Can't wait

I can't wait!

Damn it Streetking, stop being an embarassment, and fix your damn signature:



An Adventure is Born...Deadly Dominion




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- 2nd in Command, get over yourselves, there are no other ranks.

Hi, here is my deal. I am leaving MKO most likely, unless something happens which will change my decision. No one likes me i mean they call me ho's *caughs* barakas-cuz... So I may drop in this thread every once in a while but thats it. So, i will not make a character in this thread unless something happens.

Leo, its been fun working with you, your stories are great, keep up the great work. I hope you continue this and it becomes a great success.(You never know.) So see you guys and have fun with this project.

Leo, my trip was delayed a day, can I post an overall score, and not an indepth review *(so not to give it away)?

Leo is about to post the episode in a few minutes, so be patient, and write him a proper review, got it?

- 2nd in Command

Episode 16 is up, at last!


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Deadly Dominion: Episode 16
"Consecutive Clashes"

"Round 1 of the tournament meets its intense end, with the outcome of the fight sending relief into the hearts of some, and contempt into the souls of others.

And with the first battle over at last, focus is slowly shifted back into other pressing matters: among them Leona's almost-reckless audacity, Lord Vladimir's iron hand, and Donnovan's jeopardous mission."
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P.S.: I don't know if everyone is aware or not, but "Beat" is a moment of silence o.o...

Anyways...

Surprisingly enough, this was one of the episodes I enjoyed writing the most. Hopefully that means everyone will enjoy it "extra...ly"... too...

Can't wait to see the comments/reviews/opinions!

Enjoy!

Once again, I'm Speechless Leo! We'll not really, here's the review:

* An Amazing end, to an Amazing Battle! I love the Cabin bit, where Millena desperatly fought to stay alive and the fight eventually exploded into a Grand-...No it just Exploded. I loved the reactions to the falling pieces of wood some of the characters demonstarted such as:


"Screams. The crowd is SHOWERED with pieces of wood
of all sizes and shapes, which come fleeting at
them like bullets.

We see Elandra clench Mace's sleeve with her left
hand and upper arm with her right as if to
completely shield herself from a bulky fragment
that slams nothing but a few feet beside her.

Over to the right, Lara spins sideways with a
short scream and sets her legs on Luther's lap as
a more spiked chunk cuts the air where they just
were.

Luther's lips curl in condemnation.

LUTHER
(low voice)
Lara! Keep... your... composure!

She scowls and shrugs carelessly, then clears her
throat and retains her normal cross-legged
position."

LMAO!

Also its was interesting of how the bonds between different characters are shown, such as Logan's sibiling bond with Millena, and Bianca's friendship and possibly almost Beastiality Booty Call with Viper. It is shown hilariously in this scene:

"Logan rises to his feet.

LOGAN
(shouting)
No!

Bianca jumps up as well, but clearly with
different emotions and even waving her arms
wildly.

BIANCA
(even louder)
Yeah, Viper! Kick her ass! Whoo!"

LOL! Perfect Timing Huh?

Enough about the Stands! Back to the battle!

The slow motion parts were also very fantastc and a perfect way to end the fight:

"We go into slow-motion as Viper leaps from the
trunk toward Millena, his claws aimed and nearing
the mortal spot on her body.

Millena turns to see him pelting for a decisive
final cut, nearer to her than she could
anticipate.

Viper extends his arm to reach his mark all the
faster.

Millena begins to fall backward and drives the
blade of her Supernal Spear toward Viper in a last
attempt to stop him.

The monster's claws reach Millena's skin.
CLOSE UP ON VIPER'S CLAWS

They graze her flesh gradually... but do not sink
deeper.
PULL BACK TO REVEAL:

That the Supernal Spear's blade has burrowed into
the side of Viper's midsection before the tip of
his claws could touch Millena's heart.

He falls backwards. Millena crashes onto the moist
ground as well, her dress sliced and reddened over
her left breast."


Well guys, Looks Like Millena wins, and I win the bet! So please hand over the 50 Gs you each put in the fight pool in cash and we will be a-okay....or else. >:O


* Now onto the post Fight Events. Poor Viper, lucking his best friend doubles as a walking First Aid Kit, Lol! Bianca assaulting Millena and Logan was absolutely Hilarious.


"Bianca bursts into the scene like a madwoman,
ignoring Logan's presence and SLAMMING her hands
down on the door of the vehicle to get Millena's
attention.

