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1. "And for a fucking freestyle, there isn't any fucking bars," - Some douche who doesn't know shit about raps.
Freestyles have no bars? Alright, in that case, I'll spit :
Yo, I don't like you. You suck and can't rap. Don't insult me again or I'll be sure to shoot you
with my nine. I'll make you bleed. FATALITY!
There you go, a no-bar rap. How is it?
2. Garlador : You are on the internet! Watch as Vab fearlessly 'defies' you and insults K4E again. And what will you do about it? What's that? Nothing? Oh, that's right. Because you know nothing about him and are flipping out for no reason.
This is the rap board, meaning low is never too low. So be low. That's what Vab did, and you guys flipped out.
And Gar, if you really love K4E as much as you say you do, why didn't you put that emotion into your rap? You could have really killed him if you had even MENTIONED, with some emotion, that you loved her and not to bring her into it. Instead, you spit a bar that didn't make sense. Great!
And I know now a flame-fest is probably going to start, so lets end this right here and prevent that.
Edit : Fuck it. K4E Sucks and can lick me! Now, blow up, Gar. Kill me! Oh wait, you ARE on the internet, and can't do shit, huh? That's right.
Freestyles have no bars? Alright, in that case, I'll spit :
Yo, I don't like you. You suck and can't rap. Don't insult me again or I'll be sure to shoot you
with my nine. I'll make you bleed. FATALITY!
There you go, a no-bar rap. How is it?
2. Garlador : You are on the internet! Watch as Vab fearlessly 'defies' you and insults K4E again. And what will you do about it? What's that? Nothing? Oh, that's right. Because you know nothing about him and are flipping out for no reason.
This is the rap board, meaning low is never too low. So be low. That's what Vab did, and you guys flipped out.
And Gar, if you really love K4E as much as you say you do, why didn't you put that emotion into your rap? You could have really killed him if you had even MENTIONED, with some emotion, that you loved her and not to bring her into it. Instead, you spit a bar that didn't make sense. Great!
And I know now a flame-fest is probably going to start, so lets end this right here and prevent that.
Edit : Fuck it. K4E Sucks and can lick me! Now, blow up, Gar. Kill me! Oh wait, you ARE on the internet, and can't do shit, huh? That's right.
Okay, my analysis.
vab's (notice the sweet nickname)
This is a rap BATTLE
not an oppurtunity to have your ass prattle
-states that Garlador mainly talked about himself (untrue) and that he didn't actually make any attacks (also not true.) That, and the flow just doesn't flow with me at all. However, I liked the challenge at the beginning. Great start.
on and on about yourself,
i wish i could give you more help
- didn't really go "on and on", and why the hell would you wish to give him more help? Doesn't make any sense, especially after the insult. Confliction. At least it sounded condensending, but only slightly so.
lemme tell you not to toot your own horn man
ill also mute your adorn fans
- he only bragged because it was true, and that was about one line. And, also, he doesn't have any adorn fans, aside from one: K4E. Also, I found it rather gimmicky throwing "man" in there to rhyme with man (and I believe somebody accused Garlador of that but conveniently failed to mention this little tid-bit.)And "toot your own horn" as an insult sounds gay (no offense.)
who are blindly voting.
hope you dont mind me noting
- *ahem* changes subjects rather abruptly. Also, I notice people accused Garldor of this, but not Vab for some odd reason?
the kisses and nicknames, isnt that sweet?
lemme inform you, that isnt what we need.
- If I'm not mistaken, Garlador never used "kisses" or "nicknames" in his rap, which is what you're supposed to be responding to, NOT the reply of a fan. Also, the rhyme doesn't really work together with sweet/need. It's also better the whole "lemme inform you". What the hell? THAT'S uniniative. You're talking to him like he's some buddy, which really doesn't fit into the rest of the rap. Sorry. At least it was an attack. Bravo for making fun of Garlador's masculinity.
and your pathetic lil inner rhymes
are less deadly then everyday sinner crimes
- You got them, too, idiot. While the "less deadly then everday sinner crimes" was rather original, it also was vague and bland, since some everyday sinner crimes are rather deadly (like the every day sinner crimes in my neighborhood. A murder a day, at least.) But, at least an insult, but a weak one.
WHY DONT YOU FUCKING ATTACK ME!
BE IT FIST OR RAPPING
- ...And he did. Next rap. But, if I'm not mistaken, he did state that he would physically beat your sorry ass if you mentioned K4E again. And I still have problems with attack me/rapping. Not quite up to par. But... THANK YOU! for actually letting it all out! This is what I wanted from you, and if you had kept this up, you would have easily got my vote. Best line of your rap.
CAUSE I FEEL IVE LIVED ENOUGH!
..at the edge of given up
- way to whine and bitch and moan... as Garlador said you would. Way to make him right. At least it flows.
but ill at least get rid of punks
- Okay, this line just comes out of nowhere and doesn't go anywhere or rhyme with anything.
like garlador who dont even diss me
who whatever they write, gets K4E kissing
- he DID diss you, and to label Garlador a punk is... humorous... at best. And, as Garlador finishes everything with "Fatality", she finishes everything with "*smooches*" so, yeah, whatever he writes gets her standard reply. But... is that a fucking BAD thing? It could have flowed better. You had it on the tip of your tongue/fingers, but you just wrote it in a very unappealing way.
and yelling "omigawd your shits the best!
you totally put his spit to rest!
- Wish she had said that, but... you said it, not her. And, for the record, I agree with what you said. But I DO really like the flow and rhythm.
dint read it, too busy rubbing my clit and breast,
but i know you're better then him!"
- Doesn't have rhythm. If you want the "technicle" standpoint that all you idiots keep ranting about, he suddenly changes from couplets to trimeters, throwing the entire rhyming bit out of wack. And your biggest problem is that you've lost target. If you were against K4E, this stuff would be great, BUT you're against Garlador, so, to quote you, "FUCKING ATTACK" him, instead of retreating into "safe" territory like the "coward" that Garlador described you as.
uh...K4E wheres common sense? youre fogettin again.
Why dont you try and make an unbiased vote?
read my verse then try us both?
