MK - A New Dawn : WOW!!!
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RE: MK - A New Dawn : WOW!!!
01/13/2004 12:59 AM EST
really? I didn't notice. Great job regardless.
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yah, i know that there was the tense problems with past and present tense. when i started writing it, for some reason or another, i wrote it in past tense, but then later on i began to write it in present. i guess i never went back to correct the tenses

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01/13/2004 08:22 AM EST
No, the ones of people in bikinis just didn't seem to .... mesh very well, not that they were bad pictures in and of themselves. That and some of the "actresses" just made me go off again.

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01/13/2004 01:49 PM EST
sorry, I couldn't resist... *snicker*


-All the characters have purpose and add to the story. - kind of like MK:A. If you think of it, Stryker and Kabal caused Rain to get killed, and made Kahn get a new general. So even they had a purpose and added to story.

-Tons of character development. - And they sure devolved...

-Lots of twists and surprises. - yup, kind of like dropping pianos on people.

-Rayden's lines are hilarious. - Yeah, especially the ones I have heard a dozen times before. And the ones that make Rayden look dumb.

-Mileena's character was an awesome an unexpected twist. - Unexpected, true, but you can still see it coming with the first sentence, they mention the "Kitana". :-p

-The story was awesome; It wasn't completely faithful to MK, which was good in a way; It wasn't predictable, and it caused several plot twists. - Not predictable indeed - NOONE could have seen the twist of using all pallette-swapped characters, coming. It perhaps didn't resamble Mortal Kombat much, but, however, it was very faithful to where MK:A left us.

-Excellent pics; They actually helped me 'see' what I was reading. - and they helped me see the actual MK scenes, they were taken from. I can't believe he actually used pictures of Reptile's and Shinnok's dolls... though, using pictures where Sung Hi Lee, as "Li Mei", has a horny face? I liked that. Even if she was supposedly fighting.

-Great choice for cast. - cast? It's a fanfic. Cast really doesn't matter much, if it's mainly written, does it? Besides, recycling old MK actors??

-Some of the dialogue is superb. - and the other some is able to balance it perfect :)

Li Mei: "I'm coming."
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01/13/2004 05:40 PM EST
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sorry, I couldn't resist... *snicker*

Of course not, you always have to back up Zentile b/c obviously, he can't handle sticking up for himself. Sorry, I couldn't resist.

-All the characters have purpose and add to the story. - kind of like MK:A. If you think of it, Stryker and Kabal caused Rain to get killed, and made Kahn get a new general. So even they had a purpose and added to story.

Ummm... No. MKA killed off characters in one sentence. When did MKAND do this? Did you actually read it?

-Tons of character development. - And they sure devolved...

And I'm supposed to take this **review** seriously?

-Lots of twists and surprises. - yup, kind of like dropping pianos on people.

Again, I have to wonder if you actually read it. How about using real examples as oppossed to sarcasm. Your 'review' is nothing but soem cheap shots on the script directed towards me.

-Rayden's lines are hilarious. - Yeah, especially the ones I have heard a dozen times before. And the ones that make Rayden look dumb.

How bout you give an example? They all seemed new to me. Then again, I still doubt you actually read this, so...

-Mileena's character was an awesome an unexpected twist. - Unexpected, true, but you can still see it coming with the first sentence, they mention the "Kitana". :-p

???WTF???

-The story was awesome; It wasn't completely faithful to MK, which was good in a way; It wasn't predictable, and it caused several plot twists. - Not predictable indeed - NOONE could have seen the twist of using all pallette-swapped characters, coming. It perhaps didn't resamble Mortal Kombat much, but, however, it was very faithful to where MK:A left us.

Funny how you talk all this trash but you can't even give one ex.

-Excellent pics; They actually helped me 'see' what I was reading. - and they helped me see the actual MK scenes, they were taken from. I can't believe he actually used pictures of Reptile's and Shinnok's dolls...

???You must have read the wroooong screenplay. Where in the HELL do you see dolls?

though, using pictures where Sung Hi Lee, as "Li Mei", has a horny face? I liked that. Even if she was supposedly fighting.

So did I. So now I'm guessing you skimmed throught the script, looking at the pics. Gee I guess I should take your review seriously now. Riight....

-Great choice for cast. - cast? It's a fanfic. Cast really doesn't matter much, if it's mainly written, does it? Besides, recycling old MK actors??

Well duh; Who wouldn't want Bridgette as Sonya, or Robin Shou as Liu? Recycling old MK actors makes it more faithful to the movie/show, how in the world is this a bad thing?

-Some of the dialogue is superb. - and the other some is able to balance it perfect :)

Li Mei: "I'm coming."

Wow, that's really bad dialogue. Gimme a break. What, Zentile sent you over her to talk smack b/c he obviously can't do it himself? This is even less credible than Zentile's so called 'review'.

You give me the impresion that you skimmed through this; NO examples, just a couple of pics and ONE sentence. You call that a review?

How about you write YOUR review as oppossed to backing someone up (someone who's review wasn't credible to begin with); Do you feel better now that you talked trash? I hope you do; that's a good sign of LOW SELF ESTEEM, something I bet you have.

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