you must carry there burden. Only when you reach the end can they be forgiven.
Hatsuma- Tell me. What am I supposed to do?
?????- Hell is divided into 10 circles. Each representing a different sin. You must traverse these circles to reach salvation in the middle.
Hatsuma- 10 circles? I have been taught that there where 9 layers?
?????- You speak of the Inferno. That was Dante's own rendition of it. The only way his mortality could cope with it. The visions he saw were only supressed images. What awaits you is far worse.
Hatsuma- What sort of "salvation" awaits me at the center?
?????-.......Life.
Hatsuma- Life? That can't be! No one has ever escaped from Hell. So, how are you here?
?????- My from was forged in it's fire. I leave this choice to you. You can make the journey, and if you succeed, your life will be restored. If you renounce it, or fail, your soul will become part of this for all eternity.
Hatsuma- How will eye return to life?
?????- If you make it that far, I will await you there, with your body. If you make it that far, we shall meet again.
Hatsuma- Very well. But who are you? You're not a demon, but I suspect you're far from a saint.
The figure is quiet for a moment.
?????- Grave.
With that, the figure vanishes, leaving Hatsuma with his trek towards salvation.


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Wow.
Creative stuff SmokeNc.
I enjoyed reading the whole thing especially the 10 circles, i'm guessing you're referring like before to religion. the ten commandments..meaning ten sins.right.
Very well done.
I would love to see how this turns out.
Fantastic ideas, keep it up bro.
Creative stuff SmokeNc.
I enjoyed reading the whole thing especially the 10 circles, i'm guessing you're referring like before to religion. the ten commandments..meaning ten sins.right.
Very well done.
I would love to see how this turns out.
Fantastic ideas, keep it up bro.


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Yeah, pretty much. I was also reffering to Dante's Inferno. I'm hoping to atleast finish up the fight between Vandon and Sensui by today. Anyway, glad you liked it.


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World of the Living
-Dragon King's Court Room-
Onaga- We have come to the second round of the Semi-Finals. Who so ever wins this will go on to face Kilvan in the final round of the tournament.
Vandon, step forth.
A pillar of black fire shoots from the ground, releasing an emense amount of energy. Vandon steps for, removing his hood and letting his hair flow free.
Onaga- And for the challanger, Sensui.
The ground erupts, billions of screams fill the court room. The noise is unbarable, the voices of small children, women and other innocent shrieks fill the unlookers. A pillair of blood shoots from the ground, Sensui and Xion flip from the crimson curtain onto the arena.
Sensui- Vandon, you know what to do. now leave me.
Xion- Of course.
Xion creates a demension slash, reopening the ancient Genma Realm and is slowly dragged in by its power, dissapearing from sight.
Onaga- Now, let the finals be decided. Go forth and provide a show.
Both fighters are warped from sight and a new portal opens to the battle sight. It's completely dark, no features of the arena, nor the fighters can be made out. Suddenly, a loud heart beat can be heard, followed by a long pause, a second heart beat is heard and the arena lights up. The two fighters find themselves facing off on a long stretch of bridge, with a sizeable platform in the center. The bridge is made from a mix of bones, as well as stone. The pillars have skulls impaled on the tips, leading all the way, and around the center platform. Periodic eruptions of magma shoot from the lake of fire below. It looks as if the two fighters are squaring off in the belly of an immense beast.
Vandon- Sensui, it's been almost two months since our last escapade. And we face each other at last.
Sensui- So, it has finally come. Well then, have at me, if I am to die, I want to feel the rush one more time.
Both fighters charge each other from opposite sides of the bridge, each trying to reach its center first. However, Sensui's immense speed gives him the advantage as he's able to reach the center first and cross over into Vandon's territory. Sensui jumps into the air and delivers a swift kick to Vandon's head, however, Vandon stops in his tracks and raises his gaurd, blocking Sensui's kick completely. That brief second let's him to charge his other fist and unleash a Black Dragon fist to Sensui's mid-section, Senui, being a bit smaller uses his agility to flip over the fist in mid air and land on his feet unscathed. Vandon turns around and comes down with an over head fist crush, Sensui, once again uses his agility to back handspring away from the assault. Vandon's fist comes crashing down to the floor, on impact he releases a surge of Shadow Dragon energy into the floor which courses towards Sensui, catching him off gaurd, and hitting him directley in his chest, shooting him to his side of the bridge.
