The ninja (Syn) Leaps up as Sabre leaves. A Shadow could easily feign death. He dusts himself off and takes to the trees once more. His idea alot better now of what to expect of these characters. His eyes watch the shadows as well as if anything were to pass by.

He may have faked a loss, and gotten a bruise or so, but only to find out more on his foe. His eyes were on all of the fighters, this would be his greatest feat. He would track them down, one by one, killing the weakest first.

Slim you should take the fight scenes.Everything I have been doing lately is catching up with me.Take them,so we can move on.

Syn shoots through the trees like the wind, unseen, and hardly with a sound. As he reaches a willow tree over looking the courtyard, he is suddenly caught in an explosion. Syn is shot back through the trees and lands hard against a trunk of another tree high in the branches. As Syn regains conciousness he see two seeker missles coming straight at him. He quickly shoots into the air and runs on top of one missle causing it to guide off course while slicing through the other. Syn lands back into the tree tops a little shaken.
Syn" Where is this shelling comming from?" As the ninja tenses up he hears a branch snap in the distance. On instinct Syn shoots out a shuriken, only to lodge it into the bark of a young sappling. His eyes shift from side to side and final rest as he takes a deep breath. Before he can exhale a steel tendril shoots out of the foliage and wraps itself around Syn's leg.
Syn" What the...?" A second tendril shoots out and wraps around his waist. Before Syn can react an electrical current is shot through the wires and instantly shocks the ninja. Without so much as a warning, Syn is dragged down from the treetops to the ground below. As he comes down the tenticles release him and he free falls the rest of the way, crashing through every branch on the way down. Six feet above the ground, Syb suddenly feels a hard hit to his chest and is pinned to the tree trunk. His ribs almost break on impact as he spits out some blood through his mask. Before he can see who attacked him the figure dissappears and lets him fall to the ground. Suddenly before Syn can fall to hi knees the figure strikes him in the stomach, popping him back up and into the range of a round house kick. He is quickly grabbed by the head and again stapled to the tree. Syn finally gets a brief glimpse of his attacker, the walking tank, Ravage before getting pumled by a barage of vicious hits to the stomach. Ravage picks Syn up once more and brings him to his face.
Ravage" Identify yourself."
Syn doesn't answer and only stares at the android.
Ravage" Second request. Present idnetificatian or face termination."
Again Syn doesn't answer.
Ravage"Identification unknown. Analysis: Unconfrimed. Course of action...termination."
Ravage tosses Syn into the air and opens his missle turrets. Then in a blink of an eye he launches a barage of missles at the airborne ninja.
Syn rotates in mid-air to catch a glimpse of the missles coming at him. "Nin Pyo Kio Ta Kai Chen Retsu Sia Zen!" Syn manages to warp down to the ground and avoid the missles. Ravage scans the area once more and then moves on while Syn tries to catch his breath and tend to his wounds in the shadows.

Finally, I've finished two fight scenes. Lianna VS Ayido, and Keilienaten VS Sabre. It took three days in the making, not counting weekend, cuz of work. It's true, but I got it. Hope they could put the Pheniox fight, so Amanuet's could be posted up. Also Nasha's fight just passed. Let's gitta working partnas. Here's the fights....


- GOLDEN DESSERT –

The Dragon King stands at large, looking down at the crowd below. The crowd’s getting smaller, and a lot of so called allies have parted. Kombatants seem not to trust one another. There’s been lots of betrayals, disappointments, and deception.
The number of opponents have decreased after each battle.

Onaga: I always said Mortal Kombat, the tournament is just a waste of time. In the
end, I will win. I never loose.

Amanuet: Is that why you were trapped in an egg for thousands of years?

The Dragon King roars and flies towards Amanuet. He grabs her by the throat and lifts her up.

Onaga: Think I wont kill you? Ha!

Keilienaten quickly teleports next to the Dragon King.

Keilienaten: What’s the point in killing her? She’ll be just a waste of good powers.
She’s not worth it. A little whore with a lot to say is all she is. I, on the
other hand am here to worship you. Adore you. Do you

Onaga looks at her, and smirks. He just tosses Amanuet across the ground.

Onaga: I will make sure you die next time. (to Keilienaten) Wait for me in my
chamber after this fight.

Onaga walks away. Keilienaten runs to Amanuet’s aid. Amanuet angrily pushes her away.

Keilienaten: Will you hear what I must say to you?

Amanuet: It’s very clear now. You care for no one, but yourself.

Keilienaten: No. I care for you too. He was about to kill you. I had to do something. It’s a good thing this happened though.

Amanuet: Why?

Keilienaten: I just scored some points with that bastard. Our plans going on great.

They both giggle and hold each other. Then they run away holding hands singing “They’re not gonna get us” by Tatu.

Onaga walks in the middle of the battleround where Lianna and Ayido Hwedo are waiting to fight.

Onaga: Just kill the hell out of each other.

Onaga flies away, and both opponents face each other. They look dead at one another, ready for combat. Ayido gets into his Tajiquan fighting style, while Lianna just stands still. Three enchanted knives appear in front of her, and soon begin floating around her.

Ayido: Always with your sissy toys, deuchess.

Lianna: Always talking smack. You fight to protect your Lord, but are too blind
to see you’re just his little slave doing his errands.

Ayido: Screw you.

Ayido makes his first move. He swings his fists, legs. Lianna dodges his attacks. She attacks back using her blades. Using her mind only, she swings one blade at Ayido, but he too jumps out of the way.
Lianna advances and continues to swing at him her other blades that float around her. As Ayido jumps away, only his clothing is sliced leaving pieces of cloth gliding aound.

Keilienaten and Amanuet had snuck into a dark room. There, they make out madly, slowly taking off each others clothes.
A light flicks on, and both women startle, jumping to their feet. There, in front of them, is Onaga.

Onaga: I always liked girl on girl action. Maybe after your fight Keilienaten, we
can have a pleasurable moment. The three of us.

Keilienaten: Please, find your own ginue pigs.

Onaga: Oh I have.

Amanuet: After you tries to kill me, you want

Onaga: Silence bitch. I love sleeping with the enemy.

Keilienaten: (seductive) If a threesome you want, a threesome you’ll get, then,
mighty king. And if you want to wait until after my match, you
might wait til tomorrow.

Onaga: I think otherwise Keilienaten. Your wait awaits.

Keilienaten: What do you mean?

Onaga: Your opponent awaits. You’re match is also next.

Amanuet: You can’t do that.

Onaga: I’m the king, I can do whatever I want. Now GO!

A portal opents behind Keilienaten, and Onaga pushes her through it. The portal disappears seconds later.

Amanuet: You’re trying to get rid of her, aren’t you?

Onaga: If I did, she would already be dead. Thanks to her, you’re still here.

Onaga walks away proudly.

- Nethership –

A portal opens above the Nethereship, and Keilienaten falls from it, landing on the flying ship.