- Uh... what's so biased about that? If she likes his stuff better, then, yeah, she's biased against you. Everyone's biased if they like something more than someone else. Dumbass moment, I think. And, yes, she read yours, too. I also don't like again/sense. Bad.
oh wait, cause you're in love with his wit
and you wish you were hugging his dick
- Sudden changes back into couplets. And, hell, I'm in love with his wit. But, once again, what does K4E "hugging his dick" have anything to do with Garlador? Shallow! Avoiding the target! Running! I just makes me think you're afraid to confront HIM! Good rhyme, bad presentation.
inbetween your legs
getting off on everything he says
- Once again, more unnecessary, worthless banter about K4E. Also, lacks beat and originality.Too bad you don't do as you say. You should be ATTACKING Garlador, not K4E. You stupid or blind, or what?
this battle makes me sick
ive had all i can take from pricks
- Well, your rhymes have the same effect on me. And the transition from line to line is totatlly screwed up. Talk about "Changing subjects on the fly." Nice rhyme, though.
now i gotta try and win a popularity contest?
fuckers act fair then when im gone jest
- Actually, this is a rap battle, retard. And, for the second time, Garlador isn't popular, just notorious. And you pretty much again bitch and whine about how no body likes you and how they're all making fun of you. Grow some balls.
about how i never stood a breathing chance
and i never could beat garladors rants
- You restate the same concept, which doesn't fly with me. And, once again, you bitch and whine. This is your so-called "attack"?
cause im new to the crowd
and it feels like ive got glue in my mouth
- *boo hoo* *sob, sob* Trying to get a sympathy effect so that people will feel like "oh, he's the little underdog. I sure hope he wins."? Lame, man. You're still bitching and whining and no doing what you told Garlador to do. Right now, you should be attacking Garlador, not the readers with some guilt trip to make them vote for you.
everything i rhyme goes unnoticed
- Once again, where the hell does this line come from? It doesn't further anything and it doesn't lead anywhere. Just one random line of more bitching and whining. Sissy boy.
you dont catch the 3-4 rhymes a bar
the act of hearing sometimes goes far
- Technicle? Nice. But, way to shatter what you had started and change subjects again with a very vague, worthless statement like "the act of hearing sometimes goes far". What the hell does THAT mean? It's a bunch of worthless information that turns me off to what you have to say (which, right now, might I repeat, is more bitching and whining.) Sorry, but I pretty much did what you said and your lines went unnoticed. I hate people who bitch and don't face the music like a real man.
but outloud you dont say my shit
you wait for him to come and spray his spit
- Actually, I like this part. It made some sense, was kinda original, but the transition still is rough. But I think this was one of his best lines and it made me say his stuff out loud, which is always good. Wish he had kept it up.
talkin nonsense like
"you a clueless, nudist, buddhist who jizzed in his new dress"
- WTF? Way to just make stuff up. If you're trying to mock Garlador's style, you flopped. The rhythm's pretty good, though, but it's a poor attack, since, quite frankly, no one cares. good rhyming but poor presentation and weak comeback.
but wait, you dont even say that, you talk about yourself
proud of every damn thing, even how you walk without help.
- Then why the hell did YOU say it, dumbass? And if I were better, then, yes, I'd talk about myself, too, which, as I AGAIN repeat, he didn't overdo, but you seem pretty stuck on. And the whole "walk without help" part is rather lame, uninspired, and pointless, failing to cut through the flesh. Yeah, I'm sure he felt that. It rhymes but who cares when it's hardly an insult? It's AN attack, at least.
again as for the voters, amazed as to how you can have sight be be blind
...go ahead and vote for him, there'll be no eternal spite in my mind
-Ah, a sympathy ending for a rather unoriginal rap. You won't have "spite in your mind". So much for that "battle" you bragged about at the beginning. At least Garlador ended with your fatality. You're doing nothing but gripe, complain, and ultimately play the underdog Eminem like in 8 Mile, hopping that the poor, underrated rapper might get a boost from the fans. But your sympathy pleas and weak lyrics fail to impress me. You didn't do what you promised you'd do; rather, you turned to old tricks like avoid Garldor himself and focusing on K4E and, for the majority of the entire rap, you BITCHED AND WHINED! God DAMN it! I don't want to hear that shit! You should have followed your own rules.
vab's (notice the sweet nickname)
This is a rap BATTLE
not an oppurtunity to have your ass prattle
-states that Garlador mainly talked about himself (untrue) and that he didn't actually make any attacks (also not true.) That, and the flow just doesn't flow with me at all. However, I liked the challenge at the beginning. Great start.
on and on about yourself,
i wish i could give you more help
- didn't really go "on and on", and why the hell would you wish to give him more help? Doesn't make any sense, especially after the insult. Confliction. At least it sounded condensending, but only slightly so.
lemme tell you not to toot your own horn man
ill also mute your adorn fans
- he only bragged because it was true, and that was about one line. And, also, he doesn't have any adorn fans, aside from one: K4E. Also, I found it rather gimmicky throwing "man" in there to rhyme with man (and I believe somebody accused Garlador of that but conveniently failed to mention this little tid-bit.)And "toot your own horn" as an insult sounds gay (no offense.)
who are blindly voting.
hope you dont mind me noting
- *ahem* changes subjects rather abruptly. Also, I notice people accused Garldor of this, but not Vab for some odd reason?
the kisses and nicknames, isnt that sweet?
lemme inform you, that isnt what we need.
- If I'm not mistaken, Garlador never used "kisses" or "nicknames" in his rap, which is what you're supposed to be responding to, NOT the reply of a fan. Also, the rhyme doesn't really work together with sweet/need. It's also better the whole "lemme inform you". What the hell? THAT'S uniniative. You're talking to him like he's some buddy, which really doesn't fit into the rest of the rap. Sorry. At least it was an attack. Bravo for making fun of Garlador's masculinity.
and your pathetic lil inner rhymes
are less deadly then everyday sinner crimes
- You got them, too, idiot. While the "less deadly then everday sinner crimes" was rather original, it also was vague and bland, since some everyday sinner crimes are rather deadly (like the every day sinner crimes in my neighborhood. A murder a day, at least.) But, at least an insult, but a weak one.
WHY DONT YOU FUCKING ATTACK ME!
BE IT FIST OR RAPPING
- ...And he did. Next rap. But, if I'm not mistaken, he did state that he would physically beat your sorry ass if you mentioned K4E again. And I still have problems with attack me/rapping. Not quite up to par. But... THANK YOU! for actually letting it all out! This is what I wanted from you, and if you had kept this up, you would have easily got my vote. Best line of your rap.
CAUSE I FEEL IVE LIVED ENOUGH!
