Hey guys,

Great, great guesses!

I can say that, while no one has hit the bullseye fully yet, a few of you are actually quite close!

So I decided that I'm gonna go ahead and drop another little hint that could help everyone before the poll closes. Think about this hint and all the past ones, and you're welcome to throw another guess out there even if you've already participated!

By succeeding in her plan, Lara will accomplish 2 things (as you already know): hinder Mace's discovery of Jonathan Ryder's death, and bring down Mace's chances of winning the tournament. BUT --> She's not going to accomplish both of these goals with only one course of action
She will do ______________________________ in order to hinder his search for the truth, and simultaneously do ________________________, because she knows that doing that will cause Mace's chances of getting through the finals (if he gets there) to diminish.

Hope I helped, even if just a little bit! The poll will be closed tonight @ 9pm.

Once again, I'd like to say how surprised I am that such great guesses are coming in!

- Leo

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I'm going crazy over this.

Another guess: Lara wants Logan or Millena dead but she can't her hands or Dimentia's hands dirty.

To do that she must get someone else to do that, so question is who would do anything (to get info)? Answer is Mace but he will not work with her that easy. So Lara gets Drake to be friends with Mace. Drake lie to Mace like you can trust Lara and crap like that.

So Mace start to work with Lara. She tells him to kill Logan or Millena and in return she tells him who the killer or how his father die.

Mace kills Logan and Millena in the tournament.

This means Heiligan lose their change have winning and Mace gets throw out the tournament or worst.

Another guess: Leo does not have answer (he can't think of anything for story), so he gets us to think of something for him but he does not want to ask us so he makes game out of it.

.... Um, no.

So much that no one has gotten the whole thing. However...

Barakaz_cuz
Wins

By coming the closest! His guess still does not reflect Lara's plan exactly, but he mentioned some points that actually resemble some of the effects that her plan will have.

I still dont have a "prize" idea ... so I'll just allow B_C to pick what he wants ! That takes work off my back!

Episode coming up 2morrow! Just as eventful as the last one, so prepare yourselves, bitches!

(Sorry little drunk) lol

- Leo

Hmmm, not Sure what I would like either. Perhaps I will keep this little Victory under my belt for a while and use it when the tme is right... but I'm open for Suggestions.

Cannot Wait for Episode 10!

Just don't kill my character (not too early in story) or make him gay.

Hey guys!

Episode 10 is here!

I have to say that this is up there in the list of my favorites so far, because it has different story elements all packed together to create a flowing, absorbing episode that really stands out, IMO.

Hope you guys like it as much as I did!







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Deadly Dominion: Episode 10
"Revelations"

"In one side of Dimentia, the encounter of Logan and Millena with Luther escalates to an explosive point as the feared emperor's past is unveiled, consequently triggering heated emotions in all those present.

In the other, Leona comes clean with Mace and is forced to uncover a secluded part of herself in the process. But an obscure threat lurks amid these revelations, containing the power to meticulously turn them against their informers."
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Thanks again for reading, for commenting, and for continuing to be a part of this project! It's taken off so impressively well, so I don't get enough of thanking everybody for it!

- Leo

Great episode.

Best bit was Bianca getting throw out.

................. My people are gonna die for sure.



Great episode though Leo. Damn cliffhangers. Stop IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz

Lara will tell him everything.



Lara: Psst i have a secret
Mace: What
Lara: Ur gay.




I love messin wit folks

EM

If you hate on Mace, I WILL write an episode where he kicks C.J.'s ass for the full 30 minutes of it!

And why do you think your characters are gonna die? =/ ...

Well, other than those two things, not much more I can comment on EM's post.

Beautiful!

* The Luther/Millena/Logan scene was awsome! The way Luther told his Rise to power was grizzly and interesting. Luther's Mystical Ord attack was intriguing and Heart Stopping! Millena's Goooooooooold attacks were cool as well! Great Scene!

"Their time has not come yet."


* The Leona/Mace scene is Dramatic one. Leona's Flashback was Horrifying (Well Done, but Horrible) and it explains further on why Leona hates Vice so. I see a little relationship building between these two, or perhaps this is just me? Another wonderful scene!


* The Only Person Who could ruin such a Dramatic scene would be Bianca! Where is Serpy when you need him? LMFAO She told everyone off...before she was tossed out -_-" Never the Less, another Great Bianca scene!

"Don't give me that "tough guy" stare! You just look plain stupid! Then again, that can be said for a large portion of you people."


* Lara and her usual self, just Owned Viro with some BBQ Sauce on the Side! LOL this line was my favorite:

"And then I'll be forced to take it upon myself to cut you in two and serve your contaminated blood as punch to the other fighters!"


* Looks as if Drake doesn't play Spy very well now does he? Lol, at least he got the information for Lara's plan. Speaking of that, what a Cliffhanger! Wow Outstanding Job Leo!! I can't wait for Episode 11!!!


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You must really want me to get Diavol to have a Dimentian Sex change?



o..k.. Why do you think your characters are going to Die?

I don't hate your character, I just find funny because it remind me of this guy I use to know. He was trying to cause trouble in pub and group of people just grab him and throw him outside. Good Times

LMAO. I aint hatin. Mace is cool.

Their gonna die because. C.J isnt really important. Viro will be killed by either Malickus, Millena, or Logan.


Heilig, my last creation you must live!!!!!!!




EM

Why you laughing? ...