Sensui lands shoulders first and skids a few inches, feet in the air the whole time. Vandon preforms a massive leap and covers immense distance, Sensui realizes that Vandon plans to squash him underhis heel and quickly kicks up, barely avoiding the stomp.
Vandon lands hard, and with authority, he's a bit stunned since he had nothing to brace the impact, Senui uses the opporutnity to reach back and kick Vandon in the back of his head, sending him tumbling forward.
Sensui does a backflip, landing with his feet pressed against Vandon's back then pushes off, causing Vandon to fall face first to the ground. Sensui then jumps into the air, and comes down in a corck-screw stomp, only to have Vandon power up his fists and block the attack.
Vandon- That's quite impressive, but it will take much more then that to take me down.
Sensui- oh, believe me, when I'm done, they'll need to sew you back together for your funeral.
Not impressed, Vandon powers through, shooting Sensui off his arms and back into the air. He launches his Black Dragons at Sensui, which home in on the demi-god and attack him visciously, all three connecting, and igniting Sensui life a light bulb, Sensui's body is smoldering as it comes tumbling back down to the bridge. Vandon extends his hand and forms it into a fist, he times his strike perfectley, hitting Sensui square in the solo-plexes, knocking the wind out of his body.
Vandon- How dissapointing, I thought that you would've lasted longer.
Sensui quickly raises his hand and points his palm directly at Vandon's face.
Sensui- Just bidding my time!
With that, Sensui launches a Magma blast at Vandon's face, causing his whole head to be incased in scortching magma. Vandon instantly drops Sensui to his feet as he tries to scrape the magma off his face. Sensui lurks under both of Vandon's legs, kicking out both of his knees and causing him to collapse, Sensui kicks him in the stomach, but leaves his foot there, igniting Vandon with flames. Sensui brings his foot straight up, launching Vandon into the air, then jumps after him. Vandon recognizes the move, having seen it done several times before, and grabs Sensui's leg as it comes in.
Vandon- Although I can't see you, I know you're trying your powerful High Riser Hell Kick, it won't work on me.
Sensui- On the contrary, I was hoping you'd grab my leg, it would leave you open for THIS!
Sensui uses his other foot to create a flaming sickle and launch it up Vandon's body, causing a deep gash in his chest. Vandon lets go of Sensui's leg as the attack caught him off gaurd. With that opening, Sensui turns around and lands a hook kick to Vandon's magma encased head, shooting him to the ground. Vandon lands hard, craking the magma casing around his head, clearley bleeding from his head. His eyes flare up and the casing explodes releaving him of that cast. The blood drips into his eyes, causing a painful sting, Vandon is not pleased.
As Sensui lands on the ground Vandon inloades on him with several Seeking Black Dragon blasts, Sensui manages to avoid most of them by switching to his Zui Quan form and acting drunk, he does a few back flips to avoid a spiral version of the seeker blasts, he also bridge backwards to dodge several more, however, on his barrel roll to his feet, he is hit with one last blast, straight in the face, blinding him temporarily. Vandon uses his Shadow Teleport to put Sensui into a choke hold, counting this as payback, Vandon lifts Sensui off the ground and beggins to smash Sensui's skull into the ground repeatedly, and actually causing part of the platform to give way, showing the lake of fire below. Sensui is bleeding from his forehead, his face a crimson mess.
Vandon- What do you have to say now, demi-god?
Sensui coughs up some blood and smirks.
Sensui- That's it, hurt me more, give me a rush.
Sensui's eyes flare as he lifts his head and glares at Vandon with a sinister look. Sensui takes some of the blood on his forehead and flings it onto Vandon's chest, before Vandon has a chance to react, he burst into flames. Vandon quickly concentrates, and absorbs the flames, and the pain quickly subsides. At this point, both men are a complete mess. Instead of going for more powe attacks however, they resort to the basics: Hand to hand.