..at the edge of given up
- way to whine and bitch and moan... as Garlador said you would. Way to make him right. At least it flows.
but ill at least get rid of punks
- Okay, this line just comes out of nowhere and doesn't go anywhere or rhyme with anything.
like garlador who dont even diss me
who whatever they write, gets K4E kissing
- he DID diss you, and to label Garlador a punk is... humorous... at best. And, as Garlador finishes everything with "Fatality", she finishes everything with "*smooches*" so, yeah, whatever he writes gets her standard reply. But... is that a fucking BAD thing? It could have flowed better. You had it on the tip of your tongue/fingers, but you just wrote it in a very unappealing way.
and yelling "omigawd your shits the best!
you totally put his spit to rest!
- Wish she had said that, but... you said it, not her. And, for the record, I agree with what you said. But I DO really like the flow and rhythm.
dint read it, too busy rubbing my clit and breast,
but i know you're better then him!"
- Doesn't have rhythm. If you want the "technicle" standpoint that all you idiots keep ranting about, he suddenly changes from couplets to trimeters, throwing the entire rhyming bit out of wack. And your biggest problem is that you've lost target. If you were against K4E, this stuff would be great, BUT you're against Garlador, so, to quote you, "FUCKING ATTACK" him, instead of retreating into "safe" territory like the "coward" that Garlador described you as.
uh...K4E wheres common sense? youre fogettin again.
Why dont you try and make an unbiased vote?
read my verse then try us both?
- Uh... what's so biased about that? If she likes his stuff better, then, yeah, she's biased against you. Everyone's biased if they like something more than someone else. Dumbass moment, I think. And, yes, she read yours, too. I also don't like again/sense. Bad.
oh wait, cause you're in love with his wit
and you wish you were hugging his dick
- Sudden changes back into couplets. And, hell, I'm in love with his wit. But, once again, what does K4E "hugging his dick" have anything to do with Garlador? Shallow! Avoiding the target! Running! I just makes me think you're afraid to confront HIM! Good rhyme, bad presentation.
inbetween your legs
getting off on everything he says
- Once again, more unnecessary, worthless banter about K4E. Also, lacks beat and originality.Too bad you don't do as you say. You should be ATTACKING Garlador, not K4E. You stupid or blind, or what?
this battle makes me sick
ive had all i can take from pricks
- Well, your rhymes have the same effect on me. And the transition from line to line is totatlly screwed up. Talk about "Changing subjects on the fly." Nice rhyme, though.
now i gotta try and win a popularity contest?
fuckers act fair then when im gone jest
- Actually, this is a rap battle, retard. And, for the second time, Garlador isn't popular, just notorious. And you pretty much again bitch and whine about how no body likes you and how they're all making fun of you. Grow some balls.
about how i never stood a breathing chance
and i never could beat garladors rants
- You restate the same concept, which doesn't fly with me. And, once again, you bitch and whine. This is your so-called "attack"?
cause im new to the crowd
and it feels like ive got glue in my mouth
- *boo hoo* *sob, sob* Trying to get a sympathy effect so that people will feel like "oh, he's the little underdog. I sure hope he wins."? Lame, man. You're still bitching and whining and no doing what you told Garlador to do. Right now, you should be attacking Garlador, not the readers with some guilt trip to make them vote for you.
everything i rhyme goes unnoticed
- Once again, where the hell does this line come from? It doesn't further anything and it doesn't lead anywhere. Just one random line of more bitching and whining. Sissy boy.
you dont catch the 3-4 rhymes a bar
the act of hearing sometimes goes far
- Technicle? Nice. But, way to shatter what you had started and change subjects again with a very vague, worthless statement like "the act of hearing sometimes goes far". What the hell does THAT mean? It's a bunch of worthless information that turns me off to what you have to say (which, right now, might I repeat, is more bitching and whining.) Sorry, but I pretty much did what you said and your lines went unnoticed. I hate people who bitch and don't face the music like a real man.
but outloud you dont say my shit
you wait for him to come and spray his spit
- Actually, I like this part. It made some sense, was kinda original, but the transition still is rough. But I think this was one of his best lines and it made me say his stuff out loud, which is always good. Wish he had kept it up.
talkin nonsense like
"you a clueless, nudist, buddhist who jizzed in his new dress"
- WTF? Way to just make stuff up. If you're trying to mock Garlador's style, you flopped. The rhythm's pretty good, though, but it's a poor attack, since, quite frankly, no one cares. good rhyming but poor presentation and weak comeback.
but wait, you dont even say that, you talk about yourself
proud of every damn thing, even how you walk without help.
- Then why the hell did YOU say it, dumbass? And if I were better, then, yes, I'd talk about myself, too, which, as I AGAIN repeat, he didn't overdo, but you seem pretty stuck on. And the whole "walk without help" part is rather lame, uninspired, and pointless, failing to cut through the flesh. Yeah, I'm sure he felt that. It rhymes but who cares when it's hardly an insult? It's AN attack, at least.
again as for the voters, amazed as to how you can have sight be be blind
...go ahead and vote for him, there'll be no eternal spite in my mind
-Ah, a sympathy ending for a rather unoriginal rap. You won't have "spite in your mind". So much for that "battle" you bragged about at the beginning. At least Garlador ended with your fatality. You're doing nothing but gripe, complain, and ultimately play the underdog Eminem like in 8 Mile, hopping that the poor, underrated rapper might get a boost from the fans. But your sympathy pleas and weak lyrics fail to impress me. You didn't do what you promised you'd do; rather, you turned to old tricks like avoid Garldor himself and focusing on K4E and, for the majority of the entire rap, you BITCHED AND WHINED! God DAMN it! I don't want to hear that shit! You should have followed your own rules.
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I didn't read yours, because I know mine is more correct. 
Okay. Part II of my unbiased analysis:
That your best attack?
You still don't know what you lack.
- Okay, Garlador started off weak. The transition is off, and it was pretty unoriginal. Sorry.
Why don't you go for the ball-sack,
Or do you even have one? Are you that wack?
- While I'm not keen on the "wack" part, this caught my attention. Vab asked for it, and Garlador answered. Why didn't Vab go for the ball-sack? He went for K4E (who, I hope, doesn't have one.) Garlador begs for Vab to hit low, but he never did. And then he questions whether Vab even had the balls to insult him. I liked that. Low, and redeeming.
Suck it up, loser, and get outta my way.
You think that all I have is sweet things to say.
- A firm ending to tell him to back down, but pretty pointless. I like the rage, but it could have been directed much better. Reference back to Vab could go somewhere...
Screw you! You don't know what the hell you're sayin'!
You think that you'll get away without payin'?
- The infamous "screw you" instead of "fuck you." Actually, I commend the decision, as it's certainly more original than the predicted f-bomb. A surprise, if you will. Again, mocking of logic is pretty poor, but the threat of making Vab pay is nice, and it flows nicely, too, albeit with a poor transition.
