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•09/04/2004 06:39 PM (UTC) •
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nice additions guys..i'd like to see the others.
rabid, and others you should try and get some other people to join the 3rd tournament, then we will be able to have a much livelier story thread.

Don't worry about it being on pg7, well it shouldn't be that far away..but all the threads have been pushed down to pg3 minimum. and it's hard to notice a thread if it's that back, eh.
unless you know about it.

thanks for showing up ninja_arts.
we have 31 more slots available for pre-registering. So, try and find people who are interested. Thanks.

Good job with the stories. Keep up the good work.
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 •09/04/2004 06:58 PM (UTC) •
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Brodeur Wrote:
nice additions guys..i'd like to see the others.
rabid, and others you should try and get some other people to join the 3rd tournament, then we will be able to have a much livelier story thread.

Don't worry about it being on pg7, well it shouldn't be that far away..but all the threads have been pushed down to pg3 minimum. and it's hard to notice a thread if it's that back, eh.
unless you know about it.

thanks for showing up ninja_arts.
we have 31 more slots available for pre-registering. So, try and find people who are interested. Thanks.

Good job with the stories. Keep up the good work.


Im still working on mine.Trying to finish off story then it will be in soon.
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 •09/05/2004 02:12 AM (UTC) •
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Sabre readies himself for his quickly approaching fight.

Sabre "That little bitch doesnt stand a chance."
He hears knocking at his room door and opens it.
Sabre "Get out of here you stupi...what the?"
He looks down at his feet and he is standing in a red liquid,formed in a slash.He bends over and puts his finger in it.He places it on his tongue and thisthingisdisableduates it.
Sabre "Blood,how did this get here?"
He hears a window crash open behind him.He turns around and sees an open window.
Sabre "Who's there?Show yourself."
He hears running footsteps to his right in the shadows.
Sabre "Calm..." He hears them from the left "Stay calm..." They run towards him "Calm...GOTCHA!"
He holds Leviathan up by the throat.
Sabre "And who might you be?"
The character struggles,as he grabs Sabres arms and applies pressure.
Sabre bites his lip in pain "Wanna play like that?"
He tightens the grip around Leviathan's neck.Choking him.
Sabre "How do you like that?"
Leviathan sprays out blood from inside his mouth into the eyes of Sabre.He drops Leviathan.As he lands on his feet.He slowly stands up straight and Sabre tries to swing at him.
Sabre "What is this shit?"
Leviathan replies in a low voice "Blood..."
He knees Sabre in the stomache and throws him to the ground.
Leviathan "Be ready...watch your back."
Sabre sits up as if nothing happens only to hear a voice.
The voice slowly fades away "Be ready..."
Sabre stands up,as the effect of the mist goes away.
Sabre "For what?"
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 •09/05/2004 02:47 AM (UTC) •
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He moved along Quickly. He was now back in the wooded areas, leaping from tree to tree. His insights telling him that there was no good here. His eyes narrowed as he leaped from branch to branch. The nimble ninja darting back and forth as a Cabin type house came into sight. He stopped and pulled his Grapling hook from his belt and began to swing it. He wasn't too far from the ground, and he knew he could get a better view on the roof.

He was an enigma in this tournament, an unbridled mess of mayhem. He wasn't even entered, but he knew where he was and what was going on. They were all trying to kill eachother for Pride, vengence, power, even. He takes a spot on the roof of the cabin, where it would seem a battle was taking place. The ninja began to creep along the edge as he saw Sabre and Leviathan fighting beneath him. He kept to the shadows as he watched for now. Only God knows when he'd strike.

He spoke in a whisper. It is this time, that I make myself known. That they know who I am. A shadow, an assasin. Blessed be the ones who fall under my blade, for God shall spare them no pity. I am the Unknown Shadow. I am Syn. I am Death. He then rolled to the side and hung to the roof of the Cabin, waiting for the right moment. At that time he heard " Be Ready...Be Ready..." He then Leaped down, clinging to a side of the door and then bursting through a window, his katana in hand along with a Tanto in the other. He was about to wage war, and the only way he knew how, was to kill by dark and use darkness. This was his time now, and now he would spill the blood.

To be continued...

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 •09/05/2004 08:26 AM (UTC) •
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Someone can't read the Topic Title.
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 •09/05/2004 12:55 PM (UTC) •
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Mobster_For_SATAN Wrote:
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Ok.Sureeeeeeee it is.Its called a story for a reason.I hope that was some wierd version of a joke.
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 •09/06/2004 01:19 AM (UTC) •
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Keep goin' with the story.
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 •09/06/2004 01:22 AM (UTC) •
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Im all storied out right now.Tomorrow if I can I will.
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Just like the pied piper lead rats through the streets. You dance like
marionettes, swing to the symphony of destruction.- Megadeth

 •09/09/2004 03:11 PM (UTC) •
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This is disgraceful, what is going on are we all going to let the storyline die!? We have a few fightscenes that still need to be written why is this thread on the 4th page?
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 •09/09/2004 03:43 PM (UTC) •
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I hope not. I'm still waiting for the other two fight scenes we need, so I can post mine, with Sabre and Keilienaten. If not, I will just write all 3 fights. COncerning the story, writing this novel, I found a lot of looses ends, and unexplained feuds, so I'm fixing all that. That's why I haven't written anything here, but I might just add a shit load of stories, since no one is doing so.
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 •09/09/2004 03:44 PM (UTC) •
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Yea, Someone pick it up.

