Except instead of running on gas, it runs on the blood of unoriginal characters that should never see the light of day!

Hopefully it's blood of Shujinko

Another great episode!

I loved the bit with Hamon and his doppleganger the best.

@BC: Keep in mind, with the exception of your character being disgracefully removed from the Earth dwelling, Bianca hasn't been featured either.

Besides, as Elandra ultimately had the upper hand in their little rumble, I doubt she's scared of Bianca at all...much less enough to be in a coma


@Devil: Somehow I don't think that BC's talking about Shujinko, but I think it's best not to enter that argument again....


At any rate, another top notch episode, and I hope both my characters will be able to kick some major butt in upcoming episodes

Soul_Stealer, I do know what character BC is talking about. I'm not that stupid. Me and BC having a joke.

Great episode. I love the details with Hamon's fight. And of how Lara is playing everybody. It was worth the wait (although kind of short) it was still excellent. Can't wait for epi. 12.

Hey guys,

Stopping by to give everyone a little preview of what's coming up on Episode 12!

- It will be a more dialogue-based episode.

- You will see appearences by characters who have been absent in the last one or two episodes.

- You will see a basic set-up started for the tournament, since the day has arrived.

- A bigger focus will be made on the Vladimir-Davila-Hamon storyline.

Expect the episode to be up by tomorrow night! Today is Saturday, so I might not get a lot done, but things are going by smoothly enough that I think there won't be a need for another delay !





Also, I think this project has been going well enough and for a long enough time that I should take some time to thank everyone for being a part of it!

I haven't spent any time telling everyone how much I appreciate the incredible amount of atention you have all given this series! It's great to be able to provide everyone with something that I know you guys enjoy so much, and be able to read all the comments and feedback, as well as see how "into" it everyone really is!

So thanks to everyone who is part of the series and has taken me from a basic Episode 1, all the way to 12! !

- Leo

Can't wait for Ep 12.


Leo, you shouldn't be thanking us, we should be thanking you for all hard work you done for this project. Without you there would be no project.

Thank you

!

Quick note: I have only one more scene to get done for Episode 12, and so far, it has come out absolutely perfectly! I am going out right now, and will be back later tonight to wrap things up! I'll stop by soon in order to let everyone know what's up!

Thank you,

- Leo

I am eagerly awaiting the mischief and cunning of Davila


Also, as said before, thanks really goes to you for actually putting our (and your) ideas to paper and making something of them!


Can't wait for Episode 12

Episode 12 will be up today at 6:00 PM EST.

Hey guys,

Thanks for waiting! Here's Episode 12 of the Deadly Dominion Series! Lengthier than usual, too!




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Deadly Dominion: Episode 12
"The Preceding Events"

"Lord Vladimir is elated with Hamon's successful acceptance into Luther's ranks, though his uneasiness in his bride increases as Davila once again decides to make concrete her questionable involvement in The Underworld Ruler's plan.

Not far from there, an unexpected aid to the forces opposing Luther's rule rises literally out of nowhere... while the anarch and his allies simultaneously feel their triumph coming closer and closer, along with the tournament itself..."

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Looking forward to all the comments, thoughts, and feedback!

Thank You,

- Leo

Gd Gd.

Another great episode from leo. ___________________________________________________________ Q/ Is Bianca ment to be jail or something like that at this point of story?

Perfect setup to the tournament!

I loved all the dialogue, in lieu of action is still felt as if things were very much moving forward, and I can't wait until the tournament starts

speechless in your amazingness.

Another Beautiful Episode!

* Interesting Davila/Vlad/Hamon scene.I have a feeling that Lord Vladimir is begining to suspect Davila and she won't be able to keep up her charade for too much longer. She did manage to devise a clever way of convincing Vlad to allow her to go to the palace with Hamon.

"A brute like Hamon would crush it in a heartbeat and allow the essence within to escape, leading to hazardous consequences."

The Dialouge in this scene was outstanding and the overall scene was very well done.

* Another well done Lara/Luther scene. She appears to be losing her nerve at the thought of her plan being flawed.

"I! Don't! Make! Mistakes, Luther!"

Hopefully her plan will be sucessful, but you never can tell what is going to happen in Deadly Dominion! Also there is some friction between Luther and Lara in this scene, which made good Drama!

"If you want a piece of property, then devote your affections to your dancer! You may be the emperor of this world, but NO ONE owns me!"

Again, another Beautiful Intense scene!

"No, Luther. YOU watch out."