Vandon and Sensui square off in the center of the bridge, fire geyzers constantly erupting. Both fighters match blow for blow, nobody can land a clear hit. They counter each punch with a punch, and kick with kick. Neither Vandon nor Sensui can land a solid blow on each other's bodies. Vandon tries to sweep Sensui, but Sensui jumps over it and tries to catch Vandon with a spinning hook kick, but Vandon ducks over it. As Soon as both regain their foorting they make on last lunge at each other, and make contact with a vicious uppercut on both chins. The impact has a delay, and it looks as if time is standing still, Then, suddenly both fighters are shot back to their ends of the bridges, each has broken the others jaws. Sensui and Vandon spit out some blood and pop them back into place.
Vandon- Time to end this fight.
Sensui- Yes, it is.
Vandon reaches behind his back and extracts his Blades of Carnage.
Sensui creates his Malice blade, and solidifies it, its steel scrapes the ground, creating what sounds like a shriek. Both fighters charge each other with full force. Sensui unleashes a verticle slash, Vandon counters with a cross shaped block. Sparks fly and the blades clash ferociously. Vandon and Sensui brake and hop back from each other. Sensui charges his blade, and Vandon unhinges his Blades of Carnage. Both fighters charge once more and begin to assault each other with a storm of cuts, slices, thrusts and counters. Vandon swings around high with one blade, and then swings low, hoping to get Sensui of gaurd since he only has one blade. Sensui however bridges back for the first one then lifts his feet of the ground to avoid the second slice, he falls on his back and quickly kicks back up, kicking Vandon in the chest. Vandon kneels to catch his breath, and Sensui take the opportunity to sprial in mid air and land on one of Vandon's blades, rendering it useless. Sensui fallows up with a verticle slash with his blade, Vandon quickly lets go of his blade and avoid the cut, but is left with a scar across his face.
Vandon- You'll pay for that.
Sensui- Shut up and fight.
Vandon shoots a Black Dragon at Sensui, knocking him off the blade. Vandon then drops his foot on the blade's handle causing it to flip in the air and back into his hand. He rotates his wrist once and readys himself. Sensui comes in with a swift slash to Vandon's chest, but Vandon drops his blade just low enough to block the attack. Vandon the comes around with a slice at Sensui's head, Sensui shoots his blade between his wrists and blocks the hit as well. They continue to dodge each others blows until Vandon, fakes Sensui with a double slice, but hits him with a sweep to the back of his knees, causing him to collapse. Seeing an opportunity, Vandon comes down with an over head slash with both blades, Sensui rolls out of the way, but gets his arm severed at the wrist.
Sensui- Aaagghh!!!!
Vandon doesn't let him lag on it too long as he continues his assault. Etremely angered Sensui unleashes his Drakness Cannon on Vandon, blasting him to the edge of the arena, and causing him to drop his blades. Vandon quickly grabs one of the posts to keep his balance, but Sensui won't have any of that, he rushes Vandon with a flurry of punches of kicks, trying to make Vandon break his grasp. Sensui unleashes a combo which chains from his Wu Shi, to his Judo. Vandon knows that if he lets go during an assault like this, he's finished, o he takes the punishment for as long as he can. Then Sensui leaves an opening in the combo for a power move, Vandon ciezes the opportunity and flips over Sensui just as he's about to make contact. Vandon rolls over to his Blades of Cranage, and launches them at Sensui at blazing speed, Sensui only has enough time to turn around and see the blades shoot through his kneck and torso.
Vandon- It's finished.
Sensui only lets out an evil laugh as his jigon eye begins to glow. Cracks run down his body, and blood spew forth. Sensui's energy begins to erupt out of his body, and suddenly the demi-god is enveloped in light, an explosion occurs of epic proportions. Gore is shot everywhere, but what Vandon doesn't see is a mysterious being where Sensui stood because of the blindining light. What's left are Sensui's legs, which then fall backwards, off the platform and into the lava pit, incinerating before they ever hit the lava below. With that, Vandon is warped back to the Court Room.
Onaga- The winner, by fatality, Vandon. We now have our final candidates. I suggest you get some rest and tend to your wounds, we begin the final match in two days.
Guess I'm doing the lone wolf thing again.
-Dragon King's Court Room-
Onaga- We have come to the second round of the Semi-Finals. Who so ever wins this will go on to face Kilvan in the final round of the tournament.
