Yay, then it has finally started!!! Or as Shangy would put it:
IT HAS BEGUN!!!

Excellent Rabid Wolverine! Thank you. Nobody else update please...from here on out the Tournament dictates that story...so now it's only a matter of waiting for the first match.

Time for the tournament,hopefully it doesnt take long for Brodeur to get the site finished,great job to everyone doing the story,good luck to all characters.


Raiden is in the Higher Plain making a speech to the warriors there.

Raiden:We must be ready,the tournament is coming nearer and nearer.We must be ready to fight,we may need to fight eachother,but if we do,it is for the good of us all.

The wind picks up outside,the windows fly open as a faint voice is heard."Come to the palace of the king."

Everyone looks around wondering whats going on.
Raiden: "I guess that means it is time to go."

Edenia

Sabre and Katian are fighting the Kings army,destroying them together,the winds pick up again."Come to the palace of the king."
Sabre "It is time,the tournament is to begin,let's go."
Sabre and KaTian charge through the soldiers leaving dead bodys everywhere,and make their way to the palace.

Outside of portal

Keillienatan is celebrating with her army when she hears a voice."Come to the palace of the king."

Keillienatan "The time has come..."

Not far from the living forest

Piroh and Kilvan are walking,the wind picks up heavily."Come to the palace of the king."
Piroh "Time to leave."
Kilvan "It has begun."

The Dragon King's dungeon.

A guard walks up to Amanuet,Sareena and Deceptame.

Guard "You can leave,the tournament is beginning,you will be in it,be gone."

In the Abyss

Sensui is waiting as Hatsuma returns.They both hear the noise."Come to the palace of the king."

Sensui "Hahaha,time to kill the mortals." Hatsuma "It is indeed."

Nasha's lair.

Nasha is awaiting the tournament then hears the noise."Come to the palace of the king."

Nasha "The day of reckoning is here."

Sindel's Palace

Liana is about to leave for the tournament."Come to the palace of the king."

Liana "Time to go."

Dragon kings palace.

All the parties arrive at the same time,they begin to yell at eachother,Ravage walks up to them and stares,all the yelling is still going on.
The Dragon King walks out of the palace.

Dragon King "Silence!The tournament will begin,get ready to compete in the most brutal tournament ever...MORTAL KOMBAT!"

LOL, thanks, I wondered what happened to them!!!

Perfect!!!

jaded-raven Wrote: LOL, thanks, I wondered what happened to them!!! Perfect!!!

Sorry about forgetting about them.

Sorry I didn't update this earlier, I was at work all day. BTW how do you like my new look i.e. sig and avatar?
The fighters from different realms are now gathered in one place, tension instantly builds up. Sensui and Vandon instantly lock eyes with each other. Both are excited that the other one is her.
Sensui steps up to to Vandon and stares him dead in the eyes."Let's finish this."(Smiling demonicly.)
Vandon"I sence a change in you since our last encounter. I hope this change is for the better. Today, we leave it all in the ring."
Vandon stretches out his hand, Sensui does the same and the two fighters shake hands, all the while having a power match. Their energies clash causing strong winds to pickup.
Vandon"If we are not fortunate to meat in the ring, believe this, we will see each other again"
Sensui bows his head and the two seperate. Hatsuma stands still like a statue, starring at Gabrielle for a second. Their eyes meet and then instantly seperate. Hatsuma starts chanting an old spell and teleports Nasha to the Tournamet site along with Celestial.
Nasha"What is this?"
Hatsuma"You said once before that it would bring you great pleasure to take, Celestials life with your own hands, here you may get that opportunity."
Ravage scans the feild analyzing his opponets.
*Inside his visor*
Ravage scans everybody's vitals. His conciuos circut uploads the data from each of the fighters there, including Vandon, Sensui, and even the Dragon King."SCAN COMPLETE initialise combat mode in 3,2,1." Ravages liquid like frame opens, releasing pressure as he gets ready.
Nightwolf and Sub-Zero search the field for an old friend.
Nightwolf"I don't think he's comming."
Sub-Zero"I don't believe so either. Dissapointing"
All of a sudden a cloud of smoke appears and a familiar shadow can be seen inside, along with the glowing red eyes.
Smoke"So it's finally started. The gloves are off, the chains are tightend, it's time to throw down."

Awesome new pics man!

TomTaz Wrote: Awesome new pics man!

New pics?? WHERE???

LOL No Jaded, I'm talking about Smoke's Avatar and Sig. No new characters.

Damn, I was hoping there were some new character art... :(

Here's my picture of Sabre,not the best drawing but its what he looks like,im doing a colored version in paint since the hand colored copy gets too much color flushed out.BTW,the things in his hands is actually the tip of the thrice dragon,not fingers.

slim3ddi3g Wrote: Shadaloo, dude, I had Piroh be with Lianna and Sindel in Edenia. Now that you have Piroh with Kilvan, we have to put SIndel, Lianna, and of course Tanya since she's along Sindel. Let's find a way to put them together, and explain how Kilvan got in the picture...

