I do have my character finished now, I guess I havent sent the finished portion. I guess I'l do that. Its nice to be back and have great welcome back.

Somebody Feels Pumped Up.

Great to have you back man! You were definitely missed! One of the fights that has to be written is the Gabrielle/Kilvan match. Though for story purposes *If you decide to write it* (As she is one of the central main Characters) if you would NOT kill Gabrielle that would be great. She was defeated, so she can be badly beaten..but I would prefer it if you would spare her life. Thanks ANd again, welcome back.

I was just wondering if any of you guys read my Smoke vs Sub-Zero fight a bit higher up on the page? BTW nice to see you back slim3ddi3g.

Thanks a lot Tom, Brodeur, Smoke, and Rabid of course. I would love to write the Kilvan and Gabrielle fight scene, but it prob be a while. Ill either have it tomorrow or Sat. I still need to read everything I missed. It's about thrity pages. I copied and pasted where I'm keeping the first draft of the novel, and printed out everything I missed, and yep, it's about 30 pages.

Never felt so welcomed than here. Thanks fellas. You all are real pals.

then I could add more to the story already created, especially since the tourny is almost over. I wanna have the novel done before the 3rd tourny starts, or when we're in the middle of it.

I'm still trying to see who can draw so they can contribute some illustration for the novel. If anyone is interested plz let me know.

Yes Smoke, I did read it, and I liked it. But then, that doesn't surprise me, you do a great job with the writing you do here. I'm very thankful for all of the work you and Rabid have done to help keep this story going. And Slim for his incredible Tournament fight scenes. If not for you guys this would have died and stayed dead. Don't think I don't realize that.


Slim: Np man, and don't rush yourself. Whenever you can get it done is fine.

Hey guys. I'm gonna post Kilvan VS Gabrielle, and Sensui VS Ghost in a bit, plus a small addition. The fights are short and simple. Not that my brain is dried up, but I've been writing a lot lately, and using a lot of imagination to other stories besides MK. So please nejoy them. Thank you guys.

- CRUMBLING TOWERS –

Kilvan versus Gabrielle. Another anticipated match waiting to happen. Being resurrected, Gabrielle keeps in mind she will win this match, and move forward. She has to destroy the Dragon King. She’s very angry for what they did to Leviathan.
First, she has to take care of Kilvan. A powerful God from the Egyptian era.

Kilvan and Gabrielle stand face to face, ready to battle it out. The rocky tower falls apart within minutes apart. It’s a dangerous place to fight, but Onaga loves it. He really wants both opponents to fall and die a treachery death, so this tournament could be over. He still has no clue why he agreed to reborn Mortal Kombat. It only stalls his true intentions in fusing all Kamidogus and clash all the realms into one, so he can become the most powerful being ever.

KILVAN: Give up now, Gabrielle. You were beat once, but this time you will be annihialated.
GABRIELLE: That’s a dream you will never catch.

KILVAN: SO be it.

He attacks Gabrielle using his Devil Hands fighting styles. Gabrielle blocks ebry hit, but I
in one of those hit combos, Kilvan manages to connect a brutal combo on her. Apparently, she breaks the combo, knocking Kilvan away. She runs at him, and starts her own Savate combo. Finishing the killer combo, Kilvan flies across the tower, almost falling off the cliff. Gabrielle runs at him, and begins to kick him, trying to roll him off the cliff.

Kilvan spins around and trips Gabrielle. He jumps up, and lands sitting on Gabrielle’s stomach.

KILVAN: Not even worth my time... wouldn’t you agree Piroh? Shit, forgot that
little fucker isn’t here anymore. I am going to enjoy your screams.

He wraps his entire palm on Gabrielle’s face, and squeezes it. He slowly pulls her head up, and then smashes it on the ground. He does this repeatedly, until Gabrielle gets a deep cut, and squirts a lot of blood.
Gabrielle stays strong and still focus. She lifts her legs staright up, kicking Kilvan off of her.
She jumps to her feet and starts stomping her foot down at Kilvan.

The ground begins quaking again, and part of the tower breaks off, almost taking Kilvan and Gabrielle along. Gabrielle had seen it coming, and jumps out of the way. Kilvan is not so lucky. He tries to roll away, but almost falls. He hangs on the edge. He tries to pull up, but the tremors wont help him.
Again, the edges of the tower collapse. Kilvan looses grip and falls. He quickly pulls out his Scythe, and sinks it on the edge of the tower. He uses that to pull himself up.

Once he gets back to the top, Gabrielle does her Hurracarana on him. Kilvan gets up in time to block another combo from Gabrielle. They both begin to throw attacks, and block each others at the same time.

Kilvan gets caught in Gabrielle’s Kick Crusher. She super speeds and hits Kilvan’s face with a roundhouse, and rapidly sweeps him. As soon as Kilvan falls hard to the ground, she jumps up high, and and comes down har on his chest with both feet. Kilvan is knocked cold, spitting out blood.

Gabrielle lifts him up, and drags him to the edge. She’s about to throw him over, but he quickly wakes up, and uppercuts, Gabrielle. She flies across the tower, onto the other edge. She hits a pole stuck on the edge. She looks up and sees that on the pole is a rotten corpse strapped on.
She angrily gets up, and grabs the pole. She brakes it off, and runs towards her opponent.

Kilvan looks at the pole behind him, too, and brakes it off. He runs towards his opponent.

They reach the middle of the arena, and swing the pole with the corpse, clashing them together. They swing back and forth, as if they were swords. The top part of the pole where the corpses are tied up, brakes off, leaving thick pointy edges on the poles.
Both opponents swings at each other, and try to stab one another.

Gabrielle swings her pole, but Kilvan grabs it. He They pull back and forth, fighting for it. Then Gabrielle grabs Kilvan’s pole. They both hold both poles, and trying to pull them away. They shove each other back and forth roughly.
Finally, Kilvan kicks Gabrielle on the chest. She stumbles back, letting go of one pole.
Still holding onto the other pole, Gabrielle tries to pull it away, but Kilvan swings the other pole, and with the pointy edge slashes Gabrielle diagnaly across her face. She now has a huge deep scar on her face that runs from her left corner of her forehead down to the corner of her right cheek. It bleeds tremendously.

She lets go of the other pole, as she falls to her knees, whimping in pain. Kilvan laughs. He pins the pointy edges from both poles, on her neck, and uses it to make her get up to her feet.

KILVAN: Your screams and vails are the most beautiful melody.

Chuckling, he jams each pole on her upper legs. Gabrielle lets out a loud and nasty scream. She falls to her back holding the two poles tightly.

Kilvan grabs his scythe blade, and begins to play a dischordant melody upon his scythe. Soon, Gabrielle gets completely paralyzed, and just screams. Kilvan is about to swing his scythe at Gabrielle, but an old nemesis of his appears right before him. Kilvan is in shock. It’s non other than Anubis himself.

ANUBIS: You served me well long ago Kilvan, but thanks to me you got your
powers. I made you way before Shinnok brainwashed you to
betray me. You too will get your doom soon. Just like Keilienaten.

KILVAN: Keilienaten?

ANUBIS: Have you forgotten your past with her?

KILVAN: I don’t know what your talking about.

ANUBIS: Perhaps your mind has blocked hundred of thousands of years. You
will remember, but it will be too late. I will demolish you. Beware of
Kamon.

KILVAN: (paranoid) Kamon? Isn’t he dead?

Anubis laughs as he slowly disappears. Kilvan is left thinking, and spaced out.

Gabrielle gets to snap out, and able to move. She grabs the poles, and uses all her strength to pull them out of her legs. Slowly, she gets up, and stabs Kilvan on his back.
Kilvan screams and backfists Gabrielle. He runs towards her, and pulls out the huge poles stabbed on his back. He shoots one down at her, but Gabrielle rolls away. He tosses her the other, and she manages to escape that on too.

Gabrielle tries to do her Cartwheel move, but the pain in her legs causes her to fall to the ground. She is getting weaker by the minute since she’s loosing a lot of blood. Kilvan puls out his scythe and does his Cruel Turn. He swings his scythe, and jams it into Gabrielle’s stomach. He lifts up his scythe along with Gabrielle, and spins them around. He then tosses her across the crumbling tower.

He laughs at the weak Gabrielle. Gabrielle isn’t about to give up either. She weakly and slowly gets up.

KILVAN: You’re tough and brave. I give you that, but unfortunately you must die.

As He floats in the air, a great portion of the edges crack off, and Gabrielle falls along.

KILVAN: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

He dives down to grab his rival, but she has fallen into the pit below.

KILVAN: (angry) I wanted to finishe her! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!