Be a man, you shallow, worthless prick!
Your so-called rhymes makes me sick;
- Oo! Another attack! So-called rhymes and the challenge to "be a man" really got me involved. Mainly because, after all Vab's bitching, that's exactly what he needed to do. And, on a personal note, his rhymes did make me sick, too.
So bad and unoriginal that I think I'm gonna hurl.
Do you get off makin' fun of my girl?
- I don't like the transition, but the mocking of the rhymes originality to the point of vomitting is inspired, IMO. And the thought of Vab being so twisted as to get off making fun of K4E is interesting as well. And, thankfully, Garlador covers her back, however briefly. Actually, thank god he DIDN'T dwell on K4E. His focus was Vab, as it should have been.
Why don't you get one yourself. Who's your pick?
Or can you even get one since you don't have a dick?
- Another challenge. Good, Good. I don't like how it flows, but I like the way he logically states that K4E is a good thing, and that Vab doesn't have that and might not be able to get a good thing.
You can't make the grade. You just won't pass.
You want a kiss, too? Well, pucker up and kiss my ass.
- Degrading his rhymes again. And, I absolutely love how he replies to Vab's comment about "kissing" from K4E by coyly replying to kiss his ass. Great stuff, even if it is only secondary rhyming.
You call me weak, you call me lame.
Hell, it's all the same, but this is MY game.
- Generalizes ALL of Vab's comments into worthless babble, then replies that it's nothing when you're above it. Coy. Very coy, for better or worse. At least Gar's on a power trip and not Cryin' to his momma like Vab was.
You face the master and you're headin' for disaster.
So, you arrogant bastard, you see this is over faster
- The master and disaster bit was uninspired. Weak, so that it missed the punch it was meant to deliver. The arrogant bastard remark, though, was rather good, and it all flows so very well.
Than it even begun. The lyrics you spun
Ain't nothing. You haven't won. You're over; done.
- Again attacks Vab. This already has Garlador keeping his promise of a 10x1 ratio for the insultes on K4E. All he's done is mock him. That's what this is about! This is a battle, and Garlador's battling, while Vab's whining. His lyrics are nothing? It's over before it had even bgun? He's over and done? That's what I wanted to hear from Vab, expected from Vab, but failed to hear from Vab.
Can you always rap this rhyme? Can you blow 'em away every time?
All you do is bitch and wine. Boy, your ass is mine!
- Another challenge! Great! Internal rhyme at it's best, and free-style, too! And, Garlador's comment that cinched my decision: "All you do is bitch and wine." Yep, that covers Vab, alright. And the remark of "your ass is mine", while good, didn't flow and, yes, changed subject pretty abruptly, mid-rhyme.
At least I have a name. I have my claim to fame.
All you got is shame and pitiful ramblings, so tame.
- Garlador on an ego trip. Can't say I agree. But, I do like how he attacked Vab AGAIN (for like the 50th time) and mocked his rhymes AGAIN! But I can't say I like the flow.
You wanna go insane? You wanna play my game?
Can you take the pain, soak it up like acid rain?
- The comment that if Vab plays Garlador's "game" he'll go "insane" I think is great and original, flows well, and is one of the better stuff he wrote. Then, ANOTHER challenge. "Can you take the pain?" Then he takes it a step further, describing the pain as soaked up acid rain. Nice, but I still feel he could have worded it better.
You coward! You dork! You don't know how far you sunk!
What, you think you can get up and get crunk?
- Okay, while I like the true comment of "coward", the rest in this part is pretty bland. I like how Garlador mentioned that vab sunk low (status wise), most likely in reference to the K4E stab, but it could have used some work, and the change to "get up and get crunk" simply doesn't pass with me. The weakest part of the rap. Also, "dork" is one of the least aggressive terms I've heard in a long time. I was surprised.
You're nothing more than a no-name punk!
Bet the only time you talk sense is when you're dead drunk.
- A "no-name punk?" Well, that was pretty good, since that's what he is. While it should have been good, it was unnecessarily true. But to say that Vab is so screwed up that he only makes sense when drunk made me smiling and grateful that Garlador was back on his attacking path. A funny, tongue-in-cheek insult.
How sad. You're that bad. What's the matter? Gettin' mad?
You think you're the next big fad? You're 'bout as cool as my dad.
- Oh, I LOVE the line "bout as cool as my dad." OUCH! Tactile and efficient. You mocks Vab further by saying the entire thing is sad (that he only makes sense when drunk, and then spurs him further by adding "gettin' mad" (and I can imagine the mocking tone involved.) Then he destroys the grand image of Vab being the next "fad" with that wonderful line representing all things out-of-date.
You can't compete, so accept defeat.
Don't make me repeat that you can't keep a beat.
- Another challenge, and more mocking of Vab's work, but the rhymes are pretty uninspired. But they flow and work.
I could go on and on, talk 'bout your sorry friends and mother;
You brought K4E into this; why not another?
- I wish Garlador had gone on and on, as he only hints at the potential of mocking Vab's mother. Too bad. But, he also brings K4E back into the mix, but thankfully, he doesn't defend her, but uses her as a vessel for another insult, stating that he has more of something then Vab for a reason. I don't like the way it flows, or the beat, but it's another great attack.
I got friends, but where do you turn to in the end?
On whom can you depend? Who do you have to defend?
- Questions, questions. Questions with no answers. I can only imagine. Regrettfully, my imagination is low, so the stinging remarks don't quite win me over.
You'll wind up dead, and nothing more will be said.
- One line. I was surprised. However, even though it's out of place, it really bites down hard. To say that vab will die and no one will remember him is COLD. Thank God.
Your sorry ass won't get a tear; I'm everything you should fear.
- Okay, Garlador has changed into the single lines again, which irks me, but the saving grace is the great insult. Vab "won't get a tear". Low and wicked. But I hate the transition to "everything you should fear".
Back off and step down. You can't shock with sound.
Every pound for pound will nail you to the ground.
- Back to couplets. Another dare and insult. vab can't "shock with sound", meaning he can't get under Garldor's skin with weak rhymes. And the "pound for pound will nail you to the ground" I think is reference to the weight of Garlador's OWN rhymes tearing Vab apart. A vague attack, but one which has my mild imagination burning. I liked it. And who said this part made no fucking sense? I don't have an imagination, and I understand it.
Leave you for dead, like the scum that you are.
When you measure up to me, you're only sub-par.