Did you? I must have missed it. Hold on, let me look back...
EDIT: OK, I see it now. thing is, I had Piroh appearing along with Kilvan in the wastelands around the 4th page or so. Piroh is Kilvan's sidekick. They're inseperable. So I think what needs to be explained is just how it was that Piroh has been with Lianna all this time... EDIT 2: Ok, I've fixed my post where they're in the Living Forest. Piroh does have the ability to teleport. In your next post, just have Lianna ask Piroh something like "Where do you keep disappearing off to?" and have him make up an excuse. Meantime, I think I'll introduce Vortex into the mix...

Ok, so here we go: After many painstaking hours in MS Paint: I present Kilvan and Piroh! Sorry if the picture sucks, I'm a way better artist with a pencil and paper than with a mouse...

WOW.. I knew you'd get it done. Nice work it doesn't suck at all...I wish I could do as well drawing in MS Paint! I love his look!

I know we're not suppose to update the story, but Celestial is still out of the picture. I'm finding a way to put him in.

Celestial is already at the Mortal Kombat Tournament. Hatsuma uses an old ninjitsu spell to warp him and Nasha to his location.

-Noob's Lair-

The shadow ninja teleports in still carrying Celestial wrapped in weds.
Noob drops him, and burns the webs, freeing Celestial.
Celestial grabs Noob by the throat.

Noob: (choking) If you kill me, you will never make to the Dragon King.
Celestial: I don't need you to go to him.
Noob: But I will make sure you GET to him. Mortal Kombat is about to begin.
Celestial: (releasing him) Mortal Kombat? Is it almost going to start?
VOICE: It has begun.

Celestial turns around, and to his demise, SHao Khan is alive, standing in front of him.

Celestial: You bastard. I ought to kill you.
Shao Khan: If you do, you will never see Jerrod.
Celestial: (angry) You mock me. You bastard killed my partner.
Shao Khan: Killed him. That son of a bitch sold his land for his life. I let him live if he never returned to Edenia.
Celestial: (angry) You lie!
Shao Khan: You really think? I'm evil and coniving, but no liar. (laughs) Well, yes I am, but I speak you the truth. He is alive.
Noob: It's true he is.

Celestial stays quiet. He has believed them.

Shao Khan: I'm here to ask you to join me.
Celestial: Me join you? SHao Khan? (laughs)
Shao Khan: Just for now. In Mortal Kombat.
Celestial: (walking away) I will never do such thing.
Shao Khan: I will give you your own army. ANother army of vampires.
Celestial: I had an army. I need no more.
Shao Khan: Nasha, Queen of Arachnid, has called her army just to get you from getting to Mortal Kombat. They will hold you hostage until she gets back and fullfill her prophecy.
Celestial: I;m not afraid.
Shao Khan: You know what happens if they wake up RIktor, the Million year old Arachnid.
Celestial: They will bring chaos to all that is living.
Shao Khan: YEs indeed. They say they just want peace and not be involved with wars, btu in reality they want to bring their leader back and overrule everything. Let me give an army, an army like you. I have thousands of people waiting to kneel before you.
Celestial: What's in it for you?
Shao Khan: You should know that by now. I want power back. FULL FUCKING POWER!
Celestial: I don;'t really trust you, but I accept your army.

Shao Khan gives him an evil grin. He opens twop wooden doors. They all walk in.
There are thousands of men and women celebrating, drinking, having orgies.

Shao Khan: (to all) Ladies and gentlemen. Upon you I have brought you Clestial, Lord of the Vampires. He has accepted in adopting y ou all.

They all cheer in excitement.
Clestial wastes no time and begins to feed himself by biting people's necks one by one. He continues to do it every single body.

SHao Khan and Noob Saibot are in the back, watching this. Shao Khan laughs.

Noob: Master, why is his blood so important?
Shao Khan: He holds the original blood of the first vampire, Dracula. It's said to be very powerful.
Noob: Are you willing to help him once he destroys Nasha and the Dragon King?
Shao Khan: Have you learned nothing, Noob? I will turns him to Nasha at the end, and have her wake Riktor up, and make him align with me. (laughs)

Celestial has bitten everyone in the cave. They are all bleeding to death.
Clestial floats in the air, and then transform into a huge ass ugly vampire bat. He grabs his sword and stabs both his palms, and the puncture hundred holes in his stomach and makes lots of cuts in his chest. He drops the sword, and spreads his hands. All the blood squirts out from his boddy like if it were rain.
The people below shower the blood, and beginf to drink eat.

Celestial: Eat my babies. It's time to fight. Mortal Kombat has begun and is waiting for us.

