- CHAOSREALM –

The clan of blood thirsty vampires cover the skies of outworld, as they fly by.
Their leader, lord of the vampires, Celestial, leads his troop. They are headed for a battle to the finish in Outworld. By his side the new ally, and Celestial’s left hand, Lorne, flys along. Lorne had accepted Celestial’s proposal and has become a vampire. Lorne now has every part of his body.

LORNE:
We are nearby the portal my Lord.

CLESTIAL:
Good. Once in Nexus, we must grab all of the Kamigodu keys before they reach the hands of the Dragon King.

LORNE:
What will we do with them?

CELESTIAL:
Destroy them. Then you and the rest will fight the Dragon King’s army, while I go and finish personal matters with the reptilian beast.

A full anger fills Celestial’s face.

LORNE:
Look my Lord.

Lorne points ahead to the portal. Celestial flies at full speed, and through the portal. The rest of the vampires follow behind.


- NEXUS –

Celestial flies out into the Nexus, the platform in the abyss that holds all the portals. Including Keilienaten’s world, which seems to be connecting to Outworld’s portal.

The six Kamidogu keys lay nearby, rotating. Celestial walks up to it.

CELSTIAL:
I will bring you down Onaga, and make you pay.

He starts using his mind to move the keys around, but then gets attacked from behind. He flies through one key, and brakes it. As he gets up, he sees the broken key reanimate itself. Then he turns to see who’s his attacker. It’s Nasha, Queen of the Arachnoids.

CELESTIAL:
You. You’re dead. You were finished in kombat. In the tournament.

NASHA:
Haven’t you learned that no one stays dead in the world of Mortal Kombat? It’s unbelievable. It doesn’t hurt to align with a leader. It really pays off.

CELESTIAL:
You rather be a slave of a Dragon, than run free?

NASHA:
Save your words and lectures. I’m not hear to talk, nor am here to listen.

She leaps at Celestial, and knocks him to the floor. She pins his arms and legs with her stings, as she sits on top of him. She starts punching the hell out of him.

At the sametime, the vampires were beginning to fly out from the Chaosrealm portal.

LORNE:
(to vampires) Attack, and help the Lord.

NASHA:
(looking up at vampires) Silly blood drinking vampire bastards.

She laughs, and the vampires dive down towards her. Using her palms, she begins to shoot webs. She she hits the first few who get nearby. They are shot back, and webbed against the platforms’s wall.

There are still far too many vampires. They have begun to surround her. With desperation, she sticks out another sting-looking tail from her lower back, just a few inches above her ass cheeks.
She starts firing thick webs, as if pouring water from the water hose. She moves around the tail, and forms a wall around her and Celestial. After, she puts away her sting tail, and looks back at Celestial.

NASHA:
Where were we? Ah yes...

Hug sharp theeth grown from her grill, and poisoned saliva drips from her mouth. She lowers to bite Celestial. By this time, Celestial’s eyes has turned pure black, and with a flash, has Nasha frozen in hypnotism.

CELESTIAL:
Now let me up my love.

Nasha nods, and gets off of Celestial. She then helps him up. Celestial braces her face gentely.

CELESTIAL:
You are such a beautiful fiend. Your young, sexy, and tender. I would make you my bride.

NASHA:
Oh make me yours, Lord.

Celstial brings her closer to him, and slowly lowers his face to kiss her, but stops. He only licks her lips, and then pushes her head back. Her neck pops up, and Celestial flavors her nick. He sticks out his teeth, and lowers to bite her neck. Just a few inches away her neck, he stops.

CELESTIAL:
But I am not immune to blood from a bitch.

In that instant, Nasha snaps out of the trance.

NASHA:
What happened? (angry) What’d you do to me?

CELESTIAL:
I’m no R. Kelly, so do not worry.

Nasha screams, and runs towards Celestial, but the vampire uppercuts her. Nasha flies up, and hits her web-wall. She uses her stings to run around the web-wall freely.

NASHA:
If you think that the Lycon race is your biggest threat, you should think again. This is not over vampire. I, queen of the Arachnoid, will lead the army of my kind, to destroy your kind. We will get your blood and revive, Rikktor.

CELESTIAL:
(laughs) Rikktor? Is that why blood is so special. To wake up a dead spider? (joke laughs) Why go the heard route, when you could just save the trouble and tear Onaga’s heart? His heart has the power to ressurect anything and anyone. Even pathetic spiders.

Nasha is now thinking of what Celestial just said.

NASHA:
We still need your soul.

CELESTIAL:
My soul? For the millionth time, I’m not the reincarnation of Rikktor. My soul is different from his. And Onaga’s heart will resurrect everything, from flesh to spiritually.

NASHA:
That still doesn’t end our feud.