Vandon, step forth.
A pillar of black fire shoots from the ground, releasing an emense amount of energy. Vandon steps for, removing his hood and letting his hair flow free.
Onaga- And for the challanger, Sensui.
The ground erupts, billions of screams fill the court room. The noise is unbarable, the voices of small children, women and other innocent shrieks fill the unlookers. A pillair of blood shoots from the ground, Sensui and Xion flip from the crimson curtain onto the arena.
Sensui- Vandon, you know what to do. now leave me.
Xion- Of course.
Xion creates a demension slash, reopening the ancient Genma Realm and is slowly dragged in by its power, dissapearing from sight.
Onaga- Now, let the finals be decided. Go forth and provide a show.
Both fighters are warped from sight and a new portal opens to the battle sight. It's completely dark, no features of the arena, nor the fighters can be made out. Suddenly, a loud heart beat can be heard, followed by a long pause, a second heart beat is heard and the arena lights up. The two fighters find themselves facing off on a long stretch of bridge, with a sizeable platform in the center. The bridge is made from a mix of bones, as well as stone. The pillars have skulls impaled on the tips, leading all the way, and around the center platform. Periodic eruptions of magma shoot from the lake of fire below. It looks as if the two fighters are squaring off in the belly of an immense beast.
Vandon- Sensui, it's been almost two months since our last escapade. And we face each other at last.
Sensui- So, it has finally come. Well then, have at me, if I am to die, I want to feel the rush one more time.
Both fighters charge each other from opposite sides of the bridge, each trying to reach its center first. However, Sensui's immense speed gives him the advantage as he's able to reach the center first and cross over into Vandon's territory. Sensui jumps into the air and delivers a swift kick to Vandon's head, however, Vandon stops in his tracks and raises his gaurd, blocking Sensui's kick completely. That brief second let's him to charge his other fist and unleash a Black Dragon fist to Sensui's mid-section, Senui, being a bit smaller uses his agility to flip over the fist in mid air and land on his feet unscathed. Vandon turns around and comes down with an over head fist crush, Sensui, once again uses his agility to back handspring away from the assault. Vandon's fist comes crashing down to the floor, on impact he releases a surge of Shadow Dragon energy into the floor which courses towards Sensui, catching him off gaurd, and hitting him directley in his chest, shooting him to his side of the bridge.
Sensui lands shoulders first and skids a few inches, feet in the air the whole time. Vandon preforms a massive leap and covers immense distance, Sensui realizes that Vandon plans to squash him underhis heel and quickly kicks up, barely avoiding the stomp.
Vandon lands hard, and with authority, he's a bit stunned since he had nothing to brace the impact, Senui uses the opporutnity to reach back and kick Vandon in the back of his head, sending him tumbling forward.
Sensui does a backflip, landing with his feet pressed against Vandon's back then pushes off, causing Vandon to fall face first to the ground. Sensui then jumps into the air, and comes down in a corck-screw stomp, only to have Vandon power up his fists and block the attack.
Vandon- That's quite impressive, but it will take much more then that to take me down.
Sensui- oh, believe me, when I'm done, they'll need to sew you back together for your funeral.
Not impressed, Vandon powers through, shooting Sensui off his arms and back into the air. He launches his Black Dragons at Sensui, which home in on the demi-god and attack him visciously, all three connecting, and igniting Sensui life a light bulb, Sensui's body is smoldering as it comes tumbling back down to the bridge. Vandon extends his hand and forms it into a fist, he times his strike perfectley, hitting Sensui square in the solo-plexes, knocking the wind out of his body.
Vandon- How dissapointing, I thought that you would've lasted longer.
Sensui quickly raises his hand and points his palm directly at Vandon's face.
Sensui- Just bidding my time!
With that, Sensui launches a Magma blast at Vandon's face, causing his whole head to be incased in scortching magma. Vandon instantly drops Sensui to his feet as he tries to scrape the magma off his face. Sensui lurks under both of Vandon's legs, kicking out both of his knees and causing him to collapse, Sensui kicks him in the stomach, but leaves his foot there, igniting Vandon with flames. Sensui brings his foot straight up, launching Vandon into the air, then jumps after him. Vandon recognizes the move, having seen it done several times before, and grabs Sensui's leg as it comes in.