BIANCA (CONT'D)
You'll have to deal with ME, now! Or did
you think you could have just done that
to my friend and drive back home without
a care in the world! Well, it's payback
time!

Bianca tries to pull the door open.

BIANCA (CONT'D)
Get out of that fuckin' car and I'll--

A firm hand unexpectedly closes around her upper
arm painfully. Logan spins Bianca around to face
him.

LOGAN
Get the hell away from her, you nutjob!

Bianca gapes at him for a few seconds as though
dazed, then snaps back into her usual self.

BIANCA
Let me go, you're hurting me! I'll kick
your ass, too!

Logan forcefully pulls Bianca's arm, heaving her a
slight distance away from his sister. He adds
pressure to his grip.

LOGAN
Get out of here. Now!

He lets her go and turns his back on her.

BIANCA
Yeah, I'll get out of here...

She starts toward the car again.

BIANCA (CONT'D)
But I'm taking her head with me!

Logan grabs her shoulders furiously before she
reaches Millena.

LOGAN
Dammit! This girl's got all her screws
loose!

MILLENA
Logan, you're going to start up trouble
with the other Dimentians! Just let her
go, she's nothing but a nuisance!

Logan begins to drag Bianca away from the vehicle.
She attempts to elbow him in the stomach. He
catches her blow and secures her arm behind her
back.

He finally chucks her crudely onto a tree trunk
when they're a safe distance.

BIANCA
You're gonna pay for doing this!

LOGAN
I'm only gonna say this to you once:
stay away from her or anyone else in MY
dwelling! If you so much as pull a
strand of hair from Millena's head, I'll
forget you're a woman and put you in a
hospital!

He glares at her threateningly. Bianca finds
herself at a loss of words, able only to watch in
defeated silence as Logan marches away. After long
moments, she starts walking back to Viper and
Serpen Kia."

Little does Logan know that Bianca is extremely attracted to men who get rough with her. Beware flirtacious Logan, you just might have a stalker on your hands.


* The Deadly Trio is reunited once more, only to blasted away by a "SHADOWY PROJECTILE", and back to the Palace for the Dimentians.

We see a bit of doubt in Mace as he talks with Logan, Millena and Elandra. Then Mace completely tunes Elandra out:


"ELANDRA
(laughing)
I understand. But all Heiligians are
very skilled fighters. It's no wonder
they won the Stone more than any other
world...

Elandra's voice begins to trail off in Mace's
mind."


LMFAOOOOOO! But it appears something has caught his eye!


" Lara Dalton is looking straight into his eyes a
couple yards away, where the trees of the
everglades grow tighter together.

She is standing behind a beautiful, huge blood-red
flower that resembles an oversized rose: the only
attractive ornament in the ominous pit that is the
everglades. Her left hand is stroking the wavy
petals of the crimson piece of flora while she
flashes him a smile just as alluring as the flower
itself.

That is when a gap appears on the middle of the
flower... the mouth of a diabolical carnivorous
plant, complete with dagger like teeth. "


Oh its just a Pretty, possibly Man-eating Flower, No Big Deal.


Hmm, Leona tagged along with Donnovan, and look who she just found. With Donnovan distracting Mace, that Leaves Leona to go deal with Lara...O_O!


"Oh, you're very, very welcome."


(ERROR ERROR! NOO 2 SAME WORDS SIDE BY SIDE IN DOCUMENT >XO...I HAVE JUST MADE THE SAME ERROR ERROR! OVERLOAD! CANNOT COMPUTE! ERROR ERROR! OVERLOAD ERROR! *Explodes* X_X)


Lmfao Please disregard the joke above.


* A Very Creepy and amazing scene. I loved how Vlad changed Davila, or at least her face, back into its demonic state as punishment. Way to step up Vlad, and show that bitch you wear the pants in their Hellish Relationship.


"But, honey, you have your face. I don't
know what you could possibly be speaking
of."


I wonder how long he plans to keep her that way? Oh well, thats what she gets for acting like the Bad Demon Wife she is. RAWR right back at you Ho. >:O


* Another interesting scene indeed. Drake is starting to get increasingly fiesty, and I wonder how much Lara is willing to put up with it before some heads start rolling.


"DRAKE
I doubt you'll ever find an ally more
efficient than I, Lara."

CUPPFFFT! We shall see about that in all due time. Overall the scene was Great and was a nice touch developing their relationship a bit more. (Of course by relationship I mean Master and Pawn )


"Hope really is the last one to die,
isn't it?"