Nasha begins gathering the web-shield she had made, and begins to uses it as a shield around her. She crawls away safely, and runs out through the Outworld portal.

Lorne lands next to Celestial.


LORNE:
Are you okay my Lord?

CELESTIAL:
Yes, no worries.

Celestial looks around, and the Kamidogu crystals are missing.

CELESTIAL:
Why’d you let her take the keys?

LORNE:
She didn’t my Lord. She left without them.

CELESTIAL:
So where are they?

LORNE:
I-I don’t know.


- OUTWORLD – CAVES

An invisible force runs through the cave, leaving footsteps behind. The invisble thief laughs. Then it shows it’s figure. It’s...

Nice, the only problem I have is that I can't think of who would be thief. So if somebody can add to his, I'll see if I can add the Hatsuma/Sensui fight after.

Yes, we must continue with HATSUMA/SENSUI flee. I luv their plot. I guess I was thinking of Tanya, since she shows DK the Kamidogu in her story and ending.

I need a huge favor, tgrant, smoke, rabid, and/or brodeur, I want to make my sig./avataar using Keilienaten's pic. The one Jax007 drew. Is there a way either of you guys, or all of yous can do it for me? I really don't know how.
I want her with a cool background sunset type of Rahankatut. I want her phrase, "Bitterness of a senseless wager has brought death to everything... for I will rule all!" In cool gothic type font, and of course my signature in the corner, SLiM3DDi3g.
Is there a way someone could help me, pleeeeeeeeeeease???? Thank you.

I made one for you-




http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/blackmagik34/keilienatensig2.png

If you like it, keep it, if you dont its good practice for me!

First off I wanna say I;m sorry for using this badass section to get a sig. Then I wanna thanks Brodeur and Blackmagick for their pics they made for me. It's pretty tough to choose cuz I luv em both. I like how Brodeur did it making it look it was painted with a brush, and I love how Blackmagik blended it in with the background. So I'm keeping both. One for my icon, and one as my sig. THanks again for you best cooperation.

One thing though, is how the hell do get that picture to be in my icon or sig. I try to put it on, but all I get is the "web page" posted. Can someone help plz. Thanks.... Oh and I think we should update this story. I don't wanna just blab around about Keilienaten, although I've fallen in love with her with Jax007 pix. Thanx again Jax.
I wanna see where Sensui's plot goes.

Copy this into it-

[http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/blackmagik34/
keilienatensig2.png]

Except change the [ ]'s into <>'s

K... let me try it. thanx

Okay i give up man. I've tried and tried and can't get my sig to work. What's going on?

< img src="http://img.photob ucket.com/albums/v481/blackma gik34/
keilien atensig2.png" >

Remove spaces and it should work.

Hey Rabid, if I give you my password can you sign in and post the pic for me. I seem not to be able to post it. PLZZZZZZZZ

um..o...k..

Thanks for the comments, but i like blakmagik's sig better. Even though i didn't put much effort into the one i made.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v481/blackmagik34/keilienatensig2.png

that's all you need to change your sig..

well, how's the novel coming along?

Peace.