Keilienaten: Son of a bitch. I’ll make him pay. Oh I will.

Sabre: You think you’ll make it out alive in time to do it?

Keilienaten: (getting up) Oh please I am a queen with powers like no other. I will
make sure I’ll live through this fight. Actually, I’m damn sure I’ll
make it out alive. Can’t say the same thing about moi.

Sabre: You seem so sure of yourself, but it will be I who will defeat you. Don’t
worry, I’ll make your death slowly, but painfully. (laughs)

Sabre attacks Keilienaten, but she spns out of his punches. She kicks him on the stomach, then on his face. She’s about to land another kick, but Sabre grabs her leg.
He quickly swings over him, and slams her on the floor. He begins stomping her on the stomach.
Keilienaten quickly disappears, and teleports behind Sabre. She pulls out her knives and stabs him repeatedly.
Sabre screams in pain, but manages to backfist Keilienaten. The Egyptian queen flies across the flying boat, crashing throught wooden rails and poles.


- Golden Dessert –

Lianna and Ayido are still battling each other.
Lianna tosses one of her knives at Ayido, stabbing him on his arm, then the blade goes back to its rightful owner.
Ayido quickly pulls out his Chinese Rope Javelin, but before he could even flinch, Lianna had thrown another knife at him, getting im right in his hand. He drops his weapon. He pulls out the knife from his hand, and looks uo angrily at Lianna. He gets u p screaming an tosses the knife at her. Of course, when it’s about to hit her, the knife joins it’s floating partner, and floats around Lianna.

Ayido grabs his weapon again, and gets into is Wushu fighting stance.


- Nethereship –

Sabre jumps on top of Kielienaten who is on the floor. He licks her with his huge tongue.

Sabre: Tasty. Mmmmmm.

Keilientaen: Nasty. Iiiiiiick.

Keilienaten jams her head onto his, pushing him off of her. She leaves a slow fireball rotating, then teleports across the ship, and leaves another slow fireball. She quickly teleports behind Sabre, who is getting up. She does her Tornado Kick on him. He is knocked down into one of the slow moving fireballs. As he is tossed across, hit hits the other slow fireball. Keilienaten quickly shoots a regular firball, hitting Sabre in mid air. Sabre is pushed far away, and off the ship.

Keilienaten smiles, proudly. She slowly walks to the edge of the ship, and looks down. No sign of Sabre. There is a beautiful scenery underneath though. She’s about to walk away, and looks ahead. She smiles.

Keilienaten: We’re near the secret portal. My hometown.

A hand reachs up from the edge, and grabs Keilienaten’s foot. She looks down, and sees Sabre hand on a ledge, and a hold of her foot. Sabre pulls Keilienaten off the ship, but instead of letting her fall freely, he swings her through the side of the ship, and into the stomach of the ship. Once Keilienate is forced to crash through, Sabre swings down into it also.


- Golden Dessert –

Ayido shoots his Chinese Rope Javelin at Lianna, actually geeting her on her arm. He pulls it back, and begins to swing it around, trying to hit Lianna. The beautiful deuchess has to jump away from every attack.

Lianna teleports away and appears behin Ayid, spinning her blades around. Each blade slices through Ayido’s back, spilling tons of blood. Ayido runs away from the knives, and turns to look at Lianna.
Lianna: You’re loosing a lot of blood now. Want to forfeit.

Ayido: Never. Ayido never quits.

Ayido swings around his Chinese Rope Javelin, and shoots it. The rope wraps around Lianna’s legs. He tightens it, and pulls the rope. Lianna falls on her back, as Ayido pulls her towards him with the rope.

Lianna uses her knives to cut herself free. As she gets up, Ayido is running towards her and does hi War Spear at her. He sits on top of her and punches the hell out her face.

Ayido: Wanna bleed too? Bleed bitch, Bleeeeeeeeeed!

Ayido grabs his rope, and ties it around her neck. He tightens it up, and squeezes it choking the shit out of Lianna. The beautiful deuchess tries to loose the rope, and tries to hit Ayido at the same time, but she’s loosing breath too fast. She finally orders one kife to attack Ayido. The knife dives at Ayido’s shoulder. Another knife saws the rope off of her neck.
Lianna gets up and runs at Ayido. Ayido had barely pulled the knife off of his shoulder, and gets kicked in the face by Lianna. Lianna quickly shoots all her knives at him.
As Ayido falls, all the knives hits his clothing, pinning him on the rocky nearby.
Lianna takes advantage and runs to do a brutal combo on Ayido.

- Netherbelly –

As Sabre leaps in, Keilienaten had gotten to her feet, ready to attack. She runs at Sabre and starts a killer combo, but to be broken with Sabre’s uppercut. Keilienaten flies back, crashing into a hanging dead body. Angrily, she gets up. She grabs a hanging body, and tosses it at Sabre. Sabre punches the body out of the way, letting the corpse swing around.
Sabre then punches another body, hitting Keilienaten hard. She is knocked back, and out the Netherbelly. Sabre quickly jumps out through the hole Keilienaten made.

- Skies –

Sabre dives down at a falling Keilienaten. The queen looks up, and after seeing Sabre, she teleports away. She reappears above Sabre. By the time the beast sees her, Keilienaten strikes him with her knives. She begins stabbing the hell out his back.
As they both fall, Sabre manages to turn around, and stop Keilienaten from stabbing him.
Then they hit a portal and disappear.

- Golden Dessert –

Lianna is still doing her combo, but Ayido breaks it, by kicking her with both feet. He strongly gets himself free, and grabs all the knives. He tosses them at her. Only one stabs her on her thigh. She manages to control the other two before they her.
To their surprise, a portal opens, and in the middle of the battlefield, Keilienaten and Sabre are spit out.

As they fall, they continue to fight.
Lianna shoots her knives at Ayido, but he jumps out of the way. All three knives head directly for Keilienaten. Luckily, the Egyptian hottie dodges away in time. This pisses her off, and heads towards Lianna.

Keilienaten attacks Lianna, and both females face off. The catfight gets interested, as both girls beat the hell out of one another, and rip their clothes.

Sabre sngril runs towards the girls. Keilienaten is his fight. He’s about to grab Lianna, but Ayido fly kicks Sabre on his back. Sabre angrily gets up, and attacks Ayido.

Ayido: Lianna is mine.

Sabre: You’re mine now, bitch.

Both males commence to fight. Blood is splashing everywhere. Sabre grabs Ayido by the throat and and lifts him up. He then tosses Ayido unto the girls. All threeare knocked all over the area.

Lianna floats to her feet, and shoots her knives at Sabre. All three sink into Sabre’s stomach. Keilienaten angrily gets up.

Keilienaten: He’s mine bitch.

She’s about to slap Lianna, but Ayido tosses his rope at Lianna, and grabs her by the throat, rapidly pulling her back to him.
Ayido grabs the metallic spear that was tore from the edge of his rope, and is about to stab Lianna.
Keilienaten sees that and smiles devilishly. She teleports behind Ayido, and grabs him. She then tosses him to Sabre, who was running behind her.
Keilienaten leaps on top of Lianna, and licks her face.

