Just a quick in and out:

I've been a little busy with work, school, and my personal life recently, so I apologize for not being on very much as of late.

However, I will later answer the poll, and I'll answer your PM, B_C, so don't fret

Yes, let's all vote for drake now. I of course think Drake should win. One, because he is highly intelligent. Two, because he intimidates people easily. Three, he gets the job done. Four, he's my character. And five, we all know Lara truley loves him on the inside.

Alright, here's my brief wishful outcome:

First, I just hope both my characters are lucky enough to live through this, and here's what I kinda want to see for both of them:

Elandra: I don't really want her to be evil per se, but I want her to turn into a very dark character that's not afraid to do anything - including murder - to ensure that Earth wins the tournament.

Davila: I can see her finding a way to usurp the Underworld throne from Vlad; it'd be great to see some amazing display of magic/and power that she's kept hidden from him for years. I don't think her rule would really be any less cruel or despotic, but I think it'd be more regimented and organized.

As far as the final outcome of the tournament itself, I'm not too sure...part of me of course wants Earth to win, but I can kind of see my hopes for Davila coming through, with her manipulating people to an extent equal or maybe greater to what Lara's been doing, but in order to undermine Dementia from the inside....possibly using Maverick and his abilities to do her dirty work for her.


B_C: That reply to your PM is still forthcoming

Great Comments Guys!

(Btw there will be NO prize, because it truly makes no sense to award someone for an Opinion. SOrry for the Inconvinence)

Also there is something that I must just adress!



Really? How on Earth is Drake anywhere near considered "Intelligent"? Let alone "Highly" Intelligent? Last I checked, all he was is a slow brute that almost ruined Lara's plans.



Really? He didn't do such a good job at intimidating Vice or Logan, let alone Mace. Ha, he couldn't scare a child if it wasn't for him being so unsightly!



Barely, other people could have done his same job A LOT faster and more efficently...



o_o...

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LMFAOOOO! I seriously hope you are joking. I know for a Fact (100%) that Lara would Never, Ever consider even touching such a disgusting being like Drake. Your character just has a pathetic little crush, and I have a feeling he's going to be heart-broken....The Hard Way.

Anyway, Looking forward to your PM S_S!

- 2nd in Command

B_C duh I was kidding. The only reason I want him to win is because I made him up. Other than that, I was pulling reasons out of my @$$.

Dam, It's because I came up with best outcome and B_C hates me winning something. jk

B_C, who that in the avy?

B_C - I've replied to your IM, and am interested in your feedback

Now I want to Know what you 2 said?

My reply here was generally just to keep this thread from sinking to the second page.

We are discussing our respective characters, and nothing more

Guess who!!!

FINALLY I've found time to stop by! As you know, I've been vacationing, and my hands have been pretty full with gruaduation stuff, especially getting ready for prom. Everything's a blur right now.

Anyway, I come with some news.

I want to avoid delays in future episodes as much as possible, since it brings nothing but pain and suffering. So, I think it is best that I release episodes every 2 weeks from now on so that it will happen less, if at all. Then, to tide things over, we can have all "bonuses" the week before a release.

I also think that this will help encourage people to further discuss the episodes among themselves, which is something that I've always wanted to see happen on top of the reviews themselves. Makes this seem more like a group project.

Thoughts? Opinions?

Who are you? lol

Anyway has anyone heard anything about the game?

GOOD NEWS: I got in for HND comp art and design, all I got to do now is complete the NQ comp art and design. I will be learning animation which means I could turn this project into flash animation as well

That wasn't even funny...-_-"



Congrats on getting in the Class Lardy but Uummm.. you're still gonna have to LEAAAAAARN it. Chances are that when you're finally able to make animation, the series will be far over. Maybe you should have spent a little more time hitting keyboard letters in order to say something about the topic at hand?

I have LEAAAAAARN it and the series might be over when I think I'm good and ready but that does not mean the project has to end when Leo done writing it

is asking about the game not part of topic?

P.S. you PRESS the keyboard letters, not hit

Ladies *well B_C is cool so no he's not a lady, unless he is O_o.* Leo, the whole two week idea is alright I guess. I just want to see what happens next. If anybody wants to read a fan fic. I made, look for the Chronicles of Keith *unless it's on page two already, but if you want to read and comment, be my guest.* Thank you and bye.


GOOD LUCK LEO!!!

I think moving the schedule to every two weeks would be a good mood; that way if there's an unexpected delay we aren't left hanging for a week, and so that you have more time to work on it as well as your life in general, lol.

I think it'll be interesting if we can have poll questions or what not that would allow us to discuss the issues....maybe we could start with something like every week we'll look atg a random match up (i.e. Elandra vs. Bianca) that has happened in previous issues; we can discuss the events that led to said match up, and what we anticipate the fallout from the encounter to be.

At any rate, it's good to see that you had time to post in this thread, and I'm eagerly awaiting Ep. 13

Whooooo!!! Episode 13 is finally here!!!