That's it, I'm done waiting. So here we go.
The theif reveals herself to be Tanya. She has stolen the Kamidogu as her lord commanded.
Tanya- Excellent, with the Kamidogu, the Dragon King well finish the merger and restor the realms into one.
Tanya uses her stealth spell and leaves the cave, making a way to the Dragon King's palace.
Ryoko and Ashrah return from the Dead Swamp, completely disshevled. The first fighter they run into is Nightwolf.
Nightwolf- Ryoko, Ashrah, what happened?
Ryoko turns her head away, avoiding the question.
Ashrah- Gabrielle wasn't there. We were confronted by Sensui. I can see why you take such caution when approaching him. He shattered my Kriss with one strike.
Nightwolf-What?! If Gabrielle wasn't there, where is she?
Ryoko snaps out of it and screams at Nightwolf- She's with Sensui!!! I captured her and is planning to put her through the same thing he has done before. He's also taken Collin from me.
Nightwolf- I know, we all saw it through the demension rift in the main room. Ryoko, I'm sorry for your lose.
Nightwolf comforts her for a split second when a loud gong is heard.
Ashrah-What's this, nobody is sceduled to fight yet, what's going on?
The fighters all gather in the throne room once more.
Onaga appears before the fighters, still scarred and bruised from his run in with Xion. Shao Kahn makes a rare appearance and lets out a smirk.
Kahn-Well, it looks like you've been busy. How could you let yourself be abused like this.
Onaga- Oh trust me Kahn, when this is all over, I will add your head to my trophies. However, that's not why I've gathered you here. All though this is not customary, we will have an exhibition match.
Kilvan- What is this nonesense? Who will fight so soon after their match?
Suddenly, a familiar pillar of black fire shoots from the ground and Sensui appears.
Sensui- I will.
Ryoko instantly charges him at full force.
Ryoko- You scum, how could you take her?!
Sensui give her a side glance and shoot his hand out, grabbing Ryoko by her throat, stopping her assault in its tracks.
Sensui answers in a low growl- Don't toy with me. This is personal.
With that he puts her to the ground and then kicks her in the gut, shooting her back at her companions. Sub-Zero and Nightwolf catch her in mid air.
Sensui- Stay out of my way, murderer. Xion, bring in Gabrielle. I want her to witness this in person.
As beckoned, Xion brings in Gabrielle from the catacombs and places her by herself.
Ryoko looks over to see her dear friend, surprisingly unharmed, atleast not physicaly.
Vandon- Very well, but who is his opponent.
Dragon King- Bring him in.
Suddenly, a green bolt of lightning shoots from the ceiling and across Sensui. A short scream follows and the bottom fills in with a human figure. The bolt disappears and reveals it to be Hatsuma.
Gabrielle- Hatsuma!
Hatsuma manages to look over and strains to speak.
Hatsuma- Ga....Gabrielle. I'm sorry, but this will be the last time I lay my eyes on you.
Onaga- Enough! By special request, this match will take place here. However, it will be in a controlled enviroment.
The Dragon King summons his shaman who surround the arena and start chanting a spell. In an instant, a barrier is formed, stretching most of the room, and stoping just beyond the fighters. Hatsuma's Sennoku spell is removed, but the barrier lets him keep his mind, preventing Sensui from controlling him.
Onaga- Now, let the match begin.
Sensui- Are you ready? Hatsuma, today you die for good.
Hatsuma- Gladly, I'd except death over slavery any day!!
Sensui- Very good, I can see why I chose you to be my right hand man. Now, have at me!
Hatsuma switches into his Ninjitsu form and charges Sensui with lightning speed. He uses his demension shift to lunge from side to side, making himself extremly difficult to trace. The arena grows quiet.
Ryoko- My god his fast, is this truely his power?
Suddenly, a yell is heard and Hatsuma appears in mid-air and delivers a swift roundhouse kick to Sensui's head, shooting him into a pillar which was enveloped in the barrier. Sensui's body falls to the floor with a loud thud.
Hatsuma- Sensui! Get up! You're far too powerful to go down like that! I know I will die today, but for each wound you've inflected on my Gabrielle, I will return to you 100 fold before my death. Now rise and let's continue you Son of a Bitch!
Sensui disappears in front of Hatsuma's eyes.
Sensui- I've made you kill everybody you've ever loved, she will be no different.
Hatsuma turns around and sees Sensui standing behind him. Be fore he can make a move, Sensui hits Hatsuma with a vicious right hand to his soloplexus. Hatsuma has the breath knocked completely knocked out of him. Sensui ignites his fist and digs it into Hatsuma. Sensui balances him on his fist and picks him up off the ground.
Hatsuma- Aaaaarrrrgggghhhhh!!!!!!
Sensui- That's it, feel the pain. It'll get much much worse.
Sensui pops him up into the air and preforms his High Riser Hell Kick, but instead of aiming for the stomach like the technique normally, goes, he kicks Hatsuma into the open chest wound that he recieved from Onaga. The rest of the moves concentrates on that spot as the second kick comes down on the same spot. The kick sends Hatsuma to the ground with a jet of fire coming out of his chest. Hatsuma hits hard, blood spurtting out of his mouth. Sensui lands on Hatsuma's chest, grinding into his chest.
Sensui- Hurts, doesn't it?
Hatsuma- Not as much as this will.
Hatsuma manages to raise one arm and aim it at Sensui's face, then manages to fire off a Diamond Fang blast at Sensui's face. Sensui manages to block most of it, but the shards imbed themselves through his forearm. Some manages to scratch his face, causing it to bleed. Sensui backs off of Hatsuma and craddles his arm.
Sensui- That's good, i can feel the pain, give me more. But, you've clearly forgotten about THIS!!
Sensui flings his arm at Hatsuma, releasing the droplets of blood into mid air. Hatsuma quickly erects his Diamond Shell infront of him, catching the blood droplets which ignite a split second after. Hatsuma breaks down the wall and launches it as a wave at Sensui. However Sensui flips over the attack and lands inches from Hatsuma's face.
Sensui- You've gotten sloppy. You're clearly usless to me. Your mind is on Gabrielle, get it back in the fight!