Keilienaten: You are a pretty, sexy, foxy bitch. Wish I could keep you, but as you see...
(Keilienaten turns to see Amanuet, who smiles back) I’m all tied up
already. A lust threesome be’d okay.

Lianna wiggles her fingers without Keilienaten’s consent.

Sabre and Ayido are duking it out. The knives impaled into his stomach begin to glow green. Then they fly out, letting Sabre drop to his knees. Ayido uses this to start a kick combo on Sabre.

The knives fly down, to stab Keilienaten on her back. Without turning back, Keilienate extends her hand out, and the knives stop, and stay floating in the air.

Keilienaten: I’ve bratted about my realm being powerful, holding powers like no
other. Well, this is one of those powers. And this (she snaps her
fingers and all three knives duplicate) Of course, I have more, but
I will keep them hidden, but too bad for you. You’ll get the first
taste.

Keilienaten jumps off Lianna, waving her hand. All six knives dive down, and impale on Lianna’s stomach.
As she lands, Ayido kicks Keilienaten on her hind legs, making her drop to her knees. Sabre who had just gotten up, slashes her face with his thick claws. A huge scratch scar is left on her right cheek, and pieces of meat dangle from it.
Both Sabre and Ayido gang up on Keilienaten and beat the hell out of her.

Lianna, who is loosing a lot of blood, orders her knives off of her. The duplicated three turn to ashes as they fly out from Lianna. She slowly gets up, and has her knives glow and float around her. She slowly begins to heal. The punctures close in, and her strength is getting better.

Keilienaten punches Ayido on his balls, and quickly grabs a hold of Sabre’s face. She kisses him, and begins to suck some life out him, slowly healing up, too.
He pushes her off of him, but she does her Tornado Kick. As they both fly in the air, a portal reappears, and sucks them in.

Ayido gets up, and to turns to see Lianna. The deuchess is already up, starring dead at him.

Lianna: Lucky she left, but too bad for you. Now, you have to feel my wrath.

She tosses her knives at Ayido again, but the guard jumps out of the way. He lands in an unsafe spot.
Above him, a statue is pushed out, and is headed down at Ayido. Ayido spots the falling statue, and jumps away in time.

- Nethership –

A portal opens, and Keilienaten and Sabre are thrown out. They continue to fight, but the flying ship goes through an invisible portal.

- Rahankatut – Skies

The Nethership flies into a beautiful Egyptian realm. Even with all the evil lurking everywhere, it’s a very beautiful place.
Both Keilienaten and Sabre stop fighting and look aoround. They admire the scenery.
Keilienaten, then grabs Sabre, and pulls him to her face.

Keilienaten: You’re in my world now, bitch.

She throws him over board, and then she leaps right after. Sabre falls through the pyramid from the very top. Keilienaten dashes behind.

- Pyramid –

Sabre falls about hundred feet, crashing down through different floors of the pyramid. Finally he lands hard on the first section of the pyramid. The crash is hard and harsh, that the entire place shakes.

- Golden Dessert –

Ayido grabs a huge chunk of the broken statue and tosses it at Lianna. The deuchess teleports before been hit, and appears behind Ayido, spinning her blades. Ayido gets a lot of cuts, before fleeing Lianna’s blade attacks.
Ayido grabs a hold of Lianna’s head, and knee impales her. She falls to the ground, and Ayido begins on kicking her. Unexpecting the kicks, Lianna gets hit hard many times.
Lianna then grabs another piece of broken statue, and uses it as shield. As Ayido stomps one of his legs down at her, he kicks the rock instead. Crrrrrrrraaaaaaack! A loud bones braking is heard, as Ayido’s legs just broke. A bone impales out from within his leg. He drops to floor screaming in pain.

- Rahankatut – The Tomb

Sabre weakly gets up. He looks around the dark area. Soon, light shines in from above, lighting the entire room. He realizes he’s in a tomb area. He caresless, and desperately searches for Keilienaten. He roars her name, knocking mummified corpses, and caskets.
A spiritual form appears before Sabre. It’s the famous God Anubis.

Sabre: Who the hell are you? Where’s Keilienaten?

Anubis: Help me and I will help you.

Sabre: I trust no one. Where is she?

Anubis: I only ask once. Very well then. You don’t stand a chance.

Sabre angrily slashes at Anubis, but the spirit disappears.

Keilienaten: (nowhere to be seen) Talking to yourself is a sign of craziness.

Sabre: (angrily looks around) Where the hell are you? Show your face.

Keilienaten: (still O.S.) Respect the Queen who will rule you rule all.

Keilienaten jumps out from the shadows. She has her alternate costume. She has a long sliky gown, with golden trimes running on the sides. She has a hug hat-looking hat, with egytpion symbols, and golden straps around it. She looks almost like her mother, Nefertiti.

Sabre: (scoffs) What the hell happened to you? Is it Halloween?

Keilienaten takes out her Falcon Knives, and Sabre his Dual Thrice Dragon. Sabre makes the first move, and both begin attacking each other with their weapons, causing huge sparks as the knives clash together. Both opponents are eager to kill the other.

- Golden Dessert –

Lianna kicks Ayido on his chest sending him to crash unto a rocky wall. She flies at him, ramming back against the same wall. She again start doing her brutal combo at him.
Ayido breaks, too, and uppercuts Lianna as far away from him.
Ayido is pissed off, and wants to finish as soon as he can. He gathers up all his energy and lets out his deadly move, Cry of the Undead. The scream is so horrible, the entire crowd drops to their knees. All except the Dragon King of course.

Lianna gets it worse. She drops to her knees, trying to cover her ears, but they start bleeding. Then her nose runs down blood, and she then tears blood. Seconds of hearing that horrific cry, Lianna falls completely down, not being able to move. Her entire body has become numb.

Ayido stops his screams, and stares down at Lianna.

Ayido: (laughs) No, you will feel my wrath.

Ayido limps with one good leg up to Lianna, and picks her up. He lifts her over his head, as if offering her to someone. He brings her down, as if doing a backbreaker on her. What an ass, he must have forgetten he had a broke leg.
Instead, he husrts his leg again, and drops Lianna down. An upset Ayido, drags himself to a huge rock. He’s using that to kill Lianna.


- The Tomb –

Sabre rolls over table with a corpse. He spots an Anubis Spear, and quickly goes for that weapon. Keilienaten immediately shoots her fireballs at him, but misses him.
Sabre grabs the spear, and unknowingly shoots a huge spark ball, almost hitting the Egyptian queen. Instead, it hits a wall, blowing it to pieces.
Sabre charges at Keilienaten, swinging the spear at her. She bocks his attacks with her falcon knives.
Sabre shoots another spark ball, hitting Keilienaten. She is sent to the next room, where the hole was created.
Sabre runs in, and looks around for Keilienaten, but she’s nowhere to be found.