- ROYAL EDENIAN GRAVEYARD – At the Same Time

Another awaited battle is about to continue. Sensui, the evil feind who has gained the most power has become a threat to all those who are left in the tournament, and Onaga himself.
This doesn’t have Ghost fear him one bit. Ghost is so sure of himself in beating Sensui. Especially since Sensui lost a bit of power. Little does Ghost know, that either way, Sensui is still strong.

Ghost walks through the graveyard. He looks around for Sensui. As he waits, he looks at the tombstones from all the dead great fighters.
A shadow lurks behind Ghost, and criss-crosses with his. Ghost quickly turns around, and sees Sensui, standing before him, ready to fight.

Sensui undigs a tombstone, and tosses it at Ghost. Ghost sidesteps, letting the stone crash unto another stone. Ghost grabs huge pieces of stones, and begins to toss them at Sensui. Sensui brushes them away with one hand.
Quickly, Sensui sinks his hands into the ground, and then pulls them out along with a coffin. Sensui tosses the coffin, and Ghost jumps out of harms way.
Ghost tosses his Raknar at Sensui, cutting him in the chest. The weapon comes back to him, and Ghost puts it up. Ghost quickly runs to Sensui, a double kicks him on the chest.

Sensui stumbles back, but quickly begins to create a huge firball. Ghost knows what Sensui is about to do, and dashes away.
Sensui slam dunks the huge firball unto the ground, causing a huge explosion, and the chain reaction chases Ghost.
The chain is too fast, and the fire is about to engulf Ghost, so he turns himself into a literal ghost. This lets the fire cloud chain pass right through him without any harm.

Sensui satnds at large at the mess he just made. The entire ground, about 100 miles long and witdth, has been shatter. Tombstones, stones, coffins, and corpses have been spit out, and thrown all over the area.
As the smoke and fog slowly fade away, Ghost turns back to living flesh, as he jumps out to kick Sensui in the face.
After, Ghost continues his six hit combo using his Kenpo fighting style. Unfortunately, Sensui brakes it away, and does his own combo using Bui Xuan Quan, quickly switching to Wu Shi Kempo, and the to Judo and finishes it with a total of a twelve hit combo. This has weakened Ghost.

Sensui does his Ground Sicle by ground sweeping, and shooting out a huge fire wave. The wave hits Ghost, sending him across the tore down graveyard.
Ghost is down and very weak. Sensui runs at him. Ghost has no choice, but to duplicate himself (oh cool, my character Avinel does the same).
Clone Ghost flies out of Ghost, and attacks Sensui. Clone Ghost is much quicker and more aggressive. He throws a good six hit combo at Sensui.

Sensui brakes the combo, and grabs Clone Ghost by the throat, and lifts him up off the ground.
By now, Ghost has regained some strength. Ghost begins to summon ghosts, and begins to create a Ghostnado. Sensui gets sucked into the Deadly Vortex. As Sensui gets cycled inside the Ghostnado(not soulnado), some of his life begins to get drained.

Ghost sucks the life and gets enough strength. After, a long spin, the Ghostnado tosses Sensui out, and have him ram against a huge statue of Emperor Shao Khan.
The Vortex disappears into the mist.

Ghost and Clone Ghost run to Sensui, who is on his knees, and begin to gang up on him, with each doing an eight hit combo. They both uppercut Sensui, sending him across the graveyard.
Again, both Ghosts run at Sensui, but the evil feind uses his Soul Chain to manipulate Ghost. Ghost is now being controlled by Sensui.
As Clone Ghost runs to attack Sensui, Sensui countermoves with his High Riser Hell Kick. He lifts Clone Ghost off the ground, and Sensui engulfs himself in flames. He then flies at them, and kicks them on the chest, and in mid air quickly does a spinning axe kick at Clone Ghost. Clone Ghost immediately catches Sensui’s flames and bursts into flames.
But since the kick was so hard and fast, Clone Ghost flies across and the fire puts out, leaving Clone Ghost in a living charco.
Clone Ghost hits a huge tree.

Ghost just stands there, waiting for orders, and he finally gets them.

SENSUI: FINISH HIM!!!!!!!!!

Ghost obeys, and attacks his clone. Ghost thinks, “Retribution”. He walks to his burnt clone and picks him up. He spins around along with his clone, getting momentum. He then flings his clone into the air, and then throws his Raknar. The spinning blade slices the opponent in half from the abodomen. As the two halves fall to the ground, the Raknar returns to its owner.
Ghost stands still and waits for more orders.

SENSUI: Impressing. If you were on my side, you’d live, but you’re not. Hara-Kiri.

Sensui laughs as he walks away.
Ghost pepares for his suicide. He switches to his ghost formand begins to sink into the ground. Then, Ghost gets a...

V I S I O N

- CRUMBLING TOWERS –

Gabrielle tries to do her Cartwheel move, but the pain in her legs causes her to fall to the ground. She is getting weaker by the minute since she’s loosing a lot of blood. Kilvan puls out his scythe and does his Cruel Turn. He swings his scythe, and jams it into Gabrielle’s stomach. He lifts up his scythe along with Gabrielle, and spins them around. He then tosses her across the crumbling tower.

He laughs at the weak Gabrielle. Gabrielle isn’t about to give up either. She weakly and slowly gets up.

KILVAN: You’re tough and brave. I give you that, but unfortunately you must die.

As He floats in the air, a great portion of the edges crack off, and Gabrielle falls along, and screams.

He cuts to a new vision, where a dying Gabrielle still hangs weakly. Her leg had gotten jammed on a trunk, and severly broken.

- SHATTERED EDENIAN GRAVEYARD -

Ghost snaps out of his manipulation, when he’s half way down. Then, he turns into his flesh, having him get stuck in the ground.

GHOST: Gabrielle needs me...

He tries to move, but notices he’s stuck.

GHOST: Oh no... Aaaaaaaah!

Loud cracking noises are heard. The ground underneath is closing in on Ghost as his bottom half is turning to flesh. He struggles, and struggles, and finally pulls his bottom half out right before it turns completely flesh. He’s thrilled to be okay, but his pride is cut short.
Sensui walks behind him.

SENSUI: Too bad you wont be there to save her. But I will.

GHOST: You leave her alone.

SENSUI: Why? She owes a big debt, and she’s overdue.

GHOST: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Ghost gets ups, and fights Sensui. Both hit each other. It’s so hard to tell who will win, for both opponents share the same amount of blows. Then, Sensui mangaes to open another long twenty hit combo on Ghost, using all of his fighting styles.

As weak as he is, Ghost gets to his feet, and continues to battle. Sensui again beats the hell out of him, but Ghost still gets up.
Ghost throws a kick, and Sensui grabs it. With a hard pull, Sensui pulls tares Ghost leg, and bats him with it. Ghost flies out of the graveyard.

- CLIFF –

Ghost flies over many mountains, until he comes down unto huge rocks. The fall is hard, but he still manages to get up. He could hear Gabrielle screams.
He looks up ahead, and spots the Crumbling Tower. He could see Gabrielle being beaten by Kilvan. Gabrielle falls to her doom, but the one-legged Ghost summons the Ghost Vortex, and orders it to capture Gabrielle.

The Deadly Vortex sucks in Gabrielle and spins her around, draining her energy away.

Ghost is about to leap over to it, but Sensui attacks him. Sensui rips one of Ghost’s arms, and uppercuts him with it. Ghost flies over and near the Vortex.
He’s dying quickly. He sees as his opponent is running towards him, and then turns to see how the Vortex is sucking the life out of Gabrielle. He has to save her.
As Gabrielle’s energy begins to flow into Ghost, he takes the sacrifise of winning, and out of love jumps into the Vortex. His life begins to be drained out. With his only hand, he grabs Gabrielle, and pulls her unto him. He begins to kiss her, letting his energy flow into her. He then tosses her out of the Vortex, letting the Ghostnado dry him out of his life. Now his life, and her life flow into Gabrielle’s body, healing her completely. The Ghostnado disappears, but first had tossed the raw corpse unto Sensui.

SENSUI: (angry) Little fucker. Dare you embarrass me by killing yourself, but guess who gets the last laugh?

Sensui opens his palms, and it begins to glow. Ghost’s ghost flies out of the rotten corpse. The ghost fights to get free, but with a snap of his fingers, Sensui once more controls’s the ghost.

SENSUI: Now you will be my slave for ever. Ha, ha, ha, haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
(stares at Gabrielle) And you my dear, we still have business to finish. Everyoe thinks your dead, so might as well act like it.

She lays their, unconscious. He lifts her up, and carries her in his arms. He disappears in the mist.
Seconds later, Kilvan runs in. He’s desperately looking for Gabrielle’s body.