With that, Sensui grabs Hatsuma's face in his palm and applies pressure.
Hatsuma lets out a grunt as his skull begins to crack.
Sensui- This is a technique a learned after drinking Sabre's blood and absorbing Talons soul. Sensui freezes Hatsuma from head to toe in a block of solid ice.
Onaga is quickly stunned, along with everybody else.
Onaga- It can't be. There's no possible way he can activate the Ice Lung. That technique was lost eaons ago with the death of the legendary ice dragon Talon. So, Sensui was the one who slayed him.
Sensui then puts Hatsuma on the ground and begins to pummel the ice with an onslaught of punches. The ice shatters into shrapnel and imbeds itself into Hatsuma's arms and legs. Most of his chest remains unharmed due to the thick chain mail that he wears. Hatsuma is flung across the floor and continues to roll for a few feet. He manages to stand up, but quickly falls back to one knee. His body is a mess, covered in blood and bruises.
Gabrielle whispers to herself- Oh, Hatsuma. Tears roll down her face as she watches him littarley dismantled.
Hatsuma is breathing heaviley. His body has been through so much, it's amazing that it's still holding together.
Hatsuma- I can hardly move with this armor on. My body is too weak to support it.
With that, Hatsuma unlatches his vest and it falls off his body and to the ground, leaving a crack where it lands. Hatsuma's torso is revealed and it's covered with deep battle scars, open wounds, and bruises. His tattoo on his back shows the light and dark dragons, intertwined in battle. The Black Chaos can be seen running up his spine, and connecting to his right side at the small of his back.
Gabrielle is in shock to see what he has really been through, and starts to weep.
Hatsuma- Come on Sensui, let's get on with this!
Hatsuma unleashes his whip chain and upgrades it with Ruby Requiem. he shoots it at Sensui, and successfuly wraps it around his waist, causing the blades to sink into Sensui's flesh.
Sensui-Argh!
Hatsuma- Oh I'm not finished yet.
He whips the whip in an upward motion, causing the rest of it to go into a spiked wave, thereby slashing Sensui across his chest, opening deep cuts.
Sensui kneels in pain, grabbing his shoulder, applying pressure to stop the bleeding.
Sensui- Fine if you want to do this with weapons, then by all means.
Sensui charges his hands with dark energy, forming it in the shape of a blade. He puts his hand together, making it solid, and forming the Malice Blade. Sensui raises the blade and cuts down, through Hatsuma's whip, canceling the Ruby Requim. The whip acts as a conductor and a surge of energy travels up the whip and into Hatsuma, filling him with energy.
Hatsuma screams in agony as his body falls to its knees. His flesh is smoking as it surges with energy.
Hatsuma-Da.....Damn you!
Sensui- Final words, dead man?
With that, Sensui shoots a Magma Blast at Hatsuma, enveloping his torso, causing it to burn and smoke.
Hatsuma clenches his teeth from the pain. He stumbles to his feet, dispite being weak and in immence pain. His eyes are bleeding from all the pain.
Hatsuma extends his hands and manages to create a fire ball. As it begins to burn brighter, it morphs into a pheonix.
Sensui-Ha, you're far too weak to harm me with that.
Hatsuma- We'll see.
At the last second before firing, Hatusma changes direction to the ceiling, causing some of it to come crashing down.
Sensui blocks his face to cover himself, leaving himself wide open.
Hatsuma charges in wih full force, fists glowing. He unleashes a devistating combo, switching on the fly from Wolf, Phoenix, Dragon and then ending with a swift strike to Sensui's neck in Ninjitsu. He sends him flying to the ground, smoldering in flames. Sensui hits hard, face first, he coughs up blood and does a kick up back to his feet, leting out a smirk and spitting out some blood.
Hatsuma charges him full force- Sensui!!!!!! You're Mine!!!!!!!
He jumps in the air with a spinning kick, but Sensui bridges back, cleanly avoiding it. hatsuma lands and attacks with a quick fist, and Sensui evades that as well. Then with one step he closes the distance, and hits Hatsuma in the chest, reigniting his magma retraint, and sending him flying backward, destroying the magma core on impact. Hatsuma does a back hand spring and sinks into a stance.
Hatsuma- We end this NOW!!!! *to himself* Gabrielle, forgive me.
He charges up his hand and shoots a blast of purely negative energy at Sensui.
Sensui- Verry well.
Sensui shoots the same blast, and both meet in the middle in a power struggle.
Sensui- Know we see who is stronger, give it everything you've got!!!
Hatsuma sinks in and releases all the power he can. His right hand begins to pulseate, the diamond substance it was made of begins to crack and bleed. His eyes begin to glow white, just like they did when he was under Sensui's control. He truely is using up all of his power and life. His hand begins to shake as he looses grip.
Sensui- You weakling. Now die!
Sensui intensifies the blast and it pushes in, causing Hatsumas to cave in on itself. Sensui's blast tears through, and hits Hatsuma dead on, enveloping him in the blast.
Gabrielle- HATSUMA!!!!!!! PLEASE NOOOOOOOO!!!!.
His body is thrown into a pillar, creating a dent.
Hatsuma is still able to speak and move. He turns his sights to Gabrielle and speaks.
Hatsuma- Gabrielle, please, don't cry for me. My soul isn't worth it. Atleast I die, looking at you. My.....my only regret is not being able to hold you in my arms....I lo...Lov....
Before he can finish, Sensui takes his Malice blade and shoots it through Hatsuma's chest. Pinning him in place, killing him on the spot. Hatsuma reaches towards Gabrielle with his last ounce of strength. His lips move, but no voice comes out.
Hatsuma *silently*- I love you.
With that his hand drops and his eyes close.
Sensui- I win.
the barrier around them lifts, and Sensui extracts his sword from Hatsumas chest, letting the body fall to the floor.
Sensui-Say your goodbyes. He won't be coming back.
Sensui and Xion disappear from the arena.
Gabrielle runs over to Hatsumas body and craddles it.
Gabrielle-No, this can't be happening. It can't end this way. HATSUMA!!!!!!!!!!
The other fighters surround the wheeping Gabrielle.
Nightwolf begins to chant an ancient prayer, taught to him by his people. This is said to honor and guide the spirits of the dead.
End.