- Golden Dessert –

Lianna’s numbnees has worn out, and she slowly gets up. By this time Ayido had limped his way, and picked up the huge statue head.
Lianna shoots her three knives at Ayido. All three stab him on his chest. She calls the back, and shoots them again at Ayido. They hit his stomach.
The pain causes Ayido to fall, and has the head land on his stomach.
Lainna walks up to him, and pushes the head off of Ayido. She sees the pain he’s in, but has no mercy. She lifts him up, and slams him on the ground. She picks him up again, and roundhouses him across the arena.

Ayido falls hard. He can’t take it anymore. He knows he’s about to loose, and be killed. The hell with that, he thinks. He rather emberass his opponent by pleasing himself with his own Hara-Kiri. He jams his fingers on his head, and pushes hard, trying to sink them in. Blood squirts everywhere. He gets a hold of his brains, and tries to pull them out.

Lianna sees him, and quickly teleports in front of him.

Lianna: Nuh-uh. No suicide here.

She pulls his hand out of his head, and rips his arm off. Ayido screams, in horrific shriek. Lianna swings his hand, uppercutting Ayido far across the arena, and crashing unto a wall. Ayido tries to crawl out, but he has no clue, he’s inside a death trap. A much bigger statue above, falls and land on top of Ayido. Blood squirts everywhere.

Onaga: (laughs)Lianna wins. You’re lucky, no Hara-Kiri, or you’ll be the
laughing stock. FATALITY!

- The Tomb – Treasure Room

Sabre calls out for a missing Keilienaten. The room begins to shake hard as an earthquake strikes it. The floor begins to crack.
A huge golden crown flies at Sabre’s head, cutting him deep on his forhead. Keilienaten flies in. She’s now in a her third alternate outfit. It’s a shorter skirt, that’s golden but a bit see-through. She only has a thin top, only covering her nipples, and some laces strapping it back. She also wears a golden mask with long golden dreads.

Sabre: What is this? Oscar awards? You change more the Micheal does plastic
surgery. No, not really, he still outnumbers.

Keilienaten: Oh please. ‘Nuff talking. Fight!

Sabre swings the spear, but Keilienaten cuts it in three pieces with her knives. She kicks Sabre on the groin, and slashes her two Falcon Knives on his chest.
Sabre grabs a golden chest, and tosses it at Keilienaten. Green poison gas is spit out from a hole that was underneath the chest.
Both begin coughing, but continue to battle it out. An earthquake happens again. The ground cracks open, and both fighters fall to the ground below.

- The Tomb Pit –

Keilienaten and Sabre fall, but jumo to their feet, and continue to battle. Both are dead tired, but don’t give up easy.
Sabre bearhugs Keilienaten, and squeezes her tight. Keilienaten rmas her golden mask onto Sabre’s face. The beast lets her go. She’s about to stab him, but he grabs her hand, and makes stab herself on her stomach. She falls to the floor bleeding.
Sabre grabs her, and lifts her up.

Sabre: It’s my win today.

Keilienaten pulls out her knife from her stomach, and jams it into Sabre’s neck. Sabre lets her go as he screams in pain. He pulls the knife out of his neck, and drops it.
Keilienaten makes a huge snake appear around her back and neck.

The ground shakes harder, and the opens wide. Below there’s a pit of fire, and millions of burning souls are trying to get out, but hands of fire pulls them down.

Keilienaten tosses the snake at Sabre, and the cobra bites him repeatedly. Sabre manages to get the snake, and squeezes the head like a bag of ketchup.

Keilienaten: It’s not nice. Animal cruelty is horrible.

She walks up to him, giggling. She jams her heel on his crotch.

Keilienaten: It’s my win today. My realm, my win. I will rule all, and you’ll hear
about me in the pits of hell.

Sabre: Fuck you.

Keilienaten laughs, and begins to kick a dying Sabre, rolling him over to the Pit. She gives him a final hard kick, and Sabre falls. He tries to hold on, but she sinks her heels on his hand, he is forced to let go.
Sabre falls freely into the pit. Burning souls grab a hold of the dragon beast, and rip him apart, letting his flesh burn away. Sabre’s soul flies out. The soul turns into a huge dragon. It tries to fly out, but a huge fire hand reaches at it, and pulls him down. Sabre’s dragon soul turns to fire as it’s been pulled into hell.

Keilienaten laughs and snaps her fingers. The ground closes up, and seas back as if it never cracked open. The screams of the lost burning souls give their last scream for help.

Keilienaten takes off her mask, and begins to walk away. A breeze of wind makes her stop. She turns around and sees Anubis in a spirit form.

Anubis: The time has come, Keilienaten. Your doom is near.

She turns away, and turns back. Anubis is gone. She still feels someone watching her. She turns around, and her long former opposite sex love, KAMON, is looking right at her. He disappears immediately. She turns away in great desperation, but at the same time happy. She has moved up a latter in Mortal Kombat. Now, all she has to do is have the Dragon King align and trust her.

Please do rate this fight. I would like to know what you guys think. B honest. Trust me, no hard feelings will come. It's a writer wish to get all the feedback.

slim3ddi3g Wrote: Please do rate this fight. I would like to know what you guys think. B honest. Trust me, no hard feelings will come. It's a writer wish to get all the feedback.

I LOVED it,fucking awesome job on there slim.Sweet fight scene.Like how you made Sabres soul turn into a dragon then get pulled down.Sweet scene.By the way,9.5/10.

Rabid_Wolverine Wrote: slim3ddi3g Wrote: Please do rate this fight. I would like to know what you guys think. B honest. Trust me, no hard feelings will come. It's a writer wish to get all the feedback. I LOVED it,fucking awesome job on there slim.Sweet fight scene.Like how you made Sabres soul turn into a dragon then get pulled down.Sweet scene.By the way,9.5/10.

Thanks Rabid_Wolverine. I appriciate it. Now I wonder who's doin thext scen, so I can do Amanuet's.

Those fights were awesome! I liked the final death trap that Sabre got caught in. Even in death he was a real warrior. Plus, I like how Keilienaten finaly sees Kamon for the first time, yet still doesn't know what he has become. Very cool fight scenes. I hope that this will breath some life into the story.