KILVAN: Where is she? She didn’t get stuck on those huge spikes. She must’ve splattered herself around here.

He then spots Ghost’s rotten dead corpse, and thinks it’s Gabrielle. He nods, and walks away in disgust.

Nice. I'm glad you made the fight scenes simple since you had to do a double feature. The thing is, we are going to have to insert the quarter finals somewhere in there. But, I will post the Keillienaten/Ravage fight tonight, I have a great scene in mind. Also, how do you like the story so far? It might have taken it a while to get going, but I think that it's back to what it used to be, kind of. We only have four people writing the story, but as long as somebody is still willing to do it, then it's far from dead.

As Ryoko and Ashrah make their way towards the Dead Marsh, Ryoko gets a familiar feeling that an impending force is getting closer.
Ryoko-Ashrah, hold still, there's somebody here.
Ashrah-I don't sense anything. Are you sure somebody's here?
Ryoko-Yes, and I know who it is, this power is all too familiar form me.
Ryoko does a swift back handspring and comes around with a hook kick into the mist. Her foot is suspended in mid-air as she confirms the presence.
Ryoko-Come out you scum!
Suddenly two glowing eyes appear in the mist, inches from Ryoko's leg. The mist fades and reveals Sensui standing there, holding Ryoko's leg.
Sesnui-Nice kick, but if you think that is all it will take to bring me down then you're sadly mistaken.
Ryoko-Mark my words, after this is all over, you will be the one on your knees begging for your life. Now let me go, I have more urgent things to attend to then be your plaything.
Sensui-You mean urgent as in looking for dear, sweet Gabrielle.
Ryoko is stunned for a second and then replies-How......how did you know?
Sensui-It's all to clear, I don't need to use my Jigon eye to see that, but your efforts are in vain.
Ryoko-What do you mean, demon?
Sensui-It's quite simple, you won't reach her alive if it's only the two of you.
Ryoko-Do wish to test me?
Sensui-Enough games!!! Gabrielle is with me, and if you come so much as within another centimeter of me I will order Xion to slit open her stomach, causing her to die in great pain.
Ryoko-You lie!!!! I know she is somewhere in the Dead Marsh and I will find her!
Sensui opens a rift in the demension and shows her a dark room. Suddenly a candle is lit and Gabrielle is shown chained to a wall, next to her stands the oni Xion, blade drawn and pointed at Gabrielle.
Sensui looks at Ryoko with a cold stare.
Sensui-Care to call my bluff?
Ryoko-What have you done to her? Gabrielle!
Sesnui-I haven't done anything to her, yet. Tell me Ryoko, do you think that Gabrielle can survive another de ja vue of my Eternal Damnation tehcnique like she did before?
Ryoko, now in tears doesn't answer, but her expretion is clear through her mask.
At that moment, Gabrielle wakes up and looks into the void, and tires to speak. However, the words she utters isn't what Ryoko excpected to her.
Gabrielle-Ha....Hatsuma, where are you? Please help me. (Screams) HATSUMA!!!!!!
With that the void closes between her chamber and the Dead Marsh.
Sensui lets go of Ryoko's foot and she falls to her knees in sadness and shock at what she has heard.
Ashrah, having seen enough decides that this is her time to strike.
Ashrah-You monster, how dare you?!!!!
She charges Sensui with her blade extracted, hoping that she will impale him. Sensui uses his incredible speed to side step the attack and grabs Ashrah's arm. He applies pressure to it, causing her to let go of her blade. Sensui then pulls her close to him and puts his palm infornt of her face, mid way from charging a blast.
Sensui-I could kill you both right now, but then, you don't deserve the peace of death.
Sensui then lets go of Ashrah, but just as she's freed he delivers a vicious kick to her side, causing her to fly back several yards and tuble to a stop. He then kicks her blade into the air and extends his Malice Blade, and shatters hers as it comes back on the way down.
Ryoko manages to speak through her shock and sadness.
Ryoko-Sensui, you will recieve no mercy from the gods, you sickening son of a bitch!!!! When I get the rest of the warriors, and find a way to free Collin you'll pay!
Sensui kneels down and stares at her almost nose to nose with an evil stare. His eyes show their dragon slits as they burn intensley.
Sensui-Ghost is far beyond your reach, I've already killed him. *Sensui lets out a low laugh as he stands back up*
Ryoko-No! It, it can't be true, you're liying.
Sensui-Is that all you can call me? A liar. In the time this tournament has taken place, can you recall anytime that I have lied to you? liying would accomplish nothing and only soothes pain. I find truth to be a most devestating weapon.
It suddenly it accured to Ryoko that, indeed, through all of Sensui's acts he has always been upfront with her.
Sensui then interupts her train of thought- But if you don't belive me, I will show you.
Sensui extends his hand and an ethreal flame burns in his palm. It then shows Ghost's face.
Ghost-Ryoko!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ryoko reaches out her hand in desperation-Collin!!
Sensui folds his hand back into a fist, destroying the last image of Ghost infornt of Ryoko's eyes. Full of dispair, Ryoko bows her head down and sobs.
Sensui gives her a glance over his shoulder as he starts walking away.
Sensui-Too late, he's mine now. Oh, and if you're wondering, Gabrielle fell in love with Hatsuma of her own free will, but if you dispise now, you are going to hate him even more when I free him and he becomes the instrument of Gabrielles death, just like he was five years ago.
With that, Sensui walks into the distance and then goes up inflames, leaving Ryoko and Ashrah alone in the Dead Marsh.
From a distance, chanting can be heard. It sounds like a prayer that Shaolin Monks say when their brothers pass on into the afterlife. this is coupled with the sound of rings jingling, getting closer and closer.

Sorry guys, I know I promised a fight scene but I haven't had a chance to type is up since I had to fix my computer, It should be ready today, or tommorow, or whenever you read this. I hope you like this scene though.

Nice work Smoke!! Excellent story man. You had some very solid emotion in there and I like the whole De ja vu thing. Very evil on Sensui's part...it's like Gabrielle and Ryoko are RIGHT back to square one..just the way they were when they met him. Incredible work here man.

As pomised, this is the fight scene between Keilienaten and Ravage, but we still need to write the fightscenes for like, four of the quarter final matches.

