Rabid_Wolverine Wrote: SmokeNc-017 Wrote: Celestial's attacker emerges from the shadow and reveals himself to be the servent of Sensui, Hatsuma. Celestial"And who the hell are you supposed to be?" Hatsuma doesn't say a word and starts to approach Celestial. Celestial"First you appear unanounced and now you refuse to answer my question? You've got some nerve." As Hatsuma approaches Celestial he begins to glow with a black flame which then turns into a dragon. Celestial"Very well, if you refuse to answer me then DIE!" Before Celestial can make a move however, Hatsuma charges him and grabs him by the throat. He then shoots Celestial up in the air and sends a fireball after him. Celestial senses the blast and uses his wings to glide and avoid it. Celestial"I don't know who you are, but your not leaving here alive!" He swoops down with a powerful kick and strikes Hatsuma straight in the chest with both feet. Hatsuma winces as he is pushed back a couple of yards still standing on his feet. When he stops he falls to one knee. His eyes burn blue as he stands up and brushes himself off. He starts walking again towards Celestial. Celestial"Damn you, this time I'll make sure that you stay down." Hatsuma stops."It's not wise to say such things to your superior." Celestial, now inraged takes out his thrice blade and charges at Hatsuma with lightning speed, impaling him straight through. Celestial"Heh, where's all that tough talk now?" Unamused Hatsuma breaks the blade and shoots a fireball at point blank at Celestial's chest. He goes flying backwards and sliding hard on the dirt. Hatsuma"Vermin, my name is unimportant to you, just know that I am Master Sensui's avatar." Celestial"I don't know who that is, but me and my clan will take you down." Hatsuma"You have no clan anymore."Hatsuma raises his hand at his volcano home and causes it to erupt, killing everything and everyone in it." Celestial"NO!!! DAMN YOU AND YOUR MASTER!" He swoops in and sinks his fangs into Hatsuma's neck hoping to drain him of his blood. Nightwolf wakes up to see the final momment of this encounter. Hatsuma grabs Celestial by the throat and raises him into the air."You have a strong spirit, my master will be pleased. However your body is a liability." Sensui drains Celestial of his soul, which is transported into his arm, he then sets Celestials body on fire. Hatsuma and his latest victim disappear in a black flame. Nightwolf"NO!!!! Damn it!" -Elsewhere- Ryoko and Ghost have a conference with Raiden. Ghost"Lord Raiden"(bowing) Raiden"Rise Collin" Ryoko"Raiden, please tell me that the demonic fighter that me and Gabrielle encountered wasn't him. Please tell me it wasn't." Raiden"I'm sorry Ryoko, but...." Wait a second,doesnt that completely eliminate the point of my addition?

Don't worry,I had Hatsuma extract his soul for a reason. He'll be back later on in the story. And I apologize that I spelt his name wrong.

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: Don't worry,I had Hatsuma extract his soul for a reason. He'll be back later on in the story. And I apologize that I spelt his name wrong.

No I mean,I had written up what Sabre and Hatsuma were and what they were doing,along with Ryoko and Ghost,and then you changed where everyone was.

I can change it if you like. I must've missed the last part.

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: I can change it if you like. I must've missed the last part.

You choose,im going to sleep.

Wait a minute... TomTaz, what is this thread about???
Are you roleplaying or something?
I'm confused...

jaded-raven Wrote: Wait a minute... TomTaz, what is this thread about??? Are you roleplaying or something? I'm confused...

No it's not role playing....You know how Brodeur has the Create a Characer Tournament? Well this is an ongoing story with those characters that the participants of the tournament are doing...we each take turns continuing where the last left off. :)

Oh...
Cool!!!
Have you seen my character??? I also posted!

That's good SmokeNc-017. I don't want my character Celestial to die yet. He needs to make it tio the tournament.
We'll see where the story goes. If you already have plans regarding my character, I'll wait until his soul is put back in his body, to continue his storyline. If not, I will resurect him... lol

Keilienaten and Amanuet still await for Deceptame's response.

WIll they join? If they want to get far, they should.

First off I wanna say that the story is going great.

