jade and smoke could work as a quick fling sort of thing..o.k give me more time to come up with something (or not)..but here's what i have smoke saves jade from ambush in living forest..and dissapears in smoke before she could thank him..then jade finds out smoke is a friggin cyborg so she goes to visit him to say 'thank you gawjus' lol she kisses cyborg smoke to see if he feels anything (like beauty and the beast haha or should i say beauty and the cyborg haha)..or secretly she wants to smoke his pole

It doesn't have to be plastic. It could be metallic.
Have you seen Hattori Hanzo from Samurai Warriors? There's three games in the franchise now, and he's developed quite a lot since. He looks awesome in any of the three games, and maybe you could take inspiration from his mask.

How about making it look closer to a turban?

MK1-style? If so, go for it. The costume overall is very original, good job. @noobsmoke_mk: you should proceed your idea a bit further to make it feel more sensible. I also published an artwork of Human Smoke and it is for everyone's view now in MK Fan Submission Discussion. I hope you like it. Request: I will put various high-quality Human Smoke pictures into the original post. To do that, I need images. If you have any, bring here please.

i dont think nrs would come up with a decent story of them being together without making it look cheesy.. and i'd hate that because both are my fav mk characters..so instead they should hint a romance/love interest between jade and smoke..because then fans will be like 'what if'..

A what-if romance could fit there. As I have mentioned on the fly about Smoke having Sandman-like moves, I meant this:



This is DC Universe Sandman. He is a villain who emits smoke putting his victims asleep. What do you think of this? For instance, Human Smoke would have many kinds of stun moves with this addition. Have you come up with any specials for Smoke?

^i don't want to see human as a hypnotic ninja, but i'd like it if he had chemical gases, nova gas which disorients them, or other gases which makes them choke blood. also i'd like smoke bombs, or smoke screen stuff like that..lol spam the whole screen with constant smoke bombs

If Smoke was to turn into a cybernetic ninja, a special move where the screen goes into black-white blur for a few seconds would be neat, freezing the opponent for a few seconds and giving Smoke time to pull off a combo.

Your idea of Smoke making his opponent choke blood was good. How would it work in-game? What would he do to make it happen? I renamed the topic into Human Smoke Reflections {Specials & Fatalities} to indicate that we are creating these for Smoke at the moment here.

well in black ops (fps) theres nova gas, and when you step in there, you move slowly, start coughing and lose life if you keep staying in there, so with smoke i'm thinking if he chucks some gas at the opponent, and they step in there then they lose life..the only way round it is teleport to the other side or or wait for the gas to run out..but i could see this spammed a lot so maybe not

God I hope we avoid the Cyborg/Robo-Bitch form of Smoke this time. They ruined him beyond belief.

Smoke deserves the gift of Humanity. Its been long since he was human and he did a good job at it :D So ALL IN FOR HUMAN SMOKE!

If we're going for Fatalities now...

One Ive posted since the dawn of time is that I'd love him to disappear, reappear behind the enemy, kick them in the back of the knees, and grab them in a headlock while covering their nose and mouth with the other hand. Then we'd see a ton of fumes emerging from that area and watch them struggle until he lets them go and they fall over face-first.

I'd rather him turn into smoke-form and enter the opponent's body, then burst out of it like in Nightmare on Elm Street 2.

Stunning.

This would fit pretty much perfectly for Smoke. It gives a feeling that he is a true assassin killing the opponent by a surprise, calmly and without leaving a note. Which would ultimately reflect who Human Smoke is - a covert-ops assassin of the Lin Kuei. His 2nd Fatality should have the gore aspect common to Mortal Kombat in the contrary. What would it be like then? I'll bring my Fatality ideas when I've created some. [I'll add two Fatalities into the original post, one gory and one covert. This one seems very fitting but if you'll come up with a decent (gore) Fatality for Smoke, I may add it there too. Can you think of any?]

Amen!!!

Thanks Vasculio.

I was requested so I've added my concept art to this topic. What do you think guys?

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6474/0001smokeversion1.jpg

it's a nice mask but the pipe thing running to his neck makes it look like a gas mask. i like it without the pipe ;)

I think it's be a cool fatality if he turned himself into a gaseous form as clouds of dark fog rises from beneath the enemies feet. He pulls them into the ground until they are stuck from below the waist, re-appears in front of them and kicks the head clean off them. The body could sorta stagger backwards as blood fountains out of the dead body.

Very nice. I like the mask and the details overall but I think that you should add smoke around him, whiten skin tone, pull of the pipe away and ultimately make a full body picture of him; since this has potential. @NoobSaibot5: Sounds cool. Maybe you should make a comic of it (e.g. in MS Paint) to express your Fatality more distinctly?


We're still coming up with new Fatalities and specials for Smoke here!

Well, I've always believed Shang's MKII body invasion should belong to him, but I had an idea for another one ages back where he de-solidifies his forearms and hands, phases them through the enemy's torso, re-solidifies, they give a sudden scream of pain, and he rips out their lungs.

Hell, he could do that with any organ he chose. He could just solidify his fist in them somewhere, wouldn't even have to rip anything out.

Please forgive the crappiness of this drawing, I never use MS Paint and it's just a quick illustration, but basically it shows Smoke vanishing, pulling his opponent into the floor through a Smokey vapour, re-appearing and delivering the fatal kick to his enemies head.

Very nice, NoobSaibot5. So does Smoke in fact bring him to another dimension or how does the floor consume the victims legs?



This could really be utilized in his X-ray moves too.

He merely rises up through the ground from underneath them through smoke vapour, grabs their legs, and pulls them into the soil (similar to how Rain can teleport through his puddles). When stuck he does a very powerful kick (was personally thinking he could kick it like a Football) which results in the victim being decapitated.

A second fatality of his would be to knock his opponent to their knees, cover their mouth from behind (similar to a neckbreaker position) and emits a steady stream of gas into the victim's lungs as they cough and splutter. He allows them to suffer and choke for a second or two before breaking his opponent's neck.

For special moves I was thinking he could have a parry move similar to Sub-Zero's Ice Parry from MKvsDC, except when he's attacked he merely dissipates into smoke vapour and re-appears behind the enemy with a surprise uppercut.

Or maybe even a version of the Ice-Clone where he backflips away from the enemy as a way of maintaining distance from the foe, but leaves a large amount of Smog behind in the position he was standing in. This staggers the opponent as they choke and cough, disorientated by the gas, and also gives Smoke the opportunity to escape a close-range attack whilst stunning his foe in the process.

Alright, it could maybe work then. I was just thinking if the arena is e.g. Goro's Lair where the floor is of stone. But maybe he just pulls them with such a force. It's fine. The second Fatality is cut-throat.

Would this Smog Parry move end up with Teleport Punch? Could an alternative version of Jade's Projectile Shield possibly work with Smoke? What kind of X-ray moves would you give Smoke? I'll put the best options to the original post in the end when I'll give it a little polish.

Remember to check out andy88's Smoke picture and give some feedback to him.