-Dragon King's Palace- Main Chamber-
The remaining fighters enter the domed room for what seems to be the hundredth time, many freinds where lost here, while alliances were formed. this is has become the room that people go to die in. The remaining eight fighters gather in the circled platform to await each other's challanger. In a brillinat entrance of fire and power, the dragon King makes his way into the room, and once again places himself on his thrown infront of the fighters.
Onaga-Well, well, well. We have finaly made it to the semi-finals in both sections of the tournament, this is the Climax of Mortal Kombat, the deciding factor on who is worthy enough to go on and become champion. This will truely seperate the strong from the weak, so, without further delay, we begin our semi-finals! The first two opponents have shown great skill in the Light Sector, let's see how they fair against each other. First, we have the Princess of Rahankutat, a desert jewel and a sultry temptress, Keilienaten! And her opponent, a true force to be reakoned with, he feels no pain or emotion, his moves are cold and calculated, Ravage!
Kelienaten comes in, sexy as ever in her Egyptian styled dress. Ravage steps forward, coming down hard on the ground, then releases a jet of steam from his face shield.
Keilienaten points towards Ravage and mocks him.
Keilienaten- Rajhul may have been a great fool, but he was right when he stated that you do not belong in the Mortal Kombat. I will rid this world of your existance and toss your head away laughing!!!
Ravage- Primary Traget:Sub-Zero. All non-compliant intruders will be erminated.
Onaga- Very well, let the fight begin!
The warriors are engulfed in a beam of light and are warpped from the arena to their battle ground.
-Tundra-
The warriors find themselves in a hostile enviroment. Each fighter is knee deep in snow and are in the middle of a blinding snow storm.
Keilienaen instantly freezes.
Keileinaten-He doesn't really excpect us to fight in this?
Ravage-The flesh is a desgin flaw. It is an inadiquite defense sheild and leaves it's user open to envirmoental hazzards.
Keilienaten-Shut Up! Cold, or no cold you will die on this barren waste land! Get Ready!
She sinks into her Lua and prepares to attack Ravage. Ravage, looks around and scans the area.
Ravage- Visibility-17% Recommended Course of action: Heat Visor. With that Ravage takes a few steps back and into the blinding snow, soon even his glowing visro dissappears in the blizzard.
Keilienaten-Shit. For a robot, he is uncommonly intelligent.
As Keilienaten looks around for her opponent she suddenly hears a low humming noise. As she turns to her right she sees a dim spark in the distance, shining brillinatly against the smokey gray clouds and while snow.
Keilienaten squints for a sec and tries to make out what it is.
Keilienaten-Oh shit!
She dives out of the way as the spark shoots by her, singeing part of her dress. As she rolls out of the way, she heres a strange whiping sound around her, suddenly, she feels a sharp pain on her back and then cold metal on her throat. She grabs at the ones on her throat, hoping to let herself free but it's no use, she's been ensnared. An electri current is feed through the tendrils and Keilienaten is filled with pain!
Keilienaten-AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
She is lifted into the air and slammed on the ground several times, on her last trip to the ground, she hits her head hard and it beggins to bleed. The cold isn't helping much either, her outfit offers no protection from the weather, and her loss of blood is making this fight all too easey for Ravage. As soon as she thinks it's over, she is lifted once more into the air and brought in closer through mist, until she is withim several feet of Ravage. She can't see his frame, but his visor is giving off a glow just strong enough to be made out in the blizzard.
Ravage- Surrender and be terminated quickly, resist and your life will be taken with extreme prejudice.
Keilienaten-Go, to hell.
With that Keilienaten fires of a fireball into Ravage's visor, causing him to drop her to the ground.
Ravage's visor is clouded with a static discharge due to the fireball and he looses sight of his target.
Keilienaten-Let's see how you like being hunted insted of the hunter.
Ravage stays completely still in the raging storm, visor off, and seemingly incompassitated.
Crinkling snow can be heard in the white darkeness of the storm as the snow gives way to Keilienaten's footsteps. She dashes around Ravage in a cricle at impressive speed, yet doesn't strike when the oppertunities arise. Suddenly, the crinkling of snow has stopped and only the howling wind is heard, shortly interupted by Keilienaten.
Keilienaten-Hey, metal head! Let's see how you like being blind sided.
Suddenly, orange lights appear against the dark canvass of snow, surrounding the seemingly blind Ravage.
Keilienaten-Now, I release you from this world.
The orange lights trn out to be individually placed fireballs, turning the snow blind areana into a deadly mine field. The balls zero in Ravage, and all explode on contact, creating a huge pillar of fire that shoots into the sky.
Keilienaten-And with that, this fight is finishe.......
Before she can finish she hears a loud thump behind her, As she turns around, she is completely dumbfounded that Ravage stands behind her, almost completely unscathed. He lowers his head to look at Kelienaten and his visor glows red again.
Ravage: Prepare for termination.
Before Keilienaten can make a move, she is grabbed by her throat and tossed 20 feet into the air.
Ravage-Initiating Berserker Mode.
Ravage glows a deep red as he starts to channel of his energy through his body, then in one move, he shoots up towards the falling Keilienaten, kicking her in the ribs, causing her to let out a scream. He then punds her with an elbow to her stomach and sends her to the ground. As she lands, her body bounces up a couple of feet into the air, Ravage swoops down and grabs her by her head. Then he places her on her feet, and before she can fall to the ground, he unleashes a savage combo on her with his razor claws, tearing through her flesh, and dress. Then as he delivers his final hit across her chest, he spins around and raises his foot to her head. As she regains some conciusness, the first thing she sees is an ion flare to her face, shooting twenty feet across the frozen tundra.
Keilienaten tumbless through the snow, leaving streaks and spots of bood where ever she lands. She hits, up against a rock, which stablizes her, giving her something to lean on. She's bleeding pretty badly, with most of her dress gone, and the sub-zero temperatures covering her open wounds, she won't last too long. She decides to finish this as quickly as she can, but her thoughts are interupted by a shot from the darkness. She rolls out of the way as the blast whizzes by her head and shatters the rock behind her. The blast came from Ravage's newly modified rail gun. Using his heat visor, he can flawlessly target keilienaten in the blinding snow. She tries to run around Ravage like she did befoe, but with his visor fully functional, it proves impossible. Ravage decides to have some target practice and really break in his new weapon. he sets the blast to minimal damage, which won't blow through the limbs, but the shear force of the impact will shatter any bone it comes in contact with. As Keilienaten tries to run around, concealed in the snow, Ravage's legs stay stationary as his torso spins with the same speed and direction of Keilienaten.
-Inside Ravage's Visor-
Ravage picks out points he wants to target on Keilienaten, choosing her left arm, right hand, her right knee and her left foot. Then he quickly calculates the exact points in time where she is going to be and fires off a stream of rail shots, all four shots connect perfectly, connecting with each designated point, practically leaving her immoblie in the snow.
Battle field-
Ravage intends to finish this off with one final rail shot to her head. He locks on and is ready to fire, when suddenly, Keilienaten teleports behind him and slashes into his ion jets, causing an explosion due to the overuse for keeping Ravage at top condition to battle in this climate.
Ravage turns his torso around and with one quick motion, stabs Keilienaten through her thighs with his energy sabres.
Keilienaten-AAAAAAAHHHHHH.
The blood from her legs, and the burning plasma contained in the blades make a blood red smoke between the fighters.
As Ravage adjusted to compinsate for the imbedded plasma sabres in Keilienatens legs, to prevent masking, he is struck down with a powerful whirlind kick to his head, sending him to the ground. Before he can get up, Keilienaten lands on top of him, piercing through his arms with both of his own sabres, now extracted from her legs. Keilienaten, straddles herself around Ravage's waist, completely nude, due to her battle scars, and using the rest of the fabric to cover up her major wounds.
Keilienaten leans in close to Ravage.
Keilienaten-You are not a robot. You fight like a demon, a savage, a great warrior indeed. And for that you have my recognition, but I will end this now. GO BACK TO WHERE YOU CAME FROM!!!!
She takes Koshi Mawari and stabs them through Ravage's visor, stapling his head to the ground.
As she tries to get up she winces from the pain, then suddenly, one of Ravage's arms frees itself and grabs her by her throat. It brings her closer to Ravage's visor, showing a countdown.
"5.....4......3......2.......1......0....." "Hara-Kiri flashes in Ravages visor as his torso begins to light up and generate enromous heat, some of which bruns some of the inside of Keilienaten's thighs.
She instantly realises what's about to happen and struggles franticley, trying to get free, it's no use.
Keilienaten-Oh God, NO!!!! This isn't happening!
Form a distance, a silhoeut with sapphire eyes and a jackal's helm stares. He hears a voice in his head.
-Do it now
-Yes, my master.
The figure points at Keilienaten, and she begins to glow blue, the instant Ravage detonates, she lets out a scream, and in that same instant, she finds her self back in the Dragon King's Main Chamber.
-Tundra-
-Well done my servant, and now the game continues.
-Thank you, my lord.
With that the figure dissapears, only to have another one show up at the blast sight.
the figure uncloakes itself revealing a woman.
-This is Mirrage, tell Sektor that I have recovered the data. I will be reporting back shortly.
With that the figure cloaks herself and leaves the wreckage.
-Dragon King's palace-
Onaga-The winner, due to an unexcpected Hara-Kiri, Keilienaten.
With that, Keilienaten, gets up off the floo, braces her ribs and walks to her quarters, battered and broken.

Hope you guys like this one, I know it's been a long time coming, but hear it is.

NICE! I like it alot Smoke. And how you had it end in a Hari Kiri is a nice touch too. I'm glad the fight scenes are being written. Once again, great job! Keep it up man. I like reading your stuff.

Awesome stuff as usual SNC.
Keep it up bro.

Ok, let's face it, with the missing fights, and the ongoing story, it's gotten harder to write and keep track of events. So, I just want to suggest, that if you're doing a previous fight scene, please state it at the begining.

