slim3ddi3g Wrote: -Rahankatut Realm- Keilienaten steps out of the invisible secret portal. Her army has been waiting for her. They are huge creature with dead wolf heads, and dead Hawk heads. Keilienaten: It’s time to stop playing around, and finish the game. The time has come to punish all the living and the non living. I wasted my time playing weak when I am actually strong. No one knew where I came from, nor I care if they know now. It’s time for us to win our war and claim Outworld as ours. Then we will move on and rule other realms. Are you READY! Her thousand creature soilders roar and raise their weapons. Keilienaten raises her hands and shoots out huge light from both her hands, lighting the entire area. The invisible secret portal becomes visible and starts to interact with the soilders as they go through the portal. Keilienaten laughs hysterically. -Higher Plains- Ryoko: When is Mortal Kombat to begin? Raiden: When all the chosen players arrive to the Dragon King’s battlegrounds. Ryoko: When are we going? Raiden: (scoffs) I won’t even fight with you on this one. I know you will still go. We leave at the crack of dawn. Kung Lao joins them. Raiden: Kung Lao. Where have you been. We’ve been trying to contact you. Kung Lao: I know. So sorry. I was in war at Edenia battling the dead army. I am here now to help. I m here to destroy the Dragon King. Gabrielle: Don’t get to cocky. He is a very powerful rival. Kung Lao: I am the best, and will destroy that bastard. I will make sure everyone sees when I kill the Dragon King with my bare hands. Raiden: Are in this to be recognize, Kung Lao. If that is the case, your ego will not let you win. Kung Lao: If my brother Liu Kang can do it, so can I. He walks away upset. Fujin: What’s wrong with him? Raiden: He still blam

-Rahankatut Realm-

Keilienaten steps out of the invisible secret portal. Her army has been waiting for her. They are huge creature with dead wolf heads, and dead Hawk heads.

Keilienaten: It’s time to stop playing around, and finish the game. The time has come to punish all the living and the non living. I wasted my time playing weak when I am actually strong. No one knew where I came from, nor I care if they know now. It’s time for us to win our war and claim Outworld as ours. Then we will move on and rule other realms. Are you READY!

Her thousand creature soilders roar and raise their weapons. Keilienaten raises her hands and shoots out huge light from both her hands, lighting the entire area. The invisible secret portal becomes visible and starts to interact with the soilders as they go through the portal.
Keilienaten laughs hysterically.


-Higher Plains-

Ryoko: When is Mortal Kombat to begin?
Raiden: When all the chosen players arrive to the Dragon King’s battlegrounds.
Ryoko: When are we going?
Raiden: (scoffs) I won’t even fight with you on this one. I know you will still go. We leave at the crack of dawn.

Kung Lao joins them.

Raiden: Kung Lao. Where have you been. We’ve been trying to contact you.
Kung Lao: I know. So sorry. I was in war at Edenia battling the dead army. I am here now to help. I m here to destroy the Dragon King.
Gabrielle: Don’t get to cocky. He is a very powerful rival.
Kung Lao: I am the best, and will destroy that bastard. I will make sure everyone sees when I kill the Dragon King with my bare hands.
Raiden: Are in this to be recognize, Kung Lao. If that is the case, your ego will not let you win.
Kung Lao: If my brother Liu Kang can do it, so can I.

He walks away upset.

Fujin: What’s wrong with him?
Raiden: He still blames himself for Liu Kang’s death.

Sabre and Sub-Zero return to the higher plain,Sabre has a furious look in his eyes once again.
Sabre "Raiden!The cyborgs have been destroyed,I must do something,where is the Dragon King,Sensui,anyone we need to attack one of them."
Raiden "The Dragon King and Sensui are...together."
Sabre "WHAT?This cannot be damn good."
Raiden "The King's army is invading Edenia."
Sabre "I must go there.Katian,now is your chance to save Edenia."
Katian walks from behind Sabre.
KaTian "Thunder God let us leave."
Raiden "As you wish,but Sabre,you will know when to come back,I will tell you,and at that time you must leave."
Raiden opens a portal and Sabre and KaTian jump through it landing on top of a Edenian house,looking at the carnage.
KaTian "Let's get them."
Sabre and KaTian jump down causing many Edenians and members of the kings army to move.The King's army jumps ontop of them and just as fast Sabre tosses them off.
Sabre "Time for some fun."
Sabre begins to jump on the enemys,ripping off heads and slicing them in half,he takes one and drives its head into the ground popping it,he throws the body into a pile of his and KaTians victims.Sabre looks out to the army.
Sabre "Who's next?"