* Well it looks like Leona's distraction plan worked afterall. Donnovan has convinced Mace to accompany him to Valora, where he is to show him the Horror's Luther's caused. But I do wonder if he will be able to convince him to aid him in his quest. I guess we'll have to wait and see.


*
"Deem yourself incredibly lucky..."

Lucky Indeed Viper..very Lucky indeed. It looks like that annoyance Diavol did have a purpose afterall. I am very eager to see where this little quest of their's goes. Lets talk about Luther for a sec...O_O!

...


He's Crazy as Hell! :-O!!! He wants that stone really bad I guess...so bad its driving him Mad...well...Mad-er then usual, which makes him even more dangerous. He's like:

" STONE IS MINE! *Smashes Pickle Jar* >= O"

Lol! Anyway, an overall awsome scene that contributed a lot to Luther's evil Character, just by showing what the thought of not getting the stone does to him.


* Well it appears Lara isn't going to fool Millena anytime soon. Its good to finally see a character who isn't fooled by Lara for even a second. Logan on the otherhand seems unsure possibly. Oh well, they really aren't too vital to her plot...


" She's such a thorn..."


I concur, she called Bianca a nusiance, when she deserves a LOT better, like "Annoying Bitch"! >= (


ZOMG at the ending! What a cliff-hanger. So Lara, how does it feel to feel the cold steel of Leona's double edged blade on your back? >= )


"I could have just killed you if I wanted
to... you wouldn't even have seen my
face."


Once again you never cease to amaze me Leo! I absoultely loved this episode, and I can't wait for Ep. 17!

- 2nd in Command

Leo, that was pure sexiness, orgasmic *circa Leo*, adreadinle pumping stuff.

The Finale - I love the cabin fighting, and of how easily Viper was tossing the bitch around *who called Millena would win, besided B_C*. I love how mean Viper was being.

Post-Cabin - I loooove the slow motion part. It was sexiness at the max. I litterally yelled "no!" when Tartarus ended the match. Viper was going to win, we all knew it.

Sibling love - very good job at showing the bond between Millena and Logan.

Lord Vladmir is the man! - Enough said.

Lara love? - Lara, apparently not the best actress, at least succedded in wooing Logan.

Drake!!! - Oh yeah, my man is slick!

10/10

I got a very short time to be doing this, so I'm just gonna give a quick reply to the shorter of the two reviews for now.



He was pretty swift with getting the upper hand at the most critical of times, and the match came out so well-matched and even that it even surprised me. You really couldn't tell who was going to win throughout many points of the fight, until, of course, Taranis called the final word.



TARANIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



I know, it makes you feel all warm inside.



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Uuuh... the bitch has had more than three characters in the palm of her hand for the entire series so far, so I slap your opinion in the face ()... Hell, I'd give her an award!



LOL!!!!!! That killed me for some reason.

Thanks for feedback. Nice little format you got there, too! If expanded a bit more, I bet it could climb up the Orgasmic Ladder.

Wow.

Now that was something else. I have to say, that battle was intense. I really thought Viper was going to win. But I'm glad she won, I like her just a little fraction better. There's something very cool and collected about her. I love how you write, it's very sharp, all the right details and gritty at just the perfect times.


Once again, Bianca makes me smile. Loved the confrontation with her at the car.

Amazing work, as always.




Damnit, man. Go pen the script of MK3 will ya?!

I just finished skimming through the page.Sadly I wasn't able to read the whole thing.This episode was really intense.Sorry I can't post much but I enjoyed it as much as the 15th .I'm not sure what I'll expect in the 17th.

LoL I love how the highlight of the fight for you was the wood-shower. Just picturing that in your head is actually really funny, although if it was you up in the stands you'd probably be more startled than anyone there. Let's just say you would be doing much more than clutching onto the first guy sitting next to you. I predict you'd throw yourself off the stands and into the lake.



Bianca doesn't make a good stalker, just because of how insane she can get. I bet she's more likely to try and rape Logan than the other way around. Not pretty...



O nooos! Something tells me she doesn't wanna ask her to go shopping...



I already told you Davila is gonna roar at everyone who reads this ep., you're not the "Chosen One".

And there's something odd, I think, about you and StreetKing loving Vlad so much. Hopefully you two won't grow into wife-beaters or something trying to make him proud.

