Queen Kitana
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09/16/2008 03:23 PM (UTC)by
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XiahouDun84
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Warlady
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NTO CULU

08/26/2008 08:38 AM (UTC)
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That's what I expected, knowing yours view on Kitana's future. Are you going to make a sequel?
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WarriorPrincess
08/27/2008 03:58 AM (UTC)
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WOW! this is brilliant! and very fitting. You took Kitana to a darker place that has been needed in her story for sometime. It was great to read Kitana & Mileena actually working together instead of against each other. I really hope you continue this story. Since Mileena was in fact spared along with Kitana, from dying with Shao Kahn; it'd be nice to see her reunite with Kitana and dare I say, actually come to terms with their past hatred for one another. Which is something I've always wanted to see happen, whether officially in the game or unofficially in a wonderful, well written fiction. Again, GREAT story!
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08/27/2008 03:49 PM (UTC)
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Nice, and believable.

I wish people would have read my bio on Quan Chi.
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-Brad-
09/01/2008 07:05 AM (UTC)
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Man, that was great.

I really liked the persona you gave Kitana, it fits perfectly after all she’s been through.

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)
You gotta get a job on the MK team. :P
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JediSith
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The enemy of my enemy of my enemy is my enemy.

09/08/2008 03:07 AM (UTC)
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wow I bow to your skill! Seriously, this was epic and it fits very well into the storyline! I hope you make a sequel real soon!
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WarriorPrincess
09/09/2008 12:14 AM (UTC)
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Are you gonna continue with your Jade/Tanya story? It is fantastic.
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~Crow~
09/09/2008 08:42 PM (UTC)
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Sorry about the format problems (and sometimes the utter lack of interest in the Fan Fiction section on this site), we'll try to do something about it, what isn't in parenthesis at least.

Hopefully you submit more stuff though, it would be nice to have at least two active authors.
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XiahouDun84
09/16/2008 03:23 PM (UTC)
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Warlady Wrote:
That's what I expected, knowing yours view on Kitana's future. Are you going to make a sequel?

Yeah, I doubt people who follow my posts are too surprised by what I've done with Kitana here. Nevertheless, I had fun actually depicting it in a story rather than describing it in long-winded rants.

As of now, I'm leaving this as it is...although I do have ideas about where this story can go for Kitana. But for the time being, I'm focusing on other things.


WarriorPrincess Wrote:
WOW! this is brilliant! and very fitting. You took Kitana to a darker place that has been needed in her story for sometime. It was great to read Kitana & Mileena actually working together instead of against each other. I really hope you continue this story. Since Mileena was in fact spared along with Kitana, from dying with Shao Kahn; it'd be nice to see her reunite with Kitana and dare I say, actually come to terms with their past hatred for one another. Which is something I've always wanted to see happen, whether officially in the game or unofficially in a wonderful, well written fiction. Again, GREAT story!

Thank you. I do think we're due to see a new side of Kitana if she's to continue on, and I'm interested in seeing a more pessimistic and cynical side emerge. If I were to continue this story, I would leave Kitana & Mileena out of each other's affairs for a while. Eventually they're paths would cross again, but not as enemies.
WarriorPrincess Wrote:
Are you gonna continue with your Jade/Tanya story? It is fantastic.

It's not currently on the top of my to-do list, but I would like to finish Jade/Tanya sometime soon. I don't like leaving it hanging.


Riyakou Wrote:
Nice, and believable.

Thank you.


-Brad- Wrote:
Man, that was great.

I really liked the persona you gave Kitana, it fits perfectly after all she’s been through.

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)
You gotta get a job on the MK team. :P

Like I said, I would like to see a more cynical Kitana emerge after all she's been through. I think after all the crap she's survived, that's probably the only sane response she could have. And I also love the idea of her being forced into some big battle/plot despite just wanting to be left alone.

I should work on the MK team.tongue


JediSith Wrote:
wow I bow to your skill! Seriously, this was epic and it fits very well into the storyline! I hope you make a sequel real soon!

Thank you. I do try to make my stories fit into the canon as seamlessly as possible.


~Crow~ Wrote:
Sorry about the format problems (and sometimes the utter lack of interest in the Fan Fiction section on this site), we'll try to do something about it, what isn't in parenthesis at least.

Hopefully you submit more stuff though, it would be nice to have at least two active authors.

Not a problem.

I do have other Mortal Kombat stories I wouldn't mind posting here.
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Shadow_17
05/23/2020 01:16 AM (UTC)
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This was a really good read. It's been years so I doubt you'll see this but what do think of MK's current story? Especially with their treatment of Kitana and Mileena? And is there a chance we'll get your sequel?

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