Deceptame:Fine I'll join you but I want to carry out my initial plan first.
Amanuet:and what is that?
Deceptame:Get the amulet from Quan Chi
Amanuet:alright
Keilientaten:How are we gonna do that?
Deceptame:First off I'm not really a member the Red Dragon, I only joined it because Mavado is with Quan Chi. My plan is kill Mavado first, then I take his body, when he meets with Quan today, I'll kill Quan, take the amulet, and go and get Sareena.
Amanuet(crosses her arms):It sounds like this plan is all about you, where do we fit in?
Deceptame:I need you two to kill Mavado then when I leave this body to go to Mavado's, I need you to hold this body because once I kill Quan Chi, I'll take my body back.
Keilienaten:and once you're done with the bodies me and Amanuet get their blood
Deceptame:Fine you can have 'em, after we finish my part of the plan, we retreive Sareena, then however you wanna finish the Dragon King.

Great plan Deceptame, I like where this storyline is going. We need a big army though to destroy other rivals. Try to think who can join us.

Deceptame Wrote: First off I wanna say that the story is going great. Deceptame:Fine I'll join you but I want to carry out my initial plan first. Amanuet:and what is that? Deceptame:Get the amulet from Quan Chi Amanuet:alright Keilientaten:How are we gonna do that? Deceptame:First off I'm not really a member the Red Dragon, I only joined it because Mavado is with Quan Chi. My plan is kill Mavado first, then I take his body, when he meets with Quan today, I'll kill Quan, take the amulet, and go and get Sareena. Amanuet(crosses her arms):It sounds like this plan is all about you, where do we fit in? Deceptame:I need you two to kill Mavado then when I leave this body to go to Mavado's, I need you to hold this body because once I kill Quan Chi, I'll take my body back. Keilienaten:and once you're done with the bodies me and Amanuet get their blood Deceptame:Fine you can have 'em, after we finish my part of the plan, we retreive Sareena, then however you wanna finish the Dragon King.

Keilienaten, Amanuet, and Deceptame are strolling riding their horses through the Living Forest.

Keilienaten: Just up ahead is Quan-Chi’s fortress.

Amanuet: We need to finish that quick. We got plenty of work to do.

Deceptame: That’d be no problem.

Deceptame orders theh orse to horse faster. He disappears in the mist.

Keilienaten: Show-off.

Amanuet: I think he’s cute. I don’t’ know why he’s changing body. Mavado isn’t all that.

Keilienaten: (upset) What about us?

Amanuet: What about us? We’re an alignment.

Keilienaten: What about those seductive moments we shared.

Amanuet: Don’t confuse my sexual preferences because of my flirts. I’m known to be a just a tease.

Keilienaten: You wretched wench.

Amanuet: Thank you, but we could do a threesome with him. You and I.

Keilienaten: (smiling) Now that’s intriguing. What about Sareena?

Amanuet: You really think we’re getting her out?

Keilienaten: We must if we want him to stay with us.

Amanuet: Please, once he has us both, he won’t remember Sareena.

They both laugh hysterically.


In the Netherrealm, Hatsuma takes Celestial’s soul to his master, Sensui.

Sensui: What news as of now?

Hatsuma: Ryoko and Ghost are on their way here.

Sensui: Good, I’m counting on them.

Hatsuma: Sabre and Kai Tan will come too, master.

Sansui: What do those bastards want? They’re not part of my plan. Ah—I’ll kill them to entertain myself.

Hatsuma: I have a gift for you. Before you I hold Celestial’s soul.

Hatsuma extends his hand, and a Celestial’s soul floats around his hand.

Sensui: Nice work. It’s about time you are for good use. Now go offer to Nasha, Queen of the Arachnid. Tell her I offer her Celetial’s soul if she would align with us.

Hatsuma: (scared) I-I bu-bu-but why me?

Sensui: (angry) I said go!

Hatsuma: Yes master.

Hatsuma takes off.

Gabrielle is locked in a cage above a lake of lava.

Gabrielle: You’re days are numbered.