Vandon- Although I can't see you, I know you're trying your powerful High Riser Hell Kick, it won't work on me.
Sensui- On the contrary, I was hoping you'd grab my leg, it would leave you open for THIS!
Sensui uses his other foot to create a flaming sickle and launch it up Vandon's body, causing a deep gash in his chest. Vandon lets go of Sensui's leg as the attack caught him off gaurd. With that opening, Sensui turns around and lands a hook kick to Vandon's magma encased head, shooting him to the ground. Vandon lands hard, craking the magma casing around his head, clearley bleeding from his head. His eyes flare up and the casing explodes releaving him of that cast. The blood drips into his eyes, causing a painful sting, Vandon is not pleased.
As Sensui lands on the ground Vandon inloades on him with several Seeking Black Dragon blasts, Sensui manages to avoid most of them by switching to his Zui Quan form and acting drunk, he does a few back flips to avoid a spiral version of the seeker blasts, he also bridge backwards to dodge several more, however, on his barrel roll to his feet, he is hit with one last blast, straight in the face, blinding him temporarily. Vandon uses his Shadow Teleport to put Sensui into a choke hold, counting this as payback, Vandon lifts Sensui off the ground and beggins to smash Sensui's skull into the ground repeatedly, and actually causing part of the platform to give way, showing the lake of fire below. Sensui is bleeding from his forehead, his face a crimson mess.
Vandon- What do you have to say now, demi-god?
Sensui coughs up some blood and smirks.
Sensui- That's it, hurt me more, give me a rush.
Sensui's eyes flare as he lifts his head and glares at Vandon with a sinister look. Sensui takes some of the blood on his forehead and flings it onto Vandon's chest, before Vandon has a chance to react, he burst into flames. Vandon quickly concentrates, and absorbs the flames, and the pain quickly subsides. At this point, both men are a complete mess. Instead of going for more powe attacks however, they resort to the basics: Hand to hand.
Vandon and Sensui square off in the center of the bridge, fire geyzers constantly erupting. Both fighters match blow for blow, nobody can land a clear hit. They counter each punch with a punch, and kick with kick. Neither Vandon nor Sensui can land a solid blow on each other's bodies. Vandon tries to sweep Sensui, but Sensui jumps over it and tries to catch Vandon with a spinning hook kick, but Vandon ducks over it. As Soon as both regain their foorting they make on last lunge at each other, and make contact with a vicious uppercut on both chins. The impact has a delay, and it looks as if time is standing still, Then, suddenly both fighters are shot back to their ends of the bridges, each has broken the others jaws. Sensui and Vandon spit out some blood and pop them back into place.
Vandon- Time to end this fight.
Sensui- Yes, it is.
Vandon reaches behind his back and extracts his Blades of Carnage.
Sensui creates his Malice blade, and solidifies it, its steel scrapes the ground, creating what sounds like a shriek. Both fighters charge each other with full force. Sensui unleashes a verticle slash, Vandon counters with a cross shaped block. Sparks fly and the blades clash ferociously. Vandon and Sensui brake and hop back from each other. Sensui charges his blade, and Vandon unhinges his Blades of Carnage. Both fighters charge once more and begin to assault each other with a storm of cuts, slices, thrusts and counters. Vandon swings around high with one blade, and then swings low, hoping to get Sensui of gaurd since he only has one blade. Sensui however bridges back for the first one then lifts his feet of the ground to avoid the second slice, he falls on his back and quickly kicks back up, kicking Vandon in the chest. Vandon kneels to catch his breath, and Sensui take the opportunity to sprial in mid air and land on one of Vandon's blades, rendering it useless. Sensui fallows up with a verticle slash with his blade, Vandon quickly lets go of his blade and avoid the cut, but is left with a scar across his face.
Vandon- You'll pay for that.
Sensui- Shut up and fight.