Well, here it is. How do you like it?

I hope you guys like this.

WHOA !! What a fight! I must say that's excellent work Smoke. Though I am saddened to see that Hatsuma is no more. I wasn't expecting that lol, I was expecting that somehow, someway, the fight was gonna be interuppted with no clear winner. But it never happened. I know it could not have been an easy decision for you to completely kill off Hatsuma either. But it was very good work man. I liked it and couldn't take my eyes away until I was done reading it.

Yeah, it was a bit difficult to kill Hatsuma. He was my very first created character. But I think that this will add a bit more to the story. Plus conisder the realm this story takes place and the reputation that MK has. N.E.way, that's all I can say for now. But after this, I hope that the story gets going again. Thanks for the feedback.

SO, who's doing the next scene?

Is it ok if I try? I'll be using a character I made up who is from Reptile's world.


The portal opened with a strong blast of energy and wind. The trees in the forest grunted and resisted the force of the wind. Out of the portal appeared a creature extremely hideous.



"Perfect. I'm in the Living Forest. I'm one step further to finding that traitorous beast." said the creature. He formed a ball of acid in his hand and threw at one of the trees. It screamed in agony as the bark slowly melted away.

"No one can escape the King Cobra."

Sorry man, only contestants in the Kreate-a-Karacter tournament are allowed to add to the story.

Dude, seriously chill. I'm not a mod but talking like that will get you banned real quick. It was an honest mistake and that was uncalled for. So back off.

Well, guess I'm doing the "Lone Wolf" thing over again.