However, this takes place after the events of Sensui's encounter with Ryoko and Ashrah in the Dead Marsh.
-Dragon Chamber-
Through the constant pain, and torture, Hatsuma has reached a point where he has all but given up on living, if only to see his enemies die infront of him. But, there is also another reason, he longs to see Gabrielle's face again, once more through his eyes.
Hatsuma reflects on his past experiences, knowing that the Sinnoku Spell will kill him soon. He has a descion to make, does he keep living and have somebody use him as another weapon, or, does he quicken the process, and let the Sinnoku spell finish it's job, and in theorey give up his life, so that atleast somebody else can walk away living?
Hatsuma- Saika, Iyaka, Gabrielle. Everybody that I've gotten close to has died, and I suspect that Gabrielle will be no different. But, I rufuse to be the one who carries out that order. If I can't be killed by anybody from the outside, then I'll take my own life from here.
Hatsuma tries to channel some of his power, hoping that the Sinnoku spell will finaly finish the job and free him from this hell.
As he starts channeling, the kanji on his body start to glow and surge with power, as they concentrate the energy given off by his body. The pain is intense, he feels as if he is being stabbed with a hundred knives repeatedly, all at once. The pain becomes so great that Hatsuma can't bare to keep quiet and starts to scream uncontrolably.
Hatsuma-Gggyyyyaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!
-Catacombs-
Sensui hears his former servants screams of agony and looks over to Gabrielle. He walks over and lifts her head, she has passed out from her fight, and with one quick slap across her face, he brings her back to reality.
As she wakes up, she sees Sensui starring at her several inches away.
Gabrielle- Se.....Sensui! What are you doing here? Where's Kilvan?
Sensui- Your fight is over, you lost, Kilvan is the winner, and with the exception of Ryoko everybody else thinks your dead. In short, you know belong to me. Sensui's eyes flare with a dark flame.
Suddenly, it starts to come back to Gabrielle, her fight with Kilvan, she was knocked off the edge and almost fell to her doom. She remembers a strong gust of wind, and before loosing conciusness, she remembers seeing Ghost.
Gabrielle- Where is he? Where's Collin?!
Sensui lurkes down and gets face to face with Gabrielle. She tries to lean away, but being chained to a wall, she has no place to go. Sensui closes his eyes for a split second, then opens them revealing their true color, they are in the shape of dragon slits. The slits open wide and show a small image of Ghost, burning in some sort of ethereal flame, screaming in agony. The slits close as Ghosts image fades in blackness of Sensui's eyes. With out a word, Sensui blinks, and his eyes flare up once more before he stands up and turns his back to Gabrielle.
Gabrielle- No, no, no. NO!!!! This can't be happening, he gan't be gone!
Sensui answers in the coldest tone of voice- The idiot forgot his place in the realms, I merely reminded him. He knew that his compostion was over 50 % spectral, and I have complete control of all things, living or dead. Although he put up a fight, his life was quite easy to take.
Gabrielle- Monster!!!!!
Sensui- Please Gabrielle, you know me all too well. Why do you act so surprised? I haven't spared anybody who dare stood in my way, not Lorne, not Nasha, not Ghost, and soon, even Hatsuma will fall at my hand.
Gabrielle- Don't you lay a hand on him! He has followed your orders without a doubt, without question. You yourself vowed to get revenge on Onaga for taking him.
Sensui- It's true that I vowed revenge, but he his body is useless to me now, he has sustained too much pain to be of any use. I will kill him, and then I will ressurect him once again, a new body, a new purpose, but no memories of his past to make him doubt his alliance.
Just then, they here another scream.
Hatsuma- Aaaagggghhhhhh!!!!!!!!
Gabrielle lashes out in tears- Hatsuma!!!!!!
Xion- It appears as if he has decided to take his own life.
Sensui- Hmmm, this might be interesting.
Sensui opens a rift in the demension, showing a one way portal to the Dragon Chamber. There they see the former Shinobi in pain as he adds fuel to the fire and tries to make the Shinnoku spell take affact sooner.
Garielle sees the extreme pain displayed on her love's face and is brought to tears.
Gabrielle-Hatsuma!!!! Hatsuma please stop! Don't do this!!!!!!!
Sesnui- I see. Hatsuma, you will not escape me so easily. Sensui begins to feed some of his energy from the void into Hatsuma's very life force, preventing him from dying, at a point where it clearley should've killed him.
Sensui- If he's going to die, it's going to be in punlic, and by my hand.
Not knnwing what just happened, Hatsuma stops to channel his power.
Hatsuma- This makes no sense, I should've died from that, unless. Unless Sensui is keeping me alive somehow.
Sensui closes the rift, cutting off Gabrielle's vision of Hatsuma. He then turns to Xion.
Sensui- Tell the dragon King I want an exhibition match, against Hatsuma.
Xion- And if he refuses?
Sensui- Then you MAKE him except it.
Xion- Ofcourse. With that Xion fades out.
Sensui turns his attention to Gabrielle.- It's time to see if he is worthy of being ressurected, or does he deserve to die with the rest of you.
Gabrielle looks at him with wide, but feirce eyes, still soaked from her tears.
Sensui- Remember this, as you watch this fight, all of your suffering will be nothing compared to his final punishment. He wont survive this fight, he will die, and his final vision will be your crying face. If he fails, his soul will be devoured by my Malice Blade. I will leave you with that.
Sensui materializes his cape from his back and goes up in flames from top to bottom, leaving Gabrielle to cry in silence and darkness as she contemplates Hatsuma's final moments.

I gotta say sorry for not writing.I have been having some personal problems,and while I could try to write,it wouldn't be the same.Smoke,you are awesome to keep the story up,thank you for that.I don't know when I will be writing normal again.Maybe soon,maybe not,but I just can't right now.Im sorry.

Hey, personal matters come first. So you do what you need to, and I'll keep the story going.

Smoke...I loved that addition! I'm soooo looking forward to the fight coming between Hatsuma and Sensui..I think that should be one fore the history books. Great work man! Poor Gabrielle... Her torment, like Hatsuma's, seems everlasting.

And Rabid: Smoke is right, your personal life comes before these forums, you take whatever time you need. Don't rush it.

Thanks for the feed back TomTaz. I'm glad you liked the scene. Yeah, I think it's time to see what Hatsuma can really do. But, I don't know if this will be a final farewell for the gem stone ninja.

I'm baaaaaaack....

I read the Kilvan/Gabrielle fight scene...great work, but there's one tiny little problem: Kilvan isAnubis (that is to say, if we're talking about the same Egyptian god here). Check out his bio. He's the god of death, and was worshipped by the Egyptians under the name 'Anubis'. Also, Millenia ago, he lost a wager to Zaggot, and became his servant. He watched as Zaggot incited Shinnok to war - he himself never interacted with Shinnok. If there's anyone Kilvan has the intention of betraying, it's Zaggot himself.

Is there any way we can fix this? It might actually prove very interesting to the storyline, and incorporate Kilvan more into the main brawl...he's kind of been an outsider up until now, and I'd like to get him more involved overall.

Also, what are the current fights that need to be written?

In the meantime, allow me to brush up on my writing skills....


HALLWAY LEADING TO ONAGA'S THRONE ROOM

**Kilvan, walking down the hallway, is joined suddenly by Piroh, who teleports into position above his shoulder**

Piroh: Little fucker?

Kilvan: You know I missed you so. I just got upset.

**They both cackle for a good two minutes**

Piroh: A shame you weren't able to finish her off...

Kilvan: Ngh....I have more important matters to attend to. Like Kamon...but, the business at hand, first....

**He pushes open the doors to The Dragon King's throne room**

Onaga: Kilvan, my congratulations on a battle well fought. What have you for me today?

Kilvan: Nothing. I have not had the chance to capture any more of them.

Onaga: But you have brought me so many already...

**He lifts a crystal ball, and we see through it the reflection of the Dark Prison. Trapped in cells are Fujin, Stryker, Reiko, Khameleon, and Drahmin, among others**

Kilvan: What do you intend to do with them, anyway?

Onaga: Kill them. Kill them, and ressurect them, to make the mightiest army in all the lands.

Kilvan: Ressurect? How can-

Onaga: That is not your concern....won't you bring me more?

Kilvan: Perhaps I will, after this blasted tournament is finished. But I haven't the time. My next match comes soon.

Onaga: Pity. Go, then. Your presence is no longer required at this time.

Kilvan: ....need I remind you that we are partners in this-

Onaga: Do NOT Question me at this time, fool. I have other matters to attend to apart from your sniveling!

Kilvan: ...very well.

**He leaves the palace, silent and brooding**

Piroh: Well, isn't he testy today!

Kilvan: Gah, this is too much. He evidentally considers me less than worthy...and I'll apparently have Kamon to deal with soon...this is too much.

Piroh: He said 'ressurect'. I wonder how?

Voice from the shadows: It is a simple matter, when you have the right tools...

**Kilvan draws his scythe**

Kilvan: SHOW YOURSELF!!!

**Out of the shadows steps a man unfamiliar to Kilvan. His face is still shadowed, however, however his clothes are familiar as belonging to a Chaosrealm denizen**

Kilvan: You are of the same realm as I....who are you?

Man: One who recognizes the rightful ruler of our land, through scripture from long ago.

Kilvan: You know of my right? No records exist.

Man: What is lost can be found again, if one searches. Such are the ways of Chaos. I seek to aid you in your quest to overthrow Zaggot.

Kilvan: And how do you propose to do this?

Man: Onaga's heart has the power to grant new life to fallen warriors. All one must do is consume it.

Kilvan: His heart? Ah, yes....I understand now. His armies are not invincible, but indestructible!

Man: I will occupy Zaggot. You finish your business here, and take what you must.

Piroh: I like this guy!

Kilvan: What is your name?

**The man steps further out of the shadows, revealing his scarred face**

Man: If you ever have need, do not hesitate to call for Havik. Farewell, Kilvan.