Vandon shoots a Black Dragon at Sensui, knocking him off the blade. Vandon then drops his foot on the blade's handle causing it to flip in the air and back into his hand. He rotates his wrist once and readys himself. Sensui comes in with a swift slash to Vandon's chest, but Vandon drops his blade just low enough to block the attack. Vandon the comes around with a slice at Sensui's head, Sensui shoots his blade between his wrists and blocks the hit as well. They continue to dodge each others blows until Vandon, fakes Sensui with a double slice, but hits him with a sweep to the back of his knees, causing him to collapse. Seeing an opportunity, Vandon comes down with an over head slash with both blades, Sensui rolls out of the way, but gets his arm severed at the wrist.
Sensui- Aaagghh!!!!
Vandon doesn't let him lag on it too long as he continues his assault. Etremely angered Sensui unleashes his Drakness Cannon on Vandon, blasting him to the edge of the arena, and causing him to drop his blades. Vandon quickly grabs one of the posts to keep his balance, but Sensui won't have any of that, he rushes Vandon with a flurry of punches of kicks, trying to make Vandon break his grasp. Sensui unleashes a combo which chains from his Wu Shi, to his Judo. Vandon knows that if he lets go during an assault like this, he's finished, o he takes the punishment for as long as he can. Then Sensui leaves an opening in the combo for a power move, Vandon ciezes the opportunity and flips over Sensui just as he's about to make contact. Vandon rolls over to his Blades of Cranage, and launches them at Sensui at blazing speed, Sensui only has enough time to turn around and see the blades shoot through his kneck and torso.
Vandon- It's finished.
Sensui only lets out an evil laugh as his jigon eye begins to glow. Cracks run down his body, and blood spew forth. Sensui's energy begins to erupt out of his body, and suddenly the demi-god is enveloped in light, an explosion occurs of epic proportions. Gore is shot everywhere, but what Vandon doesn't see is a mysterious being where Sensui stood because of the blindining light. What's left are Sensui's legs, which then fall backwards, off the platform and into the lava pit, incinerating before they ever hit the lava below. With that, Vandon is warped back to the Court Room.
Onaga- The winner, by fatality, Vandon. We now have our final candidates. I suggest you get some rest and tend to your wounds, we begin the final match in two days.
Guess I'm doing the lone wolf thing again.
Piroh: We know the name of our enemy now, don't we, yes?
Kilvan: You see? I told you we had little to worry about. Sensui fell...his own arrogance and weakness are to blame. In two days....all will be mine....
**They disappear**
Kilvan: You see? I told you we had little to worry about. Sensui fell...his own arrogance and weakness are to blame. In two days....all will be mine....
**They disappear**


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-Pits of Hell-
The lone ninja, Hatsuma makes his way through what seems to be an endless forest of bones. Each step feels like it's his last. Breathing is a luxury he cannot afford. Each breath is like inhailing fire, it burns severely, it scortches his lungs as he makes his way to the outskirts of the first ring of Hell.
Hatsuma- So, this is what my transgressions against humanity have brought me. I suppose that it's fitting to say the least. I was too weak to fight back Sensui's grasp, and because of my submission, I have suffered greately.
As Hatsuma comes ever closer to the first ring, he can feel the intense heat eminating from Hell's core. His skin begins to singe, it starts to burn, and the ninja suddenly ignites into an inferno. The pain is imeasureable, since he can't die, he can't have the satisfaction of death. As he keeps tredding forward, millions of screams shoot through his ears. Cries of innocent women and children, men begging for their lives all coupled in one noise, that had it been heard by any living man would have driven them to such insanity as to tear their ears off. Hatsuma is crippled with pain, his skin burning, his head filled with screams, he can't even close his eyes since every blink feels like an eternity in darkness, surrounded by his misdeeds.
Hatsuma- Get out of my head!!!!!! Leave me alone!!!!! I won't be tortured by my sins, by things I didn't commit out of free will.
Hatsuma raises to his feet and starts moving forward, clenching his ears, and trying to keep his eyes open, knowing that he'll be driven insane if he closes them. He moves forward, until suddenly he feels a great weight being put on his shoulders. His skin has stopped burning, and the noises in his head have stopped. As he looks before him, he sees a familiar sight that terrifies him. He has reached the first ring. The bone forest seperates into a path, and at the end, lies a village. As Hatsuma makes his way to it, he knows that from here on out, things will only get harder.