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 •09/09/2004 05:36 PM (UTC) •
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Who is supposed to be fighting the fight scenes anyway?Been waiting for them for a while.
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 •09/09/2004 05:38 PM (UTC) •
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Rabid_Wolverine Wrote:
Who is supposed to be fighting the fight scenes anyway?Been waiting for them for a while.


I dunno. I think DragonKingreptile wanted to write one of them, and then there was another one left, before the one I'm writing for Keilien and Sabre. I guess no one is doin the other two. WHy dont you take one Rabid... If not you know me, I'll hog all of them up, but it's not fair. Atleast I dont think it is.
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 •09/09/2004 05:42 PM (UTC) •
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What fights have to be written now anyway?And shouldnt Katian have died from that injection by now?If we can all find out what key stuff is missing I will help out as much as I can.
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 •09/09/2004 05:43 PM (UTC) •
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That's what I was talking aout unfinished stories. I was thinking having Kitana kill her sister, since now we know Kitana is on DK's side.

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 •09/09/2004 05:53 PM (UTC) •
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The one's we need is Vandon VS Pheniox, Ayido Hwedo VS Lianna, and Keilenaten VS Sabre. I called dibs on Keilien's fight, but if no onw takes the others I will.
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 •09/09/2004 06:17 PM (UTC) •
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Im sort of mixed on doing this.It may sound like its going both ways with Sabre's emotions cause it is.Anyway thats one plot hole filled.Who is going to write the scenes now?



Sabre walks into Katians room.He sees her lying on her bed.She looks to him.

Katian "Sabre..."

She struggles with every breath.Her insides nearly completely rotted.

Sabre "Your'e dying."
Katian "I know,Nasha has done this to me."
Sabre "I saw."
Katian "Why are you here?"
Sabre "To say something."
Katian "What is it."
Sabre "You didnt fulfill your end of the bargain..."
Katian begins to panic "What are you talking about?!"
Sabre "When we first met,you said,I help you,you help me.You said I help Edenia,you kill a rival of mine.And guess what?IT NEVER HAPPENED!"
Katian "Calm down Sabre."
Sabre "WHY?So I can slave over you some more?Thats all that I have done this whole time.YOU never did shit for me!"
Katian "I cant go through this.I can die at any moment..."
Sabre "And you will..."

Sabre pulls a blade from his boot.

Katian "Tell them I said goodbye."
Sabre "Goodbye...this is for your own good."
Katian "Thank you..."

Sabre with one quick motion lifts the dagger and stabs it through Katian's heart.He takes out the dagger,and walks away.Kitana comes walking through the door and sees Katian on the bed dead.She looks at Sabre.

Kitana "What happened?What did you do?"
Sabre "I ended the pain."
Kitana trys to jump on Sabre but he catches her.
Sabre "I did it for her own good."
Kitana "How could you say that?"
Sabre "Because its the truth..."

Sabre puts Kitana down and cleans his dagger blade.Then throws it to the ground.

Sabre "She said goodbye."
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 •09/09/2004 07:53 PM (UTC) •
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I loved it. It was very emotional, and yes Sabre had mixed emotions. I guess that happens before hs fight with Keilienaten.
Good way to end that death.


I still have no clue who is writing the fight scenes. You can write one if you want Rabid, or Ill take them all. Kiddin, can't be too selfish-- or can I. Hmmmmm. No, reallt, we nedd some2 to write them.
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 •09/09/2004 07:56 PM (UTC) •
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I dont particulary like writing fight scenes too much.Plus too much shit is going on in my life right now,but still I will see if I can.
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 •09/10/2004 03:21 AM (UTC) •
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I'm glad that people are back and are atleast trying to get the story back on its feet and off of the resperator. I'll update shortly, I've just been busy with work, and my upcoming rank advancement in Kempo tomorrow.
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 •09/10/2004 05:28 AM (UTC) •
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A Follow up to the Ninja's newest movements.

With Death comes new life, as well as more death. His eyes were the shadows, and that's exactly what he was at this moment, a shadow.

A warrior paricipating in the tournament was wandering by his whereabouts, and the ninja saw the perfect opprotunity to avenge all that were killed in his village. His eyes narrowing and a tanto in hand. He then leaped from behind his victim. His current opponent was none other than Sabre who was leaving a hut, or household of some sort. He had recognized this warrior when he dove into the emptied hut where he'd heard the fighting. He saw blood stains and all he thought of was to avenge. He spoke.