Back at the site of the battle between Sabre and Ravage, Sektor finally arrives. He blows the tree on top of Ravage apart with a missle. Ravages titanium plating keeps him together through the blast. He stands up with out a scratch.
Ravage"Mission Status...Failure"
Sektor"Do not be concerned, this oragnic, called Sabre was an uncalculated factor."
Sektor hands Ravage his cutoff arm and they return to base.
-Tekunin Base-
Ravage is put into a suspension chamber and filled with nano liquid. The machines inside the liquid quickly repare Ravages broken arm and damaged armor.
Sektor stands outside of the chamber observing the repairs."Go to stage three."
Scientist"But, master we have not tested it..."
Before the scientist can finish Sektor pulls ou his heart and he drops to the floor.
Sektor"I will not be second guessed, procede to stage three."
The chamber is filtered out, leaving only the repeared android inside.A clear nano liquid fills the chamber. This liquid is experimental, it is supposed to change matter. The liquid fills the chamber and Ravage is again placed in suspended animation. The nano machines first seep into his frame, filling up any spaces, or craks inside. An electric current is fed through the chambre, increasing the sync ratio of the nano bots and Ravage.
Scientist"Sir, the sync ratio has reached over 600% compatibility with Unit TK-787."
Sektor"Excellent, begin stage four."
Ravage has now been completely fused with the nanobots, giving him a liquid like quality, while still retaining his previous dexterity and abilities. Ravage is then hooked up to a simulator, which has the stored data of the MK Warriors, including the new allies, gathered via satalite. The simulator runs six trillion combat possibilites that are displayed by each fighter.
*Inside Ravages head*
Ravage quickly goes through all of the possibilites:Attack patterns, counters, abilites, thoughts, bio measurments. He goes through timing, precisely calculating force of impact, speed and weapon class.He sees videos of recorded fight and predicted scenarios. His consciences circut quickly memorizes these and then clips together fighting combinations which Ravage then adapts to his own style.
Scientist"Sir, the upgrade is now complete."
Sektor"Equip him with the nano core and send him out."
The nano core is un upgrade to the weapons arsenal. It is made of nano machines which can analyze an opponets weapon and copy it, giving Ravage an unlimited aresenal of hand to hand weapons. Ravage is then set out on a second mission.
Ravage"I will not fail you."
Sektor"Move out, destroy the organics. Do not let anything stop you."
Ravages, visor glows red, as he kicks in his ion jets and blasts off.
-Higher Plane-
Hatsuma breaks into the Elder Gods' lair with tremendous force. The Earth Warriors come runing to the explosion, seeing Hatsuma in the flames.
Hatsuma"I won't say it again, knock, knock."

-Higher Plane-

Gabrielle runs at Hatsuma with her 3 sectional Staff , she aims the first swing at his head. She misses as Hatsuma ducks...Gabrielle then makes an attempt at Hatusma's legs, which also fails as Hatsuma jumps up and then comes down with his feet holding that end of her weapon to the ground.

Hatsuma: "Are you kidding me right now?" He gives Gabrielle a powerful backhand that send her flying back into the far wall. "Stay put girl...the next time you charge me I may not be so gentle."

Ryoko Runs to Gabrielle's side, checking to see how badly she's injured. The most she could detect was a couple of cracked ribs...she didn't know if there was a concussion because Gabrielle was still out cold. As Ryoko ran to Gabrielle, Ghost and Fujin decided to charge Hatsuma.. Hatsuma takes out Fujin first with his Diamond Fangs attack...leaving Fujin grounded an bleeding. Hatsuma then turns his attention to Ghost, who immediately summons his Deadly Vortex...Hatsuma aviod the move easily with Dimension Shift. Not prepared for this move, Collin does not have the chance to use Ghost Out, and falls to Hatsuma's lightning fast strikes. As he falls to the floor unconsious...Hatsuma eyes the others..
Hatsuma: "Pathetic. How do you all hope to defeat my master...when you can barely handle me? Well, who's next?"...