-SKIES-

Celstial is flying through the dark night, and soon his new clan of thousand vampires are right behind.

slim3ddi3g Wrote: -Noob's Lair- The shadow ninja teleports in still carrying Celestial wrapped in weds. Noob drops him, and burns the webs, freeing Celestial. Celestial grabs Noob by the throat. Noob: (choking) If you kill me, you will never make to the Dragon King. Celestial: I don't need you to go to him. Noob: But I will make sure you GET to him. Mortal Kombat is about to begin. Celestial: (releasing him) Mortal Kombat? Is it almost going to start? VOICE: It has begun. Celestial turns around, and to his demise, SHao Khan is alive, standing in front of him. Celestial: You bastard. I ought to kill you. Shao Khan: If you do, you will never see Jerrod. Celestial: (angry) You mock me. You bastard killed my partner. Shao Khan: Killed him. That son of a bitch sold his land for his life. I let him live if he never returned to Edenia. Celestial: (angry) You lie! Shao Khan: You really think? I'm evil and coniving, but no liar. (laughs) Well, yes I am, but I speak you the truth. He is alive. Noob: It's true he is. Celestial stays quiet. He has believed them. Shao Khan: I'm here to ask you to join me. Celestial: Me join you? SHao Khan? (laughs) Shao Khan: Just for now. In Mortal Kombat. Celestial: (walking away) I will never do such thing. Shao Khan: I will give you your own army. ANother army of vampires. Celestial: I had an army. I need no more. Shao Khan: Nasha, Queen of Arachnid, has called her army just to get you from getting to Mortal Kombat. They will hold you hostage until she gets back and fullfill her prophecy. Celestial: I;m not afraid. Shao Khan: You know what happens if they wake up RIktor, the Million year old Arachnid. Celestial: They will bring chaos to all that is living. Shao Khan: YEs indeed. They say they just want peace and not be involved with wars, btu in reality they want to bring their leader back and overrule everything. Let me give an army, an army like you. I have thousands of people waiting to kneel before you. Celestial: What's in it for you? Shao Khan: You should know that by now. I want power back. FULL FUCKING POWER! Celestial: I don;'t really trust you, but I accept your army. Shao Khan gives him an evil grin. He opens twop wooden doors. They all walk in. There are thousands of men and women celebrating, drinking, having orgies. Shao Khan: (to all) Ladies and gentlemen. Upon you I have brought you Clestial, Lord of the Vampires. He has accepted in adopting y ou all. They all cheer in excitement. Clestial wastes no time and begins to feed himself by biting people's necks one by one. He continues to do it every single body. SHao Khan and Noob Saibot are in the back, watching this. Shao Khan laughs. Noob: Master, why is his blood so important? Shao Khan: He holds the original blood of the first vampire, Dracula. It's said to be very powerful. Noob: Are you willing to help him once he destroys Nasha and the Dragon King? Shao Khan: Have you learned nothing, Noob? I will turns him to Nasha at the end, and have her wake Riktor up, and make him align with me. (laughs) Celestial has bitten everyone in the cave. They are all bleeding to death. Clestial floats in the air, and then transform into a huge ass ugly vampire bat. He grabs his sword and stabs both his palms, and the puncture hundred holes in his stomach and makes lots of cuts in his chest. He drops the sword, and spreads his hands. All the blood squirts out from his boddy like if it were rain. The people below shower the blood, and beginf to drink eat. Celestial: Eat my babies. It's time to fight. Mortal Kombat has begun and is waiting for us. -SKIES- Celstial is flying through the dark night, and soon his new clan of thousand vampires are right behind.

No offense guys but I like this way of bringing in Celestial much better, plus it brings in Shao Kahn who everyone seems to have forgotten I brought back into the picture. Good work. Love the way Celestrial raises his army.

TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: slim3ddi3g Wrote: -Noob's Lair- The shadow ninja teleports in still carrying Celestial wrapped in weds. Noob drops him, and burns the webs, freeing Celestial. Celestial grabs Noob by the throat. Noob: (choking) If you kill me, you will never make to the Dragon King. Celestial: I don't need you to go to him. Noob: But I will make sure you GET to him. Mortal Kombat is about to begin. Celestial: (releasing him) Mortal Kombat? Is it almost going to start? VOICE: It has begun. Celestial turns around, and to his demise, SHao Khan is alive, standing in front of him. Celestial: You bastard. I ought to kill you. Shao Khan: If you do, you will never see Jerrod. Celestial: (angry) You mock me. You bastard killed my partner. Shao Khan: Killed him. That son of a bitch sold his land for his life. I let him live if he never returned to Edenia. Celestial: (angry) You lie! Shao Khan: You really think? I'm evil and coniving, but no liar. (laughs) Well, yes I am, but I speak you the truth. He is alive. Noob: It's true he is. Celestial stays quiet. He has believed them. Shao Khan: I'm here to ask you to join me. Celestial: Me join you? SHao Khan? (laughs) Shao Khan: Just for now. In Mortal Kombat. Celestial: (walking away) I will never do such thing. Shao Khan: I will give you your own army. ANother army of vampires. Celestial: I had an army. I need no more. Shao Khan: Nasha, Queen of Arachnid, has called her army just to get you from getting to Mortal Kombat. They will hold you hostage until she gets back and fullfill her prophecy. Celestial: I;m not afraid. Shao Khan: You know what happens if they wake up RIktor, the Million year old Arachnid. Celestial: They will bring chaos to all that is living. Shao Khan: YEs indeed. They say they just want peace and not be involved with wars, btu in reality they want to bring their leader back and overrule everything. Let me give an army, an army like you. I have thousands of people waiting to kneel before you. Celestial: What's in it for you? Shao Khan: You should know that by now. I want power back. FULL FUCKING POWER! Celestial: I don;'t really trust you, but I accept your army. Shao Khan gives him an evil grin. He opens twop wooden doors. They all walk in. There are thousands of men and women celebrating, drinking, having orgies. Shao Khan: (to all) Ladies and gentlemen. Upon you I have brought you Clestial, Lord of the Vampires. He has accepted in adopting y ou all. They all cheer in excitement. Clestial wastes no time and begins to feed himself by biting people's necks one by one. He continues to do it every single body. SHao Khan and Noob Saibot are in the back, watching this. Shao Khan laughs. Noob: Master, why is his blood so important? Shao Khan: He holds the original blood of the first vampire, Dracula. It's said to be very powerful. Noob: Are you willing to help him once he destroys Nasha and the Dragon King? Shao Khan: Have you learned nothing, Noob? I will turns him to Nasha at the end, and have her wake Riktor up, and make him align with me. (laughs) Celestial has bitten everyone in the cave. They are all bleeding to death. Clestial floats in the air, and then transform into a huge ass ugly vampire bat. He grabs his sword and stabs both his palms, and the puncture hundred holes in his stomach and makes lots of cuts in his chest. He drops the sword, and spreads his hands. All the blood squirts out from his boddy like if it were rain. The people below shower the blood, and beginf to drink eat. Celestial: Eat my babies. It's time to fight. Mortal Kombat has begun and is waiting for us. -SKIES- Celstial is flying through the dark night, and soon his new clan of thousand vampires are right behind. No offense guys but I like this way of bringing in Celestial much better, plus it brings in Shao Kahn who everyone seems to have forgotten I brought back into the picture. Good work. Love the way Celestrial raises his army.

Thanks alot DragongKingakareptile. I had more stories but just today I visited this site after Friday and saw that we couldn't write anymore. I'd love to continue writing for this story.

TomTaz Wrote: TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: On a side not I think the battles in the story tournament should echo those that occur in the character tournament. So if Nasha goes up against Hatsuma for some reason it should happen in the story... just a suggestion. here. That's the plan.. Myself, SmokeNC-017, and Rabid Wolverine are going to be writing the battles as they happen...making the appropriate fighter move on.

Does this mean I can't write anymore? I enjoyed creating storylines, that's why I decided to start mini plots in the kreata a character forum. I would enjoy to keep writing...

yeah its unfortunate that the creativity of the joint writers has to be shut down. hmm... in a somewhat related question how are we going to do matches for the characters who already exist in the Mortal Kombat Universe like Sindel, Shao Kahn, Noob Saibot..etc? Maybe we can still do some creative stuff with those matches.

Ok, On second thought if anyone who has contributed thus far wants to continue to write will be allowed to do so...However, just so that we don't have multiple writers doing the same matches, I propose that when we find out which two kombatants are up, The person who wants to write that match, makes it known with a post that says they are interested in taking that one. And to keep it fair so that it's not first come first serve...Once you have written a match...you can not write another one until everyone else who wants a shot has gone one time...then it can start over again. Does this plan work for everyone?

I can live with that

Cool, I'm sorry I cut the particpants short before...but I just got worried that when the matches started people would just start writing for them and we'd have like 5 different takes on the SAME match you know? It wasn't anything personal or trying to exclude people for the hell of it. Once again I'm sorry...I think this plan can work though...just wish I could have thought of it before I made that last decision...Oh well no one's perfect.

Sure makes me very happy. I enojoy writing. Thank you Tomtaz. DOn't worry about either, I was sad at first you decided not to let anyone write, but I also understood why. You're right, we couldn;'t have ten different people write ten different stories for on battle.

One more thing, I also think you shouldn't let a person who created a character write his/her battle for his her character. FOr instance I couldn't write a battle for neither Keilienaten nor Celestial. Unless ofcourse you and everyone is cool about it, but I don't think it would be fair.