As Gabrielle weeps over Hatsumas dead body, she is surrounded by her friends. Ryoko walks to her side and kneels beside her.
Ryoko- Gabrielle, I......
Gabrielle- He's gone. He's gone, he's gone, he's gone!
Ryoko- Gabrielle, I may not understand why carred for someone like that, but...I will make sure that the Elder Gods honor his passage. This, I promise you.
Gabrielle flies into Ryokos arms for comfort as she cries.
Onaga- Leave here. Gaurds, take this miserable excusse of a mortal's body from my sight. His image alone disgusts me.
Two giant dragon soldiers make their way to Hatsuma's body. One of the gaurds kicks the body into the air, the other grabs it by the scarf around Hatsuma's neck.
Gabrielle is instantly angered and lashes out at the gaurds.
Gabrielle- Don't you touch him, you animals!!!
She tries to rush them but one of the gaurds whips around his tail and hits Gabrielle across her chest, sending her backwards. The gaurd just lets out a grunt, and breaths a jet of fire out of his nose, mocking Gabrielle.
Ryoko- You'll pay for that, trust me.
The gaurds just shrugs and swings Hatsuma's body over his shoulder and exits the room. Before he can exit, Gabrielle notices something fall out of Hatsuma's hand. The guard leaves and Gabrielle walks over to the shimmering object. It's a lotus blossom, made out of a pink emerald. She clenches it in her hand and places it in her hair as a lasting memmory of Hatsuma.
-Spectral Realm-
Hatsuma stands by Gabrielle, looking on with a heavey heart. He's only inches from her but their hands can never touch.
Hatsuma-Gabrielle, forgive me.
With that he passes right through her and exits the Main Chamber, unaware that he's being stalked.
-Physical Realm-
As Hatsuma's spirit passes through, Gabrielle is instantly filled with an immence chill. She turns around with a glazed look in her eyes.
Gabrielle-Hatsuma! No, it can't be.
Ryoko walks over to her and embraces Gabrielle in her arms.
Ryoko-Come, we should go.
Gabrielle- Ryoko, I'm sorry.
With that, the two leave the room and head for Gabrielles chamber. As they exit, they catch sight of the two gaurds that have Hatsuma's body. Ryoko suddenly senses a familiar power in their direction.
Ryoko- Gabrielle, I fear that we may be in danger.
Gabrielle- Sensui?
Ryoko- No, I've felt this power only once, and I, myself was almost taken out of this world by it. We should be extra cautious.
The two fallow the gaurds into a junction chamber which has six tunnels that lead to different parts of the castle.
As the gaurds make their way into the junction chamber, they're instantly surrounded by an eerie green flame.
Gaurd 1-What is this trickery? Come out and face us worm.
A shadow appears behind the gaurd and grabs him by his neck.
?????-Drop the body and one of you will live. Refuse and my fist will by the last thing you see in this life.
Gaurd1- You...you don't frighten me, my king will ressurect me if I die.
?????- Well then, I'm sorry you feel that way.
The shadow tightens his grip on the gaurds neck, cutting off his circulation.
The second gaurd rushes the shadow from behind, he raises his sword, hoping to cleave the figure in half. However, instead of cleaving the shadow, he splits his commrade in half. The gaurd splits open vertically as his entrails shoot out of his body and on to the floor.
At this time, Gabrielle and Ryoko rush in to see the gaurd get disected.
The other gaurd, now quivering, drops Hatsuma's body, along with his sword and tries to make a run for it when he realizes that he is completely ensnared in the firey circle. As he turns around he sees the shadow charging straight at him.
?????-I'll see you on the other side.
With that, the shadow sinks his fingers into the gaurds face, then swings around, breaking his neck. The figure fallows up with a horizontal slash, cutting the gaurd in half, launching his corpse forward, tearing his head off in the process.
Gabrielle and Ryoko run in as the shadow walks over to Hatsuma's body.
Gabrielle- Get away from him!!!
The shadow only looks at her with his blazing red eyes, piercing through the darkness. Without a word, he picks up the body and the circle of fire around him flares, blocking Gabrielles view, then subsides, revealing that he, and Hatsuma's body are nowhere to be fround.

(For the sake of speeding things along, I'm going to do the Keilienaten Vs. Kilvan fight now. If there are any problems, we can copy and paste the fight a bit later, okay?)

Kilvan: Well now, it seems yet another mighty warrior has fallen.

Piroh: Sensui's really strong, yes?

Kilvan: Maybe so...but he doesn't worry me in the slightest. I know how to deal with him. In the meantime....

**He turns to Onaga**

Kilvan: Don't we have a real fight to attend to? Who's next on the bracket?

Onaga: Why you, of course.

Kilvan: So soon?

Onaga: Yes. You will be pitted against that lovely Egyptian harlot.

Kilvan: Ah, Keilienaten. I have waited a long while for this...

**A SHORT TIME LATER, THE PIT**

**Kilvan walks down the path leading onto the arena. He passes Keilienaten and Kamon on the way, and stops to address them, Keilienaten first**

Kilvan: I have important matters to attend to. Take my advice on this...

**He leans in close**

...throw the fight. Long have I distrusted you...I have many reasons to do away with you. And I shall, if you hinder me.

Keilienaten: Never would I back away willingly from a chance to destroy someone as vile and scheming such as yourself.

Kilvan: Well, that's the pot calling the kettle black, isn't it?

**Piroh appears by his side**

Kilvan: My aide tells me much....like how, for example, you tried to turn him on me.

Keilienaten: Piroh! You conniving bastard!

Piroh: I told you...I am loyal to my lord. Shouldn't have tried to bargain with me. Hee hee hee!

Keilienaten: Before the sun rises, I shall see you ground beneath my heel, you little imp! After I do away with your vile master.

Kilvan: Correction...actually, an alteration. His master...and your god.

**He walks into the arena, Piroh hovering by his side**

Kamon turns to Keilienaten, and takes her by the shoulders.

Kamon: I realize you belong to Amanuet now...but do me this one favor.

Keilienaten: ...what?

Kamon: It was he who reanimated me to suit his purposes. I am a slave to him, chained aganst my will. If you can destroy him, I can be free.

**She turns away**

Kamon: Please. If the love we once shared ever meant anything to you...fight not only for yourself, but for me as well.

Keilienaten: As I told you....I am on a different path, now. You no longer bear relevance to me...

**She looks at him, and smiles slightly**

Keilienaten: I will destroy him, yes. For my own reasons. But...for the sake of what we once shared... I will fight for you as well.