This is a loooong one, equaling almost 40 pages/minutes. I thought it was a nice move, since you guys had to wait for so long.

Deadly Dominion: Episode 13
"The Gathering"

"A gathering that brings together all competitors of the tournament is held in order to commence the renowned event itself.

As these warriors join together with a similar goal in mind, tension builds up, egos collide, and concealed plots are brought to life that promise to make this competition one like never before seen in existance."

I'll be back to try some new things. Maybe some polls, etc., but I'd also like to pay some attention to Soul_Stealer's ideas. Maybe propose topics for discussion, a look at random match-ups, etc. I liked those suggestions.

Can't wait for the following posts!

Thank You,

- Leo

What an Amazing Episode! This was beyond worth the Wait!

* Its Good to See Bianca off the Hook, for the time being. Very good Dialouge between Viper and the others. It really felt like he was about to Tear Diavol to pieces!

"Bianca watches in delight as the guards takes Diavol away..."

Off to the Dungeons, and good riddance of his stupidity!

* Its good to finally see Elandra actually acting like a Guide and taking charge at the Earth Dwelling. Some tensions between Leona and Elandra seem to be heating up, Go thing Mace was there! Great Dialouge Overall, and another Wonderful scene!

* Millena and Logan seem quite ready for the tournament. The Dialouge in this scene was very well done. A Short yet sweet scene that I found very enjoyable!

* Such Powerful words spoken by Luther:

"I want you all to treat this gathering at The Frontier as much more than it is. I want each and every one of you to analyze your opponents... absorb their appearance and any threat they might pose to us... inspect them from afar for their weaknesses, and start plotting your victory against them straight away!
I want no one of you to give me reasons to doubt your potential! I want Dimentia to break a record for a winning streak in a tournament! LOSING IS NOT AN OPTION!"

I also liked how he called out Maverick and Bianca for their previous failures. I enjoyed how Lara just expressed her authority over the others, much to Bianca'sdispleasure. She as well had strong words which made the scene fantastic!

"Aim For Death!"

* Good to See another Watcher in the Mix. He brought up a few thinks that caught my Interest Eye (That would be my Right Eye, Due to the Sai accident my Left One is currently taking a Vacation.)

"We have an equal number of representatives for a total of six worlds in this tournament. "

Interesting...there appears to be 3 Realms Yet to be known....That leaves tons of room for expantion in later sequels and etc.

"These battles will take place across Dimentia, in previously-designated, but not yet announced, arenas and locations. "

Its Great to hear that all the battles won't take place in the same location...Cannot wait to see some creative and innovative fighting areas. (I just Hope that the Elandra and Bianca fight doesn't end up taking place in Slap Bitch Jungle...-_-")

"Now, losses: you will lose your battle if you are either stripped of your consciousness, deemed too injured to continue, OR your entire body falls out of the ring in the select arenas that involve a ring out possibly."

Hmmm...Great, Now I'm wondering how different battles are going to end.

Enough about him, onto the others. A LOT of emotions going on during the Gathering. Tensions between Pyrros and Luther was interesting. Bianca just about hates everyone, as usual...

"Every inch of me is dying to go up to that animal and beat her with her own severed arm!"

Lara having to deal with her foolish, lovestruck lackey, while having to Deal with the stresses of the dangers of her plan, and trying to keep her Venomous minion under control. Can she handle it all?

I also don't think Elandra is going to talk any sense into Mace. I Have a feeling only Leona is going to be able to do that. Lara also seems very uneasy about her as well. (Not so Much Elandra, LOL! )

* A very interesting fight indeed! I LMFAO'ed when Vincente hurrled Viro at Lara and when he was imprisoned in a Cage-Like Thing.

"You damn idiot! What kind of condition do you suffer from that you can't follow SIMPLE directions? You were almost caught by Heilig!"

Another Great Scene... Lara must be stressed out having to deal with Viro all the time...And you know what happens to stressed people...Wrinkles at an Early Age!!! :-O

* What a Shocking Ending! That was the last thing I was expecting...But can they really pull it off? Hey, who knows...(Well Actually Leo knows, but Whatever...)

And Voila, The Greatest Review this thread has ever seen!

-2nd in Command

gd gd

I try to post review later (I'm bit busy)
Edit:

- wow, BIANCA is off the hook and take credit from other people work.

- gathering scene was good and I could see TARANIS talking and acting like CYRUS from the warriors.

- First thing I'll do with the Stone before bringing it back to Heilig is beat him over his head with it. l hope someone does that at end of the story.

- great twist at end (read it to find out what I'm talking about)

Alright, it's nice to see the site back up and running!


Alright, I'll try to post a comprehensive review, but I doubt it'll be as great as B_C's

Of course, I will start with Elandra:

I liked the tension between her and Leona, it only seems appropriate and will hopefully play a part in scenes to come; though I do like how Elandra wasn't planning on ratting Leona out to the watchers....maybe as a show of how she wasn't going to 'abandon' Leona for personal reasons as she did to Elandra.