- Uninspired, but at least another attack. Thank god for the constant attacks. Leaving him for dead implies that Garlador won't kill him, but rather make him suffer. I like the dark side of it all. The "sub-par" part left me wanting, though.
You lay it on shallow, never make it thick;
Just get the hell out of my face, you friggin' prick!
- Mocking the rhymes, then the person, AGAIN! Are we in the triple digits, now? (compared to the singles with Vab?) I don't like the transition, or the restating of prick (pretty unoriginal), but at least it got me to pay attention, but it's pretty weak compared to the rest.
You want more? Do you know what's in store?
You'll wind up sore and poor facin' Garlador!
- Oo! Another challenge? Another dare? And another insult and attack from Garlador. I haven't seen the guy bitch yet. Bravo.
Now it's over and done. Wake up to reality!
What? No longer havin' fun? Just wait till your
fatality!
I like the finality of it. Sure, he ended it like the first, but he ALWAYS ends it like that, so I've come to like it. More mocking and tough talking, and then a warning of things to come. This is why I liked Garlador's stuff better. He simply did what the thread asked for. He ATTACKED and BATTLED Vab, EASILY outnumbering and clobbering him with lyrical violence. Vab had about, what?, three attacks, the rest were about his own sorry ass and K4E's breats. Weak. Garlador gets my vote because he did what he was supposed to, and that was to Battle.
That your best attack?
You still don't know what you lack.
- Okay, Garlador started off weak. The transition is off, and it was pretty unoriginal. Sorry.
Why don't you go for the ball-sack,
Or do you even have one? Are you that wack?
- While I'm not keen on the "wack" part, this caught my attention. Vab asked for it, and Garlador answered. Why didn't Vab go for the ball-sack? He went for K4E (who, I hope, doesn't have one.) Garlador begs for Vab to hit low, but he never did. And then he questions whether Vab even had the balls to insult him. I liked that. Low, and redeeming.
Suck it up, loser, and get outta my way.
You think that all I have is sweet things to say.
- A firm ending to tell him to back down, but pretty pointless. I like the rage, but it could have been directed much better. Reference back to Vab could go somewhere...
Screw you! You don't know what the hell you're sayin'!
You think that you'll get away without payin'?
- The infamous "screw you" instead of "fuck you." Actually, I commend the decision, as it's certainly more original than the predicted f-bomb. A surprise, if you will. Again, mocking of logic is pretty poor, but the threat of making Vab pay is nice, and it flows nicely, too, albeit with a poor transition.
Be a man, you shallow, worthless prick!
Your so-called rhymes makes me sick;
- Oo! Another attack! So-called rhymes and the challenge to "be a man" really got me involved. Mainly because, after all Vab's bitching, that's exactly what he needed to do. And, on a personal note, his rhymes did make me sick, too.
So bad and unoriginal that I think I'm gonna hurl.
Do you get off makin' fun of my girl?
- I don't like the transition, but the mocking of the rhymes originality to the point of vomitting is inspired, IMO. And the thought of Vab being so twisted as to get off making fun of K4E is interesting as well. And, thankfully, Garlador covers her back, however briefly. Actually, thank god he DIDN'T dwell on K4E. His focus was Vab, as it should have been.
Why don't you get one yourself. Who's your pick?
Or can you even get one since you don't have a dick?
- Another challenge. Good, Good. I don't like how it flows, but I like the way he logically states that K4E is a good thing, and that Vab doesn't have that and might not be able to get a good thing.
You can't make the grade. You just won't pass.
You want a kiss, too? Well, pucker up and kiss my ass.
- Degrading his rhymes again. And, I absolutely love how he replies to Vab's comment about "kissing" from K4E by coyly replying to kiss his ass. Great stuff, even if it is only secondary rhyming.
You call me weak, you call me lame.
Hell, it's all the same, but this is MY game.
- Generalizes ALL of Vab's comments into worthless babble, then replies that it's nothing when you're above it. Coy. Very coy, for better or worse. At least Gar's on a power trip and not Cryin' to his momma like Vab was.
You face the master and you're headin' for disaster.
So, you arrogant bastard, you see this is over faster
- The master and disaster bit was uninspired. Weak, so that it missed the punch it was meant to deliver. The arrogant bastard remark, though, was rather good, and it all flows so very well.
Than it even begun. The lyrics you spun
Ain't nothing. You haven't won. You're over; done.
- Again attacks Vab. This already has Garlador keeping his promise of a 10x1 ratio for the insultes on K4E. All he's done is mock him. That's what this is about! This is a battle, and Garlador's battling, while Vab's whining. His lyrics are nothing? It's over before it had even bgun? He's over and done? That's what I wanted to hear from Vab, expected from Vab, but failed to hear from Vab.
Can you always rap this rhyme? Can you blow 'em away every time?
All you do is bitch and wine. Boy, your ass is mine!
- Another challenge! Great! Internal rhyme at it's best, and free-style, too! And, Garlador's comment that cinched my decision: "All you do is bitch and wine." Yep, that covers Vab, alright. And the remark of "your ass is mine", while good, didn't flow and, yes, changed subject pretty abruptly, mid-rhyme.
At least I have a name. I have my claim to fame.
All you got is shame and pitiful ramblings, so tame.
- Garlador on an ego trip. Can't say I agree. But, I do like how he attacked Vab AGAIN (for like the 50th time) and mocked his rhymes AGAIN! But I can't say I like the flow.
You wanna go insane? You wanna play my game?
Can you take the pain, soak it up like acid rain?
- The comment that if Vab plays Garlador's "game" he'll go "insane" I think is great and original, flows well, and is one of the better stuff he wrote. Then, ANOTHER challenge. "Can you take the pain?" Then he takes it a step further, describing the pain as soaked up acid rain. Nice, but I still feel he could have worded it better.
You coward! You dork! You don't know how far you sunk!
What, you think you can get up and get crunk?
- Okay, while I like the true comment of "coward", the rest in this part is pretty bland. I like how Garlador mentioned that vab sunk low (status wise), most likely in reference to the K4E stab, but it could have used some work, and the change to "get up and get crunk" simply doesn't pass with me. The weakest part of the rap. Also, "dork" is one of the least aggressive terms I've heard in a long time. I was surprised.
You're nothing more than a no-name punk!
Bet the only time you talk sense is when you're dead drunk.
- A "no-name punk?" Well, that was pretty good, since that's what he is. While it should have been good, it was unnecessarily true. But to say that Vab is so screwed up that he only makes sense when drunk made me smiling and grateful that Garlador was back on his attacking path. A funny, tongue-in-cheek insult.