-Palace Throne Room-
The fighters are recovering from what they witnessed. The Earth's warriros, grieve for their losses. The Alliance, not so much. Raiden is filled with disgust.
Raiden" So many lives, wasted. So many lives I couldn't protect."
Ryoko" Raiden that's enough. You can't keep putting the problems of all mortals on your shoulders."
A voice is heard from behind the fighters.
"Your sentimentality is your greatest weakness, and will lead to your eventual downfall."
The fighters turn around to see that their mysterious guest is the ninja Noob.
Sub-Zero" To Hell with you!" He shoots an ice blast at Noob, hoping to silence the shadow ninja for a good while. Suddenly, a cloud of vapor appears infront of the blast, sheilding Noob. As Sub-Zero gets ready to shoot another blast, the vapor swirls violently, and takes shape.
Sub-Zero's expersion changes from agressive to one of disbelief.
Sub-Zero" Can't be...."
The vapor takes shape and reveals itsel to be Smoke.
Sub-Zero" Smoke!? Why!"
Smoke says nothing.
Sub-Zero"Damn it! Answer me!"
Smoke"Much has changed, old friend. Including myself. This is the path I have chosen, and hence forth, our vowe has no meaning. The Next time we meet, I can't say that you wont be at the recieving end of my fist."
Smoke dissapears leaving a stunned audience.
Noob soon fallows.
"Spineless cowards."
The fighters turn around to see the genma onimusha, Xion standing in the shadows, cloaked in his own wings.
Shujinko "You should talk. You hide behind your master Sensui's shadow like a dog."
Xion "Senusi is not my master. but he will be yours very shortly."
Ryoko "He will not win Mortal Kombat!"
Xion quietly laughs and then disappears from sight.
A strong voice from the back is heard.
Sensui"Do you doubt my skill? Sabre has done that before and I have put him in his place. I only regret that I didn't consume his dragon soul myself."
Sensui warps right in back of Ryoko, wraping his arm around her stomach, and carresing her neck with the other. Ryoko stands completely still, frozen in shock.
Sensui" Being this close to you, yet still remembering what you did to my beloved makes me sick. But sacrfices must be made."
Rayden" Unhand her Sensui!"
Sensui locks his eyes on Rayden."Ah, the former elder god. Tell me, how does it feel to be so weak?"
Rayden "I said unhand her!" Rayden manages to release a bolt of lightning at Sensui. Sensui puts Ryoko right infront the blast, making her take its full force.
Sensui"Hahahahah. Rayden, your are one of my least concerns. But remember, cross me one more time, and I will break you into little pieces, and sprinkle you all over the arean floor." Sensui the sternly kisses Ryoko with out her having a chance to fight back, and warps out of the room.


Well it's not the biggest addition but it's something. Once again, great work on the fight scene slim3ddi3g. I wonder if Keilienaten knows what Kamon was the one stalking her in the castle.

Thanks a lot SmokeNc-017. Luv the comments. Neways, I rather have her not suspect Kamon just yet, so she can continue her plans. I think she should just think she's imagining him. Seeing things...

(( This is after the brief encounter with Ravage.))

Syn brings himself to his senses. He immediately comes to his feet and picks up shattered shells of the missiles on the floor of the forest. He turns his head and looks around, his keen senses at their peak. He was indeed wounded, but that wouldn't stop him from hunting the Cyborg. That was his main priority at the moment. He would find Ravage. Syn quickly got to his feet and made his way to a near by Tavern. The wooded areas were miles long and dark, but Syn's keen eye sense could see farther than a normal human being. His trained senses have him perfectly tuned. He wanders into the tavern and speaks to the Shop-keep.

(Bold posts are what Syn Says. Regular are Bar-Keep)
Hello...
Yes, How may I help you?
I need an...Upgrade.
What might you mean? You have standard issue....Oh..
(Syn holds up his Katana and other weaponry. Also motioning to his gi.)
These...I need them blessed, better, even.
That I can do...I realize ninja don't carry money, do you have anything worth value?
(Syn withdraws a small amulet from his side pouch, placing it on the counter as the Shop-Keep backs up in surprise.)
This amulet can raise dead, control them even. It is of no use to me. I offer it in place of better equipment.
(The Shop Keep Eagerly accepts. Readying to make his best equipment.)

While waiting days, Syn rests in the shadows of the roof, letting Ravage as well as the others wander. He suddenly hears a brief knock on the walls. Immediately he leaps into view from the window, into the shop.
Your things are ready, sir.
(At that moment, he places a solid sheath, containing a blade in it. Along with this, a gi with Camoflauge ability, basically invisibility built into it. His shurkiens were like bombs now, could explode on contact, and his chained weaponry had longer range. His new sword was not only longer, but lighter, and enscribed with a Religious script along the blade.)
Your Katana is blessed. It will resurrect you if by needs be, you're killed. The blade pinpoints weakness, but is weakened by a pure evil's essence. Your gi has the ability to hide you completely, body essence and appearence. I hope you like...
(With that, Syn grabs the items, and begins to gear up, and then leave. He hadn't even thanked the shop keep, nor did the shop keep even see him leave.)
Later that night, 5 days from the battle with Ravage. He began to seek out the cyborg. He had no hate, but he had passion. His new items would surely do the trick. Sure enough, he'd found himself in the wastelands of Outworld. He began to wander the shadows, making himself a path by using his blade. His presence unknown, and his blade sparkling, gaining power.
Suddenly, before him there was a legion, fighting, bawling about and slaughtering eachother. Among that legion, he saw Tekunin members, Tarkatans, as well as Ravage. He made his advance little by little and threw an explosive shuriken at the cyborg, hitting him directly on the back. It quickly exploded and caused him to fly forward, into the ground. Syn was well prepared now, and would by no means let the Cyborg live. Syn sensed no life in the being, and Ravage could sense no life in Syn, due to his emotionless nature. He quickly withdrew his katana and made his first strike, only scratching the cyborg's armour as he made another, his foot came in contact with the cyborg's chest plate and caused him to stumble back. Syn leaped back and readied himself, chain ready for hurling and blade in hand. He then spoke...
"Forsaken one...Do you now know who I am? I am but a shadow, a lifeless being who cannot give up. I will follow you until you die. Then pursue the next being until the sun goes down, I am unseen. You have struck me and hit me when my attention was not peaked, but now, I have you."
At that point, Ravage got up and spoke not a single word. His scanners weren't acting right this time. After getting beat up by Ravage, Syn took good notes on where the Cyborg hits from and what he can do. Syn had kicked in the chest panel where Ravage's missiles came from. Ravage had another plan though, His tendrils came darting out at amazing speeds, and instantly shot into the ground. Syn quickly looked at his feet and then leaped into the air, his chained Weapon (Much like a mace) was pulled from it's hold and slung as soon as the tendrils broke free of the soil and towards the ninja. Syn slashed the first tendril and caused it to lose balance, while the other was used to keep the ninja in the air for a brief time. He kicked off and landed in a sprawling roll. He turned his head and put his chained weapon away, drawing out his sword again. He looke the cyborg in the eye and began to think.
Ravage was sick of it, and ran at Syn, ready to finish the ninja off this time, after all, he was only human. This is where Ravage was wrong. Syn activated his defenses and became nearly invisible. His entire being vanished from sight. Ravage began to scan for him, but this time he couldn't find the shadow. It was dark here, and the scuffle behind their own, was diminuishing. Syn suddenly appeared behind Ravage and was coming down with a strike from his glowing Katana, as Ravage let lose a strike from his tendrils. The elecrtic shock from the tendril shot his aim off and he was forced backward. At that point, he vanished once again. He needed to revise his gameplan. He'd be back some other time...

