*continues in cleshae fashion*

Seriously though, that was great!

this was great story. it taken me about 1 hour 30mins to read it for start to finish.

truly awesome

v well done

Hmm.... you know something I wish I did another kind of ending where after a while... Scorpion shows up...

Scorpion: You're still here? It's over... (pause, he turns to leave) Go on...
(long pause and he gives you a weird look) Go..... Seriously..... (a while, Scorpion starts getting very angry) That's it! I CHALLENGE YOU TO MORTAL KOMBAT!

Sub-Zero: Now even though Scorpion's gotten his revenge.... he's still fucking crazy...

Something like Ferris Buller and the Real Mortal Kombat mixed together

I love that flash cartoon Real Mortal Kombat. make another ending if u want. u can make 2 ending if u like.

so whats next are u going to make another mortal kombat story or game?

I've been doing this:

http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?id=66898

Umm question

I too have a MK: Armageddon plot summary i came up with (obviously different to ProudNintendoFans)

i was just wondering, should i post it in the armageddon forum like he has or post it in the fan fiction forum

and this also serves as a bump, although it wasnt intentional

Again this story rules so good job ProudNintyFan :)

Just for fun... an alt. take to the confrontation between Scorpion and Noob Saibot.... (and ignoring Shinnok's story...)

Noob Saibot: So be it, but you had you chance.
Sareena: (to Scorpion) What do you have against him?
Scorpion: Oh, he killed me in cold blood.
Sareena: He killed mercilessly?
Scorpion: Yep.
Sareena: Funny, because he spared me.
Scorpion: WHAT!? (turns to Noob) You freakin' son of a...!
(Scorpion lunges at Noob and the two roll across the ground, both get up, Noob punches Scorpion first, but Scorpion punches him three times, Noob grabs Scorpion's hand and brings it down on his knee 3 times, but Scorpion gets free and punches Noob again, causing him to stagger back.)
Noob: Agh!
(As Scorpion runs at him, Noob kicks him in the face and performs a roundhouse kick, as Scorpion recoils he uses the side of his fist to hit Noob in the face and punching him twice, Noob staggers back once more. Noob runs away, but Scorpion grabs him by the leg causing him to fall over. Both get up and face each other. Scorpion performs a combo, but Noob performs his own right back, but Scorpion retailiates with another. At the end, Noob is knocked off the ledge and conviently lands on a lava stream and a moving rock, Noob mocks Scorpion as he gets away.)
Noob: *he turns around and is surprised to see Scorpion is waiting for him up ahead*
(Scorpion leaps onto the platform that Noob is on and tackles him. Scorpion punches him twice, but Noob blocks the third blow and hits Scorpion three times, but Scorpion recovers and punches Noob twice, but Noob kicks him off making Scorpion almost fall into the lava.)
Scorpion: Oh.... that's it you little fucker... you're gonna die now!
Noob Saibot: We're already dead...
Scorpion: I meant... crap...
(Scorpion and Noob continue fighting, only to stop when they saw a convient lava fall awaiting them.)
Scorpion: Damn it... oh well, we're going to die here so...
Noob: (grabs Scorpion's spear and uses it as a swing) Adios sucker!
Scorpion: YOU SON OF A BITCH!
(As Noob swings Scorpion grabs onto his leg and goes with him, Scorpion climbs to the top, but Noob elbows him in the face a couple of time, Scorpion retaliates with a few blows to the side of the chest...)
Shinnok: (plotting his escape) Finally, I can escape the Netherrealm, I'm going to open the portal...
(As Shinnok prepares to do so, Scorpion and Noob crash down and knock him into a bottomless pit)
Shinnok: DAMN IT! NOT AGAIN!
(Noob punches Scorpion, but Scorpion punches him twice and headbutts him and punches him again, Noob punches him twice, but Scorpion tackles him near a river bank and tries to put his head in, Noob punches him twice more, but Scorpion puts his head under the lava and when Noob comes back up, all we see is his skull. Scorpion starts panting and gets up.)
Scorpion: Well that takes care of that...
(Noob leaps onto him and gets him into a headlock, Scorpion runs backwards, trying to get Noob off of him and they both fall over the ledge.... Scorpion lands on top of Noob and crushes his skull...)
Scorpion: Well that's a bit anti-climatic but whatever... now I can finally ascend... and join the icons of video gaming...
(At the sanctuary of video game icons, Scorpion looks around)
Scorpion: Huh... well... this is certainly nicer than the Netherrealm... I wonder where my neighbors are...
Mario: YAHOO! LET'S-A GO!
Sonic: YEAH!
Mega Man: (teleporting in) Alright!
Link: HI-YAH! *swipes with his sword*
Scorpion: (absolutely horrified) What the fuck? THESE are my neighbors? Kiddie gimmicks! FUCK THIS!
Solid Snake: I'm not kiddy...
Scorpion: *runs back to the gates, which are closed* WAIT! LET ME OUT! I'D RATHER BE IN HELL! I'D RATHER BE IN HEEEEELLLLLL!