Anyway, you BETTER know he's cool! >= ( Much better than white-GTA-protagonist-rip-off C.J. -_-' ... Yes, I know.

Your last creation? Ho, your only creation was CJ's thug-gone-bad ass! Heilig already existed from the moment Leo created the storyline, you just searched the net for names and "Heilig" happened to be a good one.. as for Viro: he was nothing but "Bad guy from Heilig" before his bio, look, and uniqueness was created FOR YOU.




Barakaz_cuz V.s. Ermacsmainwoman

Damn, I can't believe I missed the poll! Didn't meant to be away, but the weekend and the beginning of this week has been a tad busy.

At any rate, great episode; I love how this one was primarily dialogue, especially as it's moved the story forward a bit.


I'm curious to see where Lara's going to take Mace for their 'conversation,' as well as whether or not Viro will be as patient as Lara wants him to be.

I'm also glad to notice that even though my character wasn't physically present, she was at least mentioned several times

Can't wait for the next one

WTF B_C

I mean seriously WTF.

Im laughing because i think its funny.

And C.J isnt from GTA. C.J is a rip off of myself. My innitials are C.J.C. Only im not a thug. And he is trying to get good.

As for the Heilig creation thing. I meant the name. And viro, the story, the look, i created. I told all that to leo.

And for your little sprite comic: Hardy har. Nearly pissed myself with laughter. I mean Ermacsmainwoman, really creative.

Seriously B_C that was unnesecary. Especially since i talked to u on AIM and you seemed fine.



Sorry for interrupting the thread. But the little Lara secret is a joke that i have going with a friend of mine. We make re- dubs and a character pulled another character in close. And he said I have a secret, ur gay


thats all it was


ME backwards is EM

TIME FOR A NEW POLL!

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This week's poll question is very simple. As everyone knows, we're nearing the day of the tournament (the past episode takes place 1 day before it), and with the arrival of the tournament will come explosive match-ups as the fight for the Stone takes off. But one question remains...

Which Match-Up Would You Most Like to See?

With such a huge cast of characters, the choices are endless! From now until Saturday morning, let everyone know which two characters you'd be most excited to see duke it out in combat!


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Should be some very interesting answers for this question!

Alright, now onto lesser-fun matters...



-_-' ... Let me try and get everything straight here as best as I can:

C.J.- Entirely EM's character, no matter who he's based on.
HEILIG - Name was given by EM.
VIRO - EM had the name, the origin (Heilig) and the concept behind this villain, and asked me to make his image - then, I came up with a look/weapon for him and worked around his story.

I'm not even gonna touch the "inside joke" part because I seriously don't get what that's all about and I'll end up saying something stupid.

ANYWAY........ Don't forget to vote on the poll, and comment on the latest episode if you still haven't!

Thanks,

- Leo

P.S.: LMFAO, I thought the sprite things were actually very creative. At least I did laugh my ass off . I'm normal.

LMFAO! C.J. is a rip off of you? Well I just lost what little respect I had for him. (If I had any at all!)

Prostitute, I remember Viro's creation very well. I was part of the thread, remember? All you did was say you wanted someone named Viro from Heilig who wanted to "end the peace" of the world. Then you go "LEEEOOO IM NOT A THUG, CAN YOU HELP MEEEEE?" and he created everything thats good about him.

No creativity? Who are you to talk about creativity?You created some normal, every day guy named CJ ... o_o he wears f*cking jeans and a hooded shirt.... whats the creativity in his ugly ass?

.... omg.... i dont even know what the fuck to say about that... you make little plays with your friends filled with gay jokes? ... please, please, tell me I'm wrong! someone needs to pull YOU aside and just flat-out ki-...

I would rather not plauge this wonderful thread with more of your pathetic desperate attempts to save yourself. If you want to continue this, we do it over PM or AIM.

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Now for the Poll!

I am looking forward to the battle:


~Bianca~ V.S. ~Elandra~

No need B_C.





no respect for creative artists.


Seriously B_C this needs to stop. It was pointless anyway. Just reasoning behind what i said. Hopefully their is no more unnecessary interruptions to the thread

"no respect for creative artists. "


Ha! And that would be you? Puh-LeEeZzE!


Its good to see that you have finally succumb and realized you cannot win. I find your pathetic attemps at trying to call me "Unreasonable" or "Unnessessary", or even "Uncalled for" absolutely laughable. I really see no further use in continuing this "conversation" as it appears you cannot suffice any longer.




Barakaz_cuz Wins!





T'was Fun


-2nd in Command

Lmfao, this argument is just funny....

Umm If you aren't commenting about the Episodes, why the Hell did you comment at all? Now Shoo, and rid us of your retardation!

Oh yeah loads of fun.

And that whole thing about cant suffice. That was more laughable than me saying unnecessary.

Anyway Im sorry BC

(now you say it) Im at least owning up to this. Do your part and say it too.


about D_D

I think a good match would be Logan and Drake. Just cause. Dont really gots a reason (dont say anything B_C)


EM

Diavol vs Serpen Kia

Reason: Hits Diavol with car and he thinks he will get away with it?HELL NO

Of course I'm looking forward to the fight between Elandra and Bianca, but I'm equally interested in seeing if a conflict will now arise between Elandra and Leona, seeing as Leona abandoned her.

I also hope that Davila has some sort of conflict ahead of her, perhaps with Maverick?