Ta'da!

A couple of things,1) Ravage is a complete android, not a cyborg, 2) His missles come out of his shoulder missle pods. Other then that, great job.
-Outworld Dessert-
Ravage stares into the dark night for a spilt second. A Tarakatan warrior sneaks up behind him trying to get the jump on him. As he extends his wrist blades and prepares to strike down, Ravage unsheathes both, his plasma sabre and Nano Core. The Nano core morphs into a whip and wraps around the tarakatans neck. Ravage then turns around and slices through the warrior's stomach, killing him instantly. Once again, the nano core encompasses his body and repairs any damage. Ravage then replays the recent encounter, survaying every movement of the ninja. He observes his life signs, breathing patterns, muscle tension, and weapon techniques. Ravage then uses the Nano core to quickly cycle through the weapons and a message appears on his visor saying "SCANNING COMPLETE..."
Ravage" Mission status...Return to Tournament. Restrain subject; Sub-Zero."
Ravage fires up his ion jets and takes of at enormous speed back to the Dragon King's Palace.

very, very nice fight scene, Slim(you always write great fight scenes).

But I'll contribute something to the story:
Keely is just outside the Dragon King's throne and about to open the door when something in the shadows catches her eye.

"I know what you want and I help you get it,"said a female voice in the shadows.

Keely turned around with her Ethereal Slayer in attack position and asks,"And what is that?"

The voice replied,"The Dragon King's demise."

A woman dressed in yellow walked seductively out of the shadows and puts her hand on her hips with her other hand down at her side.

"Tanya, I'll kill you, I know you're with Onaga,"growled Keely.

"I am not with him, I'm using him to get control of Edenia after I get him to kill that bitch, Mileena,"said Tanya with a slight look of anger on her face.

Keely looks skeptical and asks as she lower her Ethereal Slayer,"And how do I fit into this?"

Tanya crushes a bug under her foot and steps up closer to Keely and whispers,"You help me gain the throne of Edenia and I'll help you achieve your goal of eliminating everyone aligned with Onaga...I know ancient spells that can wipe the Dragon King off the face of Outworld..."

Keely replies with a whisper,"Intriguing, but how do I know I can trust a traitor and manipulator like you?"

Tanya chuckles, leans closer to Keely's ear, and whispers,"Because you need me to find the spells..."

Keely begins to think and Tanya extends her hand with an evil smirk on her face. Keely thinks for a few more seconds, takes Tanya's hand, and says with a warning,"I swear, if you double cross me...."

Tanya says while shaking Keely's hand,"You have my word."

Great fight scenes guys.

Thanks for participating ninja_arts, hope to see more of your work.

All you guys have done a great job in contributing towards the story and fight matches. I can't wait to see the novel slim. How's it coming along?

Brodeur Wrote: Great fight scenes guys. Thanks for participating ninja_arts, hope to see more of your work. All you guys have done a great job in contributing towards the story and fight matches. I can't wait to see the novel slim. How's it coming along?

It's coming along good. Atleast I think so. I know I promised to send you atleast the prologue, but I've been busy lately. I have rehearals for a play I'm coming out in. But I will send you it soon. It's more work to write a novel.

Wow,page 8.Wheres all the updates?


Leviathan sits the tip of a building,staring down at the combatants.Gabrielle stands speaking with Sub-Zero.

Gabrielle "So many dying,this is horrible..."
Sub-Zero "Yes,I know...too many meaningless deaths..."
Gabrielle "Sabre...why him?He didnt deserve this..."
Sub-Zero "I know...but he's gone...his soul can now rest."

Sensui walks in.

Sensui "The bastard deserved it,I enjoyed watching him be pulled to the depths of hell.He is gone!GONE!"

A high wind picks up,as a red lightning bolt flashes infront of the three.Sabre steps forward.

Sensui "You are dead,how can this be?"

Sensui tries to punch Sabre but his fist goes right through him,as if nothing was there.Sabre stares coldly at Sensui.

Gabrielle "Sabre...is it you?"

Sabre doesnt speak,he only stares at Sensui.

Sensui "How is this possible?I saw you die!"
Sabre begins to spin rapidly as he turns into a huge ice blue dragon.
Sabre "You know nothing of me Sensui.I will not rest,I will not die,until you do..."
Sensui "I will never die!"
Sabre "Dont be so sure..."

With those last words,Sabre dives down into the ground.His roaring can still be heard in the distance,Sensui stares in disbelief,as a large gash appears across his chest.An eternal reminder of Sabre.

His voice is heard again "Goodbye Sensui..."

Leviathan stares down,shocked at what he had just seen.He turns around and leaps from building to building.He stops as he feels a prescence behind him.A knife is thrown at him as he dodges it.He runs to the person and punches them.They hold their mouth in pain,as Leviathan quickly taps his foot twice on the ground.Long nail type blades come out of his boots.He quickly runs to the person and kicks them in the throat with the sharp blades.The person falls to the ground,as he retracts the blades.

Leviathan "They know im here..."

ummm is the Vandon Phoenix fight ever going to be written, I announced a month or two ago AT LEAST that I was going to be far too busy to write it. It also seems as though the fight has just been skipped alltogether. So whats going on?

TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: ummm is the Vandon Phoenix fight ever going to be written, I announced a month or two ago AT LEAST that I was going to be far too busy to write it. It also seems as though the fight has just been skipped alltogether. So whats going on?

Wasnt it already written?

no actually, its quite amusing what happened. Every single other fight of the first round of matches was done EXCEPT that one. Not that I am resentful or anything.

TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: no actually, its quite amusing what happened. Every single other fight of the first round of matches was done EXCEPT that one. Not that I am resentful or anything.

I'm sure it wasn't intentional DKakaR..but I can see how it does look suspicious. Though, as stated, I'm sure it wasn't on purpose. I'm not that great at writing fight scenes, (that's why I haven't written a match yet) or I would do it..Slim, you seem to be the most enthusiastic about writing Fight scenes..could you please? I know it's out of order..but you could make it a flash back scene..perhaps having Vandon reflecting on the fight. I dunno..it's possible though. If not Slim, than one of you other with experience in writing the fights? It would be greatly appreciated.

BTW..My addition is nearly complete and will be posted as soon as it's done. I believe it's finally time for Gabrielle and Tanya to come face to face.

Look what I found!!!Page 59,yes 59!Damn this thing was buried.Mods will understand though....right?I know your not supposed to bring threads of this age back,but this thing is needed for us.I dont have an entry right now,pretty much cause I was the last to make one...BUT I do have something for you guys.Sabre,pulled down to hell,now appears to be back,at least in spirit.Well,I got a story for it.The second half is to come,first have is here,opinions appreciated.Its alittle long though.