TomTaz, I'm impressed that you checked out Hatsuma's moves when you wrote this!

TomTaz Wrote: -Higher Plane- Gabrielle runs at Hatsuma with her 3 sectional Staff , she aims the first swing at his head. She misses as Hatsuma ducks...Gabrielle then makes an attempt at Hatusma's legs, which also fails as Hatsuma jumps up and then comes down with his feet holding that end of her weapon to the ground. Hatsuma: "Are you kidding me right now?" He gives Gabrielle a powerful backhand that send her flying back into the far wall. "Stay put girl...the next time you charge me I may not be so gentle." Ryoko Runs to Gabrielle's side, checking to see how badly she's injured. The most she could detect was a couple of cracked ribs...she didn't know if there was a concussion because Gabrielle was still out cold. As Ryoko ran to Gabrielle, Ghost and Sabre decided to charge Hatsuma.. Hatsuma takes out Sabre first with his Diamond Fangs attack...leaving Sabre grounded an bleeding. Hatsuma then turns his attention to Ghost, who immediately summons his Deadly Vortex...Hatsuma aviod the move easily with Dimension Shift. Not prepared for this move, Collin does not have the chance to use Ghost Out, and falls to Hatsuma's lightning fast strikes. As he falls to the floor unconsious...Hatsuma eyes the others.. Hatsuma: "Pathetic. How do you all hope to defeat my master...when you can barely handle me? Well, who's next?"...

In that Sabre is in the higher plain,but hes actually in edenia at the moment,you might want to edit that,im going to bed.

Rabid_Wolverine Wrote: TomTaz Wrote: -Higher Plane- Gabrielle runs at Hatsuma with her 3 sectional Staff , she aims the first swing at his head. She misses as Hatsuma ducks...Gabrielle then makes an attempt at Hatusma's legs, which also fails as Hatsuma jumps up and then comes down with his feet holding that end of her weapon to the ground. Hatsuma: "Are you kidding me right now?" He gives Gabrielle a powerful backhand that send her flying back into the far wall. "Stay put girl...the next time you charge me I may not be so gentle." Ryoko Runs to Gabrielle's side, checking to see how badly she's injured. The most she could detect was a couple of cracked ribs...she didn't know if there was a concussion because Gabrielle was still out cold. As Ryoko ran to Gabrielle, Ghost and Sabre decided to charge Hatsuma.. Hatsuma takes out Sabre first with his Diamond Fangs attack...leaving Sabre grounded an bleeding. Hatsuma then turns his attention to Ghost, who immediately summons his Deadly Vortex...Hatsuma aviod the move easily with Dimension Shift. Not prepared for this move, Collin does not have the chance to use Ghost Out, and falls to Hatsuma's lightning fast strikes. As he falls to the floor unconsious...Hatsuma eyes the others.. Hatsuma: "Pathetic. How do you all hope to defeat my master...when you can barely handle me? Well, who's next?"... In that Sabre is in the higher plain,but hes actually in edenia at the moment,you might want to edit that,im going to bed.

OOPS, forgot about that thanks! *Goes to change*

SmokeNc-017 Wrote: TomTaz, I'm impressed that you checked out Hatsuma's moves when you wrote this!

LOL Well I wanted to be as accurate as i could, However I kinda goofed and included Sabre in the battle and he wasn't even there. :( Sorry bout that Rabid Wolverine!