* Great use of imagery to describe Davila's sorcery! The cunning Davila has manged to "impress" Maverick...Hmmm...this could pose a threat to Bianca's plan.:-O Cannot wait to see where it leads.
LOL at Hamon, he sounds like a small child in this scene:

"Lord Vladimir will be most displeased once he hears of this."

Anyway, another great scene!

* Starts off with a Great Quote!

"Damn her to hell..."

It appears Elandra is pretty pissed at the fact Leona abandoned her in the palace, but she will get over it. They both a concerned for Mace which could very well lead to a Screw up in Lara's scheme. Again, another great Intense Emotion Filled Scene!

* Very interesting! Its good to see a "Spirit" Character in the Mix, and on the Good Side. Pyrros sure made one hell of a Grand Entrance! Hmm...Perhaps the Heroes actually have a chance now? Another Marvelous Scene!

* LMFAO Drake was thinking he was going to get an Extra "Special" reward. He'll Learn not to mess with Vice of all people. This quote also made me very happy:

"Drake, you're already getting millions of Earthling currency once the weapons are transported!"

The Dialouge in this scene was outstanding! And People, don't fuck with Lara's imported Furniture!>= O

(Unlike Lara, Bianca has hers hand crafted and made from troublesome Dimentian Oak)

* Speak of the Devil, it took her all night to get back to the Fortress, and perfect timing too. She found Diavol trying to break in. (And Boy, he couldn't get his story straight -_-") He had some interesting powers, but it was not enough to over come the Might of Bianca!and Serpen Kia and Viper were There too.

Overall, another Amazing Episode and we are finally at the Tournament! w00t! Cannot Wait for Episode 13!
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Not Any More thanks to Diavol!

Also I would recomend all of you to make Long reviews of each episode as I do. These 1, 2, and sentence fragments simply will not suffice. Plus it makes Leo happier and looks more Professional!


- 2nd In Command

Viper stop Diavol not Bianca.

Here proof:

Actually his Slow Self Ran into Viper while running away from Bianca. Viper just slowed him down, but now Bianca has him. She is going to use his capture to earn brownie points with Luther and get off the Hook.

So Thank You.

~ Important Announcement!!!! ~

It is with Great Grievance that I must announce that Today's Episode will be Delayed. Leo says it is due to the fact that, while on his way back from his daily volunTeer work at the orphanage, he discoivered a bomb planted on his Benz as well as a terrorrist being smuggled into America in the trunk, and the police reports and deathly duel with the evildoers took up a lot of his time.

However, it is my personal opinion that your pint-sized reviews of the past episode are to blame, having not been wondrous enough to inject Leo with enough writing Mojo.

So in a way, YOU'RE the terrorrists, guys. YOU'RE the terrorrists. Thank You.

- 2nd in Command Whores!

I can't be terrorrist, I'm not smart enough.

~ Important Announcement! ~

I am sorry to inform you that Leo is currently visiting his Cousin in Conneticuit, and he texted me to inform you that the Episode will be realesed on Normal Schedule this Sunday. Sorry for the inconvinence, and remeber what I said Ealier Terrorists!>= O

- 2nd in Command Whores

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~ Poll Results! ~

"Which Plot in "Deadly Dominion" Interests You the Most? "




Lord Vladimir's

(2/11) 18%


Donnovan's

(1/11) 9%


Lara's

(3/11) 27%


Davila's

(1/11) 9%


Bianca and Serpen Kia's

(4/11) 36%


Looks like Bianca and Serpen Kia win this time!

Thank you to all those who particiapted in The Poll, though I wish more people would post who they voted for on the Thread.

I am sorry to Announce that Leo is expirencing some Internet connection problems today. On top of that, the Episode isn't quite finished yet due to it being so eventful and action-packed. He is terribly sorry, and the Episode will be realesed sometime this week.

But until then, we have this week's "Bonus Feature" ready to tide things over until Episode 13's release! Another "Constructed Response Poll", where your response will have to be in the form of a post. Basically, you will reply to the thread with your opinion/answer in order to participate.
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What Outcome of the Tournament are you Hoping for and Why?


Make sure you give your answer in complete, 3-5 Sentences and use your creativity and common sense to make a good guess. We might even have a prize for the person who's guess is the most accurate when we find out the results in the distant episodes to come!

- 2nd in Command Bitches

I Think CLARK should be kill near end of Tournament & someone else to go on to win it.

Reason: I hate main hero saving day, I want Anti-Hero or someone you think wouldn't win, it would be great twist and we wouldn't be follow the same road mortal kombat been going for years.

I gree, i hate it too. If not my characters i would pick Drake

good to hear but what do YOU think outcome of the tournament should be?

B_C: I think I'm going to win this because no one else has enter this yet.