Sabre : The aftermath

I was defeated in battle by Keilienaten,and pulled down to the depth's of hell.I lied in wait,waiting for my oppurtunity to escape.Little did I know,it would not come to me.I began to have 'good' behavior,deceiving all in my path,to get to the netherrealm,one step closer,to my fight,my revenge.

It seemed as if Shinnok had control of hell,in his grips,he was my first...

Shinnok's Lair

I walked in,as he see's the fallen elder god Shinnok sitting in a throne,curiously staring at me.The look in his eyes,so unexpecting of his distant future.

I said my words 'Lord Shinnok'
I bowed before him.
Shinnok spoke 'And who would you be?Another pathetic warrior killed and pulled down here?'
My eyes filled with anger,but I knew I had only one oppurtunity,and I wasnt going to screw it up 'Thy name is Sabre,I have come from the Mortal Kombat tournament being held by the Dragon King,Onaga...'
Shinnok looked unimpressed 'And you were defeated,and sent here am I correct?'
I responded,trying to calm myself 'I had been defeated by Keilienaten,a very powerful warrior,the cracks of doom opened as your hell hounds dragged me down here!'
He stared down at me 'Sabre was it?I see potential in you...your anger could serve me very well'
I nearly chuckled,trying not to laugh while spitting out 'Would be an honor to serve you Shinnok'
He sounded pleased 'Excellent,show me your powers first 'Sabre',see if you are what you are built to be'
He sent in a bloody warrior,a long sword in hand,the tip covered in blood. 'Ha!That thing?'

The warrior charged towards me,I grabbed his arm and began swinging him around.I let go as he flew into a wall,splattering it with blood.
I began to walk over,but Shinnok interuppted me 'That is all I need to see...'
I ignored him and kept going,I grabbed the...thing by the neck and lifted him.Slowly I dug my fingers into his jaw,forcing them to come out the mouth.He began to scream.
Shinnok yelled 'That is enough!'
I looked towards him,and tugged hard and ripped the warriors jaw clean off.He began to crawl away,but stopped.
I sarcastically said 'Oh...did I kill him?Im SO sorry' I threw his jaw to the floor.
Shinnok stood,and began to clap 'Ruthless bastard arent you?I like that,very good.Follow me.'

He was so easily manipulated...he spoke to me while walking 'What do you wish for,Sabre?'
I smiled widely,and said the only word that came to mind 'Sensui...'
He turned towards me stunned 'Sensui!?You cannot go after him!Do you have any idea what his powers are?'
I chuckled 'Oh yes I do,and I like it.'
Shinnok 'Why do you wish to persue him?'
I looked to the left,staring at a wall. 'He must die,no further questions...none.'
He walked me into a room 'As you wish Sabre.You may stay here for now,but you will be summoned in hours.' He left the room.

I sat on the bed,and lay down.I stared at the ceiling,as I dozed off.


I began to dream,my first fight.I was defeated by double team,then a beautiful woman came.Katian was her name,she had helped me that day.

It brought forward another face,Gabrielle,I watched as I defended her,from her former friend Ghost.Only to be ambushed.I helped her that day.

I saw Katian being stabbed by Nasha with a poisen tipped dagger.I remember the pain she went through.

Gabrielle appears in front of me,I spoke with her that day.Her and Ryoko were attacked.

I see Katian lying in a bed,very sick.I see myself kill her and walk off.

The last image,I was being pulled down here,as the hand grabbed my spirit and dragged me down.


I woke in a sweat. A guard walked in 'Just in time,Shinnok needs you.'

I walked out,and followed the guard,I saw Shinnok standing infront of a huge curtain. 'This is a portal,tell no one of it,but you can go to the netherrealm through this exact portal.' He pulled open the curtain,revealing a huge portal.
I stared at the portal 'This is my ticket,one step closer.....' I stared sharply at him 'So easily manipulated...' I grabbed him by the throat and squeezed as hard as I could 'How does it feel Shinnok?'
He managed to speak,as choking on his own blood 'I knew I couldnt trust you.....'
I interuppted 'But you did,but you did...' I squeezed harder as his head exploded,the blood spraying over me.I walked over to the portal,about to step in.I could hear the feet of Tarkata,smelling the fresh blood.I saw Shinnok's staff. 'I could use this' I grabbed the staff,and jumped through the portal as the Tarkata ran to the room.I shattered the portal.


I was now in Netherrealm,the next step.Shinnok had no idea what was coming,and he payed the ultimate price for that mistake.My journey was nearly complete,I had almost been back,to my revenge....

Rabid you ROCK! I'm so glad to see this back again! I thought it lost forever! Thanks!

This is rediculous,do you think I dug this page up from page damn 60 for no reason?I did this so we could get this thing back going,and what do we got...nothing.Not a single post besides tazzer who was there with me when I was searching and found it.I revived it because people were wondering where it was,now its up,where are you people?I even had the consideration to pm some of you about it,and got no response.I have seen some of you on,so don't try that.Im not doing this to piss anyone off,just to motivate some.Right now I only know that taz will be having his up very soon,and he's the only person who has responded since I dug this up.If you wonder why I am mad,you should know,hopefully this will motivate some of you.If you want to argue with me,my pm is open.

Rabid

Great find Rabid. Thanks guys for searching through to find this thread.
Yes. i understand exactly what you mean rabid. I think that since mkd has come out people just have lost touch of coming online because of many many new users joining mko. I wish we could get them back somehow. Some of them don't even know that the threads might have been moved to the fan submission section. Well..at least smokenc replied..in the tournament thread..not the story thread..probably cause he couldn't find it. Well..if you could transfer that.here..that'd be nice. I think it's time we need to all get into this and form some sort of agreement. We have to try to get the others back into this. If anyone of us sees them online pm them or post in their thread to let them know about the tournament. If they don't respond, just pm them again. We have to get this going again guys, and i cannot stand by just coming online for a short moment to find noone here or no new posts or no new votes or no pm's.~Crow~, krsx66, and myself are the only ones involved right now. Tgrant would help if the site showed up for him..but i don't know the whereabouts of the others. So..If the judges do not respond soon, There will have to be new judges. I will begin accepting judging applications now..and if any of the current judges do not pm me soon, they will be downgraded for now. Thanks.

I'll post this copy in the Tournament Thread as well.

Thanks Brodeur,we really need both tournament and story underway,it now appears we are getting the story back,and I will inform judges if I see them online.

I can't actually transfer smoke's part,but I will post it here.All credit for this work goes to Smoke himself,not me.