**He disappears back into shadow**

Piroh: I sensed no deception from him. His words rang true!

Kilvan: The heart...yes, the heart...AHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!

Piroh: Don't be cocky, now. You've still got people to take care of. Keilienaten's your next fight! Hee hee hee!

**Kilvan now dances around with his scythe, giggling maniacally**

Kilvan: Keilienaten....Sensui...Sozek...Onaga...Kamon...Shao Kahn...Zaggot...all who stand now in my way will die and be reborn...AS MY SLAVES!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!

As Kilvan and Piroh laugh and celebrate their new source of knowledge, they are cut short by a strange power. Kilvan stops and looks straight ahead.
Kilvan- You've got alot of nerve to interupt me. And know, you will die.
With lightning speed, Kilvan takes his scythe and tosses it over his shoulder, straight at his traget. He truns in time to see as it it's about to make contact. However, instead of the figure being cleaved in half, the scythe passes right through and gets inbeded into a near by wall.
Kilvan turns towards Piroh and lets out a laugh from underneath his mask.
Kilvan- Ofcourse, nobody could be that stupid. The coward only sent an astro image to spy on me.
Piroh- Truely a foolish coward.
Kilvan- Indeed, so let's retrive my weapon and be on our way.
Kilvan and Piroh approach the shadow figure, excpecting to walk through and pick the scythe out of the wall. As they approach, Kilvan reaches over, hoping to have his hand pass through image and grab his scythe.
Kilvan- An admirable image. Not many can hold a copy together for this long.
Piroh- Yes, the coward does seem to poses some skill. Unfortunately for him, he'll fall at your feet before long.
Kilvan proceeds to reach through the shadow and extract his weapon. As he does, the image comes to life and grabs Kilvan by his throat with great speed.
?????- I assure you, I'm quite real.
Kilvan (choking)- What the hell?!
Kilvan- Piroh *cough* banish him from my sight!
Piroh quickly casts a warp spell, and the figure dematerializes. Kilvan quickly takes a breath as he stumbles to one knee. He reaches to his throat and massages it, while extracting the scythe with his other hand. Kilvan- I've never seen a technique like that. That idiot, how dare he mess with a warrior of such skill as myself?
?????- If you truely where great you wouldn't have been caught off gaurd so easily.
Kilvan turns around and meets a the shadow figure once more, face to face before he is hit hard in the mask with a quick right hand from the figure, sending him into the wall.
Piroh tries to warp the figure once more, but is quickly turned into a statuet by the figures gaze, and falls to the floor, shattering on impact.
Kilvan- You'll pay dearley for that!
He swings at the opponent with his scythe, but the figure raises his forearm, and the scythe hits hard against a bone shaped gauntlet. Then, without warning, the figure puts his foot against Kilvans throat, pinning him to the wall. By applying pressure, he inbeds him into the wall, leaving an imprint.
Kilvan realizes that he can use his Devil Hands and can disable his opponent by applying pressure points. A great plan but as he tries to attack his opponent's legs, his hands pass right through, as if his leg was made of vapor.
?????- Don't get too full of yourself, Anubis. It's one matter to have a plan, it's quite another to execute it.
The figure grabs Kilvans scythe and throws it to the side.
?????- I could kill you right now, but I am not your executioner.
The figure retracts his leg and frees Kilvan, letting him fall to the floor.
Kilvan- You may not be my executioner, but I have now become yours!!!
Kilvan uses his power to summon his scythe to him and with one slash, he cuts through the shadow figures mid-section, but just like before it goes completely through.
Kilvan- What's going on?!
Kilvan slashes up dices the figure vertically in half, still he reforms.
Starting to feel fatigued, Kilvan manages to swing once more,but before he can reach enought momentum to swing it, the figure quickly puts his foot on the scythe, preventing it from rising, then he runs up the scythe and knees Kilvan in the bridge of the masks nose, creating a huge dent, thn he flips back and lands on the ground.
Kilvan grabs his mask as blood drips from his face slit.
?????- Don't fool yourself into thinking you're invincible, doing so will lead to your quick and painful downfall.
Kilvan- Shut-up! Once I get the heart of the Dragon King, I will be invincible! My armies will reign supreme.
?????- how dissapointing, you are not the Anubis you think you are.
Kilvan- Silence, you know nothing about me. When I take Onaga's heart and learn the secrets to resurection....
Kilvan is stopped short as the shadow figure looks over at Piroh's broken body and fire a blast of energy at the pile of rubble. The statue instantly comes together and returns to flesh, bring back the cyclopes from the dead.
Kilvan- That's not possible! Who are you?
?????- Be aware from this point on. You are far from invincible.
With that the figure then fades from view.

For starters, I wanna say I loved the fight scene for Keilienaten and ravage Smoke. Awesome. The story's going out great, but I'm a bit off. Is Amanuet dead?

Here's an additional part of a story. Hopefully this will kinda clear up the Kilvan/Keilienaten/Kamon story-- HEY KKK. Hmm, is that a conspiracy?

Let me know what you guys think. Thanks...



- KEILIENATEN’S ROOM –

Keilienaten is sucking the life out of one of Onaga’s servants. A bright light circles them, as Keilienaten heals all of her wounds, and the servant’s life is sucked out completely.

Keilienaten gets up, and heads out the balcony. She looks at the beautiful sky.

KEILIENATEN:
Oh my dear Amanuet, I miss you so. Your presence is needed by my side.

VOICE:
Keilienaten...

Keilienaten quickly turns around, and sees the shadow of Anubis. She freezes in shock.

ANUBIS:
The time has come for the truth. Your destiny ends here.

Keilienaten snaps out of it, and gets upset.

KEILIENATEN:
Enough of this show of fears. I fear nothing or no one. I over threw you thousands of years in the past. If you have resurrected to claim your position again, you’re dead wrong.

Anubis laughs hysterically. This annoys Keilienaten.

KEILIENATEN:
Shut it. Your laughter annoys the depth of my ears.

ANUBIS:
It’s time for the truth Keilienaten. It’s time...

Anubis glows a red neon color. Then, the Anubis skin and outfit melt away. Sekhmet is revealed to be the real person pretending to be Anubis.

KEILIENATEN:
You’re Anubis?

A huge sparkball flies past Keilienaten, and hits Sekhmet. A shield protects Sekhmet destroying the sparkball. Sekhmet the fades away saying...

SEKHMET:
Kamon.... Keilienaten... the day has come. Ha, ha, ha, haaaaaaa.

Keilienaten quickly bolts around, and sees Kamon. The man she once loved, long, long ago. She is somehow happy ans surprised.

KEILIENATEN:
Kamon... you’re alive...

KAMON:
Every inch of my flesh. My god, you remain so beautiful.

Kamon brushes up to her, and hugs her. He caresses her face. She closes her eyes, and enjoys his hands all over her.

KAMON:
I traveled the world, and the seven seas. Searching for you.

KEILIENATEN:
(backs away) Everybody’s looking for something.

KAMON:
I want you. I escaped the depths of hell to be with you.

KEILIENATEN:
I’m sorry, Kamon. Things change. I’ve evolved, and changed.

KAMON:
I know. You’ve becom much more powerful than the God Anubis.

KEILIENATEN:
Why did he show his identity?

KAMON:
You cannot be that naïve, Keilienaten. You better than anyone knows that isn’t really Anubis.

KEILIENATEN:
(remembers) You speak the truth. Isn’t that Sekhmet?

KAMON:
Yes. He is the traitor that ambushed my army and me. He’s the one one that started the war in your palace.

KEILIENATEN:
He’s the creator of the clan, Eye of Ra. What does he want? Did you not annihialate him in combat?

KAMON:
Yes, but you know no one remains dead here. He wants power. He will try to overrule you, and take over your realm, and then head to overthrow Onaga.



KEILIENATEN:
Never. My ambition got me where I am, and I will not let a rat from nowhere take it away.

KAMON:
What happened to you? You were so loveable.

KEILIENATEN:
Oh please, Kamon. You knew the darkside circled me. You told me yourself.

KAMON:
But our love calmed it.

KEILIENATEN:
But you were killed, and that love died with it. If you please, I got things to attend.

She starts to walk away, but Kamon stops her.

KAMON:
DO not deny that you steel feel feelings for me. If you become my bride you will be saved. Anubis will then spare your life.

KEILIENATEN:
The real Anubis? Please, he’s more dead than that those I killed in Mortal Kombat.

KAMON:
You’re wrong. Anubis is alive. Maybe you do not recognize him, but he has been watching you every move. If he hasn’t confronted you, is because he is waiting for the perfect moment.