-Dragon King's Palace: Living World-
The finals have been decided, Kilvan and Vandon will face each other in two days and Sensui is finally gone. Ryoko makes her way to Gabrielle's chamber, hoping to talk with her once dear freind. As she approaches the door, she takes a deep breath and enters inside.
Ryoko- Gabrielle? Can I come in?
Gabrielle is silent. Seeing her like this tears Ryoko apart. She hasn't eaten in three days, or slept in two. Ryoko enters the room with some caution, as she takes a step inside, a dagger shoots at her head. She quickly twists around and grabs the blade in between two of her fingers. She puts the blade down and takes another step inside.
Ryoko- Gabrielle, please I don't want...........
Gabrielle- Just shut up and leave.
Ryoko- Please I just want.....
Gabrielle- It's always about what you want isn't it? You wanted me to never see him, you wanted me to hate him, like you do. You wanted him to die a dogs death, like Sensui. Well now he's gone and you got what you wanted, now leave!
Ryoko- Get it through your head! I was doing what was best for you. He was as evil as Sensui and you know it. Because of him, you're in the predicament you are in now. Because of him we've lost many allies. He had no feelings for you, it was all a ploy.
Gabrielle breaks into tears and screams at Ryoko.
Gabrielle- SHUT UP!!!!! JUST SHUT UP!!!!! You have no idea what went on between us. You have no idea what he's really been through. He had to kill somebody he loved with full consciusness, but no free will. He was tortured for years in his sleep by Sensui before being fully engulfed by his grasp. Sensui may have been dispicable, but he always told the truth, and now I see why he despised you. You ARE a murderer, a cold and heartless murderer.
Seeing that Gabrielle has become extatic, Ryoko slaps her across the face, then grabs her by her shoulders and pins her against the wall. Ryoko is filled with rage, but that subsides quickly once she looks into Gabrielle's eyes.
Gabrielle- Why'd he have to die?
Ryoko releases her grasp on her friend and turns her head away. She takes her mask off and stares back at her.
Ryoko- I....don't know. Why do those we care for have to suffer? This is a cruel game, and many times, the ones closest to us pass at times when we need them the most.
*Gabrielle looks up at Ryoko*
Gabrielle- You're still here. And I won't let you leave me.
Ryoko looks at Gabrielle wiith surprise.
Ryoko- Gabrielle, I.......Thank you.
Gabrielle unclenches her fist and reveals the jeweledcherry blossom that was in Hatsuma's hand. She puts it in her hair and stands up. Both of them stare at each other for a moment and then hug each other. Ryoko whispers softly in Gabrielle's ear.
Ryoko- I'm so sorry, little one.
Both of them are filled with tears as the embrace each other in a hug, something that, at one point seemed impossible anymore.
At that momment, Nightwolf enters the room, short of breath.
Nightwolf- Gabrielle, Ryoko, come quickly, it's about Lui Kang and Kung Lao.....
The lone ninja, Hatsuma makes his way through what seems to be an endless forest of bones. Each step feels like it's his last. Breathing is a luxury he cannot afford. Each breath is like inhailing fire, it burns severely, it scortches his lungs as he makes his way to the outskirts of the first ring of Hell.
Hatsuma- So, this is what my transgressions against humanity have brought me. I suppose that it's fitting to say the least. I was too weak to fight back Sensui's grasp, and because of my submission, I have suffered greately.
As Hatsuma comes ever closer to the first ring, he can feel the intense heat eminating from Hell's core. His skin begins to singe, it starts to burn, and the ninja suddenly ignites into an inferno. The pain is imeasureable, since he can't die, he can't have the satisfaction of death. As he keeps tredding forward, millions of screams shoot through his ears. Cries of innocent women and children, men begging for their lives all coupled in one noise, that had it been heard by any living man would have driven them to such insanity as to tear their ears off. Hatsuma is crippled with pain, his skin burning, his head filled with screams, he can't even close his eyes since every blink feels like an eternity in darkness, surrounded by his misdeeds.
Hatsuma- Get out of my head!!!!!! Leave me alone!!!!! I won't be tortured by my sins, by things I didn't commit out of free will.