THE END

Deleted dialogue scenes: (or just scenes, I wish this stuff in, but oh well)

A scene where after Liu Kang comes back to life, he looks at the Shaolin brothers that he killed, and notices that several Shaolin children are laying on the ground, dead (Rather dark, I know but... it would've lead into this...)

(During Liu Kang and Shinnok's fight, Shinnok is winning for a bit)

Shinnok: I was expecting more of a fight from you, but what more could I expect from a killer of children?
(This causes Liu Kang to go ballistic and begin his merciless beating on the fallen Elder God)

Also, more scenes that show that more of Liu Kang going over the edge where he and Kung Lao are attacked by several Tarkatan, Liu Kang starts to have a mental breakdown during the battle over his past truamas and mercilessly slaughters them, much to Kung Lao's horror. (Yeah, very out of character for Liu Kang, but that's the point of it. He's not quite a good-two-shoes, he's more of a pissed off, brooding hero.)

And for comedy an advertisement before one update.

(Scorpion and Sub-Zero are standing in front of "Gamestop)
Scorpion: "Half-Life 2" is the best video game I've ever played... and I've played "Shadow the Hedgehog"
Sub-Zero: ...."Shadow the Hedgehog" is the worst game ever.
Scorpion: Oh yeah, true. Everything about that game killed Sonic....
Sub-Zero: Guns, Graphics, Story, 4Kids voice acting...
Scorpion: Can you imagine a Mortal Kombat anime in the hands of those bastards?
Sub-Zero: Think the SNES version of Mortal Kombat 1 which replaced the blood with sweat. That's probably what it would look like.
Scorpion: Yeah... but this game isn't bad...
Sub-Zero: Why are we advertising for a non-MK game?
Scorpion: Because this game is a lot better than any MK game, considering all the half-assed fighting engines as of late.
Sub-Zero: Yeah, I also don't like that whole "No one ever dies in Mortal Kombat thing". I mean what's the point of anything if you can just come back to life?
Scorpion: Easy for you to say Mr. "I'm the only recurring character since MK2 to never die."
Sub-Zero: Holding on to that record, baby.
(Noob, Sektor, Frost and Hotaru have joined forces elsewhere)
Noob Saibot: We all hate this man. (shows a picture of Sub-Zero) We will join forces and kill him!
(Back to Scorpion and Sub-Zero)
Scorpion: How many people have tried to kill you anyway?
Sub-Zero: Oh let's see, you, Cyrax, Smoke, Sektor, my brother, Frost although that doesn't really count, Hotaru... Tarkatan hoard, my own clan... Quan Chi...
Scorpion: Damn... a lot of people want your ass dead.
Sub-Zero: Yeah... but I always survive...
Scorpion: *sighs* Yeah, lucky you. Your idiotic brother killed me in cold blood...
Sub-Zero: You killed him in..
Scorpion: I killed him in vengeance!
Sub-Zero: I don't see how that's much different but whatever...
Scorpion: Alright that's it! I challenge you...
Sub-Zero: Oh, let's just play Dance Dance Revolution.
(Scorpion and Sub-Zero go at it, eventually it stops, their grades are shown: Scorpion: A. Sub-Zero: F.)
Scorpion: I got an "A". Awesome.
(The grades change, Scorpion: D. Sub-Zero: A+++)
Scorpion: Son of a bitch!
Sub-Zero: Some people just don't have the groove...
Scorpion: Screw you! I challenge you to Mortal Kombat!
Sub-Zero: Ok... which one?