KEILIENATEN:
A God is stalking me? Ha. A wuss and a sissy is what I shall call him.

KAMON:
Do not insult the God of Death, or he will off you before the match.

KEILIENATEN:
No one can stop me. I’ve gained to much power to be stoppable.

KAMON:
Anyone can be stopped. Anubis is planning to stop his leader, Zaggot.

KEILIENATEN:
Zaggot. The powerful Lord, other than I?
KAMON:
Yes, so please step down, and be spared. I love Keilienaten.

Kamon brings Keilienaten closer to him, and he ugs her tight. They begin to kiss passionately. After a while, she pushes Kamon away.

KEILIENATEN:
With a kiss to attain I will step down? You foolish man. My heart has gone a different direction, and it’s Amanuet who owes my love now.

She leaves her room, leaving Kamon sadden.

VOICE:
She won’t change.

KAMON:
My Lord...

Kamon turns around and faces his Lord Anubis. It is none other than Kilvan.

KILVAN:
Do not let your feelings in the way. Don’t forget what your job is to do. Keilienaten has become a threat, and she must be stopped. She sent to destroy me long ago, don’t forget that. Her mind is too wasted to recall such incidents. Our battle is next, and the truth will be revealed, even if it’s on her last dying breath. She is our enemy. Do not forget that.

KAMON:
Yes, my Lord.

KILVAN:
Then we must go for Onaga. Once I rid his existence, you will bring me his heart, so I can drain his power. A power that I will gain to defeat Zaggot. Finally, I will be the supreme ruler.

KAMON:
Yes, my Lord.

Kilvan disappears. Kamon is left totally confused.

KAMON:
I still must protect her from Sekhmet.

Kamon leaves the room, and Kilvan reappears alongside Piroh.

KILVAN:
Keep a close eye on him. I feel he’s having second thoughts.
PIROH:
My Lord, I’m still a bit off, but how is it he can detect the evil in everyone else, but sees good in you?

KILVAN:
Are you forgetting, I am the one that ave him that power. I reanimated him.


- HALLWAY –

Keilienaten is walking throught the long path. She heads towards Onaga’s throne room.
The door on Onaga’s room open, and Keilienaten hides behind a post.

KEILIENATEN:
Why am I hiding?

She’s about to walk out, but to her surprise, Li Mei walks out the room, and leaves.

KEILIENATEN:
Li Mei, coming out from Onaga’s resting place. I thought she was one of the good ones?


- ONAGA’s THRONE ROOM –

Onaga stands out in his balcony, smelling the air. He enjoys the breeze. Keilienaten walks in to his room.

ONAGA:
Keilienaten, what brings you forth to my room?

KEILIENATEN:
I see you have your pet to ease your sexual pleasures.

ONAGA:
If you speak of Li Mei, it’s far more than that. She’s a surpbrise to explode to her allies.

KEILIENATEN:
So the she s allying with you?

ONAGA:
Not completely. My soilder’s soul is stuck in with hers in her body. They fight each other to take over. You may say she has two personalities, but soon, she will become completely evil. She will have accept her destiny.

Keilienaten walks up to Onaga, and runs her arms around his body.
KEILIENATEN:
Yes, but in the mean time, focus on the beauty in front of your eyes.

ONAGA:
There is a lot of beauty my eyes see, and power is the best I adore.

KEILIENATEN:
Oh please, power is what we all love, but I’m talking about me.

ONAGA:
I got your little game figured out, my Egyptian prostitute. I careless. You will never throw me out of my throne.

KEILIENTEN:
What makes you think I want to do that. I rather be by your side, and rule with you.

ONAGA:
I don’t do partnerships. I rule alone.

KEILIENATEN:
I don’t want to be your partner. Atleast not like that.

ONAGA:
What do you mean?

KEILIENATEN:
I wanna be your bride.

ONAGA:
(laughs) You expect me to believe that? Your kisses, your tongue, your naked body lays with another female, as you both have lesbian pleasures.

KEILIENATEN:
It’s a brand new era Onaga. A girl can go both ways.

Onaga angrily grabs Keilienaten by the throat, and slams her up against the wall.

ONAGA:
I won’t deny I was not attracted, or am not attracted by your beauty, your appearance. I desire Egyptian women, but I am not stupid. I know your game plan, and this little game of yours is over.

He leans over and licks her face. He then tosses her to the floor.


ONAGA:
Now leave my presence for I wish you not to be here.

Keilienaten gets up, and runs up to the Dragon King.

KEILIENATEN:
(begging) Please Onaga. I do have this strong emotional feelings for you, and I tell you the truth. I do recognize I am a true bitch, and conniving, and am full of deception towards others. But I have never been so sencire than what I spit from my mouth.

She leans over to kiss him, but pushes her. The push is so hard, Keilienaten falls on her back.
She gets up and goes for another kiss, but he slaps her. She looks up at him. She has a cut on her cheek. Both just stare at one another.
Keilienaten swings her hand to slap him, but he grabs it. She swings her other hand, but he also grabs it.
Keilienaten angrily pulls her hands away, and quickly scratches Onaga’s reptilian face. He lets out a roar.

Onaga angrily grabs Keilienaten’s head, and stars to squeeze it. Then he pulls her to his face, and they begin to kiss. They make out like wild animals.
Onaga pulls away, and pushes Keilienaten to the floor. He then jumps on top of her, and rudely makes out with her.

Keilienaten bites his lips hard, he is forced to pull away. Blood drips one her face, from his lip. She begins to drink it. Onaga just looks doen at her.
He gets up, and looks down at her. She’s about to get up, but he stomps on her stomach, holding her down.

ONAGA:
Is this what you wanted? Drink my blood to gain more power?

She pushes his leg off of her, and gets up.

KEILIENATEN:
Maybe, but right now I want it all.

She sinks her thick nails on his cheeks, and pulls him down to her face. The continue to kiss.
Onaga than grabs her by the throat and squeezes it. He looks at her suffocating face, and then slaps her lip onto his.
He then throws her on his huge bed.

He flaps his huge wings, and glides ove Keilienaten.

ONAGA:
Is this what you really want?

KEILIENATEN:
More than you know it. Make me yours, Dragon King.

Onaga sticks out his huge claws from his hands, and sinks them on his chest. He slices down, making huge deep cuts. He roars.
Blood drips as if it was rain, damping down on Keilienaten. She drinks a lot of blood, and begins to bathe all over it. She enjoys it as if she was having sex. Her loud moans of pleasure, turn on Onaga.
He dives down, and lands on top of Keilienaten. They once more kiss like animals, and Onaga begins to rip her clothes. He starts to lick her breasts, and begin their rough animal love making.

........Uh, yeah. Anyway, nice job with the addition, but now I have to prie that image out of my head with a laser.