As the spectral image of Saber vanishes before them the fighters are left to their own means.
Sensui thinks to him self: This isn't possible; I witnessed him getting dragged into Hell. He couldn't have escaped unless......Shinnok! Hmph, this is about to get intense." Sensui laughs to himself and smolders with dark fire. He reaches deeper into his stockpile of energy and unleashes a wave of energy which burns the ground beneath him. As he comes down he walks away from Sub-Zero and Gabrielle. As he disappears a shadowy set of wings is seen emanating from his back, in the same place where he was slashed.
Gabrielle and Sub-Zero don't know how to react. From what they though they knew about Sensui, he would've killed anything that moved if he was even the slightest bit pissed off.
-Dawn-
As dawn approaches the familiar gonging is heard and the remaining fighters assemble in the throne room.
Onaga-Well, let's get the next fight started shall we?
Sub-Zero puts his hand on Phoenix’s shoulder and wishes him the best of luck. As he steps onto the dragon logo, a Shadow Dragon appears and shoots into the ground, exploding in flames revealing Vandon. The two fighters look at the crowd, knowing full well that one of them will not be returning. As Vandon scans the area, he notices that Sensui is nowhere to be found.
Vandon-How disappointing.
He does however notice that Xion is standing in the crowd.
Vandon-Where is your master?
Xion doesn't answer and stares silently at Vandon.
Vandon-Very well, we will meet again.
Onaga-ENOUGH!! Let the contest begin.
The logo the two fighters are standing on begins to glow and they're instantly transported through time and space to their battle ground. The other warriors look on as the fight is about to begin.
Vandon and Phoenix are teleported into a small round room. The room is shaped like a dome; it has worn murals on the ceiling, overgrown with vines. The ceiling is held by several pillars, which expose the lush jungle below. Water drips from the round room, down aged sand stone and into the distance. It is then that the fighters discover that they are at the top of a magnificent, half sunken temple.
Vandon- This place is gorges, a fitting burial ground for your metallic corpse.
Phoenix- I’m not the one who’s going to die.
Vandon-Then prove it so.
Both fighters get into their stances, Vandon into his Kithna Ton and Phoenix into his Jeet Kune Do.
Vandon- The first move is yours.
Phoenix wastes no time and charges Vandon full speed with a flurry of kicks to the ribs and inner thighs. However, Vandon’s Kithna Ton style lets him out maneuver every strike that Phoenix throws at him. Quickly realizing this Phoenix discretely channels some of his energy into his fist. Switching styles on the fly to Tae Kwon Do he catches Vandon off guard with a fake out side kick, into a sweep.
Vandon-What?
Before his body could hit the floor, Phoenix comes around with his energized fist and hits Vandon straight into the mid-section, sending him flying into one of the pillars.
Vandon hits, the pillar hard, taking a chunk of the sandstone down to the ground with him.
Phoenix, switches back to his Jeet Kune Do style and bounces around for a second before sinking in and preparing for his second assault.
Phoenix- Get up! I came here for a challenge, and you’re hardly providing one
With that, Vandon’s body glows a dark purple for a second and he dematerializes. He then comes down in a fire ball in front of Phoenix.
Vandon- The fight is still early, young one.
With that Vandon quickly shoots down to Phoenix’s mid section, and blast him with a vicious upper cut to the solo plexus. Phoenix instantly has the wind knocked out of him as he shoots into the air. Vandon switches to his Shadow Fist and kicks Phoenix in the head, sending him through another pillar, and off the edge of the temple.
Phoenix-AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!
His body hits the stones hard on the way down. The temple is shaped much like a Mayan pyramid. After the first impact, Phoenix tumbles down the stairs to the bottom of the pyramid, landing face first in a shallow pool of water. Vandon jumps off the ledge and uses his Shadow Dragon power to give him an extra boost towards the ground. With a thunderous stomp, Vandon lands on Phoenix’s back, almost snapping the cyborg in half.
Phoenix lets out another scream as he’s quickly brought back to consciousness. Vandon smirks and flips off the downed warrior.
Vandon- Hmph, a robot that feels pain.
Severly damaged Phoenix stands up. His chest armor is dented, his visor is broken.
Phoenix-Pain is what drives one to exceed their limits.
With that, Phoenix shots a fire ball at Vandon, wising it by his face, he then shoots several more, completely avoiding Vandon.
Vandon- Your aim is pathetic. I must have truly inflicted severe harm on your metal body.
Phoenix- Don’t be so sure.
Vandon looks around and notices the fireballs have no surrounded him in a type of cage.
Vandon- I applaud your ingenuity, but this trick won’t scare me. I’m much to fast for you to hit me with these projectiles.
Without saying a word Phoenix shoots one last fire ball into the cage. Being severely restricted, Vandon has no choice but to block it. As he does Phoenix takes this opportunity to launches a second energy ball, this time into the water that Vandon is standing in. However, this is his ice ball, which instantly freezes the water into solid ice, and creeps up Vandon’s body, freezing him solid as well. With That Phoenix shoots one last fire ball into the cage, detonating everything at once. When the smoke clears, only Vandon’s cape is left.
Phoenix breaths in a sigh of relief as he falls to the ground. As soon as he thinks it’s all over, he hears a sinister laughter.
Phoenix- Can’t be!
As he turns around a Shadow Dragon blast hits him from behind, popping him into the air. Phoenix recovers and lands on top of a broken, vine covered arch way, hook swords extended.
Phoenix-Where are you!?
Vandon- I am everywhere, and yet, I am no where.
Phoenix- Show your self!
Vandon- Very well
Phoenix then feels something sinister behind him. He turns around quickly, slashing behind him, only to catch an after image of Vandon.
Vandon-You nearly had me. But this is not how it ends.
With that the voice fades out and all that can be heard are the noises of the jungle and rushing water. Suddenly a barrage of dragon headed fireballs shoot from under the shallow pools of water, tearing through the archway, and catching Phoenix off guard, shooting him into the air. In the midst of the confusion, Vandon teleports in Phoenix’s path, with the Blades of Carnage extended. Phoenix’s body is battered and broken from the constant onslaught, but as a true warrior, he refuses to die helplessly. As Vandon comes down, Phoenix manages to extend his hook sword and slash vertically. As their faces meet Vandon whispers to Phoenix.
Vandon- You truly posses a warrior spirit. I shall remember that.
As their bodies separate in mid air, Vandon lands roughly on the ground, stumbling to one knee. In the air, Phoenix’s power supply runs out and he goes into a system shut down. As he does, his body burst into two pieces and falls to the ground below.
Vandon stands up as he’s showered by the blood of his opponent, realizing that his chest has a fresh wound which begins to bleed. The fallen warrior’s hook swords land in the ground in an X shaped fashion as a marked on a grave.
Second later, Vandon is warped back into the main chamber and with out a word or glance to his audience he walks away, saying to himself “Sensui, I hope you’re watching.”
Onaga- The winner of this fight, by Fatality, Vandon!


Hope we can get this thing going again,I know im looking forward to it again,I will be having a part of my own pretty soon.

Sorry about replying in the Tournament thread. That was an accident on my part. I forgot which place I was at. BUt I'm glad that it got posted here aswell. I hope to see a resurgance of people. Until then, I will disappear into the shadows once more.

NIn Pyo Kio Ta Kia Ceh Retzu Sai Sen!