Amanuet:sounds good to me but what about a big army to destroy help in the destruction of our other rivals?
Deceptame:I know some more Demonic Possessive souls in the Netherrealm that could help us, we just have to find them a good host body.
Keilienaten:but we'll take care of that once we get the amulet.
Deceptame(calling):Mavado!We've got intruders!(whispers to the Amanuet and Keilienaten)get ready
Mavado(steps outside the base and in front of Amanuet and Keilienaten):hm, what do you want?
Keilienaten:you are even hotter in person
Mavado(draws his Hookswords):I'm not gonna ask you again....
Amanuet(smiles deviously):you
Mavado(confused look on his face):what?!
Deceptame comes from behind him and delivers a hard elbow to his back causing Mavado to fall to the ground face first, dropping his hookswords.
Mavado(turns over on the ground to see Deceptame)Deceptame, you dare cross me?!
Deceptame's eyes glow black and he points for Mavado to look behind him. Mavado turns his head and Amanuet hooks him under the chin with his own hooksword and lifts him from the ground by the hooksword with blood dripping. Mavado dangles from the hooksword and moments later went limp. Amanuet let Mavado off the hooksword, gives the hooksword to Keilienaten who picks up the other one, and throws them off the side of the mountain.
Deceptame:I love the way you killed him, very creative
Amanuet(bows):thanks
Keilienaten(wraps her arm around Amanuet's waist)yeah, great job babe
Deceptame:now watch my body
Deceptame's spirit leaves the body and the body falls to the ground lifeless. Deceptame enters Mavado's body. Mavado's wound under his chin healed and then Mavado's eyes turned black. Mavado stood up dusting himself off.
Mavado(with Deceptame's voice):alright, I'll be right back with the amulet. Before I go, if my body comes back to consciousness, just knock him back out.
(Mavado leaves into the Red Dragon Base)
Ryu Sagen(Deceptame's host body)gains his consciousness and begins to stand up while Amanuet and Keilienaten are embracing each other.
Ryu(stands up):who are you?
Amanuet and Keilienaten are startled.
Keilienaten(whispers to Amanuet):he woke up...
Amanuet turned clearish and performed a Spectral Rush on Ryu knocking him down. Ryu starts to sit up and Keilienaten runs over and delivers a heel kick under Ryu's chin knocking him out.
-A Few more minutes pass-
Mavado comes out of the base bruised, battered, and bleeding dragging a body behind him with his Hook-Scythe Staff.
Mavado:He put up a pretty good fight
He drags Quan Chi's body in front of the girls and takes out his Hook-Scythe.
Mavado(takes the amulet out of his jacket pocket and tosses it to Amanuet):hold this
Amanuet(catches the amulet):this plan is unfolding nicely.
Mavado(hands the Hook-Scythe to Keilienaten)hold my body until I get outta this one.
Deceptame leaves Mavado's body in a lifeless heap and reenters Ryu's. Deceptame stands up and takes the Hook-Scythe Staff from Keilienaten.
Deceptame:alright y'all can have the bodies, I'm done with them.
Amanuet picks up Quan Chi's body, bites his neck, sucks out his blood until Quan Chi is a shriveled skeleton and Keilienaten does the same to Mavado's body. They both throw the bodies over the side of the mountain.
Keilienaten:now we've just gotta get some host bodies for our army and release the demons from the netherrealm.
Deceptame:and don't forget to bring back Sareena.
Amanuet:right....(under her breath)yeah right(out loud)but let's hurry before the Dragon King awakens....
-And Then.....-
hey Slim how about we switch the events around, mine happens first then yours so it makes sense.

No problem Deceptame. I like where our storyline is heading. You think it's a good idea to bring back Sareena? To tell you the truth I really like her.

I think Sareena should come back cause she could bring the Demonic Spirits with her but later in the story because we have to find host bodies. I'm also thinkin about taking out the part where we get the amulet because then your part wouldn't fit in. So instead we're headed to Quan Chi's fortress where the amulet is. What do you think?