Kamon: Many thanks...and may the gods shine their praise down on you.

**She walks into the arena, shadow cast by the dead-white moon overhead**

Onaga: The next match begins...my would-be lover against my would-be partner....Keilienaten Vs. Kilvan!

Kamon: Would-be lover...?

Onaga: FIGHT!

**The light behind the eye-slits of Kilvan's mask glows slightly more than usual. He speaks, his sinister and raspy voice carried by the wind**

Kilvan: I just wanted to let you have the pleasure of knowing your realm will be mine after you die. Great are your crimes against me, and for that, its denizens will be made to suffer for eternity.

**He draws the Paralascythe**

Keilienaten: I have no crimes against you. You have never been my god. Only a deciever and liar! When I am through with you, I shall instruct your superior, Zaggot, to roast your spirit on the flames of perdition for all time!And how is it you know of Rahankatut?

**She draws Anubis' Spear**

Kilvan: I have done my homework, little one. All realms are mine to play with.

**they charge each other, spear and scythe clashing. It quickly becomes a struggle for power, neither combatant giving an inch**

Keilienaten: You're wrong, Anubis. The realms, Onaga's heart and blood....everything you desire shall fall into my grasp!

**She pulls back on her spear now, catching the scythe by its crevasse, and leans backwards while placing her foot into Kilvan's belly. She flips him overhead, and he lands on his back with a crash. Giving him no time to recover, she springs up and launches a fireball into her downed foe's chest as he rises**

Kilvan: AGH!!

**He is angered, and shows his own speed by spinning with the impact, quickly bringing his back leg around catch her in the heel. She stumbles, and he takes this time to jam the butt of his scythe into her face, drawing blood. He swings again, aiming for her neck, but she deflects his blade and thrusts forth, drawing a large gash in Kilvan's side.**

Kilvan: Gnaaah! DAMN YOU!

**He brings the handle of the Paralascythe to his mouthpiece, and a horrid noise issues forth. Keilienaten squeezes her eyelids shut, and screams**

Keilienaten: Cant see...ahhhh, can't hear...ARGH!

**The moment Kilvan stops playing, she blinks, her eyes and ears functioning again. However, she is greeted by the sight of Kilvan's fist impacting with her face. She falls back and slides along the ground. Slowly, she arises..only to watch as Kilvan swings his scythe into her thigh, making a gash. She falls again, remaining motionless for a second or two, but gets up once more, her wound bleeding heavily.**

Onaga: The winner of round 1 is Kilvan! Now begins round 2...FIGHT!

**Kilvan reaches to his headpiece, and moves his hand outward, as if tossing something aside, though nothing is seen. A clatter of steel is heard elsewhere in the arena**

Keilienaten: What manner of trickery do you intend to use this time? You coward.

Kilvan: 'Twas merely a pebble caught in my garments. You have more pressing concerns to worry about..like that wound. You will die of blood loss soon..

Keilienaten: Not before you die a fiery death.

**He charges in, and she forms a ball of fire in her hands. He stops his advance, ready to block it, but she instead throws it at the ground beneath him, skyrocketing him up and over. Keilienaten then performs a whirlwind kick which knocks him back down to the ground, but he manages to roll back onto his feet. She uses the distance between them as an advantage, and assaults him with a series of fireballs, at least twelve, in quick succession. Twirling his scythe, he deflects them all. He laughs.**

Kilvan: Is that all you've got? I thought better of you.

Keilienaten: Imprssive...but you're one to talk of pressing concerns. Look behind you.

Kilvan: What-

**A last fireball impacts into Kilvan from behind, having been placed there by Keilienaten during her barrage. It knocks him forward again, towards Keilienaten, whose fist ignites into flame, and catches him in the face. As he stumbles back, she teleports behind him, and clutches onto him, absorbing his energy. He struggles to get free, but her hold is too powerful. For a full minute, she drains him. When she has had her fill, she kicks him to the ground. He struggles to get up, but cannot. He manages to rise to one knee, leaning on his scythe heavily.**

Onaga: The winner of Round 2 is Keilienaten!! Now finish it! Round 3! FIGHT!

Keilienaten: Before I kill you...I would like you to know that though I would ally myself with Onaga...or Zaggot...or even Raiden...Kahn...any of the powerful deities....I could never be forced into a partnership with you under Any circumstances. You are an ambarrasment to the gods. Weak, and pitiful. I will be praised for ridding the realms of your filth.

Kilvan: It is....mutual...I could...never be paired...with an...ugly whore such as... yourself...why don't you...go back to that peon, Kamon? Lick his wounds! You're both my puppets...you both deserve each other! Hahaha..

**Keilienaten's eyes blaze**

Keilienaten: You will SUFFER for that insult!