Hatsuma looks across the room at the furios fighters. They all want to take him on, but witnessing what he did, they are too scared to move. Hatsuma makes a move towards Ryoko and Gabrielle.Ryoko sense him coming and charges him with a lethal assualt of strikes. However, Hatsuma's ascension lets him easily dodge Ryoko's hits. Hatsuma paces him self and bends down just low enough to dodge her fist but leaving her open enough for a swift knee to her stomach. Ryoko, spits up blood as she is completely supported by Hatsuma's knee. He then quickly moves in back of her and jumps into the air, head level with Ryoko, and delivers a spinning hook kick to her head, sending her flying. He uses Demension Shift and appears in mid-air with his segmented whip extracted, he upgrades is with Ruby Requim, giving the whip a blade form and grabs Ryoko's neck as she's still flying through the air. He then lands on the ground, putting strain on the whip causing Ryoko to stop in mid air. Hatsuma then pulls the whip infront of him, sending Ryoko flying in the opposite direction and into the nearest wall. Ryoko hits hard, leaving a deppresion in the wall, as Hatsuma retracts his whip.
Hatsuma"Now where was I?" He stands up and walks up to the fallen Gabrielle as she regains conciosness. the first thing she sees is Hatsuma's blade at her throat. She begins to cry, not from fear, but again for Hatsuma.
Hatsuma notices this and it catches his attention.
Hatsuma"You don't cry from fear, you cry for me. Why?"
Gabrielle"Because you are a fool. You would blindly follow your master into oblivion to prove your loyalty. Why? He made you kill your only love Iyaka."
Hatsuma"His rule is absolute, it matters not what he did to me in the past. I am his servant, and shall remain that till he says otherwise." Hatsuma retracts his blade and looks around."My master has sent me here to see if any of you can give him that rush that Vandon provided. Sadly, I sense none of you will provide a challange. Stay out of the tournamet, if not then know this, I will bring no mercy to those who stand in my or my master's way." Hatsuma puts his whip away and dissapears in a tornado of flames. Leaving with a chilling laughter echoing in the Higher Plane.

Outworld's Living Forest...

As the dark man with the headdress who wields a scythe walks through, a small portal opens before him. Piroh steps out from it.

Kilvan: Ahh, back, I see. How go things in Edenia?

Piroh: Good. They haven't the slightest clue.

Kilvan: Not even Lianna?

Piroh: No. Not even she knows who I am...

Kilvan: Good. Shall we?

They begin to walk forward, but before they can continue, a tree lowers its beanches into their path, and addresses them...

Tree: Halt, travelers. You may not pass through this way...

Kilvan: Oh? Is that so? And why not, may I ask...?

Tree: We are tired, travelers. Tired of you mortals, and your tresspasses....This has, for ages, been our sacred ground, and your ilk have profaned it many a time. We will suffer this no longer.

Kilvan: No...you shall not...what you shall suffer, instead...is pain..."

Tree: Wha..?

And the blows begin to rain down, the scythe chopping the giant sentient plant to pieces, the screams echoing through the dense underbrush.

And when all is done, Kilvan and Piroh continue through the living forest uninterrupted, on the road towards the lair of the Dragon King...

You can see a picture of Lianna at her bio here:
http://www.mortalkombatonline.com/content/forum/showmessage.cds?name=mk6&message;=90060&page;=8

Enjoy!!! :P

Shadaloo, dude, I had Piroh be with Lianna and Sindel in Edenia. Now that you have Piroh with Kilvan, we have to put SIndel, Lianna, and of course Tanya since she's along Sindel. Let's find a way to put them together, and explain how Kilvan got in the picture...

So...what's next?

Well, seeing as how the tourny's about to begin.. I say we work to get all characters in the same place about to begin MORTAL KOMBAT! Then we can go from there...but first we have to get everyone together as everyone is scattered...any ideas?

TomTaz Wrote: Well, seeing as how the tourny's about to begin.. I say we work to get all characters in the same place about to begin MORTAL KOMBAT! Then we can go from there...but first we have to get everyone together as everyone is scattered...any ideas?

There could be some type of meeting of the good/bad then others ambush it leaving them all in the same place,or there could just be a calling by the dragon king.

Rabid_Wolverine Wrote: TomTaz Wrote: Well, seeing as how the tourny's about to begin.. I say we work to get all characters in the same place about to begin MORTAL KOMBAT! Then we can go from there...but first we have to get everyone together as everyone is scattered...any ideas? There could be some type of meeting of the good/bad then others ambush it leaving them all in the same place,or there could just be a calling by the dragon king.