Hehe...

Well... that's all for now...

lol...you crazy bastard.

^Yeah, I am...

Before I begin with more deleted scenes... more outtakes.

*Catchy music plays and the title appears "Scorpion's adventures in Video Land"
Scorpion: Hello my dozen cousins... I'm here today to take a break from all my vengeance seeking... *sighs* Here we go... now where's Sub-Zero? He was supposed to meet me by Mickey Mouse's house...
(Cut to Mickey Mouse)
Scorpion: (appearing on screen) Curse you Mickey Mouse!
Mickey Mouse: (gives his trademark laugh)
(Scorpion wanders around Video Land, various video game characters can be seen)
Scorpion: First, I'm going to show you what happened to all those one-shot nobodies who are coming back in "Mortal Kombat: Armageddon"
(Cut to Scorpion inside a hospital ward)
Scorpion: They all ended up here, from tramuatic stress disorder.... or lack of popularity, whichever.
(Scorpion meets Kitana)
Kitana: Hi, Scorpion. How ya doing?
Scorpion: Oh, same old... you...
Kitana: Well, let's see... my mom is a corpse straight from Hell... uh... no offense, Scorpion.. my sister is psychopath clone bent on killing me... my dad was killed by my stepdad... my stepdad is a maniac bent on realm domination and my boyfriend is a rotting zombie.
Scorpion: Damn.... that sucks.
Kitana: Yeah, it does. How you been?
Scorpion: I don't get one thing, I'm the icon of MK, and your boyfriend is the main hero... what's up with that?
Kitana: You're "neutral", how can you be the main hero?
Scorpion: Tell that to the guy who wrote "Shaolin Monks" crappy story...
Kitana: So what was your wife like?
Scorpion: Oh she was pretty much everything your not (Kitana looks hurt) In fact, you're probably the worst contender for girlfriend that I've ever seen. (Kitana looks on the verge of tears) The world would be better off if you never reproduced... you're stupid and fat!
(Kitana starts crying)
Scorpion: I made Kitana cry.... AWESOME! (long pause) That's it, stop crying.... I CHALLENGE YOU TO MORTAL KOMBAT!
(Kitana keeps crying)
Scorpion: Ok, you know what?... Screw you... *leaves*

(Scorpion's at the Shaolin Temples...)
Scorpion: (to Liu Kang) Your not a rotting zombie...
Liu Kang: No, you're actually talking to the spirit me...
Scorpion: What the fuck? That's so... stupid... I CHALLENGE YOU TO MORTAL KOMBAT!
Liu Kang: Go on.. it's not like your attacks can hurt me...
(Scorpion's attacks go right through him...)
Scorpion: Fuck this...
Kung Lao: Are you really that stupid?
Scorpion: Shut up! I don't understand why so many people like you so much! Your just Liu Kang wearing a hat!
Kung Lao: I don't understand why your so popular... you're just a revenge-crazed lunatic.
Scorpion: I CHALLENGE YOU TO MORTAL KOMBAT!
Kung Lao: That's what you always say when somebody insults you...
Scorpion: Oh this is getting old... *leaves*