How sad. You're that bad. What's the matter? Gettin' mad?
You think you're the next big fad? You're 'bout as cool as my dad.
- Oh, I LOVE the line "bout as cool as my dad." OUCH! Tactile and efficient. You mocks Vab further by saying the entire thing is sad (that he only makes sense when drunk, and then spurs him further by adding "gettin' mad" (and I can imagine the mocking tone involved.) Then he destroys the grand image of Vab being the next "fad" with that wonderful line representing all things out-of-date.
You can't compete, so accept defeat.
Don't make me repeat that you can't keep a beat.
- Another challenge, and more mocking of Vab's work, but the rhymes are pretty uninspired. But they flow and work.
I could go on and on, talk 'bout your sorry friends and mother;
You brought K4E into this; why not another?
- I wish Garlador had gone on and on, as he only hints at the potential of mocking Vab's mother. Too bad. But, he also brings K4E back into the mix, but thankfully, he doesn't defend her, but uses her as a vessel for another insult, stating that he has more of something then Vab for a reason. I don't like the way it flows, or the beat, but it's another great attack.
I got friends, but where do you turn to in the end?
On whom can you depend? Who do you have to defend?
- Questions, questions. Questions with no answers. I can only imagine. Regrettfully, my imagination is low, so the stinging remarks don't quite win me over.
You'll wind up dead, and nothing more will be said.
- One line. I was surprised. However, even though it's out of place, it really bites down hard. To say that vab will die and no one will remember him is COLD. Thank God.
Your sorry ass won't get a tear; I'm everything you should fear.
- Okay, Garlador has changed into the single lines again, which irks me, but the saving grace is the great insult. Vab "won't get a tear". Low and wicked. But I hate the transition to "everything you should fear".
Back off and step down. You can't shock with sound.
Every pound for pound will nail you to the ground.
- Back to couplets. Another dare and insult. vab can't "shock with sound", meaning he can't get under Garldor's skin with weak rhymes. And the "pound for pound will nail you to the ground" I think is reference to the weight of Garlador's OWN rhymes tearing Vab apart. A vague attack, but one which has my mild imagination burning. I liked it. And who said this part made no fucking sense? I don't have an imagination, and I understand it.
Leave you for dead, like the scum that you are.
When you measure up to me, you're only sub-par.
- Uninspired, but at least another attack. Thank god for the constant attacks. Leaving him for dead implies that Garlador won't kill him, but rather make him suffer. I like the dark side of it all. The "sub-par" part left me wanting, though.
You lay it on shallow, never make it thick;
Just get the hell out of my face, you friggin' prick!
- Mocking the rhymes, then the person, AGAIN! Are we in the triple digits, now? (compared to the singles with Vab?) I don't like the transition, or the restating of prick (pretty unoriginal), but at least it got me to pay attention, but it's pretty weak compared to the rest.
You want more? Do you know what's in store?
You'll wind up sore and poor facin' Garlador!
- Oo! Another challenge? Another dare? And another insult and attack from Garlador. I haven't seen the guy bitch yet. Bravo.
Now it's over and done. Wake up to reality!
What? No longer havin' fun? Just wait till your
fatality!
I like the finality of it. Sure, he ended it like the first, but he ALWAYS ends it like that, so I've come to like it. More mocking and tough talking, and then a warning of things to come. This is why I liked Garlador's stuff better. He simply did what the thread asked for. He ATTACKED and BATTLED Vab, EASILY outnumbering and clobbering him with lyrical violence. Vab had about, what?, three attacks, the rest were about his own sorry ass and K4E's breats. Weak. Garlador gets my vote because he did what he was supposed to, and that was to Battle.
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Once again, I didn't read it. Too bad you did all that typing.
The point is : Vab killed him. Gar didn't make sense, his rhymes were overused and repeated, he just plain sucked.
I have nothing against Gar as a person, but please! Keep your day job.
And while you contsantly try to prove me wrong, how about we battle? Just to settle this?
The point is : Vab killed him. Gar didn't make sense, his rhymes were overused and repeated, he just plain sucked.
I have nothing against Gar as a person, but please! Keep your day job.
And while you contsantly try to prove me wrong, how about we battle? Just to settle this?
Lucid_Ninja, I generally don't pick on the new guys, but you did piss me off on purpose. Who the hell are you to be trash talking me? You're a nobody with nothing on this forum? I don't give a FUCK if you were the Queen of England, on this forum, there are different rules and different laws by which we live. I have lived my life watching people I love get killed and torn from me, people I thought I could protect, so don't you DARE TELL ME you know anything about me! Have you ever had your girlfriend die? Have you ever had your father beat you and your mother? Have you ever got SHOT in the FUCKING shoulder?! Don't you DARE TALK to me about MY ideals and MY life. Don't you DARE tell me that those I have left are nothing but worthless SLUTS. Don't FUCKING DARE tell me how I can live my own Damn Life! God Damn you, you sorry SON OF A BITCH! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU! GOD DAMN IT, FUCK YOU! You think I fucking ENJOYED what you said? Why the FUCK DID you say it, if not for the sole purpose of causing me grief and anger! Do you know what it's like? Do you FUCKING KNOW WHAT IT'S LIKE to live my life? Maybe you would like the scars and to shed the tears and to see her face burned into your mind every damn day of your fucking life, huh? Maybe YOU would fucking like to see her your friend raped and tortured and killed? Maybe YOU would like to hear the news that your best friend committed suicide and that the new girl you love just tried to do the same? YOU FILTHY BASTARD! GOD DAMN YOU, YOU BASTARD! Make fun of my all the hell you want! I can take it! I've taken it EVERY FUCKING DAY OF MY LIFE! But when you bring them, those I love, into this, I SWEAR I might kill you! I've nearly killed people before, and God help me, I would GLADLY spent the rest of my life ROTTING in some jail cell knowing a nothing punk like YOU was out of my life forever? Or maybe you'd like my life, instead? Does it sound FUCKING FUN?!!! DOES IT?!!! Screw it all! I'm tired of it. Tired of it all. Do you know how many times I've thought about ending my life? Would you like to see the scars on MY wrists? And it's all because of fucking cunts like you. Don't you DARE bring this up again, do you understand me? You won't think this is so FUCKING FUNNY when someone gets hurt. This is a warning. DON'T PISS ME OFF AGAIN, FUCKER!
| Lucid_Ninja Wrote: Once again, I didn't read it. Too bad you did all that typing. The point is : Vab killed him. Gar didn't make sense, his rhymes were overused and repeated, he just plain sucked. I have nothing against Gar as a person, but please! Keep your day job. And while you contsantly try to prove me wrong, how about we battle? Just to settle this? |
Any time... and, just as a friendly reminder, I'd would back off. Serious. It ain't funny or fun any more. You don't know what kind of horrible shit Garlador has gone through. I think he said it much better than me. Now, if you have any more questions about whether Garlador can get angry or what it's like when he blows up... see for yourself. This thread isn't even fun anymore, and really, everyone's to blame. I spurred it on, I'm sorry Garlador. I'm just as much to blame as anyone else. I.. I don't know if I want to continue, not like this. This was supposed to be fun and good times, but people pushed the wrong buttons. I guess I'll stay around if Garlador get's 'x'-ed. But... I really don't want to stay. Some of you guys are real assholes, you know that? Since you didn't put it, Garlador: "Fatality."