**She brings her spear around once more, and he can barely get his scythe up in time to block it. He springs back up, being forced to defend himself.**

Kilvan: Urgh....

**She has him at a disadvantage, pressing him back towards the edge of the arena. He deflects her furious blows, one after another, but can find no advantage. Her technique is now a match for his. At last, the blade finds the crevasse of his scythe once again, and she manages, with a quick twist, to twirl it up and out of his grasp. As it rises, she slaps it aside with her spear tip, over the edge of the pit, where it falls into darkness. A dull clatter is heard from below. Before Kilvan can move, the weapon is back at his throat. He begins to shake his head, to beg apparently, but Keilienaten will have none of it. she draws back, and thrusts forth, impaling Kilvan directly through the chest. Blood spews forth, and sizzles where it hits the ground.**

Kilvan: A...ah..hhh...n..no....

**He falls to his knees, trembling. The glow behind his mask visible through his eye slots begins to flicker and fade**

Kilvan: But I'm...the god..of de...ath...

Keilienaten: Correction....you are a dead god.

**The glow of Kilvan's eyes flickers once more, and fades out. His inert body slumps over onto the spear.**

Keilienaten: Now, you will trouble me no more.

Onaga: The winner of this match, is Keilien...no, wait...

**All present look in awe and shock as Kilvan arises from his knees, Keilienaten's spear still embedded deep in his chest. The light behind his mask glows once more. He moves forward, forcing the spear deeper into him. His sick chuckle is barely audible.**

Keilienaten: That...isn't possible.....you've taken on mortal form...you can still be killed...you...

Kilvan: Fool. I am the god of death. Nothing touches me.

**He grabs hold of the spear, as well, and swings her off to the right. Suddenly, a horrible wet tearing noise is heard, and a great gash opens in Keilienaten's chest. Her heart is run through. Slowly, a blade shimmers into perception, showing itself imbedded deep within her. She coughs, rivulets of blood streaming from her mouth**

Keilienaten: Agh...gl...

Kilvan: How do you like my Phantom Razor? A little...precaution I took earlier, just in case things weren't going my way. Not that I really needed it, though.

Keilienaten: H..how...(cough)...we...could be partners...we...ack...

Kilvan: Not interested, silly girl. Don't you see? In the end, I hold all the trump cards. I controlled this entire match...just as I have always controlled you.

**Keilienaten's eyes narrow, uncomprehending**

Kilvan: Oh, but you don't know what I mean, of course not...let's just tell you a little secret, shall we?

**He raises a hand, and waves Piroh over. The tiny little demon cyclops hovers into position, and sits upon the dying Keilienaten's shoulder. He whispers something into her ear.

Keilienaten's eyes widen with horror as she digests what she has been told. Somehow, she finds it within her to scream.**

Keilienaten: You...BASTARD! YOU TREACHEROUS...SERPENT! YOU ARE AN...agg...ABOMINATION...DEFILER....(COUGH)...DAMN YOU...DAMN YOU TO TEN THOUSAND HELLS!!!!

Kilvan: The lives of all who breathe are but my toys...now...scream...

**He pushes her further onto the Phantom Razor, and she cries out in pain once more**

Kilvan: Bleed...

**Using her own failing grasp upon the handle of Anubis' spear, he swings her around with all his might, and tosses her over the edge. As she begins to fall, he retracts the spear from his own chest, and leaps with it, high into the air.**

Kilvan: And DIE!!!

**He throws it at the body, and it impales her waist, its momentum sending her falling even faster to the spiked abyss below. there is a horrible slicing sound as she impacts.**

**He lands none too gracefully, almost falling over upon landing on the arena. Wiping the blood off of his clothes, he looks up to see Piroh coming from over the pit, his Paralascythe in hand. Piroh smiles as he gives it back to his lord. Kilvan turns to Onaga, and takes a dramatic bow.**

Onaga: I stand corrected. The winnder of this match is Kilvan! He will advance to the finals! FATALITY!

**He walks back out of the arena, passing Kamon, who kneels, weeping. Without looking at him, he speaks.**

Kilvan: So will be the fate of any who betray me.

**He departs, leaving the forlorn former soldier alone with his grief.**

Amazing Shadaloo, f@#$% amazing. It sux my character lost, but I'm glad she lost to a great one, Kilvan. I didn't know much about him ,until I dida short match on him, and realized he was also from Egyptians. I' m a sucker for Egyptian stories. I loved the fight.

I would love to adapt another part of the story, after the fight, regarding Keilienaten's fate., and Kamon's.

Once again, Shadaloo, you rocked this fights. Fucking AAAAAAAA.

Hey yo buddy, Rabid.... where's my sig?

I sent it through pm,im having troubles with mko alot lately.