As for your question, I'd say that Davila better act quick, cuz Vlad isn't gonna be changing her into her eye-pleasing self too soon. As you know, Devil Lords can go without a boner for months, so Davila is in some deep sh*t.

Please pretend I did not just say that.

Now...



LoL! Whatever the big picture is, don't you still have to admire Drake's persistance? If you analyze his dialogue and actions closely, you'll see that he actually seems to enjoy being treated badly once in a while. Perhaps he and Bianca were made for each other.

*leaves country*



*comes back to finish reply*



*pictures B_C in the Throne Room, crying in the corner as Luther smashes everything* LMFAO! !!!!

Luther really is a bit "maniacal", though... while he's still not Bianca-crazy, his obsession is leading him there. He better watch it.



Unlike SK, you recognize what a talent for showbusiness Lara has, and for that, I mail Bianca a muffin.

But you're right, Millena isn't one to be fooled so easily from what we've seen. Keith summed her up in one great sentence which I shall get to later, but it shows why she's not a likely candidate to be manipulated by Lara's words. She's very cool, and holds herself together very well, making her strong enough to be impervious to such treachery.



Hey! Don't be mean!

I'm glad you were so at this scene, because it is more important than it looks. How many people would you expect to have the courage to just sneak up to Lara and threaten her out of nowhere? I seriously can't wait to see the types of clashes this could lead to in the future!



X 100!

Thanks again for the AMAZING review! At the risk of sounding overly-nice, I have to say I always look forward to these long-ass, detailed reviews! So inspiring! ! In a way, you really are influencing how good the next episode will be with this orgasmic feedback.

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I really love the way described Millena in that one sentence, Keith. You pretty much summed up what kind of character she is. Strong, aware, calm and at the same time, fierece. So you get a !



Thank you! I can see you're very good with compliments, LoL!



! It's good to have a bit of humor sometimes in situations as serious as that fight. It gives people some easy-breathing time as they go through the episode, and some moments to laugh while getting their heads wrapped around everything that just happened.



Get me the job and I'll do it.

I'll post a more detailed review later, but I just wanted to pop in and say that I finally got to read it, and as usual it was ace

This episode moved with a very smooth fluidity, and I don't think there was a single part that I didn't enjoy!

I dont have enough time to write a long review either.

Although i do want to say to B_C "Whos calling people in the stories now" 'caughs' you.

The episode was awesome. Just makes me want a videogame version even more.

The best thing ive seen regarding DD was the bios in the Ad thread.
Those were really good. Logan looks like some sort of street thug. Viro's was awesome. Definitely smart to reveal his intentions later. Although a sight of him in this episode would have been nice it definitely isnt necessary.

OVerall very good.

5/5

So, you don't have "time" to write a long review... too busy with your XBOX? You know what, it's becoming clearer and clearer as each episode goes by that you don't care about this project nearly as much as everyone else does. You barely post here at all, you did NOT post AT ALL on the bio thread, and yet here you are having the balls to talk about the bios and still babble about how Viro didn't make an appearence. If you don't put as much effort into this as everyone else, why would you get to make requests or even discuss this project? Please stop making children cry.

Also, what the hell did you say about "B_C Coughing?". Care to elaborate further?

Alright, sorry for not posting sooner!

As usual my review will not be as long or detailed as B_C's, but here goes:

I much preferred this portion of the Millena/Viper battle, though I just knew that Millena would turn out victorious. It was still an intense read, and I felt it was really well put together. I do have to wonder, though, what Luther would have done to Viper if he didn't have a mission to send him on...I'd like to see how Luther would torture one of his fighters

The Davila/Vlad scenes were also very entertaining to read, but I am concerned about poor Davila; how can she seduce her way to more power without her beautiful face? Maybe Maverick will feel so much for her that HE will give her face back? Maybe Davila is holding more cards than she's letting on, and she's just waiting to use her powers to their fullest extent? I guess we'll see!


I also enjoyed the ending to the episode...Leona is already using other people to get at a goal once more...first it was bringing Elandra into her 'plan' to kill Luther, when all she really wanted was Vice's location, and now it seems to be Donnovan, so she can get at Lara...and getting at Lara seems to be exactly what she's done. But I do have to wonder...is she only going to use Lara to finally get to Vice, or does she have something else in mind?

Also, it may be just me, but it seems as though Leona is quite herself recently....maybe there's another player behind the scenes we haven't been introduced to that is controlling her?