*Scorpion finally meets Sub-Zero*
Scorpion: Hey there you are.... where you been...
Sub-Zero: Uh...I've been... groping... Frost...
Scorpion: What? You're not Sub-Zero!
Sub-Zero: *changes voice* No it is I! Reptile!
(Reptile takes off his disguise. Subtitles say... "Reptile, the 9th most popular MK character)
Reptile: 9th? What the f(bleep)k?
Scorpion: Oh, you again...
Reptile: I'm going to end your life... and then take your place as MK's icon!
Scorpion: You've always been about this haven't you?
Reptile: Yes... ever since I was created when the MK team merged yours and Sub-Zero's yellow and blue colors together, I've desired to overtake both of your popularities!
Scorpion: OK... that doesn't make sense...
Reptile: You two have always been the most popular Mortal Kombat characters... I would've been if not for being a DAMN SECRET CHARACTER IN MK1!
Scorpion: Uh... o....k... now let's just... fight it out in a dramatic showdown...!
(Scorpion and Reptile take their positions...)
Announcer: Round 1.... FIGHT!
Title Card: SUDDEN ENDING!

Sorry no deleted scenes, but I had to do that.

Scorpion should get his own game...lol


Special Ending:

Announcer: Across the breaches of many dimensional portals... "It's Cooking With Scorpion"

Shinnok: "OH MY GOD!!!!"

Noob Saibot: "HE GETS HIS OWN F'CKNG SHOW?!!!"

Jax (watching TV with his teammates): "Now I've seen everything..."

Here's some more deleted scenes...

During the final battle with Noob, as Sareena lodges the Kriss into Noob's body, Noob begins screaming out Scorpion and Sub-Zero's names... As they both charge their attacks... Sub-Zero has one final flashback to his brother while Scorpion hears a voice in his head, his eyes go wide as he hears his wife speaking to him... with that, Scorpion declares "My name is Hanzo! Hanzo Hasashi!" and they both fire their energy blasts at him.

This was cut out because mainly I couldn't think of a way to make it work, but... oh well

During Liu Kang's chase of Shinnok, Kung Lao catches up with him and says that he wants to get to Shinnok, he'll have to go through him... this causes Liu Kang to attack him and the two best friends are engaged in combat.

This was cut out due to time.

Speaking of which, I would've liked to have done more scenes that showed Liu Kang going over the edge, but oh well.

Well that's all for now...

Well guys, check the first post, I came up with a title render... unfortuantley I couldn't get many good backgrounds so.. and the title could use work but overall, not bad for my first attempt, as the topic title said look for more soon: They will all be posted onto this thread and into the fan submission forum... I just felt like doing this for fun. I admit my skills need a bit of work, but hey my first try, I'll hopefully get better, if anyone has any advice (or constructive critcism... heh...) by all means.

Hmm... I wish I could've put in the official title render... oh well next time... Actually I think I'll redo it... after I get this next one done...

Here is the first new render, going to redo the Liu Kang/Kung Lao/Kitana one very soon...

Scorpion, Sub-Zero and Noob Saibot render

Liu Kang, Kung Lao and Kitana (sorry but that was the biggest I could get it, using paint sucks)

How do you do this stuff? It's amazing. This could be made into an awesome movie after MKA comes out. keep up the good work

Wow... I just recently joined and I'm amazewd a "common person" (no offense is meant by that) had the nerve to write not only a well done fan-fic, but an awesome attempt to predict the future MK storylines. great job man, really. Simply Brilliant

that was very good

You should consider a career in writing i really enjoyed reading this.

LOL
It'll be cool to have Scorpion in Super Smash Bros. Brawl.

COOOLL!!!! Give the story to the guy who make The Real Mortal Kombat!

oops

EDIT: nvm ^_^;;
Anyways, I remember that thread... awesome plot summary of MKA, ProudNintendoFan! The outakes are hilarious!

For some reason, I want to do a seaql this MKA. A teenager, looking to prove himself, is a rival of Lui Kang's son. He wish that he can be as storg as Kang is and be Mortal Kombat Champon. He makes it to the final until...u know, Earthrealm is invaded. He can only thow some-what weak punches, storg kicks (Tae Kwon Do), wield a dull sword (unless if he put lot of strengh) and spit fire (learn from Sporion, omly he can do diffenrt forms of fire). Sorry from the grammer. My essay due tomorrow.

nice story: it was pretty cool, because i actually read..lol