You could go ahead and leave it as is. We could find a way to fit her story in. All Keilienaten really wants to do is kill the Dragon King and drink his blood. In the meantime, she has to go through a lot of things before getting to the Dragon King, and to face off, she knows she needs a huge powerful army. THat's why she and Amanuet are helping Deceptame out. THey want the army to attack DK. ANd the vengenace she wants against Ryoko and Gabrielle will come soon. Maybe when the tournament starts.

I cant really update the story,what would be a way to get to the neatherealm,im thinkin hatsuma,but i also want it to continue with Ryoko and Ghost with Raiden,whats goin on with them now

DOn't worry Rabid_wolverine, we all cold continue with their storylines also.

Hatsuma slowly walks into the Arachnid Lair. Spider webs are everywhere. He is totally freaked out.
NASHA webs down behind Hatsuma. He yet doesn’t know.

Nasha: What brings you here?
Hatsuma: (turns around) I-I-I-I don-do-do-don’t mean to bother you.
Nasha: Oh don’t worry. No problem at all. I was just hungry.

Nasha begins to shoot her web, wrapping it around Hatsuma. He is begging and screaming for her to stop.

Nasha: I hate when people talk during dinner.

She grabs Hatsuma and is about to sink her poisonous teeth unto him.

Hatsuma: (pleading) Please don’t do it. Don’t eat me. I have Clestial.

Nasha angrily drops Hatsuma, and looks around.

Nasha: Where is he? (yelling) Come on out you bastard! Show your face.
Hatsuma: (getting up) No. I mean I have him here.

He makes the soul appear again in his hand. He shows it to Nasha.

Nasha: (upset) A soul. I don’t want his soul.
Hatsuma: I tought you needed him in order to complete your quest.
Nasha: Well yes, but I want to win it over, not take it as a gift. I want to kill Celestial with my bare hands.
Hatsuma: But-but you have him here. Now. TO complete you prophecy.
Nasha: You imbecile. I need his blood too. His soul and his blood are the last key I need. Why are you helping me?
Hatsuma: My Lord Sensui wants to offer you Celestial for an agreement.
Nasha: What kind of agreement?
Hatsuma: An alignment to bring the Dragon King down.
Nasha: (laughs) Why would I do that?
Hatsuma: It’s to your best interest. When the Dragon King awakes he will rule everything. Every realm will be his, and so is yours. When you complete your quest, your prophecy, he will make sure to destroy it.
Nasha: (thinks) Okay. Tell your Lord— name
Hatsuma: Sensui.
Nasha: Yes. Tell your Lord Sensui I accept his offer, but I need you to do something for me, NOW!
Hatsuma: What?
Nasha: Get me Celestial’s body.
Hatsuma: I’ll do my best.
Nasha: DO what you have to do, but bring him to ME, or the deal is off.

Sabre and KaTian head back to the icy mountain.
Sabre "I must show you something."
KaTian "What is it."
Sabre "You will soon find out."
They walk into the cave as a dragon comes charging towards KaTian.Sabre quickly raises is hand infront of the charging dragon.
Sabre "Stop!She is with me,we must show her the way."
KaTian "What way."
Sabre focuses on the dragon moving until it comes to a rock.It freezes it and smashes it to bits revealing a portal.
KaTian "What is it?"
Sabre "That is the way to the neatherealm."
KaTian "Why didn't you tell me this earlier."
Sabre "No time.Not the right place.Now we must go to stop these games with Sensui,retrieve Gabrielle and leave.Nothing more,nothing less.We must leave now."
Sabre and KaTian step through the portal and arrive in the neatherealm.

And Out of Nowhere, the judges come up and eliminate Sabre from the world. lol, j/k.

Hey, great continuation to the story guys, keep it up!

jaded-raven Wrote: Oh... Cool!!! Have you seen my character??? I also posted!

Yes I Saw.. She is Awesome. Very creative I must say.

Brodeur Wrote: And Out of Nowhere, the judges come up and eliminate Sabre from the world. lol, j/k. Hey, great continuation to the story guys, keep it up!

Sabre must be someone who everyone loves to hate or something,everyone in the story but a few and now the judges.AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

Hey TTaz, you can change the title of the thread to "official" story line of the Create a Character Tournament-2nd edition.

Ok Brodeur Will do.