Well, all my questions aside, this episode brought a more than satisfying conclusion to the cliffhanger of last episode, and has perfectly set up the crazy events that are sure to come in 17. Great job Leo!!

It wouldn't be pretty, that's a sure thing.. we already know Luther's a bit twisted (he has a pet whose "cage" is an entire arena); then you mix that in with his insane obsession over the Stone and, as a consequence, his hatred for anyone who brings him a step back, and you got some pretty f*cked up ideas for punishment.



She can never even DREAM of showing up to Maverick with that face! Not just because it's ugly as hell, but because you can just look at her and tell she's a demon. Someone like Maverick would look into that, and eventually find out the whole truth behind Vlad's little plan. Plus, we all know how Dimentians can be a bit prejudice against such things. *Remembers Viper's reaction to Vice*

It all comes down to how slick you believe Davila to be - will she find a way around this setback or is she back in the position of Vlad's puppet?



I think it's safe to say that, as of right now, Leona is planning only on going through Lara to get to Vice. Really, she has nothing to despise Lara for besides the fact that she helped Vice escape from Earth. If she can get past that, then it's like her "tie" with Lara never existed at all. Of course, we all know Vice didn't scheme everything by himself all those years ago...



Hmm maybe (like everyone else) you're used to seeing Leona interacting, mainly, with Mace. See, Leona takes it easy with Mace since he's helping her more than she could ever have hoped for, but the way you saw her in this episode (and will see her in the next) is how she really is. Maybe you're under the impression that she's acting too self-serving or carelessly or maybe even a bit cruel? That's her for ya. Really, she's the last character who isn't on Luther's side that you should expect to be a "hero", at least the way things are right now.



Thank you for the spectacular feedback! It's always nice to go through it and pinpoint all the great thoughts/points you make each time! !

P.S.: I've spent most of this past week at home, just hanging around without much of anything to do but watch TV, play games, and use the computer (I went to the gym only once, and went out for no more than an hour or so WHEN I went out)... what I'm trying to say here is that I've had plenty of free time to dedicate to the episode, which = :

I think it's safe to say that Episode 17 will be released this weekend. Not only that, but it will be lengthier than the average episode: while a normal episode totals to about 25-30 "minutes", this one should reach the high 40's. It's just that some scenes took up more time than I anticipated, and there was quite a bit that I wanted to force into this one !

Is it your kids crying or you. Didnt know i had that kind of power.

Anyway time to totally tear this post to pieces.

I didnt have time to write a review I had a lot to do
As for the comment about being busy with my XBOX yeah thats part of it but i was actually helping my parents because unlike you i dont have kids to make to the work for me so i can post long reviews on the computer.
And i do care about the project if you recall i originally thought of this whole thing with Hellrazer HD. HD left and Leo took over and the ideas went to him.
And no i didnt post on the Ad thread. Sorry didnt realize it was there. When i finally found it, it was on the second page in the General discussion.
So sorry ive gotton your old panty's in a bunch for not putting "effort " into posts but i have been busy being a kid during summertime.

And as for the B_C coughing. You got mad at me before (Shocking) about calling a character a bitch. You called a character a bitch in your review and i was saying look whos calling characters bitches now.

And for not putting in as much as everyone else, i see you grouching at everyone on this thread. And when i posted my long review you had something to grouch at.

As for babbling about Viro. He is my character and of course i am going to talk about him.

So i will continue to discuss here. Sorry if i am spending more of my time outside in nice weather or helping my parents with work to earn my allowance.

Now if you would like a review. Fine ill give you one. But if you continue to gripe about small things B_C i wont even listen. Youre constructive criticizem is welcome. Unnecessary bitching isnt


NOW FOR EPISODE 16

Leo you did a great job on this episode. i have to say 15 was better but this was good. I think you did a good job ending the battle. It was good. The battle was great the dialougue, and text were great

As for the post battle. It was good. Lara's dialogue was very clever. Its amazing how she can make such a boring situation seem so hilarious. And Drake is the best suck up ever.

Overall it was good but not as good as episode 15 mostly because there wasnt as much "Fighting". Not as much adrenaline in this one.

Sorry Leo




9.9/10

B_C if you dont like 9.9 too bad.


I will continue to post. And the reviews will get longer as the weather gets worse.


EM

EM, I would like to comment on just a few things in your post.



Let me start with this one, cuz I found it a bit off-hand. I don't know if this is what you meant to say or not, but when I read this, it sounded to me like you were saying I "took over" everyone's idea and just made a series instead of a game. Is that what you're saying? Cuz if it is, I'll have to completely disagree with ya.