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Dude Saxtard I know you like Gar and all but lay off his jock. I read everything you wrote and I lost all respect for you. How someone could be so biased is ridiculous. Let it go buddy. Vab just do one more flow and diss kitana so we can see this demon unleashed in Gar. Lets see Gars full potential so there is no bitching by his groupies.
C'mon, I listen to nothing but rap! Screw technicles. If this is a rap battle, what I look for is not grammar (thank god), structure, beat, rhythm, bars, or whatever. I look for original and frequent ATTACKS. That's what you do in a Battle, no? And, when it came down to what was important, Garlador had about a 20x1 lead over Vab's attacks, and that takes a great deal of effort and such. Vab didn't really do his "full potential", I think, and instead bitched and whined. Now, tell me how that is a good rap attack? If you can, I'll be impressed.
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Alright Sax, I'm sorry too... We did elevate it a bit too much. Let's lay off and just leave it up to the normal voters to decide.
GJ, I agree with the bit about being low... If Vab brought it out of Gar, then now we get to see Gar at full and see who should really advance.
GJ, I agree with the bit about being low... If Vab brought it out of Gar, then now we get to see Gar at full and see who should really advance.
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God blessed Gar chill the fuck out. Dont take shit so damn personal online. There words. Just words on your computer screen. Yes life fucking sucks but dont fucking flip out over something so unimportant. Get used to people talking shit. Your being irrational.
Saxtard, lay off, okay? I can't defend my own back. I wrote what I wrote. I did what I had to do. If it doesn't measure up, then I'm done, and that's the end of it. But it sure as hell wasn't for lack of effort. I could easily have done something different, but that's what I wrote. I could have done more internal rhyme, different styles, language set-up, etc., but I didn't. It was free-style, and I typed it all out as fast as I could, never stopping to check to see if it made sense, if my grammar was correct, or if my attacks were good enough, but that's what I wrote. I won't do another. Vab can hit me all he wants now, but nothing he says matters any more. Nothing anyone says matters to me anymore. I'm sorry I lost my temper, and I ask for your forgiveness, Lucid_Ninja, and everyond else on the board. Despite what people say, I was out of line, and I believe what I said was too low. I'm sorry. That's not how I want to be. Memories are just that; memories. I'm sorry for bringing dampening and personal material into this. I won't do another verse. We vote now. Vab- Me. Those were the rules. Two verses and then we vote. Look at them both, and vote. Simple as that. A simple rap contest on a secluded forum doesn't mean much in the long run, anyway, right? Again, I can't apologize enough for the things I wrote. I wish I could undo what I said (but I don't believe in the "edit" option.) It ends here, one way or another, right? I will refrain from comment until the conclusion. Once again... I'm.... so very sorry.
Fatality.
Fatality.
Well, this has been enough angst for me too. I think everyone owes everyone a big apology. I'd give you guys a hug, but I'm stuck in Ireland, so I'll see you guys in the morning (for you AMERICAN people, that is.) Isn't it midnight there? Anyway, I'm sorry, too.
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I cant stay mad at you Saxtard. Your Irish.
Holy SHIT! This is the first thread I come to as a new member of MKO. Damn, you people got some serious issues! *sweats* Okay, I feel very vernable right now. Um... are all your threads like a fucked up episode of the "Real Life"? I guess that's off topic. I read all four raps, read every review, and have made my decision, and it sure as hell ain't a sympathy vote. I'm one of those "stufu newbies" saxtard mentioned, and I'm voting for Garlador for the the simple reason that, yeah, Garlador was offensive (not language, but as in battle), while Vab was defensive. I don't even know who the hell either of them are! Anyway, I liked Garlador's shit best (and they may be because I'm a sucker for MK references in rap), but Vab's was good, too. Too bad he didn't go against Kitana4ever. She wouldn't have made it.
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Gar, there is no such thing as too low. You said what you said just as you wrote what you wrote, and you apologized, and that's what matters. Apology accepted, and I apologize as well.
And no, not every thread is like this. We jsut got carried away. :-p
Edit : Wow. Truthfully, I didn't even SEE what you posted up there about me till now. Now I know why you apologized, and I really accept it deeply!
And no, not every thread is like this. We jsut got carried away. :-p
Edit : Wow. Truthfully, I didn't even SEE what you posted up there about me till now. Now I know why you apologized, and I really accept it deeply!
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lmao, Gar you aren't only with problems...
Watching friend get pulled of life support knowing in a way it's your fault.
Seeing another friends brains all over the wall.
Being upto your shins in debt...
Whatever
only 3 right now cause i have to go take a shower now so i'm not late for work.
And you say i'm a whiny bitch.
alex~Vab
Watching friend get pulled of life support knowing in a way it's your fault.
Seeing another friends brains all over the wall.
Being upto your shins in debt...
Whatever
only 3 right now cause i have to go take a shower now so i'm not late for work.
And you say i'm a whiny bitch.
alex~Vab
At least he didn't whine in his rap. And, forgive me since I'm new, but I thought all this angst was settled? Why the hell are you trying to start something again? His reply wasn't even directed at you. Good god, you people are funny.
Damn poeples, take it easy. The battle was closer than what I am hearing you all say. To me, G fell of a little bit and Vab step his game up a little bit. Add a good beat to Garlador's lyrics and that ish would be crunk...but Vab was battle intensive. Vab knows how to paint a nice story with his rhymes while bashing. His verse would have been perfect if he spend as much time as he did dissing others; I am not saying it wasn't a good addition 'cause it made his ish sound good but its a battle so he should have limited that with like two lines and go back at Garlador. Garlador has skills and on a normal day he and Vab are evenly matched. It would have been cool if these guys battlled like in the quarter finals or semi finals 'cause I would hat e to see one of them go.