Hatsuma raises to his feet and starts moving forward, clenching his ears, and trying to keep his eyes open, knowing that he'll be driven insane if he closes them. He moves forward, until suddenly he feels a great weight being put on his shoulders. His skin has stopped burning, and the noises in his head have stopped. As he looks before him, he sees a familiar sight that terrifies him. He has reached the first ring. The bone forest seperates into a path, and at the end, lies a village. As Hatsuma makes his way to it, he knows that from here on out, things will only get harder.
-Dragon King's Palace: Living World-
The finals have been decided, Kilvan and Vandon will face each other in two days and Sensui is finally gone. Ryoko makes her way to Gabrielle's chamber, hoping to talk with her once dear freind. As she approaches the door, she takes a deep breath and enters inside.
Ryoko- Gabrielle? Can I come in?
Gabrielle is silent. Seeing her like this tears Ryoko apart. She hasn't eaten in three days, or slept in two. Ryoko enters the room with some caution, as she takes a step inside, a dagger shoots at her head. She quickly twists around and grabs the blade in between two of her fingers. She puts the blade down and takes another step inside.
Ryoko- Gabrielle, please I don't want...........
Gabrielle- Just shut up and leave.
Ryoko- Please I just want.....
Gabrielle- It's always about what you want isn't it? You wanted me to never see him, you wanted me to hate him, like you do. You wanted him to die a dogs death, like Sensui. Well now he's gone and you got what you wanted, now leave!
Ryoko- Get it through your head! I was doing what was best for you. He was as evil as Sensui and you know it. Because of him, you're in the predicament you are in now. Because of him we've lost many allies. He had no feelings for you, it was all a ploy.
Gabrielle breaks into tears and screams at Ryoko.
Gabrielle- SHUT UP!!!!! JUST SHUT UP!!!!! You have no idea what went on between us. You have no idea what he's really been through. He had to kill somebody he loved with full consciusness, but no free will. He was tortured for years in his sleep by Sensui before being fully engulfed by his grasp. Sensui may have been dispicable, but he always told the truth, and now I see why he despised you. You ARE a murderer, a cold and heartless murderer.
Seeing that Gabrielle has become extatic, Ryoko slaps her across the face, then grabs her by her shoulders and pins her against the wall. Ryoko is filled with rage, but that subsides quickly once she looks into Gabrielle's eyes.
Gabrielle- Why'd he have to die?
Ryoko releases her grasp on her friend and turns her head away. She takes her mask off and stares back at her.
Ryoko- I....don't know. Why do those we care for have to suffer? This is a cruel game, and many times, the ones closest to us pass at times when we need them the most.
*Gabrielle looks up at Ryoko*
Gabrielle- You're still here. And I won't let you leave me.
Ryoko looks at Gabrielle wiith surprise.
Ryoko- Gabrielle, I.......Thank you.
Gabrielle unclenches her fist and reveals the jeweledcherry blossom that was in Hatsuma's hand. She puts it in her hair and stands up. Both of them stare at each other for a moment and then hug each other. Ryoko whispers softly in Gabrielle's ear.
Ryoko- I'm so sorry, little one.
Both of them are filled with tears as the embrace each other in a hug, something that, at one point seemed impossible anymore.
At that momment, Nightwolf enters the room, short of breath.
Nightwolf- Gabrielle, Ryoko, come quickly, it's about Lui Kang and Kung Lao.....


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Nice.


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Thanks. I guess I'm doing this by myself. Sometimes I'll do some back tracking and read the older chapters to remind myself of what happened so I can atleast finish this up.


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SmokeNc-017 Wrote:
Thanks. I guess I'm doing this by myself. Sometimes I'll do some back tracking and read the older chapters to remind myself of what happened so I can atleast finish this up.
Thanks. I guess I'm doing this by myself. Sometimes I'll do some back tracking and read the older chapters to remind myself of what happened so I can atleast finish this up.
Man...wish I could help.Im way too lost for this now,I asked a long while ago if someone could help me catch up,and seemingly no one really cared,so im pretty much screwed with it,im gonna be in the third though,just not this one.


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Relax man, I'll finish this, the final round has been decided, so I guess, it's up to me to close this up.
A ninja's path is a lone one, this isn't any different.
A ninja's path is a lone one, this isn't any different.
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