"God Bless the Coffin they Carry you Off in..." He then stepped from the darkness and revealed himself. His eyes blending with the rest of his dark appearence. The ninja was of no apparent allignment, and took no sides in this game of life and death. He bared no emotions and was ready to kill as well. Sabre was his current prey, and the predator was hungry for blood.

At that moment he drew out two tanto and vanished into the darkness again, only to confuse his opponent. This would be a fight to the death that the ninja was willing to do, his hot blood rushing to his fists baring his bladed hand weapons as he dived right at Sabre, the tantos ready to be stuck in something.

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 •09/10/2004 11:33 PM (UTC) •
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Sabre senses something to his.He keeps walking,then as the figure closes in,he turns around.It continues to rush towards him,he begins to back up.As if in fear,he reaches a tree and seemingly hugs agaist it.The character continues to lunge towards him,as he is around 5 feet infront of him,Sabre smiles.At the last second he moves as the blades dig deep into a tree.The ninja tries to pull them out.Sabre speaks.

Sabre "You try to attack ME from behind!?"
He gives the ninja a hard kick to the abdomen.
Sabre "You dont do THAT!"
He tries to kick again,but the ninja flips upwards,pulling its blades from the tree.
Sabre "Quick one arent ya?"

The character jumps onto Sabre,wrapping his legs around his arms,he cant move his arms.The ninja raises his blades once again,ready to slash at Sabre's neck.

Sabre struggles to speak,having his breathe taken away "Not...that...easy..."

He falls forward,causing the ninja to land back first and release its grip.It quickly gets to its feet.

Sabre "Dont want to stay down do ya?I will help you with that."

He attempts to kick the ninja in the face.But he moves,as Sabres leg goes past him he cuts it with his blades.Sabre lands on his feet,but instantly falls over,holding his leg.

Sabre "My fucking leg!"

The ninja walks up to him,holding one blade to Sabre's throat. "Time to die."

He hears rustling behind him.He turns around,and scans the trees.He sees a red cloaked figure staring down at him.It quickly dashes to the right.He watches the leaves moving,then it stops.He turns around,and is face to face with Leviathan.

Leviathan "Leave..."
"I have a job to finish."
Leviathan cocks his head to the right.Then turns around.While the ninja forgets about him,Leviathan turns around and gives him a hard kick to the stomache,he bends over in pain.
Leviathan "Never take your eye off of a warrior."
Sabre runs from the left and kicks the ninja hard in the temple knocking him down.

Sabre "I didnt need you...get back here!"

Sabre watches as Leviathan jumps through the trees,he looks back,then continues going,he fades off in the distance.Sabre looks down at the ninja,lying there.

Sabre "Fight to the death my ass..."

He gives him one more kick to the face and walks away.
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 •09/12/2004 07:55 AM (UTC) •
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C'mon people! Atleast finish the fights! Anyway here's a short little addition.
-Castle Catacombs-
Sensui begins to surge with power while in his meditation. As he concentrates, shockwaves can be felt through the castle.
-Courtyard-
Sub-Zero: What the hell's going on?
Kenshi: I sense a powerful aura, it feels like Sensui, but more sinister.
Ryoko is too shaken up to say anything. In the past two days, she has had complete freedom. She never needed to watch her back everywhere she stepped. Now this surge of power reminds her of the first time she and Gabrielle encountered Sensui almost a month ago.
-Catacombs-
The surging power begins to focus on its weilder and compresses into a pillar of dark light which shoots through the ceiling of the catacombs, a beautiful yet horrifyng sight. The twin scars that on Sensui's back begin to bleed, and ethreal wings, almost invisible to the naked eye erupt from his back. Sensui opens his eyes, blazing with purely evil energy. A scream in his head is heard and quickly silenced.
Sensui: It's time.
The pillar of light envelopes Sensuis body and teleports him out of the catacombs.
The demi-god has reawakened and ready to terrorize his victims once more. However, the sarcastic attitude has vanished now only complete darkness remains.


Sorry if this isn't up to par with my other enteries. That's what happens when you fall out of practice for a while. Hopefully, I'll get my groove back soon.
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•09/12/2004 12:30 PM (UTC) •
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I'm adding my new character for 3rd to the story some.

A young, beautiful woman is walking down the halls with her Ethereal Slayer in hand. She stops, looks around, and says,"I know you're here, I can sense it."
A fat, bald man approaches the woman,"Hey sexy, what's your name?"
She replied,"Keely and don't call me sexy."
He laughed,"Okay baby."
Keely turned her head to look at the man and he freaked out at the sight her eyes with no pupils.
Keely said,"I've got more important things to do than worry about a slob of a man."
He replied,"You better watch how you talk to me.."
She cuts him off,"Or what?"
Keely delivers a toe kick to the man's gut and hit him in the face with the handle of her slayer, knocking him out.
She scoffs and continues walking. She says to herself,"With your death, my soul can finally rest."
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