Oh yeah, ItsVab gets my vote by the way. Lean back remix is off the chain.
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| razorxz Wrote: Lean back remix is off the chain. |
If you're talking about the one with Mase and Eminem, yes sir
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I leave for you boys to play nice for a day and this is what happens. Well as I stated in my second post regarding the battle between Vab and Garlador, my vote was still going with Garlador, despite the fact that Vab's 2nd verse was definitely better than his 1st one. I also decided to disregard the comments made at my expense for numerous reasons.
Vab I'm sure you are not aware that I have been at these boards for quite awhile, and I'm a respected member here. I'm well known and well liked by many people. I'm a good person and I have good things to say about everyone, therefore I will not be flaming you. Rather just laughing at the energy that you spurned against me in retaliation to nothing that I did to you.
However Vab, you're rap verses were well written. As a fellow writer I do commend you, but I feel that Garlador's were more intelligent, better written, and hold inference in which make his raps more enjoyable to read because the insults were subtly placed and not boldly out in the open by using an over abundance of swear words or slang which only hinderounces a person's true potential as an artist and a writer. Either way though, your raps were good.
(Sidenote: You can attack the *Smooches* thing all you want, but it doesn't matter. I did that a long time ago as a joke and everyone liked it. As a matter of fact there was a competition going to see who had the most *Smooches* from me at one point. Its a joke, get over it, and move on. Its become a calling card for me that I add into several posts and pm's.)
Lucid you always have not been around long enough to understand much of anything that goes on here. While I respect your vote as a boardmember, I find your choice of words and lack of respect towards others in general very vile. Hopefully you'll see that people who are like that here aren't taken very seriously.
Saxtard, I applaud your efforts in trying to "breakdown" both raps. And defend me in certain spots. Thank you, but I'm not at all offended by what Vab said. This is a rap battle, and the rules are the "make fun" of your opponent, I just hope that if he advances next time he actually remembers who his opponent is and does not strike at someone else.
Garlie, hun, you and I have talked about these things before. I love you with all of my heart babe, but the best thing to do is calm down because its not worth getting heated up over. Calm, cool, and collected is always the best and most mature way to act. If they choose to act otherwise that's their choice. Do not lower yourself or your morals, or your standards to compete at their level.
Now that everyone has said their side lets move on...shall we? As I stated in my prior post, my vote still goes for Garlador.
Vab I'm sure you are not aware that I have been at these boards for quite awhile, and I'm a respected member here. I'm well known and well liked by many people. I'm a good person and I have good things to say about everyone, therefore I will not be flaming you. Rather just laughing at the energy that you spurned against me in retaliation to nothing that I did to you.
However Vab, you're rap verses were well written. As a fellow writer I do commend you, but I feel that Garlador's were more intelligent, better written, and hold inference in which make his raps more enjoyable to read because the insults were subtly placed and not boldly out in the open by using an over abundance of swear words or slang which only hinderounces a person's true potential as an artist and a writer. Either way though, your raps were good.
(Sidenote: You can attack the *Smooches* thing all you want, but it doesn't matter. I did that a long time ago as a joke and everyone liked it. As a matter of fact there was a competition going to see who had the most *Smooches* from me at one point. Its a joke, get over it, and move on. Its become a calling card for me that I add into several posts and pm's.)
Lucid you always have not been around long enough to understand much of anything that goes on here. While I respect your vote as a boardmember, I find your choice of words and lack of respect towards others in general very vile. Hopefully you'll see that people who are like that here aren't taken very seriously.
Saxtard, I applaud your efforts in trying to "breakdown" both raps. And defend me in certain spots. Thank you, but I'm not at all offended by what Vab said. This is a rap battle, and the rules are the "make fun" of your opponent, I just hope that if he advances next time he actually remembers who his opponent is and does not strike at someone else.
Garlie, hun, you and I have talked about these things before. I love you with all of my heart babe, but the best thing to do is calm down because its not worth getting heated up over. Calm, cool, and collected is always the best and most mature way to act. If they choose to act otherwise that's their choice. Do not lower yourself or your morals, or your standards to compete at their level.
Now that everyone has said their side lets move on...shall we? As I stated in my prior post, my vote still goes for Garlador.
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"Lucid you always have not been around long enough to understand much of anything that goes on here. While I respect your vote as a boardmember, I find your choice of words and lack of respect towards others in general very vile. Hopefully you'll see that people who are like that here aren't taken very seriously.
Saxtard, I applaud your efforts in trying to "breakdown" both raps"
I broke the raps down, insulted Gar, voted for Vab.
Sax broke raps down, insulted Vab, voted for Gar. Why am I the evil gnome here while he ends up being the good guy?
And K4E, the reason that Vab insulted you was not because he was mad he was lost, but because he lost in ALL unfairness. You admitted in your post, you were biased, of course you weren't going to vote for Vab. That's shit.
And howam I still the bad guy? My choice of words? Uh, honey? Look at gar's post. To quote him : "FUCK YOU. FUCK YOU. FUCK YOU."
Yes, my choice of words is definetly more evil than what he ahs posted.
And Gar, you seriously are not the only one who has a hard life to live. Ever seen your best friend turn on you in a second for money? Ever had a friend like a sister light herself on fire? No? Well then, don't fucking judge me and act like I have it easy.
Only God can judge me.
Edit : Nevermind. I didn't need this to escalate as far as it did. I didn't want it to either, but it did. I'm going to stop the flaming now, even if it is just defending myself. I'll just shutup and vote.
Saxtard, I applaud your efforts in trying to "breakdown" both raps"
I broke the raps down, insulted Gar, voted for Vab.
Sax broke raps down, insulted Vab, voted for Gar. Why am I the evil gnome here while he ends up being the good guy?
And K4E, the reason that Vab insulted you was not because he was mad he was lost, but because he lost in ALL unfairness. You admitted in your post, you were biased, of course you weren't going to vote for Vab. That's shit.
And howam I still the bad guy? My choice of words? Uh, honey? Look at gar's post. To quote him : "FUCK YOU. FUCK YOU. FUCK YOU."
Yes, my choice of words is definetly more evil than what he ahs posted.
And Gar, you seriously are not the only one who has a hard life to live. Ever seen your best friend turn on you in a second for money? Ever had a friend like a sister light herself on fire? No? Well then, don't fucking judge me and act like I have it easy.
Only God can judge me.
Edit : Nevermind. I didn't need this to escalate as far as it did. I didn't want it to either, but it did. I'm going to stop the flaming now, even if it is just defending myself. I'll just shutup and vote.
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