Lara is progressively becomming more interesting, and I liked the setup between her and Drake in this episode, though it seems as - due to her seeming emotional coldness and narcissistic qualities - any alliances she currently has with members outside of the Dimentian elite will soon wither, leaving her exposed and vulnerable.

I like how Lara was a bit wary of having Elandra present while she and Mace spoke...though she says Elandra's not a threat to her I'm wondering if she really thinks that...with her alliances seeming to come closer to an end with some members, perhaps she thinks Elandra really can help influence Mace's decisions?

Bianca seems to have gotten off the hook this time, but what will Luther think when Elandra beats her again?

I actually felt bad for Bianca in this episode when she was totally pwned by Lara in front of everyone...she's got some great character dynamics that will hopefully continue to expand.

As for Pyros....I don't quite know what to make of him yet....but I'm sure whatever Leo comes up with will be brilliant

I know I'm probably missing a few people and/or important scenes, but this is the 'review' that's currently sprung to mind, so please forgive me


At any rate, I'm eagerly awaiting the next episode!!

That was great. My review won't be as good as B_C's or SS, but I like it.

Elandra: I like how she had Leona worried about being exposed, and of how the death stare that she had with Bianca.

Leona: Uh-Oh, romance with her and Mace, that should be intresting.

Lara: The Queen of Dimentia dosen't sound to far off, or Empress. I love the way she down spoke to Viro, and her ass-kicking abilities. She gave Drake a compliment YES!!!!

Drake: I can't comment on him, he is the best character in the series, no doubt.

All in all, great job Leo, can't wait until epi. fourteen

Thanks for the great reviews, guys! I'll try and address bits of them soon. For now, let me just say that everyone's feedback has improved a lot, and all the extra detail put into each of them are a great read without a doubt!

For now, allow me to put up a new Discussion Question to get everyone posting before the new episode comes our way!

"Let us analyze Mace and his current, developing situation. What can we make of him based on what he is currently going through at the moment? Is he blindly heeding Lara's every word, and slowly but surely allowing her to manipulate him and lead him as close to utter failure as possible? Or is he, in fact, capable of taking care of himself as he has said to Elandra, in which case he will eventually sense Lara's deception and act accordingly before it is too late?"

Eager to hear everyone's opinions. Make sure to have some evidence behind your thoughts if you really wanna make your statement last!

I'll be back,

- Leo

I think he going to get his dumb ass killed (which I do hope will happend). He following path to deception and its going to be too late before he finds out what Lara's plan have to do with him?

D_W, I don't know whether to laugh my ass off or bust into tears of hellish depression at your Shit-filled response... Sorry, it really does suck your fat ass. I'm not one to judge people's opinions but, I got 2 things to say about yours:

1) Where's the motherfucking evidence, you diet-needing bitch? You say Mace is being led down a path to his own destruction but you make no mention of how that is so. What leads you to believe that? Where's the facts? The only fact I see here is that you're hungering for a spot in an insane asylum.

2) I can smell your jealousy all the way from britain to here, and it stinks like your bathroom after breakfast. I don't care if you like Mace or not (which I knew you wouldn't given your uncreative-hatin'-on-real-creativity-ass). But the least you could do is try to cover up your envy. We all know Diavol is a Shit Head of a character and you dislike Mace for being flawless enough to be the story's protagonist, but you don't have to make it so pathetically clear!

We're halfway through the series, so just face it already: you suck at creating characters and have as much jealousy for REAL, SUBSTANTIAL character as you have fat Cells.

Thank You.

Now to Add to the Topic at Hand, I believe Mace will be able to become aware of Lara's deception. I have come to suspect that Leona, who is seemingly comming closer to him (Perhaps even a Love Interest in the near future?) will be the one to talk sense into Mace and see his clouded judgment. Evidence shows that in the conversations between Mace and Leona in the past few episodes show slight concern for Him. (Also in the Conversation with Elandra in Ep. 12.) I only see her doing it though...Not Elandra or CJ or anyone...Just Leona. If she doesn't get to him....He and the Realms are Doomed.

-2nd in Command

B_C, remind me never to piss your off. Please.

I think that Mace is going to follow Lara's trap all the way. But once the actual "trap" so to say is sprung, he's going to get out of it, the traditional good guy beats the bad guy. But I think that Elandra is going to be so caught up with her at anger At Leona, she's not going to notice, and Leona, Mace's probable lover in the future, actually cares about him. She'll try to talk sense, and it won't work, or to contradict my first sentence, when the trap is about to be sprung, Leona get's him out. That's my opinion, keep up the good work Leo.

B_C, shut the fuck up.

I don't hate Mace but I do think it would be great twist to story.



Your character is copy of Mileena so don't get angry with me or act like a kid because you don't like my ideas or anyone else idea.
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This is my last post for Deadly Dominion because Barakaz_cuz is turning into jackass and no one like a jackass, so I would like to say fuck you, Barakaz_cuz .
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and to everyone else I like to say it was nice working with you and good bye.