Very good ideas Rabid...I'll go for either one..Would you like to do the honors? (Since you did come up with the ideas)

TomTaz Wrote: Rabid_Wolverine Wrote: TomTaz Wrote: Well, seeing as how the tourny's about to begin.. I say we work to get all characters in the same place about to begin MORTAL KOMBAT! Then we can go from there...but first we have to get everyone together as everyone is scattered...any ideas? There could be some type of meeting of the good/bad then others ambush it leaving them all in the same place,or there could just be a calling by the dragon king. Very good ideas Rabid...I'll go for either one..Would you like to do the honors? (Since you did come up with the ideas)

I was thinking maybe you or smoke could,or if I can do it if I come up with some more ideas for it,I'll think of ideas and maybe put it up later.
EDIT:Actually im gonna go try think of it now,then I will run the idea through you,see what you think,then if its good,I'll post it.

Ok, great.. Sounds like a plan..I'll be waiting for ya.

If you want them all together, the answer is simple! All you need to do is stage a Mortal Kombat tournament!

tgrant Wrote: If you want them all together, the answer is simple! All you need to do is stage a Mortal Kombat tournament!

Well, that's the plan Ty...but all of the characters that have been introduced into the story so far, are all scattered in different realms...well groups anyway. So Now we have to devise a way to get them all to one I just have to come up with a way to get them all to meet up for the tournament...cause some characters don't really know about any MK tournament (judging from certain parts of the story.) Ideas?

TomTaz Wrote: tgrant Wrote: If you want them all together, the answer is simple! All you need to do is stage a Mortal Kombat tournament! Well, that's the plan Ty...but all of the characters that have been introduced into the story so far, are all scattered in different realms...well groups anyway. So Now we have to devise a way to get them all to one I just have to come up with a way to get them all to meet up for the tournament...cause some characters don't really know about any MK tournament (judging from certain parts of the story.) Ideas?

The Elder gods are the key!

Use their powers to summon all to them! Have Raiden or Fujin visit them and them them what's going down! Tell them the names of all involved! The Elder gods can them summon them and order everyone to compete under their rules!

Yeah, good idea!!!
Anyone writing yet???

Well in one of my additions to the story I did have the Dragon King send out one of his minions to spread the word of the tournament, perhaps you could work in some way for that to work the characters who are unaware into the tournament.

Vandon is pretty much awaiting the tournament outside the stronghold of the Dragon King, meditating. Hmmm Amanuet, Sareena and Deceptame are in the Dragon King's Dungeon. Apparently, Keillienaten appraently has summoned her army, which we were all previously unaware of, and is marching to the Dragon King's Temple. Ryoko, Gabrielle, Sub-Zero, Fujin, Nemisis, Raiden, Ghost, and all the other MK warriors are in the Higher plane. Sindel and Liana are on their way to the tournament. I have no idea where the hell piroh and Kilvan are going but they just passed through the living forest. Sabre and KaTian are fighting for Edenia against Tanya originally< which confuses me now cause apparently Sindel was working with Tanya now or something like that, you guys figure it out I'm confused on that one. Ravage will be following the "organics" so he should easily be able to show up at the tournament. Hmm.... Sensui is still in the Abyss at this point apparently finding yet another way to increase his strength, Hatsuma is probably returning to his master after heckling the Mk Warriors in The Higher plane. The spider chick...hold on I'll remember her name... Nasha is just kind of chillin, pissed off that Noob Saibot somehow was able to come back after being absorbed by Sensui to take Celestial away preventing her from fulfilling her sacrifice. Hmmm... I think thats all you guys can figure it out from here I'll just sit back and enjoy you guys try to make this make sense.

On a side not I think the battles in the story tournament should echo those that occur in the character tournament. So if Nasha goes up against Hatsuma for some reason it should happen in the story... just a suggestion. Anyways have fun guys, I'll be working on trying to get a way to get my drawing of Vandon posted up here.

TheDragonKingakaReptile Wrote: On a side not I think the battles in the story tournament should echo those that occur in the character tournament. So if Nasha goes up against Hatsuma for some reason it should happen in the story... just a suggestion. here.

That's the plan.. Myself, SmokeNC-017, and Rabid Wolverine are going to be writing the battles as they happen...making the appropriate fighter move on.

posting it in two secs,check next page,i screwed up.