When HD first began his thread, his idea (and yours too, if you were there from the beginning) was to have some tournament named Chaotica, with something about the Goddess of Chaos involved. Then HD asked me to make up a new storyline, and that's when this WHOLE thing came into play. You can go back into HD's thread and find his post where he copy/pasted everything I sent to him in IM: a complete storyline revolving around the Adonis Stone, the three "main" Worlds involved, the tournament with a completely different purpose, The Supreme Spirits, AAANNNDD at least 11 characters to start off. I based that storyline in NOTHING that HD or you or anyone there at the time had previously thought off, and it was after I thought this storyline up that eveyrone started re-making characters to fit it.

What I'm trying to make clear here is that I did not take ideas from HD or anyone else and made them my own. I took MY ideas and WELCOMED the ideas of everyone who wanted it in the series, THEN made the series itself.

Again, I don't know if that's what you meant to say, but it sounded like it to me, so I thought it was necessary to make this post.



Thanks for the review, EM! While not as lengthy or detailed as the others' reviews, it's still much appreciated and a welcome read.



I can see you're a big fan of actual fighting, but we can't have them every episode. The series would be pretty much a big, bloody mess if the episodes were all dedicated to pure non-stop action. Doing that would take away precious storyline elements. It would "wow" people who love fighting, but drive away anyone who enjoys a good story to be part of.

Hmm...so you were in Sunshine Happy Land doing chores for your parents? Thats what is keeping you from writing good reviews? Thats total Bullshit. It takes about 10-15 Minutes to write a Good review, and thats like 1/100th of the Time Leo spends creating each episode. So if you can't even take just a few minutes to give Leo the credit he deserves, then thats just Sad.

Ha...Granny jokes are beyond the word Lame can describe. Grow Up.

DAMN STRAIGHT LEO >XO

I was gonna expose the truth regarding with you said about Leo taking over HD's and YOUR ideas to make this series, but he already did it in a much nicer way than I would have. Beautiful post btw Leo.

LEO
Before i get to B_C's post i will say to Leo. That what you said is what i meant. I didnt say you took over but that the whole idea to do this kind of a project went to you when HD left. And i will start longer reviews if thats what everyone wants. Not to sound like a dick or anything but have you heard of the saying Short Sweet and to the point. A good review doesnt have to be long. Ill add more detail.

BC
At least you didnt bitch about too much. It may sound like bull shit but its true. You should see the shit my parental units got me doing. As for your granny comment. I couldnt think of anything else at the time. o and love the sig

STREETKING
I just felt like putting your name in here. Your missing on all the fun


BTW LEO
I said something earlier about putting a different ad in the GD for a game. It was about someone doing XNA. Possibly. Just a thought.


TO MYSELF (with BC in the area)
Write more detailed reviews not necessarily longer reviews. Dont say anything bad to BC or there will be hell to pay. O and stay out of (what did BC call it) oh yeah Sunshine Happy Land

To the WORLD!!!!
Dont spend more than 50 dollars on a frickin Vacuum Cleaner.

Ermac, run away while you still can. For these reasons...

Having Me mad at you is not the worst thing in the world. Although talking about suckups, at least Drake isn't Lara's bitch.

Having Leo mad at you will definitely have you falling off the orgasmic (circa Leo :) ) ladder.

Having B_C wanting your head is the worst. I can't control that fiesty little bastard (In a good way B_C I hope our peace treaty remains intact).


BTW B_C hmmm, Drake and Bianca. And you left the country for how long? Any longer than a day, leave again or I will come after you

Alright, then, forgiveness abound. I'm not too "stuck" on the review thing, but lots of details can only make them all the more enjoyable to read, so I say go for it.



... ... someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed, lol.

Oh, and if you meant how long did I leave the country for, LoL, not for long, just to visit my grandparents in Brazil. I thought B_C was gonna get mad that I was pairing his character up with other people.

*runs to Sahara Desert* is this good SK. Why are you mad at me. WTF i do
Leo seems fine.
And since when is BC a feisty little bastard. And i dont think he even collects heads.

BTW leo and BC too as you are "second in command bitches" episode 17 will have the best review ive ever written. Mostly because i just decided i want to be a videogame journalist if i cant be a designer. So it will be practice if i start reviewing.

Dude, I was kidding. But still, B_C smells blood. And when he smells blood, he kills. I would know