-Outside of the Dragon King's quarters-
Xion warps in from the shadows and hears loud moaning from the inside of the chamber. Waisting no time in being stealthy or casual, he makes to X shaped slices through the doors the blows them away with an oni blast, shooting the doors into pieces, announcing his pressance with authority. Onaga, obviously upset that somebody interupted his play time, motions for his elite gaurd to attack the intruder. As they charage him and get within inches, Xion unsheaths his kitetsu and slices the gaurds to pieces with deadly prescision, leaving them to fall to the floor from a gentle breeze. He puts his swords away and hides his arms back under his own wings. As he makes his way closer to Onaga and Keilienaten, he begins to charge them, with amazing speed, he kicks Onaga in the ribs, shooting him off of the nude Keilienaten and into his throne.
In a low growl Xion adresses Onaga.
Xion- Onaga, Sensui has a request.
With his back turned, he can't see that Keilienaten has gotten up and ambushes him with her blades, stabbing him in the back.
Onaga smiles and replies- Request denied.
Xion falls to the Dragon King's feet as Keilienaten steps over him.
Keilienaten- I can't believe Sesnui would inlist such a weak partner.
She smiles devilishly -Now, where were we?
As she lowers herself on top of Onaga, a blade comes between them, Xion has gotten back up and seems to be unharmed from the attack, yet the blades are still lodged into his back.
Xion- Genma blood is stronger then dragon blood.
He kicks Keilienaten off of Onaga and she rolls to the other side of the room. Xion turns his attention back to the Dragon King and plants his foot firmly on to his wounds, causing Onaga to let out a painful roar.
Xion- I won't repeat myself, Sensui has a request.
Onaga- And if it isn't granted?
Xion looks at one of Onaga's open hands and plunges his kitetsu through it, stapling it to the floor.
Onaga- Argh! You worm, you'll pay dearly for that!
Onaga tries to grab Xion with his other hand, but before he can lift it, Xion takes his second kitetsu and impales it through his elbow. The power his weapons give off and the points they're directed to have Onaga completely defenseless.
By this time, Keilienaten has gotten up and shoots a quick fireball at Xion which makes contact and blows him off the Dragon King.
Keilienaten- Idiot, my daggers have taken their tole, the poison on their tips will kill you within seconds.
She quickly runs over and tries to release him but as she touches the kitetsu, her head is filled with such evil and such power that it overwhelms her and she is blown away.
Xion gets up, slightly charred on the outside but he brushes it off, then reaches back and pulls out Keilienatens blades, they have become corrupt with his blood and briefly surge with power.
Keilienaten regains conciusness in time to see both of her daggers thrown at her, each impaling itself several millimeters from her face. Xion stares at her as his eyes glow brilliantly and suddenly she can't move, and barely breathe.
Keilienaten-What, what have you done to me?
Xion- A secret technique called Shinoipo. I have paralyzed your entire body, including your lungs. With that he turns his attention to the Dragon King.
He walks over and kneels over him, then putting his hands over his blades he begins to twist them, causing extreme pain for the Dragon King.
Xion- I suggest that you reconsider, if you want your lover to live, death by suffocation isn't pretty or painless.
Onaga- Hmph, she can die for all I care. But you, I will enjoy killing you and sending your broken body to Sensui, piece by piece!
Onaga lets out a jet of fire from his mouth straight at Xion's face.
Onaga- Hahaha. What?
Onaga's laughter is cut short as he realizes that his opponent remains. Xion has some how caught the flame in his palm. The red orb on his shoulder glows and he shoot the jet of fire back at Onaga's head.
Xion- I wont tell you again. Sensui wants a match with Hatsuma, one to the death. Arrange it.
Xion takes his gauntlet incased hand and hits Onaga in the chest, cracking his sternum.
Onaga's scream can be heard from beyond the flames.
Onaga- Very well. But remember this, when this is over, I will feast on your flesh.
Xion quiets the flames, releasing the pressure. He then extracts both of his kitetsu from the Dragon Kings arms and sheaths them. At that same moment Keilienaten feels a jet of air rush into her lungs as she is able to breath again.
Xion- I will inform Sensui of your descision. Now pick yourself up, it's embarrising.
With that Xion opens his wings and dissapears in a tornado.
Onaga looks at Keilienaten who is still partially suffocating.
Onaga-Get out of my sight.
Onaga raises his foot and is about to kick Keilienaten out of his room when it gets tangled in Kamons pyramid staff.
Kamon- I will take her.
The Dragon King lets out a growl and exits his chamber.
The last thing that Keilienaten sees is Kamon in his armor approah her before loosing conciusness.
Kilvan appears beside him.
Kilvan- I told you she was the enemy, do you dare defy your god?
Kamon- No my lord. However, it would be best if she recovered for a more enjoyable battle later on.
Kilvan- Very well, but do not think that I won't hesitate tearing your soul out of your body if you betray me.
Kamon- Of course.
With that Kamon craddles Keilienaten in his arms as he brings her back to her room and leaves her on her bed. The door closes as she regains conciusness.
Kamon sighs and his eyes glow an eerie blue flame once more as he is once again under the complete and loyal servitude of Anubis.
In the darkest corners, a figure watches.
?????- Greate power, supressed by uncertainty and feeble feelings of doubt. What a sorry sight.

**A dark hallway, somewhere in Onaga's palace**

**Kilvan walks forward, Piroh floating by his side. The dent in his mask is still apparent. He says nothing. Piroh folds his tiny arms, and frowns, his single eyebrow descending so that his eye narrows to a slit**.

Piroh: That wasn't nice, that was your favorite one.

**Kilvan says nothing, but stops as they come to a set of two immense marble doors. He pulls them apart, revealing a wall of masks upon masks. Every colour, size, shape. Some comical, some tragic in nature, some frightful.**

Piroh: Don't know who he was, but we're going to make him pay, aren't we, yes? That jerk almost killed me! Kill Kamon too, if he forgets his place, yes! But first, the harlot? I think so. What about you?

Kilvan: ...

**He reaches up to a button at his temple, and presses it. The mask clatters to the ground, joined by several drops of blood. It being dark, his face cannot be seen. However, where the blood hits the ground, the floor steams and sizzles. Quickly he reaches into the cabinet, and selects a mask identical to his old one, save that the eyeslits are narrowed to give the impression of rage. He fits it into place, and it connects with a clack. A pale light glows from behind the eyeslits.**

Piroh: Now, what about Havik? Yes, that one worries me...if he tries anything, can we slice him? Yes? Goody, I knew you'd agree....

**Kilvan closes the cabinet, and disappears into thin air**

Piroh: He gets so testy sometimes. Hee hee heeeeeeee.........

**Piroh disappears as well**

Hey, who is ??? ? Good cliffhang...


- KELIENATEN ROOM -

Keilienaten opens her eyes, exhaling loud, letting an eery cry out. Her eyes turn pure black, as she begins to cough blood. She rolls out of her bed, and begins to puke blood.

She starts to slowly crawl away, and lightly gets up to her feet. She stands there nude, thoughtless, with a blank head.


F L A S H B A C K – Thousands of Years Ago

- Rahankatut - TOWN
A younger looking Keilienaten runs at fast speed, eyeing her surrounding. It is night and quiet. She bumps into Kamon, who has been waiting for her.
When they meet, they hug each other, and kiss passionately. They are two young birds in love.

KEILIENATEN:
Do you have to go?

KAMON:
I must. It is your father’s orders. I cannot defy him.

KEILIENATEN:
But I am afraid.

KAMON:
Do not be, my love. I will come back. When I I return, I will tell your father about us.

KEILIENATEN:
Will you really?

Kamon nods, and she happily braces him. They kiss one another.

CHANGE F L A S H B A C K

- RAHANKATUT – Keilienaten’s Throne

Keilienaten lays on her bed, very worried. Her mother Nefertiti runs in.

NEFERTITI:
I have some rather bad news, daughter.

KEILIENATEN:
What is it mother?

NEFERTITI:
Kamon and his crew were ambushed, and killed.

Keilienaten goes bezerk, and begins cursing. She starts trashing her room. Her mother tries to calm her down, but Keilienaten throws her mother out.

All night, Keilienaten has broken every wall of her room. She has gotten dark, and full of hate. A shadow appears before her. It looks like Piroh, but the darkness hides his true figure.

SHADOW:
Why so lonely?

KEILIENATEN:
Who dares ask me such question?

SHADOW:
It is I, Piroh.

KEILIENATEN:
I know you not. Leave my presence, or be annihialated.

PIROH:
I am not here to hurt you, nor harm you. I’ve come to help.

KEILIENATEN:
Help. Can you bring my king back?
PIROH:
I cannot, but I can help you make all those who are responsible for his death, pay. You must avenge his death.

KEILIENATEN:
But it was my father who sent him.

PIROH:
Your father, your mother, Iris. They were all part of it. They wanted to get rid of him.

KEILIEANTEN:
Why would they do such thing?

PIROH:
They were afraid that together you and him would gain a lot of power.

KEILIENATEN:
Power? Why would I want power?

PIROH:
To rule all. TO become supreme rule of this realm.

KEILIENATEN:
I do not want to rule. I want my king back.

PIROH:
Crying is not getting you anywhere. You must gain as much power to become so powerful you would be able to bring him back.

KEILIENATEN:
Is that possible?

PIROH:
Yes it is.

KEILIENATEN:
How do I do that?

PIROH:
Kill those who already have power and oserve it. You will gain power. Lots of it.

Keilienaten has been brainwashed really quick.

KEILIENATEN:
Yes, yes. I shall do just that. I will begin with those who were at fault in Kamon’s death.

Piroh steps out of the shadows, and smiles. Keilienaten now has psychotic look.


BACK TO PRESENT

- - KELIENATEN ROOM –

Keilienaten snaps out of her trance. Tears run down her face. Piroh steps out of the shadows.

KEILIENATEN:
You made me this way. Ambitious, avenger, and venenemous.


PIROH:
You did it all on your own. I just helped you follow your destiny.

KEILIENATEN:
But I’ve become evil.

PIROH:
Yes, but you like it.

Keilienaten grabs Piroh, and pulls him closer to her.

KEILIENATEN:
I love it, and would not change anything for the world. Now tell me, Piroh. Does your Lord, know you’re aligned with me?

PIROH:
How dare you say that? I am loyal to my Lord.

KEILIENATEN:
Oh Please. I just remembered it all. Long ago we planned on bringing Kilvan down. You stayed along his side to follow every move he made. What happened in that process, I have no clue. Now we must continue with the plan.

Piroh just stares at an evil smiling Keilienaten.